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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste (Continuation FF) Episode 172 (1st November’s Episode) (21st of this FF)

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Episode No: 172
Episode Date: 1st November 2016

Scene 1: Shraman’s Room
The episode begins with Suman shocked finding Shravan standing behind her through the mirror. But it’s not Shravan, it’s the teenager Shravan aka Chota Shravan. It is Suman’s imagination as Chota Shravan asks her.

Chota Shravan: What happened? Why are you silent?

Suman looks on surprised.

Chota Shravan: Continue.

Suman tries to speak.

Chota Shravan: I couldn’t do what you are capable of doing.

Sumo: What do you mean?

Chota Shravan: Open out all your feelings you have for him. Sumo, I know you can do it.

Sumo: But Shravan?

Chota Shravan: Shravan is not the same anymore. And even you know that very well. But no one can change the fact he is Shravan. Be it the Shravan 10 years back or Shravan now.

Suman tries to speak but she stammers.

Sumo: Sh…Shravan how wil……will I speak to him?I….I mean you….him…you? Arhh!

Shravan smiles and laughs a bit.

Chota Shravan: Look Sumo, you still have time. Just do it before it’s too late.

Music plays.

Sumo: Shravan, you know how much I love you!

Chota Shravan: Sumo, not only him, you have also changed. You are not my Sumo.Where is the brave Sumo and the fearless Sumo I knew?

Suman stays silent and gets sad.

Chota Shravan: You are his Sumo. 10 years ago’s Shravan belongs to 10 years ago’s  Sumo and this current Sumo belongs to that current Shravan. I mean to say time changes, a person may change but the love will never love. After all love is love.

Chota Shravan smiles while saying this. Suman looks behind facing opposite him.

Sumo: But does that mean you , I mean he still loves me? Is it possible he still loves me as much as you love that Suman?

Chota Shravan: If you are having doubt, why don’t you try confessing your love one more time? What if your silence wins lovingly? (Kahin Tere Khamosiyan Jit Na Jaye Pyaar Se)

Suman gets thinking.

Chota Shravan: Think one more time , if you don’t say this soon who knows you may never able to say so, and then your silence will win over, and you may lose him forever. (Aur Phir, Tumhara Khamoshiyan Jit Jayenge, Aur Tum Usse Hamesha Ke Liye Kho Dhoge)

Suman gets angry.

Sumo: Shravan, why don’t you understand! This is what I exactly fear the most, I can’t afford to lo…

Suman looks behind and is shocked to find Shravan. The current Shravan, the elder Shravan, her husband, so now she is out of her imagination.

She finds Shravan standing having his arms folded. And he looks at her as if he claimed an explanation from her. Suman looks around to see where teenager Shravan was, and she confirmed that it was her imagination and that she is out of it now.

Sumo: Shravan…Shravan, it’s actually not what I meant, I mean to say that

Shravan: Tell me Sumo what you meant to say?

Sumo: Shravan I meant to say that…

Shravan: That

Suman takes a deep breath.

Sumo: I mean to say that I

Shravan: What is it that you fear?

Sumo: What?

Shravan: That is what I am asking what?

Suman realises Shravan didn’t listen to anything.

Shravan: Now I get it.

Shravan comes to Suman.

Shravan: I know that you fear that you won’t be able to afford high expenses, right!

Suman looks at Shravan surprised.

Sumo: Shravan?

Shravan: Surprised right?

Shravan gets into the flashback.
Scene 2: Tiwari Killa
Shravan comes to visit Tiwari Killa to meet Nanu.

Mamaji: Shravan beta you and here? At this time, Suman she just left from here a while ago.

Shravan: Yes Mamaji I know that. I have come here to meet Nanu since me and Sumo will be going for honeymoon tomorrow, so I have decided why not I meet him before that?

Mamaji: Yes beta, you can do that definitely, you do one thing you seet here I call Babuji here.

Shravan: It’s okay Mamaji, I will go and meet Nanu upstairs in his room.

Mamaji: Okay fine, I will take you there.

Shravan: It’s okay, I will go by my own.

Mamaji: As your wish.

Shravan goes upstairs to meet Nanu.

Scene 3: Nanu’s room
Mamiji is with Nanu.

Nanu: Manju, have you completed the cleaning?

Mamiji: Yes Babuji, should I leave now?

Nanu: Okay leave.

Mamiji is about to go, Shravan comes there.

Mamiji: Sharman beta! You and here! At this time!

Nanu: Shravan beta, come here and sit beside me.

Shravan takes the blessings of Nanu and sits beside him.

Shravan: Nanu, I and Sumo are leaving for Goa tomorrow so I have decided why not I meet you before leaving and Sumo already met you before she left so that’s why. I hope you don’t have any problem with that.

Nanu: No, no beta, you did the right thing. Manju bring something for Shravan to eat.

Shravan: No, no Mamiji it’s fine I already had dinner.

Nanu: At least have some snacks. Manju bring some Chikki for Shravan.

Mamiji: Okay fine.

Mamiji goes to bring Chikki.

Nanu: Let’s play one round of chess what say?

Shravan smiles.

Shravan: Okay Nanaji.

Nanu and Shravan are playing chess and Mamiji comes and serves him Chikki.

Mamiji: Sharman beta, if you don’t mind may I ask you something?

Shravan: Sure Mamiji carry on.

Mamiji: Preeti told me that you and Suman were supposed to go for London, but then you both ended up choosing Goa.

Shravan: It’s actually Suman’s decision she prefer Goa over London.

Mamiji: That time she was so willing to go to overseas, and she was even supposed to go US with us but then she cancelled the trip. And also our flight got missed. She could have gone to London now.

Nanu: And she didn’t go because of you.

Mamiji: What have I done? I didn’t say anything wrong. We also missed our flight.

Nanu: If you didn’t taunt her about her mother and her debts, she would have gone to US and also you all won’t have missed your flights either. That poor girl was so happy to go there, but she cancelled the trip for you all.

Mamiji hides her face. Shravan gets confused.

Nanu: After that she took an oath that until and unless she doesn’t repay off her mom’s debt by her she won’t make unnecessary costs.

Shravan realises the fact why Sumo didn’t want to go to London.

Shravan gets out of the flashback.

Scene 4: Shraman’s Room
Shravan: You did this because of your oath right?

Suman nods.

Sumo: Since, you got to know everything now there is no hiding. Actually Shravan, my dream is to repay off my mom’s debt and that too all by myself that’s a major reason why I am running PCT. It’s a very huge amount so it’s a bit hard to…

Shravan holds Suman’s shoulders.

Shravan: Don’t worry very soon you will repay your mom’s debt very soon and I have full faith on you. Now I can help you, but I know you don’t like taking favour of anyone, that’s why.

Suman smiles.

Sumo: Thank you so much for understanding.

Shravan: Okay, I should do my packing now. It’s very late. Please help me.

Sumo: Sure.

They start packing. Suman looks at Shravan thinking.

Sumo: (in her mind) How should I even confess my love to him? I can’t even speak to him properly.

Suman looks at the letter she is holding, she smiles as she gets an idea.

Sumo: (in her mind) Yes! this will be great.

Shravan is busy packing his bag, Suman pretends finding her stuffs and she looks at Shravan’s book. She chooses a book.

Sumo: (in her mind) Yes, this is his favourite book. He will definitely take it with him.

Suman takes the letter and keeps it in between the pages of the book. Shravan gets a call and he leaves to attend the call. In that time, Suman quickly takes another piece of paper and writes something. She keeps that in the book too.

Sumo: (in her mind) Very soon, Shravan will get to know everything I feel for him.

Suman smiles. Just then, Shravan comes back, and Suman pretends she is just standing.

Shravan: Why are you standing here? Help me.

Suman comes and continues helping him.

Next day Morning,
Scene 5: Malhotra Residence
Suman and Shravan get ready to leave for Goa. All the family members say good bye to them. Shravan goes to put the bags in the car with Pushkar and Varun.

Sumo: Vandy Bhabi, Kamini Aunty, Lalaji if you need any help do call me, I will be always there.

Lalaji: No problem, beta, you just go there tension free.

Suman comes to Ramnath.

Sumo: Dad, you will fulfil the promise you made to me right?

Ramnath nods yes.

Suman comes to Preeti.

Sumo: Preeti take care of yourself, now you have to be more careful in this condition.

Preeti: I will take care of myself, and Dii have you confe…

Sumo: I will do that very soon.

Preeti smiles.

Just then Shravan comes,

Shravan: I think we should leave now.

Suman is about to go,

Shravan comes to Ramnath.

Shravan: Dad, take care of yourself.

Ramnath: I will of course do that.

Shravan is feeling bad.

Ramnath: What happened beta, this is not the first time, and you have stayed without me in London for many days. Very soon, you should get habituated to it.

Shravan: No, dad! I can’t. It will be hard for me. I will miss you.

Shravan hugs his dad. Suman gets emotional seeing this. Everyone smiles except for Kamini.

Ramnath: Beta, go and enjoy. After you come back, we will spend some time.

Shravan and Suman leaves.

Scene 6: Train Station
Shravan and Suman come to the train station.

Shravan: Sumo, you took so long to get ready! Now if we miss the train, it’s entirely your fault! And already it’s time for departure.

Shravan looks at the watch worried.

Sumo: Shravan, oho! Don’t worry, we are very much on time, and I know these trains very well.

Suman and Shravan tries to find the train, and they find it and sit on it.

Scene 7: Train
Sumo: See, I told you, we won’t miss this train.

Shravan looking at the watch,

Shravan: But wasn’t the time 8.50am for the train. It’s 9.10am now. Did I see the time wrong or what?

Sumo: No, no! You saw the right time, but don’t trust the timings. They say one time, and they will release the train at least after 30 minutes most of time.

Shravan is shocked.

Shravan: What! That is such a lousy system.

Sumo: Stop acting like as if you went by train first time.

Shravan: It would have been better if we went by flight, we would have reached by noon, and now we will reach by tomorrow noon.

It is just clearly a waste of time.

Sumo: Oye! Stop complaining, and yeah I made compromises too, that’s why I agreed you buying return tickets by flight.

Shravan: Yeah, yeah.

The train leaves.

Shravan: Finally the train started to move. I was thinking it won’t even move tonight.

Sumo: Shravan, remember how we used to enjoy in the car whenever we used to go for picnics?

Shravan: Yeah what we used to do, remember we used to play cards right!

Sumo: Of course I do remember!

Shravan: All those days.

Shravan looks at the window.

Sumo: Guess what!

Shravan: What!

Suman shows Shravan cards. Shravan gets happy.

Shravan: You…You brought them?

Sumo: Of course, how can I forget these?

Suman and Shravan starts playing cards. Music plays. They enjoy the game, Suman wins some of the round and Shravan wins some of the round, and then Suman gets angry as Shravan wins again, and she peaks through Shravan’s and Shravan hides them, and then she forcefully tries to see the cards and they argue over it, and later they share a laugh over it.

Shravan: That’s all for now.

Suman while packing the deck of cards,
Sumo: Remember how we used to plan that after graduation we will go Goa together and that too by train!

Shravan: Yeah, we even took our family’s permission for that!

Sumo: But before that could happen, you left London and…

Suman stops, and Shravan looks at her as he realises she is sad and guilty. Shravan holds Suman’s shoulder.

Shravan: Where are you lost? And any other games,

Sumo: I have brought board games and we will play tonight.

Shravan: Great! Okay, now I tell you what I used to do in London?

Shravan says and Suman listens and vice versa.

At night,
It’s dinner time, Suman is looking at the window and Shravan takes out a book and reads it.

Railway guy: Sir, mam what Thali you want for dinner?

Sumo: It’s okay Bhaia, we have brought dinner with us.

The railway guy leaves.

Suman also takes out their dinner carrier and then she takes out Dal.

Sumo: Shravan, here is some Dal.

Suman realises Shravan is reading the book. Her heart starts to beat until she realises he is reading some other book.

Sumo: Shravan where is your that book?

Shravan: Which book?

Sumo: Your favourite one!

Shravan: This is my favourite book and what else?

Sumo: No! The one you brought from the library.

Shravan: Oh, that book. That book is boring to me now, so I stopped reading it.

Suman realises her plan got flopped and she gets sad.

Suman serves Shravan.

Shravan: Sumo, I will eat later.

Sumo: I know you won’t eat until and unless you finish reading this book.

Shravan smiles.

Sumo: So?

Suman takes some food and feeds Shravan. Shravan eats it happily and reads the book. Suman feeds him happily and he reads the book. Later, after he finished eating,

Shravan: Sumo, you also have something.

Suman eats her dinner. And after eating, she completes talking with Preeti and Nanu.

Sumo: I will come back soon Nanu.

Suman keeps the phone, and smiles. And she notices Shravan is still reading the book,

Sumo: How long will you take to finish this book?

Shravan: Just a few pages.

Sumo: You na, once you start reading a book you don’t stop!

Shravan: Sumo, if you want you can sleep.

Sumo: No, no it’s fine.

Shravan is reading the book, Suman waits for him and she yawns as she feels sleepy. Later, he finishes reading the book.

Shravan: Sumo, I am done with rea…

Shravan realises that Suman has fallen asleep as she dozes off on his shoulder. EDKV title
Music plays. And he stares at her lovingly. Later, he also dozes off and falls asleep.

The episode ends.

Precap: Suman and Shravan reach Goa and they roam around the beaches and other places in Goa and enjoy their honeymoon.

Hi all. I m so happy that so many silent readers commenting in my episode yesterday it means a lot to me. And so so sorry I couldn’t add the track you all requested for, actually I write the episodes in advance so that I can publish it mon-fri, since I am doing job na. I wrote some in advance and still writing on the days I have leave. And I will add the track you are requesting for in later episodes but it may take some time ?. Maybe after 1-2 weeks so sorry ?. And as for my job today it was my first day and it was very stressful and tiring. I came home and doze off. And i had some other work too so I got a bit late in publishing the episode so sorry for that. I will try to publish earlier tomorrow since I have a shift tomorrow too, but no shift on Thursday and Friday, so those two days I won’t publish it late. And I love the fact you all are encouraging me to keep on writing ??? Love u all ???

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