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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste (Continuation FF) Episode 169 (27th October’s Episode) (18th of this FF)

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Episode No: 169
Episode Date: 27th October 2016

Scene 1: Malhotra Residence
The episode begins with Suman and Preeti coming back home from Tiwari Killa.

Kamini: Preeti beta, Suman beta, you have invited your family members right?

Sumo: Yes, everyone is coming tonight.

Kamini: Come Preeti beta, come and sit beside me. See what I brought for you.

Preeti sits besides Kamini. Kamini notices the box Suman is holding.

Kamini: Suman beta, what is inside such a big box?

Sumo: Nothing, Kamini Aunty just some of my stuffs, I brought from home.

Kamini: Oh I see.

Sumo: I keep this at my room and then I am coming downstairs.

Suman goes upstairs to keep the box.

Scene 2: Shraman’s Room
Suman goes upstairs and then she collides with Shravan, and some of the things from the box fall down. Shravan stays aside by putting his hands up.

Sumo: Can’t you see while walking?

Shravan: Woah! Fine, I am sorry.

Sumo: Now what are you staring at me? Help me pick up these stuffs up.

Shravan helps Suman, and as they both are picking up the things and putting them in the box. Just then Suman sees the letter, and then she looks at Shravan who is picking up the other stuffs. She becomes surprised and as Shravan is about to pick up the letter, Suman quickly picks it up.

Sumo: Get up.

Shravan: What?

Sumo: I said get up.

Shravan gets up.

Sumo: No need to help me out. Do your own work now.

Shravan: You were the one who told me to help you pick up your stuffs.

Sumo: Okay, sorry it’s my mistake. Now you just do your own work.

Shravan: (in his mind) This Sumo is very strange. I don’t understand her sometimes, what she wants. What she doesn’t.

Shravan leaves to do his own work.

Sumo: (in her mind) Thank god, Shravan didn’t get and read that letter.

Sumo: And this box, I have to keep it somewhere, where Shravan will never get it.

Suman keeps the box in her wardrobe in between in her clothes. And as she looks behind, she gets shocked as she finds Shravan.

Sumo: Shravan! What are you doing?

Shravan: Actually the thing is

Shravan takes out a box from a shopping bag.

Shravan: This is for you.

Sumo: What is this?

Shravan: This is a Diwali gift for you.

Suman stares at Shravan as music plays.

Sumo: For me?

Shravan: Do wear this for tonight’s Diwali party.

Suman looks on. Shravan is about to go,

Sumo: Wait.

Shravan: Now what work you have for me?

Suman opens her wardrobe and passes him a shopping bag.

Shravan: For me?

Sumo: Nanu sent this for you.

Shravan takes the bag.

Sumo: Do wear this if you can.

Suman leaves. Shravan smile. Shravan opens the bag and finds a red kurta.

Shravan: Red Kurta? Not bad.

Night Time,
Scene 3: Preekar’s Room
Preeti gets ready for Diwali party. Just then Pushkar comes and hugs her from behind.

Pushkar: Wow my Pretty Preeti is looking very beautiful today.

Preeti smiles, and then she gets thinking.

Preeti: So, you are saying that I am not beautiful usually.

Pushkar: Areh, what’s this! You got angry for no reason, I was saying that you are indeed beautiful, but there is something special about you today.

Preeti: Let it be Pushkar, I understand very well what you meant. I am not foolish. I have to go now.

Preeti goes and Pushkar pulls her close.

Preeti: Pushkar, what are you doing? What if anyone sees us like this?

Pushkar: Let them see.

Preeti: Pushkar, what will they think?

Pushkar: What is there to think about, can’t I romance with the mother of my unborn child?

Preeti: Pushkar, you naa.

Pushkar comes close to kiss Preeti, just then Suman calls out Preeti.

Sumo: Preeti!

Pushkar: This Sumo naa..

Preeti: Now I really have to go, my dearest husband.

Preeti pulls Pushkar’s cheek.

Preeti leaves. Pushkar makes sad faces. Preeti again comes and gives a kiss to Pushkar on the cheeks and he smiles.

Scene 4: Shraman’s Room
Preeti comes to Suman’s room.

Preeti: Dii, you have called me?

Suman looks behind as seen dressed in a pink-orange saree.

Preeti: Wow dii, you are looking really beautiful today, and this saree suits you so well.

Sumo: Thank you my Prettypreeti, Shravan gifted me this for Diwali, you are looking beautiful too.

Preeti: Dii, you also think I am not very beautiful.

Sumo: No! When did I say that?

Preeti: Even Pushkar said the same.

Sumo: How dare Pushkar called my sister ugly?

Preeti: No, no dii, he didn’t call me ugly. He just said the same as you said.

Sumo: What do you mean? What did I say?

Preeti: That I look beautiful today. That means I am usually not beautiful?

Suman understands.

Sumo: Oh so you are trying to say that means other clothes don’t suit me? You also called me beautiful today?

Preeti: No dii, I never said that.

Sumo: See, Prettypreeti when one compliments you that means you look really different and usually it’s good but now it’s special since it’s different, like Diwali.

Preeti: Dii, now I get it. I scolded Pushkar for no reason. I don’t know why I get moody for no reason.

Sumo: No need to worry about this. This is because of mood swings which are very common for pregnant woman.

Preeti: Dii, cope up with my mood swings. If I say anything to you in anger, don’t mind.

Sumo: You are saying this to me? Of course, I won’t mind.

Preeti: Dii, you are the best Dii ever.

Preeti hugs Suman.

Sumo: See I forgot why I called you.

Preeti: Why?

Sumo: Preeti, see this Dori, I am trying to tie it up for such a long time, but I just can’t tie it up.

Preeti: Okay Dii, I will tie for you.

Suman looks at the mirror, and Preeti is about to tie the dori, she sees Pushkar in the mirror who is waiting for her outside. She gets surprised seeing him. Pushkar gestures her to come to him. Preeti looks behind and gestures that she can’t. She talks to Suman.

Preeti: By the way dii, you could have called Vandy Bhabi to help you out.

Sumo: Vandy Bhabi and helping me? Instead of helping me, she would have talked non-stop and that too nonsense.

Preeti: Okay I will tie for you.

Preeti is about to tie the dori, Pushkar shows her pakoras and she sees it through the mirror. She isn’t able to resist and her mouth starts to water, so she just leaves from there. Shravan comes there in red kurta at the same time.

Sumo: Preeti, tie it for me now!

Shravan comes to the room.

Sumo: Tie for me!

Shravan looks on surprised and confused.

Sumo: What are you doing? I said tie this dori for me.

Music plays. Shravan walks slowly towards Suman.

Sumo: Quickly, tie this for me. I need to go downstairs as soon as possible.

Shravan holds the dori. He looks on confused.

Sumo: Quick!

Shravan: (in his mind) How should I even tie this? Yes let me tie it like a shoelace.

Shravan starts to tie the dori in shoelace form. Suman smiles. Music plays. And after he tied it, he ends up touching her back with his finger unintentionally.

Sumo: Hmm, looks like you cut your nails.

Shravan looks on confused.

Sumo: Thank you so much Pr…

Suman looks behind and is shocked to find Shravan.

Sumo: You!

Shravan: Yes me?

Suman looks on confused and embarrassed. She quickly adjusts her saree pallu to her shoulder.

Sumo: So, you are the one who tied my dori?

Shravan: No, no a ghost tied it for you.

Sumo: What?

Shravan: You are the one who told me to tie the dori for you.

Sumo: I was telling that to Preeti, Preeti?

Suman realises Preeti left and she understands the situation.

Sumo: Okay I have to go now. Anyways thank you.

Suman quickly goes downstairs. Shravan smile looking at her.

Scene 5: Downstairs
Suman comes downstairs, and she finds Preeti and Pushkar eating snacks.

Preeti: Pushkar, these snacks are so tasty.

Pushkar: See I brought you here, because I know all these will finish very soon.

Preeti: How you know I was craving for all these?

Pushkar: Mom told me that it’s very common for pregnant ladies to have cravings.

Preeti: Sorry Pushkar, that time I scolded you. I don’t know, these mood swings.

Pushkar: It’s okay Preeti, happens.

Suman comes and scolds Preeti-Pushkar.

Sumo: Preeti, you left without doing my work and here busy eating and romancing with your husband.

Preeti: But Dii…

Pushkar: What Sumo? Why are you burdening my wife with work? Kam Chor.

Sumo: Oh, so I am Kam Chor now. Wow. I just gave this girl a simple work and she is enjoying snacks here.

Pushkar: What simple work?

Sumo: That is to…

Suman stops as she remembers how Shravan tied her dori.

Preeti: But your work is done, right?

Sumo: There is no use to speaking to both of you.

Suman is about to go and Vandy comes to her.

Vandy: See Suman, this is the latest designer dress I brought that day and also that heels, it’s matching right.

Sumo: Yes Vandy Bhabi, it suits you very well.

Vandy: Wow Suman, you are looking very pretty. This saree is so beautiful.

Sumo: Now fashion siren also said that I am looking good, than I am really looking good.

Vandy: Did you say anything?

Sumo: No, no I didn’t say anything.

Vandy: See Suman, this heel the same one Varun brought for me in the mall that day.

Sumo: It suits with the dress very well, right?

Vandy: Right. Now in staying with me, your taste in fashion has become good.

Sumo: Yes, yes

Just then, Kamini comes there holding a stack of gifts.

Kamini: So many gifts!

Sumo: Kamini Aunty, let me take these gifts.

Kamini gets happy.

Kamini: Heh? Really!

Suman takes the gift.

Sumo: Yes, I will keep these gifts. By the way where should I keep it?

Kamini: Keep it there.

Suman goes to keep the gifts.

Vandy: Mummyji look…

Suman goes to keep the gifts.

Sumo: Thank god, I found Kamini Aunty if not Vandy Bhabi would have made me bored with her senseless and boring talks.

Shravan is talking to some guys, and he finishes talking to them.

Suman keeps the gift, and Shravan walks back, and then they collide with each other while they are facing back, and after that they look at each other. Music plays and they share a small eyelock.

Suman breaks the eyelock by speaking.

Sumo: Thank God, you didn’t collide with me this time, if not all the gifts would have fall down.

Shravan stays silent. Suman is about to go, Shravan holds her hand.

Shravan comes to her, and whispers to her.

Shravan: By the way, you have a very hot and s**y back.

Suman gets shocked and stunned seeing Shravan talking like this. And she puts her hand on her waist,

Sumo: Why you want to fry jalebis on it?

Shravan laughs.

Shravan: What Sumo? You are really crazy.

Sumo: You are also no less.

Just then Ramnath comes to them,
Shravan: Dad?

Shravan gets happy, but Suman ignores Ramnath.

Ramnath: Beta, Mr.Khanna was asking about you?

Shravan: Is it, where is he?

Ramnath: He is there, waiting for you.

Shravan: Dad, let’s go.

Ramnath: Suman, you also come with us.

Sumo: It is okay, uncle.

Shravan: Sumo, dad is telling you to come. So let’s go.

Shravan holds Suman’s hand, and they go to meet Mr.Khanna, Ramnath’s client.

Shravan: Happy Diwali, Mr.Khanna.

Mr.Khanna: Happy Diwali, Mr.Shravan Malhotra.

Ramnath: This is Shravan’s wife, Suman.

Suman smiles and greets the clients.

Sumo: Happy Diwali!

Mr.Khanna: Happy Diwali!

Suman smile.

Ramnath: Say something about yourself.

Sumo: Hi, I am Suman. Suman Malhotra. I run a catering centre named PCT.

Mr.Khanna: Wow, that’s great. Mr.Shravan Malhotra, you are lucky that your wife runs a catering centre and also takes care of this house.

Shravan smile.

Mr.Khanna: It is very rare these days to see girls who work after marriage, and on top of that they are doing it so well. It is not easy to handle house and career at the same time.

Sumo: Actually Mr.Khanna, I am lucky that I got a husband like Shravan, who supported me, if not some people don’t support their wives at all.

Suman angrily looks at Ramnath. Ramnath understands. Shravan is a bit confused. The episode ends.

Precap: Shravan, Suman and others are playing with firecrackers and rockets outside. Suman is playing with Daboo, and some kids while Shravan is playing with Pushkar and Varun. Shravan looks at Suman, and Suman looks at Shravan. Just then Suman’s saree pallu falls on the firecrackers and she doesn’t realise it and it catches fire. Shravan sees this and gets shocked and he shouts Sumo! Suman looks at her saree and panics. Shravan runs to save her.

I will publish the episodes as per normal tomorrow, and the good news is I will publish a promo this weekend for sure, guaranteed. But most likely, I will publish the promo on a Sunday, as I am busy this Saturday. And I hope you all liked today’s episode and also tomorrow’s episode. And as for the promo is concerned, I hope you all will love the promo which I will publish this Sunday. And as for those, who are still having exams, all the best for the current and upcoming ones and also your results ?.

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