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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste (Continuation FF) Episode 168 (26th October’s Episode) (17th of this FF)

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Episode No: 168
Episode Date: 26th October 2016

Scene 1: Malhotra Residence
The episode begins with Suman and Shravan looking at each other. They both share an eyelock, and Shravan removes the cloth that fall on them. Suman breaks the eyelock.

Shravan: Can’t you climb down properly?

Sumo: I was… by the way you and here?

Shravan: I know you will busy due to Diwali preparations, so you may get late, so I decided why not I go home first and then bring you?

Sumo: You did the right thing.

Shravan: Are you done with your work, or there is more?

Sumo:  Yes, Shravan, I am done. Just give me a while, let me put this cloth on.

Shravan: I will go and fresh up, and then wait for you. And after you have done your work, get ready quick.

Suman agrees.

Scene 2: Pizza Restaurant
Shravan drives Suman to the pizza restaurant.

Sumo: So, you are going to treat me with pizza today!

Shravan: Yes, and what else?

Sumo: Great!

Just then Suman remembers,

Sumo: Oh no, I forgot I promised all my staffs a treat. Now if I don’t do that they will taunt me, and also they worked so hard that day they deserve it.

Shravan listens.

And later, as Suman and Shravan go to the Pizza Restaurant, Suman is surprised to find all of her staffs there.

Sumo: All of you here? Preeta?

Preeta: Yes, after all Shravan called us here.

Suman looks at Shravan,

Sumo: Shravan, you called them?

Shravan: Yes, I remember you promised all of them, so why not along with giving you treat. They also get their deserved treat and they were not there in the reception too.

Sumo: Thank you so much Shravan, I don’t know how it skipped from my mind.

Shravan: No need to say thank you.

The PCT ladies enjoy the Pizza and some of them feed their children too. Suman smiles as she sees one of her staff who is a mother of a son feeding her child. Shravan sees this and gets into a flashback,

Teenagar Shraman flashback,
Scene 3: Restaurant
Shravan and Suman come to a restaurant to have lunch together after school.

Sumo: Finally, we are getting to eat lunch here with the money we saved together.

Shravan: You wanted to eat here, right?

Suman nods.

Suman and Shravan happily orders food, and then they get their food served. Suman eats the food.

Sumo: Yaar, the food here is so tasty. No wonder why this hotel is so famous for its food.

Shravan: I know right. Dad brought me here on my birthday, that’s why I know the food is quite good here.

Suman and Shravan are eating, just then Suman sees a mother feeding her daughter. Suman becomes happy seeing that. Shravan sees her smiling, and gets happy.

Shravan: You look very happy, what are you looking at?

Shravan looks behind and finds the mother feeding her daughter, Shravan smiles looking at Suman.

Sumo: You know when I was a kid, mom used to feed me like this. After all I didn’t want to eat so she lovingly fed me, so that I can have my food. But now,

Suman gets emotional and tears drop from her eyes. Shravan feels bad and to stop her from crying he changes the topic.

Shravan: Sumo, you know what happen the day dad brought me here?

Sumo: What?

Shravan: We ordered for some food, and then our food came and dad realised we ate the wrong food, someone else ordered for it, and I am such a foodie by the time dad stopped me I finished the food.

Sumo: Are you serious!

Shravan: Yes

Suman laughs and stops crying as Shravan narrates what happened after that.

Sumo: You are really an idiot!

Shravan smile after seeing Suman happy.

Shravan gets out of the flashback and smiles.
Scene 4: Pizza Restaurant
Suman is standing and as a tear is about to fall from her eyes, Shravan stops it from falling as he wipes her tear, Suman looks at Shravan.

Shravan: Thinking of Aunty?

Suman nods.

Sumo: I miss her so much. But whenever I see these kids with their mom I feel happy, but when I was a teenager I used to be so much jealous of those kids with their mom.

Shravan: Now?

Sumo: Not anymore, now I understand. But I still get a just bit jealous. Those who have their mom with them are so lucky.

Shravan: Not everyone with mom is lucky. Even though my mom is alive, she is not with me. She left me for someone else

Shravan is a bit angry thinking about his mom. Suman looks at him.

Sumo: (in her mind) Shravan, you don’t know the entire truth that’s why you are saying like this. I have seen Aunty, she really misses you a lot and loves you a lot, but situations. Looks like, I really need to speak to Ramnath uncle about this. I can’t see Shravan like this.

Just then Preeta comes,
Preeta: Suman, Shravan you join us.

Sumo: Okay.

Preeta takes a pizza and feeds Suman and Shravan.

Preeta: Thank you for the treat both of you.

Suman and Shravan join them too, and they take pictures.

Later,
Shravan goes to make the payment,

Sumo: Shravan, you no need to pay I am going to pay for it.

Shravan: Let it be Sumo, and anyways I was supposed to treat you.

Sumo: You were supposed to treat me, not the entire PCT.

Shravan: Let it be Sumo, I will pay for it.

Sumo: No, I will.

Shravan: There is no me and you between us, since we are husband-wife now.

Music plays, and then Shravan is about to pay, Suman stops him.

Sumo: You said that there am no me and you between us right. So basically whatever is yours is mine. So 50:50.

Shravan smiles, and they both do equal payment, and then there is change, which cannot be divided.

Shravan: I will give the change; since I was supposed to give you treat anyways.

Shravan gives the change, and as they were about to leave.

Sumo: And remember, your treat to me is still pending. This won’t be counted.

Shravan: Yes, yes I know that.

Suman warns Shravan and leaves. Shravan smiles.

Shravan: She is just crazy!!!

Scene 5: Shraman’s Room
Shravan and Suman comes back home, and they change back.

Shravan: Sumo, where are you going?

Sumo: Shravan, I just have some work left for tomorrow, I will complete that and then come back.

Shravan: You need any help?

Sumo: No, it’s fine.

Sumo: I just have some work for tomorrow left; I will complete that and then come.

Shravan: Okay fine, I am going to sleep then.

And just then Shravan gets a call,

Shravan: Okay, I will give that file to my dad now.

Shravan keeps the phone, and he takes out the file and is about to get up to give it to his dad.

Sumo: You need to give this file to uncle?

Shravan: Yes, I need to give it to dad, it’s related to work.

Sumo: You just take rest and go to sleep, and anyways I am going so on my way I will give it to him.

Shravan: Okay fine, thank you so much.

Sumo: No need to be so formal.

Shravan smiles and he goes to prepare to go to sleep.

Suman smiles and she goes to give the file to Ramnath.

Scene 6: Ramnath’s Room
Here Ramnath is looking at the album of Shravan’s childhood pictures with him and Nirmala.

Ramnath: Those days were such bliss. Sometimes I feel that I have done wrong with my Shravan, by separating him from his mother. I should have understood Nirmala well and her intentions. How I wish I could tell Shravan that whatever happened and that his mom wasn’t in fault at all?

Sumo: So why don’t you tell him the truth?

Ramnath looks on surprised as he finds Suman standing.

Ramnath: Suman?

Suman comes to Ramnath.

Sumo: Uncle, there is no use of regretting and pondering over old memories.

Ramnath looks at Suman surprised.

Sumo: If you want, you can bring back those times back again, where you, Shravan and Nirmala Aunty used to stay happily together.

Ramnath: Is that possible?

Sumo: Of course, it is possible.

Ramnath: But how?

Sumo: Why don’t you go and tell Shravan the truth? The entire truth! And that his mom was not at all in fault here.

Ramnath gets surprised.

Ramnath: But?

Sumo: Isn’t it unfair that Shravan was made to stay away from his mom for all these years for something she didn’t do?

Ramnath: I admit, I admit I go and tell him the truth. But! But he will never forgive me.

Sumo: And what about Nirmala Aunty? She was made to stay away from Shravan for almost 11 years. A mother was part from her son for 11 years.

Suman gets emotional.

Sumo: Uncle, you know whenever Shravan thinks about his mom, I only saw hatred for his mom. Hatred for something she didn’t even do. Shravan was raised without the love of his mom even though she was alive. I understand this pain very well. My mom isn’t even in this world and Shravan? His mom is alive but still they were made to stay separate from each other.

Ramnath gets teary-eyed.

Sumo: Uncle, please! Tell him the truth. Don’t you think he deserves to know the truth?

Ramnath: Okay fine, I do that.

Ramnath gets up from his chair angrily.

Ramnath: But what about me? Shravan will hate me forever if I tell him the truth. He will never forgive me. I know I am selfish, but this is how am I? I can’t change it. I want to bring Nirmala back, and I can do anything for that, but I can’t tell him the truth. My biggest fear is to lose my son. Why don’t you understand?

Sumo: Yes, yes you are right uncle. You are indeed very selfish. I know you love your son, but what you are doing with him is not right? And if he gets to know the truth from somewhere else, he will be very hurt and shattered. And I can’t tolerate that.

Suman remembers about the file.

Sumo: Anyways, I keep the file here. Shravan have sent it for you for some work.

Suman keeps the file is about to leave,

Sumo: Your selfishness is really a big problem! No wonder, why Nirmala Aunty had to leave you.

Suman leaves angrily. Ramnath looks on and gets thinking.

Next day morning,
Scene 7 :Tiwari Residence
Suman and Preeti comes to Tiwari Killa.

Mamiji opens the door and she is happy to see Suman and Preeti.

Mamiji: Preeti? Suman? Early this morning!

Preeti hugs her mom. Suman smile.

Preeti: Happy Diwali, Maa.

Mamiji: Happy Diwali, dear.

Sumo: Happy Diwali, Mamiji.

Mamiji: Happy Diwali, beta.

Suman and Preeti come and greet everyone.

Nanu comes. Suman and Preeti take the blessings of Nanu.

Sumo and Preeti: Happy Diwali, Nanu.

Nanu: Happy Diwali, Suman beta. Happy Diwali, Preeti beta.

Suman finds Mausiji and Daboo decorating the Rangoli, Suman helps them out.

Sumo: Let me help you.

Daboo: Suman Didi, good you came here, if not making Rangoli with Mausiji is so boring.

Mausiji: Oye Daboo, don’t call me boring.

Suman smiles.

Preeti: Dii, may I help, please?

Sumo: No Preeti, you better go and seat there.

Mausiji: Areh let her help you. She is asking it so lovingly.

Sumo: Preeti, you know why I am not letting you right, so why don’t you tell them the reason.

Preeti: Actually the thing is,

Mausiji looks on confused.

Mamiji: What happened?

Preeti: Maa, actually the thing is,

Mamiji: Say say.

Preeti: Maa, you are going to become a grandma. I am pregnant.

Mamiji gets happy. Everyone else gets happy. Mamaji gets up.

Mamaji: What, I am going to become a grandpa?

Mamaji and Mamiji hugs Preeti.

Nanu: And I am going to become great-grandfather.

Nanu blesses Preeti.

Nanu: May God Bless you.

Preeti smile.

Mamiji: I don’t know when my daughter grew up and now she is going to become a mother.

Preeti smile.

Mamiji: Suman is right, you won’t do any work.

Preeti: But Maa?

Mamiji: Before marriage you didn’t want to do any work, and now?

Preeti smile.

Mausiji: Preeti beta, congratulations.

Preeti thanks Mausiji.

Daboo: Suman Didi, does that mean I am going to become an uncle?

Suman pulls Daboo’s cheek.

Sumo: Yes Daboo, you are going to become an uncle.

Daboo: Wow, I am becoming an uncle even before getting growing up.

Suman smile.

Sumo: Daboo? Now let’s get to work.

Mausiji: Daboo, be prepared, soon you have to play with your niece and nephew, first your Preeti Didi’s baby and very soon your Suman Didi will have baby too.

Sumo: (in her mind) Why is everyone asking me to have baby? I just got married a few days back.

Daboo: Suman Didi, when will you have a baby?

Sumo: Keep Quiet Daboo. You always talk too much now get back to work. Decorate the rangoli with me.

Later,
Mausaji brings some things.

Mausaji: Rachna, Manju Bhabi which ones should I throw?

Mamiji: There is some at Suman’s room and Preeti’s room, since they are not needed.

Suman remembers something.

Sumo: No! No! Mausaji, I have some important things in the room. Let me take those, and then you can throw the rest.

Mausaji agrees.

Scene 8: Suman’s Room
Suman goes to her room, and she tries to find something and finally she finds the box, and also the letters.

Sumo: Thank god, no one found these and throw it away.

Suman takes out some of her stuff and keeps it.

Sumo: I will have to take this with me. It’s unsafe here.

And while, Suman is packing the box, she finds a picture of hers and Shravan, she smiles seeing it and hugs it. The episode ends.

Precap: Diwali Party is going on. Suman is dressed in light pink-orange saree with a white-golden type blouse for Diwali and Shravan is dressed in a red kurta. Suman and Shravan collide with each other from behind, and they look at each other.

Hi all. And yeah haha sorry for the very big message in the end yesterday’s part ? and well thanks for the wishes and support ? and also thanks for being very patient reading my ff. And you all will love the upcoming track.
Today is WeirdSister’s birthday so happy birthday WeirdSister and well I am sorry I read ur comment late if not I would have published the episode earlier ?.
Okay for today, this much ? thanks for enduring me so much ???

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