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Ek Anokha Rishta..(episode-14)

NeethuBy NeethuMarch 26, 201728 Comments7 Mins Read
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The episode starts with Suh telling about the punishment

Suh: Wait for a second…
She went inside and brought a piece of cardboard on which something was written
Bh: What’s this?
Suh: This is a placard. Hold this and stand on the street
Me: Why should I?
Suh: Because I’m telling u to do!
Sh takes the placard and ShaVana laughs seeing it
Me: What’s so funny?
I grabbed it from his hand and read it. I got totally shocked after reading that. It was written ” I’m a Sadu! And I fought with my wife which was wrong. Give me a hug if u think I’m cute.
ShaVana was laughing so hard after I read it out loud
Me: Ha ha! Very funny. Suhani kyun kiya tumne aisa?
Suh: Stop wasting time and go stand on the street. U should get at least 5 hugs to enter inside
Me: Ye tumne bilkul achha nahi kiya!
Suh: Now don’t blame me! U were the one who wanted to apologize
I sighed and went out of the house. I was standing just a few inches away from the gate while Suh came and pushed me further

Suh: Go and stand little away so that everybody who passes by this street will see u..
I gave her an angry stare and stood a bit away this time. I was relieved to see nobody on the street since it was afternoon. But I knew children would soon come out of their houses to play in the park.
Bh: Is this really necessary Suh?
Suh: Oh yeah! Don’t pity on him. And yes, u both cannot go hug him
Bh: Par Suhani..
Suh: I don’t wanna hear anything..Now I’m gonna take a nap while u both make sure that he doesn’t run away
She goes inside
Sh: I wish I could give u hug..
Me: Oh! Thank u for your kindness…

Half an hour passed but none came out of their houses. Bh brought me a chair so that I could at least sit. I was so tired and so I was starting to doze but then I heard some laughter. I opened my eyes with a jerk to see 3 to5 kids standing around making fun of me.
Kid1: Look at him! He fought with his wife..
Kid2: Oh so sad! Ha ha ha…
Little girl: Aww! Don’t make fun of him Henry..
Me: Anybody think I’m cute?
Kid1: Not at all! You’re so mean
Little girl: Stop it both of u! I’ll hug ya..
The little girl gave me a hug.Now I just needed 4 more. Sh& Bh smiled at me
Little girl: Now can u go back to your house?
Me: No..i need 4 more hugs
Girl: Oh..Let me see if I could help u..
She ran away saying that and after 15 minutes a huge crowd gathered in front of me. Everybody laughed at me but 2 teenage boys hugged me and took a selfie with me.I was so embarrassed. Why was Suh doing this to me? She gives more importance to her friend more than me. I felt very bad. Just then I noticed a familiar face in between the crowd. It was Paul! I knew he would help me for sure.
Paul: Omg Yuvraj! Is this a punishment?
Me: Yeah..Will u help me?
Paul: Sure! (He hugged me and gave a pat on my back) I would’ve brought my kids to help u but they’re not in town. And i gotta go now. Bye

The crowd was cleared now. And it was 5 in the evening I was sitting here for 3 hours and now it was beginning to get cold. I turned back to see what was sh doing and I saw Bh leaning against Sharad’s shoulder and both were asleep sitting on the porch. At least they got to spend time with each other. A rain drop fell on my face. I lifted my head to the sky and it soon started raining. ShaVana woke up and saw me getting all wet.
Bh: Yuvi come in…
Me: No I need another hug
Bh: Just forget about that now. Its raining heavily.
Sh: We’ll talk to Suh. Come on yaar
But I didn’t go.Suh came outside on seeing that it was raining. She ran towards me and said
Suh: Come inside.. Its OK I forgive u
Me: No I wont! go inside or you’ll get ill
To my surprise she gave me a tight hug and said
Suh: Ab Chalo
I was happy by her gesture. Sh&Bh raised their eyebrows on seeing it. She likes me for sure! She held my hand and took me to my room and said
Suh: Look, you’re all drenched now. (She took out a towel from my cupboard and started to dry my hair) I was already on cloud nine! I could feel her soft fingers running through my hair. ShaVana hid behind the door and was too excited to see all this. Then they went back. Meanwhile I held suh’s wrist and made her sit beside me.
Me(still holding her hand): I’m sorry for what i did.

Suh: It’s okay..let’s forget about that now. Go and change or else you’ll catch a cold she was about to go when I made her sit and took the towel from her. I touched her wet hair and dried it. I could smell a soothing flavor from her hair. I gently moved all hair backwards and I touched her bare shoulder and I could sense that she was too nervous to say something. I took advantage of that and gave a peck on her neck which made her turn towards me. She tried to get away but I held her closer. Now she was trembling with fear and avoided looking into my eyes. I lifted her face and kissed her forehead.
Suh(in a soft tone): Yuvraj, tum kya kar rahe ho?
I didn’t answer to that, instead I went towards her lips but she kept her hand in between, blocking the kiss
Suh: Control yourself Yuvraj, we aren’t doing right…
But I knew that I was doing right coz I love her. I realised that she too loved me back but she wasn’t ready to accept it. I kissed all over her neck sending shivers down her spine. She moved back all of a sudden and went outside without uttering a word. I wanted to confess to her as soon as possible now. I couldn’t wait to make her mine forever!

Suh’s POV:
I quickly went into my room ignoring di& Bhayya. I closed the door and changed. I didn’t know why but I kind of liked Yuvraj being around me. I thought of what happened few minutes ago and I couldn’t stop smiling. I buried my face in a pillow. I wanted to spend more time with him& cursed myself for coming to my room so soon. Maybe he likes me…I was happy at the thought
The screen freezes on the happy faces of Suh & Yuvi

Precap: All the four of them play a game of truth or dare

Sorry for the short update guys! I will post longer episodes after Tuesday. Hope you all liked it. Please do comment and stay tuned for more episodes..

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    28 Comments

    1. yuvani_saraj on March 26, 2017 5:39 pm

      wow awesome episode…loved yuVani moments…and shaVna are so cute…

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:49 pm

        Thanks a lot yuvani saraj!

    2. Somi on March 26, 2017 5:45 pm

      Hiii neethu, I liked it very much… Specially YuvAni sweet moments…. All the best dear… Update asap

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:50 pm

        Thanks you very much Somi dear!!

    3. sri on March 26, 2017 6:04 pm

      i love it. its very funny ,cute and romantic episode .i like the punishment part very much.plz update soon

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:51 pm

        Thank u so much sri !Keep commenting..

    4. anshi sharma on March 26, 2017 7:01 pm

      awesome episode di.. waiting for next

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:51 pm

        Thank u anshi sis!

    5. yuvani on March 26, 2017 7:06 pm

      nice episode……….all the four of them are very cute…Thank you

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:52 pm

        Thank u yuvani!

    6. Khyati on March 26, 2017 7:52 pm

      Hey papers khatam ho gai wooooow superb episode lovely yaar thanks for updating in between ur exams tooo

      • Neethu on March 26, 2017 8:54 pm

        U don’t have to thank me Khyati.Sirf ek aur paper baaki hai, wo bhi Tuesday ko khatam ho jayega. Thanks for commenting!!

    7. Bhargavi on March 26, 2017 8:40 pm

      Woww…superb episode neethu sis…i loved it to d core…awesome ?…hats off dear…update asap

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 7:16 am

        Thanks a lot Bhargavi!

    8. Sri on March 26, 2017 9:58 pm

      Good episode

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 7:16 am

        Thanks sri !Keep commenting

    9. abi on March 26, 2017 10:50 pm

      dear what a romantic update.. u jus took me to their world n that placard punishment was awesome.. loved it a lot.. superb work..

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 7:17 am

        Thank you abi dear!

    10. Tp on March 26, 2017 11:28 pm

      Super episode. yuvani moments were just awesome. r u from Kerala neethu

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 7:19 am

        Thank you Tp ! Yeah I’m from kerala but I don’t live there. What about you?

    11. Prashprashu on March 27, 2017 11:33 am

      Awesome love yuvani scenes

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thanks prashprashu!! Keep commenting

    12. shilpa-saraj on March 27, 2017 11:50 am

      Oh my goodnesss………. loved it neethu chechi…. .. im sweating here….. aft r a long time got some yuvani hot romance.. im so happy… such a sweet way to relax myself from exam pressure… thank thank u … thanks a lot….. sorry for commenting late…

      Btw .. which part of kerala are u frm.. even im a keralite…

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 3:44 pm

        Thank u so much Shilpa dear!? I’m from calicut and u?

      • shilpa-saraj on March 27, 2017 3:46 pm

        Tvm… very far.. anyways im settled in Kuwait

    13. sarita on March 27, 2017 2:57 pm

      superb superb superb yuvAni moment was superb

      • Neethu on March 27, 2017 3:44 pm

        Thanks a lot Sarita!

    14. Radha on March 27, 2017 8:47 pm

      Neetu its mind blowing dear.ur toooooo good yaar.episode is super.highlight is punishment.hats off to ur imagination dear.sry fr late comment sis.

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