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Home»Fan Fiction»Ek Anokha Rishta..(episode-13)
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Ek Anokha Rishta..(episode-13)

NeethuBy NeethuMarch 24, 201724 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hi everyone! Thank u for all your comments.I’m happy that you all are liking it. I just have another exam to be completed after that I’ll be hopefully updating it regularly.

After Suh & Bh went back
Me: Now control your emotions sharad and let’s go
We went to the living room and I was so shocked to see Suh&Avi dancing romantically to the song dekha hazaro dafaa aapko. My blood was boiling hot and I rolled my hands into a fist. Sharad noticed that and said trying to avoid the awkward situation.
Sh: What’s going on here?

Bh: Can’t u see they’re dancing?
Sh: Why are they dancing? I mean…
Suh: We haven’t danced together for so long that’s why.. Di why don’t u dance with Bhayya?
Wow! Now everybody has a partner.
Bh: Are u out of your mind?
Suh: Please na..Mere liye.
Suh said widening her eyes and Bh couldn’t deny her
Bh: OK..just for u
Sh held her hands and kept his another hand on her waist. At first she felt awkward but then they started dancing with the beats. They were admiring each other. Suh saw me standing alone and felt bad. She was about to say something but I left out of that room.
She came behind me and locked the door of my room
Me: What do u need? Go& dance
Suh: Aww! Tumhe bura laga?

Me: Nahi tho?
Suh: I’ve already made it clear to u that he’s my Bestie
Me: That doesn’t mean u can dance romantically with him
Suh: Yuvraj! Do u think I’m in love with him?
Me: NO!

Suh: Then stop feeling insecure and behave like a good boy. Look your nose is already growing big!
She pulled my nose which angered me
Me: I’m not insecure! But u stay within your limits okay?
Suh: Why should I?
Me: Because you’re my wife!!

There was a silence between us after I said that. I gotta stop myself from confessing to her. But its tough coz I love her soo much! God I don’t know when I started falling for her. But each minute my love for her was growing. I just wanted to tell her that I love her more than anything in the world! But I couldn’t .. Now she was staring at me like I’ve committed some crime. Then I said breaking the silence
Me: I’m sorry but I..
Suh: Look Yuvi he’s my friend and he’ll feel bad if u continue behaving like this with him..
Me: He’ll feel bad? Then what about me?
Suh: What about you? Why do u feel bad?

Me: Because I …Tum rehne do, jaake uske saath naacho
Suh: What the hell? Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko? U don’t have to remind me of my limits, instead u stay within your limits
She stormed out of the room and slammed the door
I was too furious by hearing her words. I was very frustrated that I kicked a chair. I then thought to control my anger so I took a deep breath, I got reminded that our wedding was just a compromise. What’s her fault in this? She was into trouble by saving my life. But I thought she too had the same feeling for me but I was wrong. She never loved me! I sat down on the floor and thought of the time we spent together.

Meanwhile at the living room
Suh sat on the sofa and was thinking about Yuvraj’s strange behavior while Bh was shouting at Sharad for spilling the flour down. Avi excused himself to talk to someone on the phone and went outside.
Sh: I was just trying to help Bh ji!
Bh: Kardiya madad? Ab jao!

Sh: Par Bh ji suniye tho..
Suh(in an angry tone): Would u guys just shut up for sometime??
Sh&Bh understood that something happened between YuvAni on seeing her anger
Bh: What happened Suh? Sab teek tho hai na?
Suh: Yeah…I need some rest
Bh helped Suh go to her room and made her lie down
Bh: Are u sure everything’s fine?
Suh:Yes di..
Meanwhile Sh goes to Yuvi and sees the whole room messed up and he was sitting in a corner

Sh: Guru kya hua ?
Yuvi looks at him
Bh(in mind): There’s definitely some problem.. I’ll go ask Yuvraj
Yuvi narrates everything to sh
Sh: What she said that to u?
Bh also listened to all this standing near the door and says
Bh: Yuvraj? You…
Yuvi(nods): Yeah I love her.. But she doesn’t
Tears welled up in his eyes Bh was happy but still she pitied on Yuvi’s condition
Bh(keeps her hand on Yuvi’s shoulder): Don’t worry..She’s my sister and I know she loves u too
Yuvi: Really?

Bh: Yeah..I’ve seen it in her eyes
Yuvi: I don’t think so coz she spoke in a harsh tone to me.. Why does this happen to me? I’ve never talked to girls before but when i’m in love now doesn’t care at all..
Bh: Its not like that.. I think u should tell her
Sh: No Bh ji.. What if she denies?
Bh: That’s right too..OK let me see what can be done. But u don’t worry Yuvraj
Yuvi: But first send this Avi or Avinash whatever away from here
Bh(laughs): He’s a good friend of her,Nothing else.(Yuvi stares at her) OK fine if u insist
Sh: But what will u say him?
Bh: Umm…First let’s make Suh& u friends again then we’ll think about him
After a few hours..
Suh gets up from bed to see a letter placed beside her. She picked up the piece of paper and unfolded it
It read:
Suhani I’m sorry for hurting your feelings. I know I’ve done a mistake and now I regret for it. I hope you will forgive me. Even if u don’t I’ll do anything u say.
With love,
Yuvraj.
Suh’s POV:
Now he wants me to forgive him? I couldn’t understand what was going on. Why was he behaving strange? Anyways I’m not ready to forgive him. He has surely crossed his limits this time!
I was better now and so I walked by myself to his room only to find him sitting on his bed with an exhausted look.
Me: Hey u!
Yuvi jumped out of the bed and tried to come near towards me
Me: I’m alright now..I don’t need your help

Yuvi: Fine.. U read the letter?
Me: Yeah. U really feel guilty for what u did?
Yuvi: Yes, give me any punishment
Me: OK..your punishment is that you’ve got to talk in a nice manner u Avinash
Yuvi: What?

I raised my eyebrows and he said
Yuvi: OK fine!
We went to the living room and to my surprise I saw that Avi was leaving
Me: Where are u going?
Avi: uh..I’m going to my colleague’s house. I’ll stay there for a day and leave to US
Me: But u said that u were gonna stay here
Sh: Arre Suh bhabhi leave him na..Bechara
Me: Bechara? Why?
Bh: He said that he will leave along with his colleague
Yuvi’s POV:
I was sure that it was Sh& Bh who did something to make him leave. When Suh turned towards Avi, Bh showed me a thumbs up and Sharad winked at me. I was too happy after all he was leaving.
Me: Oh! I really wanted to spend more time with u Avi. Unfortunately that couldn’t happen
Suh gave me a deadly stare and I tried avoiding an eye contact with her
Avi: Yeah I too wanted to stay but..
Sh: It’s OK u can come anytime. Hai na Bh ji?

Bh: Yes..of course
Avi: OK then bye Suh..
He bid goodbye to everyone and left. I felt like as light as a feather now.
Me: I really wanted to talk to him Suh but he..
Suh: Pata nahi use kya hua.. But give me sometime to think of another punishment
Me: Please, take your own time
She went inside
Me(looking at ShaVana): What did u guys do?

Bh: Mein batati hun..
FB shows
Bh: Sharad look,Avi was scared of ghosts&is superstitious right from childhood so what if he scare him?
Sh: That sounds good..
Avi was busy with his mobile while Sharad went to him and said
Sh: So Avi u aren’t scared of anything right?
Avi: Why do u ask that?
Sh: Ok I’ll say it to u.. Its rumored that there’s a ghost of an old man here
Avi(loud voice): What?? A ghost? U gotta be kidding right?
Sh: Nahi yaar…Its believed that the old man used to live in this street in a small house along with his wife. But one day his wife cheated on him and when he found about it his wife killed him with a saw

Avi(gulps down his saliva): A saw? That’s so cruel of her.. So what about him now?
Sh: After his death, one night when his wife was asleep she was awakened by a noise and the next morning she was found dead. Since his wife’s zodiac sign was Libra he makes people’s life who’s sign was Libra dreadful
Avi: Nooo that can’t be true!
Bh comes there

Bh: Sharad u didn’t tell him about the ghost right?
Sh nods
Bh: Oh no Sharad! U are such an idiot
Sh: But why? He isn’t Libra is he?
Avi: I am!! Oh no where am i stuck? Jai bajrangbali ki!
ShaVana controls their laughter
Avi: I think maybe I should leave from here..
Bh: No Avi u shouldn’t! U aren’t still scared of ghosts are u?
Avi: I’m….Yes I’m scared. Don’t tell Suh about this please
Bh: if u are really scared then fine..
He leaves. ShaVana gets excited and hug each other

FB ends
Me: Ha ha ha!! He’s such a darpok.. I love u guys
Sh: All credits goes to Bh ji..
Bh: No! But Sharad made up this story. And I must say u are intelligent
Sh: Thank u..
They both share an eyelock. I coughed which broke their trance
Me: Now what’s Suh gonna do to me?
Suh comes behind me and says

Suh: I’ve thought of a punishment for u..
I looked on thinking what it would be

Precap: YuVani& ShaVana moments

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    24 Comments

    1. anshi sharma on March 24, 2017 3:49 pm

      superb epi…
      waiting for yuvani moment

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:21 pm

        Thanks for commenting Anshi!

    2. yuvani_saraj on March 24, 2017 3:54 pm

      awesome episode yaar…yuVani and shaVana scenes so cute

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:24 pm

        Thank you very much Yuvani saraj!

    3. yuvani on March 24, 2017 4:33 pm

      amazing track……..loved every bit of the episode……..Thank you

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:24 pm

        Thanks Yuvani dear!

    4. Somi on March 24, 2017 6:14 pm

      Awesome just loved it … All the best dear

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:25 pm

        Thank you somi!

    5. Avanikamdar on March 24, 2017 6:51 pm

      Lovely and sorry i m not commenting regular bcoz of my exams but after 13 i will comment

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:26 pm

        Thank you so much Avanikamdar! Don’t be sorry for it Concentrate on your exams and all the best!

    6. Sri on March 24, 2017 7:19 pm

      Good one… Atleast in FF we are getting nice yuvani scenes thanks to you

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:27 pm

        Thank u sri! Keep commenting..

    7. Bhargavi on March 24, 2017 7:25 pm

      Amazing episode..i thoroughly enjoyed it..yuvraj’s feelings were awesome…waiting for YUVANI moments..good job dear…update asap..

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:28 pm

        Thank you bhargavi dear!

    8. Nainika on March 24, 2017 7:56 pm

      Very nice!! Waiting for more Yuvaani scenes… update soon

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:29 pm

        Thanks for commenting for the first time Nainika! I’ll try to update asap

    9. Radha on March 24, 2017 7:57 pm

      Hi neetu sis entire episode is very very nice.its a complete entertainer.yuvani scenes were tooo cute.poor yuvi he is confused.complete your last exam quickly.all d very best dear.we will be waiting fr u.

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:30 pm

        Thank u soo much Radha sis!!

    10. sri on March 24, 2017 8:54 pm

      lovely episode …. sis.that flashblack part is super i love it.sis plz make suhani also feel for yuvraj.waiting for nxt epi.ALL THE BEST FOR EXAM.

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 10:31 pm

        Thank u very much sri sista!

    11. abi on March 24, 2017 11:10 pm

      awesome awesome awesome each and everything is jus so lovely…

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 11:36 pm

        Th

      • Neethu on March 24, 2017 11:37 pm

        Thanks abi !

    12. sarita on March 24, 2017 11:40 pm

      awesome epi shavana n yuvAni scene were nice precap interesting

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