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Home»Fan Fiction»ek adhuri dastan (part 1)
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ek adhuri dastan (part 1)

MABy MAOctober 2, 201621 Comments3 Mins Read
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hi guys .it is my first fan fiction please support me as I am not well I would glimpse of the story.
all the couples are separated after ishana’s accident .th e rift is created amidst om and shivay because of riddhima.om is not able to forgive shivay .I will reveal in upcoming episodes

@hospital
ishana is in coma since 2 years due to severe accident .om still has a hope in his heart that she would awake soon .in her absence he used to spend his quality time with cancer affected children of the hospital .he used to bring smile on their faces by distributing sweets and toys once in a month .he used to tell them stories.

it has been 6 months there is no development in ishana’s condition.om is standing in front of window and watching patients .a cool breeze knocks his face and he turned around .he saw ishana standing infront of him .om came to her

ishana:what are you looking om ????
om:I am looking at those helpless persons who
came here with a hope to get their loved
ones back.

om holds her hand and says ishana we are one soul having different bodies .my heart knews that you would come back to me.she step backward and disappear .om came into senses.

he sat beside her on stool and keep his head beside her hand and slept .someone knocks and he wakes up and ask them to come .they are cancer affected children with whom om used to spend time .they brought ballons with get well soon wriitten upon them.om gets teary eyes and hugs them .

one of the child comes forward and wipes his tears.he said that you only said na that miracles happen if one has faith and hope .om patted his shoulder and hug him.they all ask to ishana to awake soon as they all are waiting for her .
om told them that ishana love kids alot and she would never avoid your request.he bid them bye.

according to his routine he started writing a chapter of his novel ek adhuri dastan.
shivika is watching silently standing behind door.shivay is not able to control his tears and started crying like baby.
anika makes him sit and wipe his tears and ask not to blame himself.

shivay:look at condition of om he is getting
weaker day by day .I am helpless
anika: no billu ji he is getting stronger day by day
because his strength is his love.

separation is the ultimate phase of love
shivay: I agree with you .anika please forgive me
for my mistake .I should not have
trusted riddhima’s.words.

anika-we will discuss later about this.
om was writing and suddenly he reminisce about his past events and incidents.
this is it .flash back would be shown in past episodes

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21 Comments

  1. Jazz1 on October 2, 2016 8:40 pm

    Amazing. Superb shivani di. Hope u will post the next episode soon

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:54 pm

      thank you so much

  2. bshama1239 on October 2, 2016 8:46 pm

    Shivani materstoke in first one only dear such suspense loved it too the heights dears

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:17 pm

      thank you so much

  3. Asma Basher on October 2, 2016 8:53 pm

    Awesome episode

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:20 pm

      thanks you so much

  4. shivani on October 2, 2016 9:03 pm

    I am not well so I could not make it lengthier

  5. Akshaya on October 2, 2016 9:08 pm

    It’s ok dear it is so nice

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:40 pm

      thank you so much akshaya

  6. S.Z.F.Z on October 2, 2016 9:10 pm

    Shivani di, it is amazing! Nice concept! Keep it up! Get well soon di! Take care!

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    -Zuha

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:40 pm

      thank you so much dear

  7. Priya15 on October 2, 2016 9:18 pm

    I m shocked di..eager to know abt past… Ishkara scenes was soo heart touching.. Luvd it overall… U asked me na..i have sent u a pm abt it….get well soon didi….

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 9:35 pm

      thank yoi dear

  8. Tulasi on October 2, 2016 10:41 pm

    Interstng shivani…..plz update it soon

    • shivani on October 2, 2016 11:18 pm

      thank you dear

  9. Satyam on October 2, 2016 11:43 pm

    Awsm epi… I really loved ur ff …. Plzzz update next episode ASAP…

    • shivani on October 3, 2016 12:22 pm

      thank you so much

  10. Renimarenju on October 3, 2016 12:51 pm

    Shivu…..very very emotional ff…..the way u portrayed omkara…just amazing….yaar…..
    Hats off….And u deserve some lines from renima di as u have touched my heart…..
    ZINDAGI KE KITAB MEIN JAB PALATTHE HEIN HUM ATEET KE PANNON KO

    TOH BAS BAHUT LAMHE AUR YAADEIN TASVEEREN LEKAR HAZIR HOTE HEIN

    UNN TASVEERON MEIN BAHUT KUCH HEIN JOH HAMARE JAZBATOON KE GAWAH HEIN

    INN TASVEERON KO ADA DENA AASAN NAHI AUR AAPNE INHEN KHUB ROSHAN KIYA HAI

    ISHQ KE YEH ADA AUR JAZBATON KI YEH CHAVI DIL KO PIKHAL DI

    Standing Ovation….Hats Off

    • shivani on October 3, 2016 1:28 pm

      thank you very very much di .m so happy I can’t say.superb poetry

  11. Janvi on October 3, 2016 1:22 pm

    Hats off.
    Loved it

    • shivani on October 3, 2016 1:47 pm

      thank you so much dear

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