“”A DREAM”” (SWASAN SS by Kakali) part 17

Warning: A non-numeric value encountered in /home/ftpusers/tellyu/public_html/wp-content/themes/publisher/includes/func-review-rating.php on line 212

Warning: A non-numeric value encountered in /home/ftpusers/tellyu/public_html/wp-content/themes/publisher/includes/func-review-rating.php on line 213

Hii ev1,, here m with d 17th part n 2rd last part of my story….
Thnk u all for ur amazing response on previous parts.. thnk u to all silent readers also..once again sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. :0 ๐Ÿ˜€

So Let’s go inside d DREAM,,,

Link of previous chappies :::

Link of d teaser ::

Link of my 1st OS ::

Link of my 2nd OS ::

Recap-SwaMin emotional convention…

Here we gooo,,,,,

–:-It’s said โ€œLove is not an equation, it is not a contract, and it is not a happy ending. Love is the slate under the chalk, the ground that buildings rise, and the oxygen in the air. It is the place you come back to, no matter where your headedโ€
Is it soooยฟยฟยฟ–:–

After 5 days ::::

“Sankyyy !!! What’s wrong? U seem disturb today? Anything serious?” Nia asks Sanskar finding him in deep thoughts..

Sanskar comes to sense when Nia shakes him through his shoulder ” Haa !! Nia , u were saying something.. !! ”

“Sankyy,, r u okk? I mean m watching u from many days… !! U look tense.. is something bothering u?? U can share with me if u want” says Nia keeping her palm in his hand…

Sanskar takes a long breath n narrates everything from start to end… !! From where his behaviour changed towards Swara till he slapped her…

Nia looks in his eyes deeply finding guilt n restlessness among with a new born feeling who is trying to fly with wings just need a small blow of wind to reach it’s heightens… !!!

“I don’t know why but i feel like something is wrong !! Whether i want to avoid this feeling.. it’s just grows more.. !! M not getting what to do.. !!” Says Sanskar running his fingures through his hairs…

Nia stares him smilingly with a smirk…”Sankyy ohh God u slapped Swara.. !! Wooww !! U did rit.. i wish i could see that..,, ”

Sanskar is shocked at her statement…

Nia continuous”U know what Sanskar ,, i hate that girl… she is cheap n so chipkuu.. !! Anytime bas Sanskuu Sanskuu Sanskuuuuu !!! Sometime even i also think to slap her.. !! N u said correct she is disgusting… !! Disgusting fellow.. ”

That is enough for Sanskar… he is trying hard to control his anger as he knows Nia is repeating some of his harsh words only which he used for Swara… but now he understands… totally understands how he sounded,,n how it hurted Swara. “Enough,, Nia.. u r crossing ur limits…!! Just Shut up…” Says Sanskar jerking of his place with teary red eyes…

“What happened Sanskar? Why u reacting like this? I said that” (Sanskar cuts off her)

“Bass,, u said enough about MY SHONA.. !! now just shut ur mouth up.. !! M listening from long but it doesn’t mean u can say anything about her…. it’s better u stop or i will forget u r also a friend of mine… Says Sanskar showing his hand to stop her ….

Saying this he left d place…

Nia sees him going … but she kept smiling that too broadly n wipe tears which r about to flow from her cheeks …” ALL D BEST SANSKAR.. !! HAVE A HAPPY LIFE AHEAD… ,, i have done my work . Now it’s ur turn… !! ”

At night ::: Sanskar’s room.,,,

What’s happening with me??
What’s wrong with me??
Why I did that with Swara??
How could i do that??
Why didn’t Swara say me anything??
Why she listened all my accusion silently??
Now where is she??
Is she okk??
Why her phone is switched off??
Why is she absent from college??
Why Simin also not coming to college??
Is anything wrong with Swara??
Why i couldn’t tolerate when Nia bash Swara??
Is she with Swayam now??
Why SwaSwa’s friendship is bothering me??
Why i can’t see them close??

All this questions r killing him like anything… !!

He is getting hurt with every question??he is soo damn helpless that can’t even cry properly.. !! His life has become a mess.. !!

Sleep is far away from his tired n red puffy eyes.. !! Whenever he closes his eyes Swara’s teary n blank eyes haunts him.. those emotionless eyes makes him more guilty n sad …

As a result he takes a sleeping tablet n after sometime sleep overcomes….. but he murmurs in sleep “I M SORRY SWARA.. !!!

” [We know it’s been said that we just don’t recognise the significant moments of our lives while they r happening… We grow complacent with ideas,, or things or people n we take them forgrantted n it’s usually not until that thing is about to b taken away from us that we’he realized how wrong we have been that we realized HOW MUCH WE NEED IT,, HOW MUCH WE LOVE IT ]”….

Next day morning,,,,

Sanskar gets ready n takes blessings from his Mom… Today he is going to Swara to Apologize… !!! He is somehow feeling relaxed thinking that everything will b all rit.. !! But lets not forget Destiny is not soo good to shower blessings to all ….

Sanskar is driving car thinking about Swara n his recent meeting with her.. !! How were they?? N now how are they??
He is engrossed in deep thoughts that couldn’t notice a truck coming towards him n after a second everything goes black.. !!!

At hospital :::: after sometime,,,,,

Swara’s POV,,,

I was waiting for Simin in my hospital bed thinking about my future about my life which is going to change from today onwards.. but still i have a hope HAVE I??(smiles painfully)..as Simin make me understand that i acted selfish..I have Simmu,,Hipoo,, Maasi Maa,, Mousa jii, Bee. I have to live for them.. i can’t b selfish… !!!
But m also aware about d fact that now nothing can’t happen.. !! It’s late .. it’s too lateee.. !!!

When i was thinking about all this,, i heard Dr’s voice.. !! She was saying something… something about Sanskar n i can hear it.. !! For a second my heart stopped beating when i saw Sanskar in pool of blood.. !! He was breathing heavily… n Dr. was guiding some other doctors … but i couldn’t heart …. !! My world froze at the moment n everything begun to move slowly… he was taken to OT n then i didn’t remember …

POV ends ::::

After 3 n half hour Swara opend her eyes.. !! D 1st thought comes to her mind is “HOW IS MY SANSKAR?? IS HE FINE??” … without waiting for anyone she moves to Dr.Hemanshi’s cabin …

About 15 minutes later Swara comes out with a pale face but there is something in her eyes,, something extraordinary which indicates she is going to get a new life… !! She is going to live her DREAMS again.. !!

She smilingly goes to Sanskar’s room where he is sleeping peacefully with bandages all around his body.. !! A lone tear escapes from her eyes watching her DREAM BOY in this state.. !!
She had never thought even in DREAMS too see him like this ever before going away from all.. !!

She knew that she loves him.. !! Unconditionally.. !! But also knew it’s her fate that she can’t be loved by her loved ones… but she is happy with it.. !! She has nothing to complain… nothing to argue with life..!!

Even though According to her A glorious death would b in her final breath to take before she die ,, to hear one final time on her DREAM BOY’s,, her beloved’s,, her A DREAM’s,, her SANSKU’s mouth “I LOVE U TOO”…

She takes step towards n sit beside him… Words r not coming out of throat.. !! Only silence in d whole room with breathing sounds of two persons … !! Sometimes even silence speaks more then words.. !! N today Swara could feel it.. !!

She carefully hold his hands in her palm n gives a light kiss.. !!!

She wants to say many things.. !!she has many DREAMS ,,, she has lot’s of feelings to share… but she has no time.. !! She needs to leave.. !! She needs to sleep peacefully without disturbing anyone… without informing anyone… !!! With every passing moment she is becoming past of d past…. There is no future for her just d past steadily accumulating…. n her DREAMS for her future is now leaving her soul.. NOW it’s her turn ,,, She has to goo.. !! “I NEED TO LEAVE”…

“If i could only have this life for one more day,, if i could only turn back time just for once… !!! You know Sanskar u will always b my life ,, u will b in my DREAMS… my reasons to be… MY LOVE, MY HEART,MY “A DREAM” is breathing for this moment in time… I wish i could find d words to say before i leave u today… ” Swara says to Sanskar caressing his hairs with lots of love..

She slowly bends n gives a soft kiss in his forehead,,touching with her own for d LAST time..
some pearls of her eyes falls on his one moisten their eyes “GOOD BYE SANSKAR”… says n left d room… !!!

Almost 4 hours later,,,,,

Sanskar’s POV,,,,

I was coming to meet Swara.. !!! I was supposed to ask her sorry .. !! Then suddenly everything went black.. i couldn’t figure out what happened to me ??
I was unable to open my eyes,,, that was paining like hell.. !!! But at that moment only i could see SWARA’s face… !! Her smiling face n it was enough for me to make me smile in pain also … i slowly close my eyes but still Swara was with me.. !! She was smiling looking at me …. then i don’t remember afterwards n now lying on bed holding my head n everything is black black black.. !!! Suddenly i heard someone coming towards me … i don’t know what happened to me… !!!

POV ends,,,,

Sanskar opens his eyes but everything is blur … !!! At first he was getting black view n now blur !!! But with passing seconds his vision get cleared… !!!

Dr.- How r u feeling now Sanskar? I have opened ur bandages… !! Now can u see us clearly… ?

Sanskar(confuse)-Yes,,Doctor i can perfectly see u alll… !!! But why u asking this? What happened to me??

Dr.-Cool down Sanskar… u r still week.. !! Don’t take tension.. m asking u as u meet with an accident n ur eyes were badly damaged… !!! So we had to operate it..

Sanskar is in shock… !!! Just hell shocked… Something strikes his mind n he hurriedly asks “Doctor how u know my name? N u said eye operation… !! That means somebody … (Doctor cuts off)…

Dr.- Relax Sanskar…!! Everything is fine now.. !! N yeah one of ur friend was admitted here… !! From her i get to know ur name.. !!!

Sanskar-But Doctor ?? (Again cuts off him)

Dr.-Before u ask me anything.. !!! I just wanna say ur friend said me to give u this…. n rest u will get to know by urself… !!!
Take care n stay strong….(takes out a bag n a cell phone n hand over to Sanskar). !!!

Sanskar with blank expressions holds d bag n says thnk u… !!!

He looks at d cell phone n he didn’t take time to recognize that it was Swara’s phone.. !! Coz at back side there is a sticker if Pikachuuu.. !! Seeing this without thinking he smilies a bit n open d lock .. as soon as he opened it a video flashes on the screen … He hasitately plays it … his heart beat skip coz d video is of Swara.. !!! An unknown fear comes to his mind ….

Video starts ,,,,,

Swara-” Heyy Sanskuuu !! Uthh gayee.. !! How u feeling now? R u okk?? Take ur medicines at time.. don’t skip it.. !!!

Waaa u must b thinking why m doing this. !! Why m talking through this video??
But what to doo.. !! Life has not left any choice rather doing this.. !!

I know u r confuse rit.. !! Don’t b Sanskuuu !! Okk Let me make it crystal clear … it means I M NOT WITH U… !! I will not b there when u will see this.. !! I should have gone away soo far that i can’t even return back.. !!

Okk okkk i know even u want that… !! U said me not to show my face na.. !!! See i tried hard n now m successful … !! Trust me now i will never show my face to u.. !!! If u even want then also i can’t.. !!

Now no more my talks let me say u something… “Sanskar u meet with an accident n ur eyes were damaged.. !! Doctors were finding doner to operate u as soon as possible.. !!

After a pause….,,,,

Sanskar now all my DREAMS,,which i used to see through my eyes r with u now.. !!! I may not b there.. !! But my DREAMS r always with u.. !!
Those DREAMS which i couldn’t fulfiled for my soulless body ,, now i can fulfil it again… i can LIVE it again.. i can ENJOY them again… !!!
Now my all DREAMS will come true.. !!!
U was ” A DREAM” for me.. !!! N now all my DREAMS r urs.. !!! Plzzz LIVE it .. !! Coz life always doesn’t give us opportunity to Enjoy it.. !!


Swara is about to off d screen but again smilingly says “Don’t forget i will always come to ur DREAM to disturb u, to annoy u…,,, MY SANSKUUUU !!!! BYEEE !!! “…

N the screen goes black… !!! D cell phone falls from his hand n he sits with a thud….. He slightly touches his eyes …

“SWARAAA U CAN’T DO THIS TO ME… !!! U CAN’T LEAVE ME SWARAAAAAAAA !”… Was his next words echoing in d whole room… !!!

[ “Good bye may seem forever… Farewell is like d end,, but in my heart is the memory and there u will always be… ” ]

Precap-LAST PART.. !!

See guyzz !! I have almost reached to my destination … just one more episode to go… !!!

Thnk u sooo much for reading.. !! Hope u all like it….This episode was dedicated to RASHMI SHARMA mam.. !!! Coz just bcz she is saying SR going offair… m unable to concentrate in anything… not even in my studies… it’s badly effecting me.. !! I don’t know what should i say … !! I wish this news is just ” A DREAM”…

Love u.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
God bless u all.. !!! <3 <3…

We recommend
  1. Anniya

    Give me tissue paper
    So emotional part…
    No cmnt???????
    And sry for not cmnting from long I was not active so much.

    1. Kakali

      Anniyaaaaaa !! Thnk u sooo much dear !! waaa take my fav hanky.. !!*wipe ur tears.. !! ๐Ÿ™‚
      Take a chill pill about not commenting.. ;-*

  2. Awesome ?

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear !!! ;-*

  3. Deeksha

    Kakuuu….. I am gonna kill you….!!!!!! Give a happy ending otherwise u will be in jail for killing swara…!!!!!!! And I will make sure that u will not come out of the jail…..!!!!!!!!

    Pls yaar happy ending…. *puppy eyes…..!!!!!!

    1. Kakali

      Deekshuuuuu !!! u gonna kill me.. huhh m already dead..*spirit.. !!
      Jail. !! lemme think.. yess i can manage there if their cook is good n get 24/7 electricity …
      happy ending.. !! huhuhuhu *close my eyes to shield myself from ur cute eyes..!!
      Thnk u sooo much dear !!!

  4. guess who i am??

    Nice one

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear !!! ๐Ÿ™‚ *u r a human.. !!

  5. Simi

    Superb kakali..
    Too emotional..loved it

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soo much Simi !!! m glad that u loved it dear !! ;-*

  6. Chanu

    I ddnt read dis epi properly. Im soo sleepy and my headache dnt leave me.
    bt I roughly read it…
    and kaku.. u r gone..
    I already booked icu bed 4 u
    soo Be ready 4 confront me… im gonna blast Iin nxt cmnt..
    U r sรฒoo bad.. huhuhu
    u make me sad.. bz f u nw I cdnt hv sweet dreams. If my swasanis nt hpy..hw cn I sleep peacefully. Hhuuhuh..

    its my waring again dr.. I wnt nly happy ending here..
    bT im sure abt hpy ending here is nly 0.5%

    Keep writing
    be happy always
    lv ya
    gn sd.. ๐Ÿ™ ; ( ๐Ÿ™ :'(

    1. Kakali

      Chanuuuuuuuu !!! u still have headache.. !! huhh take care dear !! no need of reading.. !!!
      N haaaa i m already lying on ICU bed.. soo u don’t need to waste money over it… but plzz buy some choco for me.. dun worry i know u will also want that.. soo buy for us.. !!*hug

      Haa dear happy ending 0.5%… u understand it soo well.. awww u r soo smart.. !! *tap ur shoulder…

      Well thnk u sooo much dear !!!
      Love u tooo.. !!
      God bless u…
      huhh still saying take care… otherwise u better know what m going to do… *ready with????…?

      1. Chanu

        Im gonna kill u nw dr..
        nw u hv 2 die!!!!!
        u make me cry….. u r a bad siso..
        I hate u.huhuhuh
        ill nt gv u choco..
        when im sad im eating chocolate ice cream 2 reduce my pain..
        and looks like I hv 2 eat at least 2 liters 4 dis รจpi… u r bad dr..
        rly still my heart is paining like hell… ๐Ÿ™
        Im soo sad and nw I cdnt even beat u or shoot u.. huhuhuh..
        ill nt talk with u.. huhuh.. *frowning face..

        yup.. I hv headache and u hv increase it..
        huhuhh.. bt im waiting 4 ur nxt epi.. huhhuh…
        And u r in icu.. good . Bz u worth it.. hhuhhuu

        uffff banging my head with pillow. ? I 4gt naaa..
        ill nt talk 2 u..
        soo byeee..
        keep writing
        be happy always
        love u..
        Ohh.. I ll nt talk 2 u..
        *angry face..

    2. Kakali

      Chaa…Chaaan…Chaaannnuuu u haaatee meeee !!!!*breakdown in choco land… ๐Ÿ™‚
      u r crying !!!! yahuuuuu !!! such a good morning for me. !!!
      let’s see how will u not give me choco.. !!! *ready to take off to SL…

      waa ur heart i paining … i thought Iur head was spinning…:P

      uhhu Take Care dear !!! just don’t take stress … n plzz try not to give much pain to ur rich pillow… i feel pity.. !!! huahh haa haaa !!!!
      *safe landing on ur roof…
      *run to Chanuuu !!
      *hug n snatch her choco
      *back in my place
      *Chaaanuuu is looking like a puppy
      *I told u.. !!!

      Adare Oya !!!
      Gd mrng dear !!! have a beautiful day ahead.. !! ;-*

      1. Chanu

        u took my choco…
        soo bad..
        im going 2 shoot u kaku..
        nw where ur bullet proof jacket!!
        *dishooom dishooom dishoomm..

        kaku r u ok!!????

        Do u knw dis is wt hpn when sm1 took my choco..

        adarei oyata..

  7. Mahavir

    diiii…….!!!!! this is not fair….i m gonna kill u for this bcz once side swaragini is going offair and otherside u killed swara…..di i was still sobbing….how can u do this….no more cmnts….

    1. Kakali

      Mahaaaa !! don’t cry my sis.. !! *wipe ur tears.. !! u know na.. ev1 has not d fate to cherish their love … or loved by their loved one’s.. so as Swara.. !! but She will leave her dreams.. !!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!!
      n don’t about SR .. it will survive.. !! love u.. ;-*

      1. Mahavir

        di…see everyone is crying…and everyone is wanna beat u….even me to ready with pimpom…. :p

      2. Mahavir

        di……….what happened to malika di….tell me clearly….i m reastless….di please tell me soon…….

    2. Kakali

      Actually Maha.. Malika di is not well since may b October.. !!! then once she fainted … then jiju took her to hospital… !! she even recovered in next 5 days.. !! then she was perfectly fine… in October her marriage done… after some days she again fainted n blood was coming out of her mouth… Jiju rushes her to hospital … then doctors declared that she is in COMA.. !!!
      even i got this shattering news yesterday… i dun know what to say… it was so unbearable for me.. !!!
      but u know what … now di is responding… she is responding to her treatment… !!! she is getting well n doctors said that she will soon be with us… !!! m sooo happy after hearing this… our prayers r working… di is getting well… !!!
      her SIL Anjali is informing about di’s condition to us …. Fairy is connected with her every second… !!!!
      Don’t worry Mahaaa… she will b fine… God is with her.. !!!

      1. Mahavir

        di why u didnt inform me earlier….but di now she is fine na….i ll pray for health….hope she will get well soon….

  8. Hemanshi

    Awesome and emotional episode……nowadays every fanfic and episode on-screen makes cry???
    Now one more thing is bothering me that sr is going off air and along with that kaku’s ff also????

    1. Kakali

      Hemaaaaa Diiii !!! Thnk u soooo much !!! huhh dun worry about SR… it will survive for sure .. !! so take a chill pill… ohh haa pill se yaad aya r u fine now? how is ur back pain? huh take care of MY di.. !!
      N about me.. !! huhuhu I HAVE TO LEAVE.. !! ;-*

      1. Hemanshi

        Shut uppp…….never say that you have to leave……this sentence makes a wrong meaning……..you know I am crying reading this sentence…..pls don’t say this ………????????
        You know already I am not well and if you say like this then my bad situation will turn to worse……so for your di’s health only never speak that sentence……about sr let’s see what happens…..waise rashmi mam has tweeted that sr will jave lots of twists and turns ahead so keep watching but dun know about its survival because now even the actors have lost the hopes…….

        But sr is there or not our binding will be forever……sr has to be off air inedl day or the other …….but promise me our binding will never ever change…….and also promise that you won’t speak that sentence again

    2. Kakali

      Hemaaaa Diiii !!! m really sorry if i hurt u.. !! actually i was saying bcz in some days i have to leave na.. !! i mean i have exam na.. !! plzzz don’t cry.. !! goshhh i blabber a lot naa !! *bang my head with chico:3..

      Plzzz get well sooon.. !! n promise i will never say that.. never ever.. !!

      huhh forget about actors we have hope na.. !! soo it’s enough…
      lets see who will dare to change our bond..?.. Love u Diii…
      Again Sorry for hurting u.. !!! ??

      1. Hemanshi

        Aww love u too??
        Sorry if I yelled at you and hurt you??
        Take care??
        And all the best for exams

    3. Kakali

      Diiii !! u can scold meee… u can yell at mee … even u can beat meee with imaginary cotton broom.. !!! Dii hai app meri itna haq toh banta hai… !!!
      huhhh elders doesn’t say sorry to younger ones… !!! specially when i blabber…n mistake is mine …. hehhh Love u… n thnk u for ur wishes… ;-*

  9. Nagamanasa

    Huhhhh!!!you r really bad kaku dear you made me cry that too early mrng….such an emotional part it is…kaku pls dont make it a sad ending dear…anyways loved this chapter dear…update nxt part soon
    Thnk u

    1. Kakali

      Manasaaa Diiii.. !!! u also crying.. !! huhh dun cry n sorry for making u cry.. but happy u loved it…!!*yeeii lets Nachooo.. !!!
      Thnk u soooo much Diiii… !! ;-*

  10. G.Chandu

    Early morning…You are making me cry…!!! Donkey..monkey…stupid…!!! Early morning you are making me scold you…!!! I hope this whole emotional story was a dream of swara or sanskar’s at the end…!!

    1. Kakali

      Chanduuuuuuu !!! u also crying !!! huhhh copy duck… !!!
      huhhh u can scold me .. !! i don’t mind as we r family rit… n family members have that RIGHT to scold their loved one’s.. !!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! ;-*

  11. Simin

    Why r u doing this
    My hands were trembling to read this part
    I hoped i dont get to read something like this but u wrote that why why why
    Its difficult time for us plz do something plz plz plz

    1. Kakali

      Simmuuuuuuu !!!! just bear me for one more chappy.. plzz plzz plzzz !!!
      huhhh dun tremble otherwise ur Kajal will not perfect … ๐Ÿ˜€
      Thnk u soooo much dear !! yeah it’s difficult for us to believe… but we have no option rit.. !! *hug.. ;-*

    2. Simin

      I want to bear u for my entire life baccha
      Plz na dont say so u know we love u a lot

      1. Kakali

        Simmmuuuu !!! don’t say like that… *blush…
        what will people say. !!! goshhh u naughty girl.. !!!
        Love u tooo dear !!!! *beat u with imaginary cooker !!! ;);-*

  12. Shreeyu

    Kaku Di I saw ur message nd m in car on the way to exam center or school …. I was really not knowing that u write so well …. Huh …. Itne emotional scenes…. Oh my God it was wonderfully written ….. I really loved It and u know na I like such scenes so much ….. M not commenting? on any ff now …. It gud u messaged me now I can give exam in happy mood …. Nd the same is happening with me Di …. For two days I was so shocked that I was really not able to concentrate properly on studies …. But wat to do have no other option other than doing it …. Waise I wanted to ask u something but my school is abt to come so will ask after coming back. … Oky … Till then take care ?

    1. Kakali

      Cutieeeeee !!! Thnk u soooo much dear for ur appreciation… it means a lot.. !!!..
      now i bet we r seriously sisters… coz m fond of this kinda emotional scenes.. !! i like to enjoy it with either popcorn or chewing gum… waa gimme hifi*by leg..!!!

      huhh recoverd … that’s good … but m still there… it’s hunting me like heaven.. !! puut pyuut !!!
      Haa ask me what u wanna ask.. !! urghhh
      Take care dear !!!

  13. Amazing dear .
    Sooooo ??????emotional ?????.
    Sanskar you should value your
    swara ‘ s gratitude . Huh …….. somebody plzzzzzzzzzzz give me a hanky to stop my tears .
    Fabulous muuuaaahhh .
    Love you โ˜บ

    1. Kakali

      Ashnoorrrr u also crying.. !!! *wipe ur tears with my fav hanky.. !!!
      Awwww dear thnk u soooo much .. !!!
      yess Sanskar will… this is going to b a turning point in his life.. !!!
      Love u tooo my sis…
      God bless u… ;-*

  14. Mica

    <—— your number one hater now…. BE AWARE !!!!

    1. Kakali

      Heartless Mica,, Helpless Kakali.. !!
      unpredictable life ,,, cruel destiny.. !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! just bcz of u i became a TU made poet. !!!
      Love u dear !!! God bless u.. !! ;-*

  15. Pooja26

    sooo emotional…;)
    flood aa gya mere ghar mai ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    read all parts in one go dear…..
    loved all d chappyyyss……. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
    post asap…
    tc….. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    1. Kakali

      Poojaaaa !!! happy to see u here dear.. Thnk u sooo much for ur words… it mean a lot.. !!!
      omgggg flood… huhhh i thought it will bring Tsunami… huhuhu !!!
      u2 Take care dear !!!

  16. Soujanya

    Awesome… So heart touching epi….

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Soujanyaaa !!! it feels good to know that it touched ur heart.. !! ;-*

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Anuuu !!! ;-*

  17. Radhika..

    Awesome part di. Ur whole part is like a talk someone gonna tell us. Means the thing happens really. The way u portray the character of swara and the way u write in between about love, amd the pain the bracket part everything u describe is so beautiful and the emotional scene loved the part very much and the emotions and feelingsfeelings in it . swara giving her dreams to her dream boy to fulfil. The part is amazing thanku for such a beautiful story dim loved it. Love u??

    1. Kakali

      Radhikaaaaaaa !!! again a blissful n analysing comment from u.. !!
      Thnk u soooo very much my Sis.. !!!, ur appreciating words mean a lot to meee. !!!
      ohhh haa dear if love exist then pain also.. coz without pain love is tasteless… !! now let’s see what’s gonna happen.. !!
      Love u toooo !!!
      God bless u … !! ;-*
      study well okk.. !!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  18. awesome dr it was very emotional it made me cry plz make it happy ending

    1. Kakali

      Awwww Parull !!! sorry to make u cry dear !!!*wipe ur tears…
      Thnk u sooo much n haa i will try.. !!! ;-*

  19. Heltej

    Kiddo sure i will be in jail for killing you… If u give sad ending… *how i will live without my hubby*..???. Crying crying
    Kiddo dont make ur studies get affect due to serials… It just a serial!
    Do study properly…. If u dint study… I will come there n beat with u broomstick!
    ***Mission broomstick kakali! ***

    1. Kakali

      Heltej Diiii sorry to say but m cursing u to have a happy n beautiful life with our jiju !!!! huhhhh !!!! may my curse touch ur soul deeply n it’s effect keeps till 7th birth of ur life with JIJU…. !!!

      Waaa Diii dun cry… otherwise jiju will kill me for making her beautiful wife cry n bring Tsunami in house… ๐Ÿ™‚ :0…
      sooo plzzzz wipe ur tears.. !!!
      Haaaa Thnk u sooo much Diii for ur advice… but u know m soo attached with SR that i dun know what happens when they said it’s going off air… urghhhhh let it b.. !!! *imaginary cotton broom in hand of Heltej di..waaa u look cute diiii… !!!! ;-*
      Be here at my last part. okkk !!! ;-*

  20. Abirsha

    Kaku this is not fair…… U made me cry dr…. Its very emotional and painful kaku….. Hope swara is alive kaku…. Dont make my swara dead…. I trust you kaku….. ?

    1. Kakali

      Shan diiiii u also crying… !!!! *wipe ur tears… !!! Goshhh !!
      Thnk u sooooo much Diii… i also hope everything goes well.. !!! but can’t predict as life is unpredictable n anything can happen… !!! ;-*

  21. Awesome dear.

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Febiiii !!! ;-*

    2. Kakali

      Thnk u sooooo much Febiiii !!! ;-*

  22. Mariyajap

    this is not fair di, apse katttttti, u made us cry.

    1. Kakali

      Mariyaaaaa my sis !!! u also crying… goshhh Thnk u soooo much dear !!! u r rit dear life n Destiny is not fair with ev1…
      God bless u dear.. !! ;-*

  23. Scooby

    I guessed d same thing whn u posted d teaser.. nw i git to read them… painkiloer is guven to some relief pain.. bt u always give me dat to increase pains… nowadays im not getting words to scold u…
    lovely emotional fab chapie…
    i wish ladt part should b a dream if swara or sanskar… ie whole incident untill nw..
    post nxt part soon.. and get ready for my sweet bites

    1. Kakali

      Naviiiiiii !!! i hate u huhhh !!! now a days u r guessing much … !!

      waaa my SS is painkiller for u.. !!yeii..
      haaa haaaa i know u r not getting words to scold me.. but u r full of words when it comes to blabber…!!
      huhh sweet bites… now i dun know why but having doubt on ur intentions… !!!
      anyway i will stay safe n u2.. *hopefully…
      Thnk u soooo much.. !! ;-*

  24. Arshaanya

    Wat ??? how can u do dat wid swara nd sanskar ????…
    M gonna kill u kakali… we want happy ending n knw u wil fulfil our wish by adding kakali suspense/surprise in it… otherwise u r dead ???

    1. Kakali

      Arshaaaaaa !!! u also ganna kill me.. !! goshhh illegal killer.. !!!
      Haa i will surely give u ending dear. !! before i die in ur hands.. !!
      thnk u soooo much dear !! ;-*

  25. Vyshu10


    1. Kakali

      Vyshuuuuuuu !!!! u crying … !!! *lets nachooo !!!
      Thnk u sooo much dear !!! ;-*

  26. SNY

    This is not fair โ€ฆโ€ฆ
    U made me cry sis…..
    Its very emotional…..
    plz make it hpy ending……
    Nxt one soon..and tc

    1. Kakali

      Yazzzz !!! u also crying… olzz dun cry my sis.. !! *wipe ur tears…!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! ;-*

  27. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    It’s emotional*crying..
    No comment for today, sorry..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. Kakali

      Umaaaaa !!! plzz dun cry !!! *wipe ur tears.. !!
      Thnk u sooo much dear !! dun b sorry n plzz keep smiling.. !! ;-*

  28. i think u r going to give it a sad ending..and i hate sad endings..
    u alwys give sad endings..
    plz dnt give sad ending..
    m nt new here..i alwys comment on ur ffs..bt today im commenting with a new name..
    and r u bengali?

    1. Kakali

      Kummuuuu !! i know u dear… u r with me since my journey started as a writer… m thankful for u !!! check my previous replies i always called as Kummu not S.. !!
      huuhuhuh i give sad endings..that’s quite true… !! but for this SS u soon gonna enjoy some twists…
      Thnk u sooo much dear..!! n noo m not Bengali..!! m Assamese..!!! ;-*

  29. Alku

    awesome update baby….. i won’t wait for next part yaar,plz don’t update soon… i can’t cry more… :'(

    1. Alku

      jst kidding….update soon… ๐Ÿ™‚

    2. Kakali

      Alkuuuuu Diii… apka hukum sar aakhon par.. !! now i will not update soon… yeeiii !!!
      plzz dun cry..*wipe ur tears..
      Thnk u sooo much Dii.. !!!;-*

  30. So emotional episode..?..I am crying…this episode is like a DREAM for me…how can you do this with my swasan….hope it never happened…let’s see…eagerly waiting for next part and tc…

    1. Kakali

      Tharuuuuuu !!! plzz dun cry dear !!*wipe ur tears… !!!
      Yeah dear me too hope it never happens.. but we dun know about Destiny naa..!!!
      Thnk u sooo much dear !!!
      Take care..!! adare oya. !! ;-*

      1. Wow..kaku..you know Sinhala!! Math adarei oyata…???

    2. Kakali

      Ohhh haaa Tharuuuu ,, Chanuuuu taught me a little… huhuhu ;-*

  31. Swarmayi

    Kakuuuuuuuu… I just wanna beat you… aaah.. what u did with my swasan.. All readers of ‘ A Dream ‘ beat ur dear writer with stick.. m with all.. cmon.. ???

    U made me cry yar.. lovely epi.. ty

    1. Kakali

      Shaluuuuuu u changed ur team.. huhhh !! u just cry moreeee.. yeiii*let nachooo.. !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear!! ;-*

  32. Mahjabeen

    Huhh hate u kaku..again u made me cry…it ws tooo emotional nd even ur tlak dat made me cry more..loved it darls..it ws fabulous…no words to describe it…u just wrote it soo wonderfully nd da way u express ur thoughts nd concept just loved it…well dnt wanna let u make it end soo soon but study is also imp so nw u concentrate proprly in ur studies..

    1. Kakali

      Mahuuuuuuu !!! sorry for late reply dear.. !! yeahh it was indeed a little emotional.. !! but my words made u more cry. !! Awww sorry my sis.. but my intention was not like that. !! it’s just urghhh let it b..
      Thnk u sooooo very much dear… ur encouraging words n appreciation means a lot to me.. !! feeling blessed after reading ur comment…Love u tooo dear.. !! may i know from which country u r?
      Keep smiling dear.. God bless u.. !! ;-*

  33. Mirna

    Kaks what was that waittttttttttt ๐Ÿ™‚ give me 5 mns. yar it was so emotional literally i had tears u nailed it dear and ittttttttttt was outstanding but hate u for killing Swara dear ๐Ÿ™ Awesome dear tc keep writing. Hopefully RS does smething for the show ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Kakali

      Mirnaaaa Darlzzz sorry for late reply.. !!! Thnk u soooo much dear !!! waaa ur words mean a lot to me.. !!!
      yooo SR will survive n ut has tooo.. huhuhu !!!

  34. U literally made me cry

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soo much Tani.. !!! plz dun cry dear..!!*wipe ur tears.. !!! ;-*

  35. Anjali30

    I read only this chapter until now… but based on the story and the comments, I can see that I’m about to have a great โคโค

    I just loved the chapter…. the way u write… the grammar, it was spot on… can’t wait to read the whole story…

    But Srsly… amazing part… emotional and it just touched my heart ?

    1. Kakali

      Anjuuuuuuuu u here.. !! goshhh somebody wake me up from my beautiful dreams.. !!!
      Huhhh my grammar… dun tease me.. i m very week in it… it’s kinda part of my writing to do mistakes… even my professors also say that i need to work hard… but since u said okk okkk i m happy .. haahhhhh !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear !!! it feels so pleasurable to know it touched ur heart.. !!!
      God bless u dear.. ;-*

      1. Anjali30

        dream?? why u talking about dreams?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

      2. Kakali

        My guessing level is “0” .. huahh haa haaa … n today i proved myself… It’s kinda out of coverage…
        m studying in XII…
        Gd mrngggggg !!!! ;-*

    2. Kakali

      Anjuuu u won’t understand my happiness … !!! as i was happy n shocked reading ur comment since u don’t read n comment in FF … *i guess sooo.. !!!!

      1. Anjali30

        lol..it’s nothing like that…

        ik i’ve been absent and really rude by not coming on tu and reading any ffs… but i didn’t have time at all this sem….
        i really feel bad… Sorry ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™
        But once i finished exams i started reading ffs once again… and hope to be regular this time… ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    3. Kakali

      Urghhhh U n rude … nothing like that Anjuuuuu… !!! it happens..huhh let it b as m also gonna disappear in few days.. !! ๐Ÿ™‚ … BDW in which Sem u r ยฟ Do u have major in English… sorry if it’s wrong as i felt like that reading ur FF …
      haaa give ur best in exam n come back soon… ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. Anjali30

        im in my third sem… as an IT major… lol.. no not in english.. am doing btech…

        what about u???

        my exams are over… have started posting epis and will be regular now ๐Ÿ˜€

  36. Kakali


Comments are closed.

This website uses cookies to improve your experience. Please review our policy and accept it. Accept Read More