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Dream scenes of Kriyam

FidatoBy FidatoMarch 24, 201718 Comments4 Mins Read
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Dream scenes of Kriyam

Hi.. dear kriyam lovers..I m not good at writing.. but still want to write a ff as I love kriyam so much… i ‘ m not good at English nor Hindi.. so I really hope u guys forgive my mistakes while writing… I’m not writing a different story of kriyam but some scenes improvised from ssel..like the way we wanted… I’m borrowing this idea from “mystery” (I think the author of kriyam required part) I hope u don’t mind…

My first scene when dadi’s birthday party is going to begin..Feb 16th..

Scene 1

Krishna wore her sari nicely and looked at mirror… she was smiling while remember the way sayyam helped to drape her sari.. she blushed… Then she about to go sayyam also come to the same direction while talking on phone..they banged each other… Krishna falls and sayyam catches on time.. They have an eyelock…both of them lost in each other.. sayyam was looking so intensely…at Krishna.. her big brown eyes,rose cheeks and red lips… Krishna is also feels a current as sayyam’s hand touch on her back.. after some time they broke their eye lock… sayyam make her stand up..

Sayyam : sorry…I was on phone.. didn’t see….
Krishna : it’s OK…

Krishna is about to go but feels a pull from her back..she was shocked and looked back.. sayyam was also in a terrified state and looked at Krishna..
Sayyam: (gulps) wo…watch..

Krishna realised her blouse’s dori was opened..due to dori ‘s hanging(I dunno what it’s called ) stuck on sayyam ‘s watch..
Sayyam try to get it out… suddenly her pallu started to fall from shoulder… Krishna panics and hold it…while sayyam looked away… awkward..

Krishna composed herself but to her surprise.. sayyam pulled her close to him the way her back pinned to his chest… Krishna looked at sayyam suspiciously…then there is knock on the door.. it was Ramdin kaka…

Ramdin : wo… Krishna bitiya, sayyam baba aap donom ko neeche bula rahi hain..
Sayyam : haan …hum bus aa rahi hain..

Now Krishna understood why sayyam pulled her..an unknown smile crept on her face… she moved a bit forward..

Sayyam : wo … Ramdin kaka…
Krishna : (cut him) I know..tumhe explanation dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hain…

Sayyam looked at her..she is still holding her pallu with one hand..

Sayyam : mein madat karoom…??
Krishna smiled at him…giving him a permission through eyes..

Sayyam looked at her bare back…then looked away…start searching for the thread to tie..so he touched her back..both feels a current passing through them.. Krishna moved a bit.. sayyam understood so he done it fast as he can possible… Krishna while watching everything through mirror..she smiled beautifully..
Krishna : thank you…
Sayyam : zyada tight tho nahi ..??
Krishna : nahi..(she felts some immense pleasure seeing him concern about her)
Then she went out…

Sayyam was about to follow Krishna just then his phone ringed… he was taking that call just then..someone scream and falling to ground is heard… Sayyam rushed outside…
Sayyam : Krishna tum teek ho…??
But he shocked to see it’s Yuvani.

Yuvani : kya sayyam aaj kal tumhe bas Krishna hi nazar aathi hai kya..???

Sayyam give a fake smile..
Sayyam : wo actually..girne ki aadat to Krishna ki hai Na isiliye..
Krishna heard sayyam and came towards them. She angrily looked at him… sayyam feels helpless…
Yuvani : oh hello..somebody help me..??
Both breaks their thoughts and offer hand to Yuvani..and make her stand…

Sayyam : tum kaise gir gayi..??
Yuvani : mein pehli bar sari pehan rahi hai na isiliye..or meri sath koi pathi nahi mujhe help Karne keliye…(she started laugh mischievously)

Sayyam eyes get widen so as Krishna..her mouth opened and looked at sayyam.. sayyam gave a stern look to Krishna..by narrowing his eyes.. Krishna felt embarrassment..closed her mouth and rolled her eyes to look away…

Krishna : wo mujhe suhani aunty bula rahi hai… mein jaa rahi hum…
She escaped from there..
Yuvani burst out again…while sayyam put his hands on pocket..in his signature gesture…

So guys…this is my first attempt…hope u guys like it.. please let me know… again request to all forgive my mistakes … it’s my pleasure that if you guys help me to correct my mistakes…

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    18 Comments

    1. Aarti32 on March 24, 2017 9:24 pm

      So r u going to write one-one episode for each of your favourite scene..Or is it an FF starting from d party scene??

    2. Ridita on March 24, 2017 9:31 pm

      Really nice…..liked it a lot ….next update soon pls….

    3. Nainika on March 24, 2017 9:37 pm

      Very nice..keep up your work i just loved that dori part

    4. shabnam on March 24, 2017 9:42 pm

      Awesome keep writing

    5. Hafsa16 on March 24, 2017 9:59 pm

      This was pure beautiful ?♥️♥️

    6. Fidato on March 24, 2017 10:06 pm

      Thank you so much guys… Aarti32 n Ridita..
      Yes m not a skilled writer… Not that much imagination…so just one one …only… If I can definitely I will….

    7. Kavi on March 24, 2017 10:11 pm

      Too good dear

    8. Fidato on March 24, 2017 10:12 pm

      Thank you Nainika n Shabnam

    9. Fidato on March 24, 2017 10:27 pm

      Thank you hafsa16 n kavi

    10. vinlora on March 24, 2017 10:29 pm

      Good going dear..really loved it. .

    11. Shaani on March 24, 2017 10:34 pm

      Nice…keep posting… Loved it..

    12. shivani on March 24, 2017 11:05 pm

      Really beautiful.
      Dont worry fidato. You writing skill is too good. Please try to update soon.
      I loved it immensely.

      • Fidato on March 24, 2017 11:38 pm

        Thank you so much guys vinlora,shaani n shivani… I will try ma best..

    13. Kudrat on March 25, 2017 5:26 am

      Mast attempt..
      wating 4 next one..
      so, plz try to post soon…
      plzplzplzzz…

    14. Zani Saleem on March 25, 2017 11:40 am

      So good?

    15. asia on March 25, 2017 11:46 am

      Nice update asap

    16. Sinni on March 25, 2017 7:48 pm

      Awesome

    17. Isha on March 25, 2017 7:55 pm

      Really loved it… keep writing 🙂

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