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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 13 by darshu and folly
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Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 13 by darshu and folly

DarshiniBy DarshiniJune 19, 2017Updated:June 19, 201742 Comments6 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me-13
Hi dear friends..!how are you all.?am super late I know..,am really sorry for that bcz am lack of ideas that’s why..!now let’s proceed to the plot..!!happy reading..!!
Laksh felt some instinct feelings inside him..!he immediately leaves from the office leaving all the works beside..!!
What is important to him.,work or his Ragini.??it’s obvious he will prefer his lady love only..!!
Laksh was hurt why..??bcz his girl too didn’t understand his feelings..??it’s all happened not bcz of him.,from the start he was not interested in acting he asked to reveal the truth to swara since she have rights to know what happened in her life..!but no one is willing to do so.!
Then parth comes with a motive used the chance claiming as ragini’s husband.!he bad eye her but somehow laksh used his brain to save Ragini.!
Everything went well.,he was hell happy that he got the best birthday ever and also for the new arrival..!
But their happiness doesn’t long last.,swara finding them coming together and talked bad about Ragini.,tried to push her.,laksh’s slap,sanskar taunting Ragini for swara’s state.,truth revelation everything flashed before him..!
He was about to got bumped with the truck while getting lost in ragini’s thoughts.,he applied the brake and the car stopped taking a turn with a sudden jerk..!fortunately laksh was fine..!the truck driver yells him for his mistake..!
Laksh forwards an apology and drove off from there..!
Ragini was still lost in his thoughts.!she have prepared all his favourite’s for dinner.,but still she feels that he won’t forgive her that much easily..!
“I can’t bear this ignorance laksh..!please don’t do this to me..!”Ragini said under her breath..!
“horn..!!”
Ragini ran outside immediately and found Laksh coming with lots of bags in his hand.!her eyes got glued with his hand which got bandaged(he got hurt).!
Ragini goes to him and holds his hand”what happened laksh..!”she was caressing his hand painfully..!he ignored and jerked a little and moves inside..!!
Both swasan were in the dining waiting for him to join for the dinner..!!
Swara:laksh..!come we are waiting for u only..!go and refresh and come soon..!!
Laksh goes to swara and handovers her the bag full of fruits and says “here it is..,your medicines and some fruits for you swara..!!”
Swara:that’s so nice laksh.!thank you so much.!
Laksh:that’s ok swara.,take care and he turned to Ragini and gave her a small parcel like thing..!
Swara:something special for you I think.!open it Ragini and see what he had bought for you..!!
Ragini slowly unwrapped that brown cover and found mouth watering..!!
“Mangoes..!!Ragu you doesn’t like mango na..!!what’s this laksh.,u should have bought some other thing for Ragini na..!!” swara said..!
Laksh:she will like it now swara..!
Swara:no way..!she won’t laksh..!
To her surprise..,Ragini takes a mango and washed it and started eating without even cutting..!
Swara got astonished and opened her mouth in ‘o’ shape..!!
Swara (smiling):sachchi(to Ragini).Ragini nods in yes and bends her head down..!!swara hugged Ragini and says”am so happy for you Ragu..!!”.
Swara:Congratulations Mr and Mrs.Maheshwari..!am so happy for you both..!
Laksh just forwards a smile.sanskar came near laksh to congratulate him but he ignored him moving to his room..!
Ragini simply gazed the direction he was going.,she gets tears when she realised the fact that he haven’t talked to her yet..!then that bandage flashes before her.!she just made an excuse and ascended the stairs..!!
Ragini opened the room and says”Laksh..!”.he goes to the washroom ignoring her.!
She got saddened and waits there till he comes out.!finally laksh came got changed in his casuals..!
His eyes gazed something and he opened the draw immediately and grabbed an ointment like thing..!
He then goes to her and pushed down her shoulders and make her sit on the bed..!!he then grabbed her hand and started applying ointment there..!she feels tingling sensation.!
Laksh (lil harsh):can’t you be careful..!see how it hurted you.is it paining..??
Ragini:yes laksh but here(pointing her heart)
That time only he realised about his ignorance.he immediately leaves after applying ointment on her wounds without uttering anything.!this hurts her more.,she followed him and goes down together..!
Raglak reached the dining and Ragini serves for them..!laksh shows his palm against her that he will take what he wants to eat..!
Swara:Ragini.,come and eat first.!we will self-serve the foods..!!
Ragini:it’s ok swara.!I will eat later..!!
Swara:you won’t listen na..!
Swara makes Ragini to sit beside Laksh and served her favourite food..!Ragini keeps on staring laksh which he found through the corner of his eyes..!!
His hands on the chair handle shivers and was shaking when she placed her hand so close to his hands..!
Laksh’s heart and brain were making such a huge fight and finally his heart won..!!he can’t wait more.,he kept his ego aside and moves his hand to her and placed his hand on her’s gently..!tears escaped from Ragini’s eyes.,she wiped it without letting others watch out..!!
He started squeezing her hands not letting her to eat..!he was showing his pain to her that how much he got hurt when she stands against him..!!
“am sorry laksh..!!”she said in her low tone..!
Laksh entangled his hands with her’s tightly and rubbing her fingers slightly and stares her painfully..!
Swasan were done with the dinner.,they bids bye and goes to their room..!laksh was waiting for this moment immediately hugged Ragini and apologized her for behaving rude with her.!!
Ragini:am sorry laksh.!!mistake was mine..!am sorry (she was crying bitterly)..!!
“tu aata hai seene mein..!jab jab saasein bharti hoon..”plays in bg..!!
Laksh cups her face fondly and pecked her forehead..!!
He then keeps the spoon aside and feeds Ragini with his hands..!!
“I need more..!!aah..”Ragini opened her mouth wide which makes Laksh to grin but he was admiring her..!
She herself takes his hand towards her and ate but he was still lost on her..!!so she bites his finger slightly..!!
“aah..!!”laksh winces..!
Laksh:Ragu.,you are becoming naughty nowadays..!!
Ragini chuckles..!!
Laksh(sadly):am sorry Ragu..!!laksh caresses her wound and looks into her eyes..!
Ragini:am sorry laksh..,I realised my mistake now..!I hurted you the most na..!
Laksh (smirks):a lot Ragini ..!
Ragini (saddened):I won’t do again..!(cute pout)
Laksh:aww mera bachcha..!!how cute you are..!!laksh kissed her cheeks and says “no more talking about that..!!”
Laksh:even you are bored with the word I love you Ragini..!!
Ragini laughs and hugs him “I love you more laksh..!!”.she buried her face on his chest..!!
To be continued…
So done with this chappy..!and I will be updating all my ff from now on..!
Tuesday:Raglak and their love story (dare waala)
Wednesday:destiny ff
Thursday:the war between love and revenge ff
Friday:can’t you see my love’s first part and this ff
Sunday:if I got free time,an OS..
Are you guys ok with it..??do tell me your views..!!take care dears
~Darshu

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    42 Comments

    1. Elizebathlovely on June 19, 2017 5:22 pm

      superb

    2. Arjuna on June 19, 2017 5:35 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    3. aleeza on June 19, 2017 5:46 pm

      Nice

    4. Aamy on June 19, 2017 5:55 pm

      Awesome

    5. ROJARANI on June 19, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome

    6. Puni on June 19, 2017 6:13 pm

      Superb ya post your story now itself iam ready to read thank you take care

    7. Mintu on June 19, 2017 6:54 pm

      Awesome sisy… Its wonderful part.. Choo cute…laksh mango vangi kudutha scene sema da…pavam avanala ragu mela kovama iruka mudila romba neram…laksh avana marandhutu ragu mela concern ah pesuna scene supr da..love this part very much.. Ena oru nal ku 1ff dhn ah!??? ???? next week vara wait pananum ah..indha ff..Its unfair sisy..!! ? post the next part soon dear.. Love u da..Take care ??

    8. Soumya on June 19, 2017 7:09 pm

      Simply superb di….post nxt soon

    9. avika on June 19, 2017 7:21 pm

      superr

    10. Ashly on June 19, 2017 7:29 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

    11. asra on June 19, 2017 7:30 pm

      darshu dear it’s fabulous update….Aiyaaa laksh yum ragu vum senthudanga jolly…but dear Sanky ya knjm alaya vidalam…ragu cute moments kudunga dear…mm la ulavunga ellam yeapa varuvanga sumi shekher ellarum ragu va pamper panratha paaka wait panren dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
      unga ff ku day fix panidengala dear superbbb..tkcr dear…

    12. Follybraverl on June 19, 2017 7:42 pm

      Aww cutiepies laksh and Ragini ohhhhy god love it akka…….

    13. Asw on June 19, 2017 8:00 pm

      Amazing is swara is recover from the memory loss ? Keep going ?

    14. Laashya on June 19, 2017 8:03 pm

      Wonderful episode and can’t wait for next

    15. dharani on June 19, 2017 8:22 pm

      Aww…. Such a cute update lakh’s care for ragini is awww so cute…. I loved it to the core and ur schedule for ur ffs I am totally fine of it will be waiting for them…. Love u ….. Bye

    16. Pearly on June 19, 2017 8:49 pm

      Awesome

    17. sethidisha002 on June 19, 2017 9:22 pm

      Amazing

    18. Sreevijayan on June 19, 2017 9:28 pm

      Awesome update myy dear….

    19. Ammu on June 19, 2017 9:29 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are so cute. Sanky deserves more punishment. Eagerly waiting for more Raglak scenes and plz post next part ASAP

    20. IQRA222 on June 19, 2017 10:30 pm

      hey darshini its alisha iqura’s sissy
      actually iqura is not well and had been advised for a bedrest for atleast 3-4 days so she told me to say that she will not be able comment on any of your ff’s or os’s
      so sorry from her side
      and coming to the chappie she was really very very happy to read and episode of this part
      and said that she loved it soo much
      thanks a lot for making her happy
      and also she said that she was missing you soo much and said as soon as she will recover she will talk to you
      and once again it was a fab and awesome episode
      bye bye

      • Darshini on June 20, 2017 10:34 am

        Hey dear.,hw is iqu nw??is she ok..?I thought she was busy since her schl gets strtd..ask her to take rest and eat properly..!
        She may read my ff’s evn aftr getting well bt nw she need rest na..mke her not to use mble ..!tell her that her didu will be waiting for her arrival with a bang..!tke cre of her and u too sissy..don’t worry she will be back soon with her naughtiness..!!love you iqu ???? and get well soon..!don’t skip your meal..!!orelse I will cme to ur house and protest…tc doll..!!

      • IQRA222 on June 20, 2017 3:00 pm

        hey darshini dear . i have conveyed your message to her. and she was very overwhelmed by your love and care for her
        and said she loves you too much!!! <3 <3
        and a big umahhhhhh!!!

    21. raguzz01 on June 19, 2017 11:53 pm

      Nice.

    22. Rehna on June 20, 2017 8:03 am

      Awesome dear

    23. Ammy on June 20, 2017 10:24 am

      superb dear.loved it

    24. Sakthi gayathri on June 20, 2017 11:18 am

      Super…..but please update the previous link….

    25. teitokUn1718 on June 20, 2017 12:30 pm

      Fabulous​…
      Raglak scenes​ r so Cute…

    26. lovely7 on June 20, 2017 2:14 pm

      Awesome

    27. Vennila on June 20, 2017 3:50 pm

      Awesome

    28. Arjuna on June 20, 2017 4:17 pm

      Amazing part and can’t wait for next

    29. Malu on June 20, 2017 4:19 pm

      Awesome part

    30. Jiyani on June 20, 2017 4:47 pm

      Awesome story

    31. Akshitha on June 20, 2017 5:09 pm

      Superbbbb…

    32. Monu on June 20, 2017 5:20 pm

      superb episode

    33. Vini on June 20, 2017 5:45 pm

      keep going

    34. Sherin on June 20, 2017 7:23 pm

      Awesome dear

    35. Anju on June 20, 2017 8:41 pm

      Awesome update and cute raglak

    36. Akankshanna on June 20, 2017 9:36 pm

      Double okkk…….. Awesome….. Marvelous…… Superb scenes

    37. shrilatha on June 20, 2017 10:26 pm

      akka superb..

    38. Jyo on June 20, 2017 11:25 pm

      Awesome darshu loved it very much

    39. jazzy on June 22, 2017 11:46 am

      superbb

    40. hemalattha on June 23, 2017 7:12 pm

      Nice

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