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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 12 by darshu and folly
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Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 12 by darshu and folly

DarshiniBy DarshiniJune 11, 201777 Comments8 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me -12
Hi dear friends..,am super late I know..,am so chorry everyone..!!ok let’s enter into the plot..!!
Happy reading friends..!!

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Sanskar lifts swara in his arms and called doctor to come immediately..!!
Ragini goes to swara and holds her hand..!!sanskar turned and found Ragini holding swara’s hand..,immediately he pushed her away saying “stay away from my swara ..,Ragini..!!”
“Sanskar please..!!”Ragini pleads..
Sanskar (sobbing):you and laksh together ruined everything Ragini..!!see my swara’s condition..!!just for talking against you..,your husband revealed everything to swara and made her sick again..!!u will regret for this..!!if anything happens to my swara..,then u both are finished..(gritted his teeth)

Ragini:not like that sanskar..!!!you know about laksh better than me!!
Sanskar:now only am getting everyone’s motive..!!i don’t want to talk anything to you..,just leave from here..!!
“sanskar please try to understand him..!!”said Ragini..!!
“leave from here Ragini..!!”sanskar closed his eyes tightly controlling his anger..!!
Ragini:please let me see her only once..!!
“you won’t go easily na..”sanskar grabbed her shoulders and pushed her on the floor!!
Laksh came to rescue and helps her to stood up and makes her stand..!!
“how dare you..!!”laksh clutched sanskar’s collars and shooks him..!!

Sanskar(pushed away laksh’s hands):just for making your wife fall down on floor..,you are getting this much anger na..!did you think about my swara..!!i thought my bhaai will stand by my side and help me but you both showed your real faces ..!!i won’t leave you Ragini..,you will regret for your husband’s deeds..!!
“sanskar..”laksh slapped him..!!
Ragini was shocked and she immediately rushed to sanlak and sanky in a full rage holds laksh’s neck and laksh was doing the same on sanskar..!!
“laksh..please stop this..!!”Ragini tried to split them but failed..!!she entered in between them and pulled laksh and without knowing herself her hands hit laksh’s cheeks..!!

Laksh stands shockingly holding his cheeks..!!she didn’t do with intentions but she wasn’t left with any other options too.!!
“What’s happening here…!!”swara’s voice brings them back to normal..!!
Sanskar (rushed to swara):tum teek hona..!!
“haan sanskar..,am alright”swara convinced him..!!
“swara..you ok na..!!”Ragini shed tears and folded her palms and apologized her..!!
Swara hugged her and caresses her hair saying”am ok Ragini..,don’t worry..!!”
She then moved to laksh..!!

Laksh feels guilty and says”swara..,am sorry..!!”
Swara:thanks laksh and am really sorry for all the things..!!if you weren’t then i can’t even imagine..(to sanskar)you shouldn’t behave like this with your brother sanskar..,laksh did nothing wrong.he was right..,it’s my life na..,i have rights to know whatever happened to me and Ragini..,you too don’t hurt him for my cause.
“thanks swara..,atleast you understands me..!!I don’t want to hurt you swara..,but I really wants you to know what’s happening around you and moreover I love my wife that’s why i can’t act like that..!!”said laksh..!!

Swara nods..!!
Doctor comes and says that swara’s health is getting better and he suggested some medicines and left from mm..!!
Sanskar holds swara’s hand..”thank you sanskar..”said swara by looking into his eyes.”you no need to thank me sweetheart..,”he said wiping his tears.”i am not that much weak..,you should have told me earlier na..i hurted you unknowingly..,am sorry for that sanskar..!!”.
“no swara..i was hurt but still i want to see my naughty girl back..!!”he caresses her hair..!!
Swara:you need to talk to Laksh,sanskar..!!
“what..!!”sanskar amazes..

Swara:because of him only i came to know about our marriage and your love for me..!!you should thank him and solve the issues between you two..!!you will na..!!
Sanskar nods his head positively and caresses her cheeks..!!
There in raglak room..,laksh was searching some clothes in his wardrobe and messed it..!!Ragini comes and takes the clothes from his hand but laksh didn’t gave up and showed his palm against her..!!
“laksh..!!”Ragini uttered but laksh leaves to get freshen up..!!
Ragini waited for laksh to come out..!!she was biting her nails in nervousness.
“I know laksh.,I always hurted you but I didn’t do that intentionally.!!”she was lack of words..,her breath caught in her lungs and she cleared her throat to talk to him..!!
He got ready in his formals and was arranging the files..Ragini brings his laptop and gives to him..,he kept it on the bed and packed other important documents in his bag..,she then bring his watch..,he walks past her and took another watch from his wardrobe and took his wallet..!!
Ragini got saddened by his ignorance which was like a hell to her..!!

“everything seems so perfect few hours before..!!but his ignorance I can’t able to afford it.I don’t want to hide my mistakes..,yes I was wrong.,I need punishment but not your ignorance laksh..!!please am sorry..!!”Ragini says under her breath gazing him painfully..!!
Laksh (in mind):am sorry Ragini..!!i doesn’t mean to hurt you but instead am hurting myself..!!ignoring you wasn’t that much easy for me Ragu..,i was standing on the fire whenever am trying to avoid you..!!but i need some more time to move on..!!yes today was my best day and worst one too..!!i wasn’t sad for getting slap from you..,i wasn’t able to digest the fact that you are not at all taking my side instead you always sees others happiness forgetting about me..!!this does not mean that you hate me..,noone in this would love me like you do..!!you are my precious part of my life..!!but still there needs a distance between us just to make you realise the fact that I got hurt..!!i really got hurt this time Ragini ..,and am really sorry for hurting you..!!(he closed his eyes and made the tear drop to escape )

Laksh descended the stairs..,Ragini comes with his breakfast and placed it before him..!!
He didn’t touched it instead he drank juice and was about to leave..!!
Ragini holds his wrist and goes infront of him holding her ears with a cute pout..!!
He pushed away her hands slowly and leaves without raising even a single word..!!
Ragini stares him painfully and her eyes turned moist..!!she wipes her eyes and goes to kitchen..!!
“Your breakfast..!!”Ragini knocked the door of swasan room..!!
Swara(smiling):aao Ragini..!!
Ragini goes near her and placed the food on the table.”am sorry Ragini..!!because of me you guys experienced so much pain..!!am sorry”swara sobs.
Ragini (hugged her):swara..!!you need not to be sorry..!!please don’t stress.
“Swaragini..!!”bg plays..

They gets parted and sanskar comes near swara to feed her food.she sighs something to sanskar..,he nods and uttered”Ragini..!!”
Ragini:swara..,I have some works in kitchen.!!you guys carry on..!!
“sorry won’t heal the pain you gone through..,but I don’t have any other word..!!am sorry Ragini..,I have hurted you the most and because of me ..,you and laksh fought..!!am really sorry Ragini.!!”sanskar foldshis hand and apologized her.!!
“nahi sanskar..!!that’s ok..!!you take care of swara..!i need to go now..”Ragini leaves immediately holding her mouth..!!
Ragini wasn’t able to control her emotions..!he said so easily but the pain she have gone through which laksh alone knows..!!

“laksh..!!am sorry..”Ragini cries her heart out..!!

“tu aata hai seene mein..
Jab jab saasein bharti hoon..”

“am sorry Ragu..!!”laksh slammed his hand on the table..!
He wasn’t able to digest the fact that he has hurted Ragini..,but still he was feeling sad but wasn’t angry on her…!!
“jis din tujhko na dekhun pagal pagal phirti hoon..!!
kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega jaise main karti hoon.!!”
Ragini lost in laksh’s thought and unknowingly she touched the handle of the vessel on the gas stove and got burnt..!!
She winced in pain..!!suddenly laksh drags her towards the sink and washed her hand with water and blows air on her finger..!!
“is it hurting more..!!”laksh muttered staring into her eyes..!!
She nods in no and smiles lovingly.!!she wipes her tears and lifts her head upwards and was shocked..!!laksh was no where and she was standing numb..!!
“Chadariya jheeni re jheeni Chadariya jheeni re jheeni..!!

Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni ..!!”
Laksh felt something in his hand and winces in pain..!!
“Ragu..!!”he immediately leaves from the office..!!

To be continued •••
Precap:
RagSan dying to get forgiveness from laksh..!!
Will laksh accept them easily or he will make them to suffer..!!
And do tell me about this chappy..i took almost a week to update this ff bcz of lack of ideas..!!if u have any thing to say..,do suggest me..!!

Take care dears
~Darshu
Oops I forgot to ask you guys…do you like cricket and if so tell me whom do you like the most??
Mine was Dhoni always????
And de Villiers outside our team

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    77 Comments

    1. Akshitha on June 11, 2017 8:38 pm

      I loved it…but I need ragu to get forgvnes frm laksh soon…but for sanskar make a little bit slow..☺?

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:23 am

        Thnks a lot akshi dear ? and yes sure laksh will forgive Ragu soon and I will consider abt ur suggestions reltd to sanky??

      • Akshitha on June 12, 2017 10:19 pm

        ??????

    2. aleeza on June 11, 2017 8:41 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:26 am

        Thnks a lot dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it..!!

    3. Berdilla on June 11, 2017 8:53 pm

      Awesome dear friend and in cricket mine is Dhoni and Suresh Raina

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:38 am

        Tq so much dear friend..?am glad that you liked it
        Evn Raina was also one of my favourites..!!

    4. puni on June 11, 2017 9:09 pm

      This was really awesome but please update it soon you are asking us to tell idea but you forget one thingthing??? you two sis are idea queens i have hope on you…..you always rockzzzz please don’t end it soon and update it soonsoon. i know it is hard but please!!!!!! I thought that you will post bon teju birthday but its ok take care☺☺☺☺☺☺

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:41 am

        Aww puni sissy thnks a lot for the compliment from my side and frm my sister’s side too…
        Am supr hpy that u liked it…
        Yaah dear I thought to update it on teju’s b’day bt got hurt at my right elbow..that’s why I can’t mke it hpn..!!sry dear and tc too..!!

    5. Jayanti on June 11, 2017 9:10 pm

      that was a superb episode dear….laksh is himself in pain in showing ignorance to ragini…..the end part was emotional….next part soon……and my favourite cricketer is tendulkar…and will always be…but Dhoni is my second favourite

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:42 am

        Thnks a lot Jaya dear ? am hpy that you liked it..!!
        Will post soon dear..
        Yup v both lie Dhoni..same pinch???
        Tc dear.!!

    6. Soumya on June 11, 2017 9:11 pm

      Simply superb di…post nxt soon

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:44 am

        Thnks a lot soumya dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    7. Arjuna on June 11, 2017 9:28 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:45 am

        Thnks a lot Arjuna dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    8. Sherin on June 11, 2017 9:39 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:45 am

        Thnks a lot sherin dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    9. Sreevijayan on June 11, 2017 9:41 pm

      It was really nt raginis mistake yaar..poor ragu .she is pregnant rite? Feelng bad fr everyone…

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:46 am

        Thnks a lot sree dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
        And I agree with you..!!everything will get sorted soon..tc dear..

    10. raguzz01 on June 11, 2017 10:40 pm

      superb dear…feeling bad for raglak.

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:47 am

        Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    11. lovely7 on June 11, 2017 10:46 pm

      Awesome, feeling bad for ragini

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:48 am

        Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
        Did u updated the next part of ur OS??if not updte soon..am waiting for it..!!

    12. Princess on June 11, 2017 10:55 pm

      Superb dear lovely???? but please laksh should forgive ragini but he should not forgive sanskaar that easily please dear and show some romantic moments between raglak please post next part soon

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:50 am

        Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
        Will consider ur suggestions..tc dear..!!

    13. Asw on June 11, 2017 11:06 pm

      Amazing but sanskar is too bad keep going

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:51 am

        Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    14. sethidisha002 on June 11, 2017 11:26 pm

      Amazing

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 11:52 am

        Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!

    15. tëìtō kUn on June 12, 2017 12:02 am

      Superb….
      Laksh should forgive Ragini soon but Sanskar should not be forgiven easily…
      Feeling bad for Raglak…

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 12:36 pm

        Thnks a lot teito ? am glad that you liked it..
        Sure..,will consider your suggestions and tc..!;

    16. Fairy on June 12, 2017 3:03 am

      Mindblowingg update yaar…superb superb superbbb chappy????? loved it to d core .???hope everything gets well soon …waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blessed sweety??
      Thnx a ton for giving such an interestng story????
      N yap i love cricket…
      Mine fav. Is Dhoni virat n Yuvraj??

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 12:39 pm

        Oyiee sissy..it’s so nice to see you bck…!!
        Thnks a lot sweetie and am super hpy that u cmntd..!!
        Yaah dear everything will get sorted..
        Tc dear..!!
        And yup v have common taste..!!teju andDhoni fans..!!

      • Fairy on June 12, 2017 1:41 pm

        Heheheh yeah sissy??? m also very happy to dat atleast today I could able to comment…it really feels annoying wen i can’t able to visit TU N read ffs…arggghh!!Bt wt to d some or d other way I got engaged wid clg n other stuffs…still wl try tocomment regular sweety???

      • Fairy on June 12, 2017 1:43 pm

        Oh gawd so many loop holes in my comment hehe? …*m also very happy dat atleast…
        *Bt wht to do some…
        *Wl try to comment regularly sweety?

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 4:10 pm

        Yeah dear..!!i can understand..
        Keep smiling da..!!tke cre..????

    17. Megha on June 12, 2017 9:16 am

      Amazing

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 12:43 pm

        Thnks a lot dear megha ? glad that you liked it..!!

    18. IQRA222 on June 12, 2017 10:25 am

      awesome episode darshu di
      loved it soo much
      my poor raglak it is so difficult for them
      i so so love shona for what she did today
      but sanky really had crossed his limits
      so do make him suffer didu pls
      but dont make my ragu suffer okay
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      lots of love
      bye bye

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 12:42 pm

        Aww my dear iqu..!!u r right dear and u knw abt ur didu..
        I won’t mke Ragu suffer mre but some cutie mmnts will be seen n future…!!
        And wil consider ur suggestions sweetie..!!
        Take care da..!!
        And u didn’t say me abt ur fav’s in cricket..do cmnt abt tht..
        Love u doll..!!

    19. avika on June 12, 2017 11:51 am

      nice

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 12:44 pm

        Thnks a lot dear avika ? glad that you liked it..!!

    20. Aamy on June 12, 2017 1:58 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 4:11 pm

        Thnks a lot dear aamy ? glad that you liked it..!!

    21. Akankshanna on June 12, 2017 2:44 pm

      Oossmm

      • Akankshanna on June 12, 2017 2:46 pm

        Oossmmm is less word to describe ur update… Its super duper mind blowing heart touching moment…… Somewgere m angry vd laksh sanskar nd ragu… Bt all persons have their some reasons so moo bash words against thm….

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 4:13 pm

        Aww..Thnks a lot dear akankshanna ? glad that you liked it..!!
        Oops am really sorry for mking u hte them..!!
        S dear..,I liked your last sentence..!!
        Tke cre dear..!!

    22. Anju on June 12, 2017 3:35 pm

      Awesome update

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 4:16 pm

        Thnks a lot dear anju ? glad that you liked it..!!

    23. Follybraverl on June 12, 2017 4:29 pm

      Akka lot of kisses and hugs for this awesome Chappy loved it ??

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 6:23 pm

        Thnks a lot da sweetie ? when you gonna post ur ff’s ..do post soon I am waiting..!!

    24. veduuuu on June 12, 2017 4:50 pm

      Just awesome

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 6:24 pm

        Thnks a lot dear? glad that you liked it..!!

    25. Appuuuuu on June 12, 2017 4:52 pm

      U r awesome darshu

      • Darshini on June 12, 2017 6:25 pm

        Thnks a lot dear appuuuuu ? glad that you liked it..!!

    26. Ammu on June 12, 2017 6:23 pm

      Outstanding episode dear ???? feeling bad for Raglak ?? please give more punishment to sanskar I hate him??? and make Laksh forgive Ragini. Eagerly waiting for knowing how Ragini earn Laksh’s forgiveness. Please post next part ASAP ????????

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:52 pm

        Aww ammu sissy thnks a lot dear..
        Will punish him hard and don’t worry laksh will forgive our Ragu soon..
        Tc dear and will post soon..!!

    27. Vennila on June 12, 2017 6:42 pm

      Awesome and I love Ajinkya rahana

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:53 pm

        Thnks a lot dear Vennila ? wow rahane is an awesome player??..

    28. Pearly on June 12, 2017 8:01 pm

      Awesome part

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thnks a lot pearly ? glad that you liked it..!!

    29. Jiyani on June 12, 2017 8:20 pm

      Awesome part and my favorite cricketer is always Mahi (Dhoni)

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:56 pm

        Thnks a lot dear jiyani?
        Evn my fav is always mahi??
        Glad that you liked it..!!

    30. Malu on June 12, 2017 8:43 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:57 pm

        Thnks a lot dear malu ? glad that you liked it..!!

    31. Monisha on June 12, 2017 9:38 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 1:59 pm

        Thnks a lot dear Monisha ? glad that you liked it..!!

    32. asra on June 13, 2017 11:47 am

      darshu dear it’s awesome update dear…loved it alot…feeling bad for raglak….Sanky inaki over ra than peasidan…hate him….Ipa swasan seinthudanga but raglak….Sanky ku ragini pregnant irukirathu theriyuma dear…Sanky ku avan wife hurt panathum kovam varuthu adhey mathiri thana laksh kum irukum…idiot Sanky…avan 2 days over than panran…laksh ragu va manichiru but raglak nenga 2perum Sanky ya forgive panathenga….eagerly waiting for nxt one…
      my fav mahi than dear…nxt Sachin virat raina…tkcr dear…

      • Darshini on June 13, 2017 2:03 pm

        Asra sissy thnks a lot da..!!
        Aama da u r right sanky overa daan panran…
        Exactly..avan feel panra maari daana laksh Ku irukkum..!!!
        Don’t worry I will punish him hard..!!
        Sanky kum swara kum theriyathu da Ragu pregnant nu..!!
        Wow..same kreach da..!!mahi is my fav too..
        Will post soon..
        Tc dear..!!

    33. Vini on June 13, 2017 2:33 pm

      Awesome

    34. Ashly on June 13, 2017 2:58 pm

      Awesome superb amazing

    35. Monu on June 13, 2017 3:03 pm

      Awesome episode

    36. Elizebathlovely on June 13, 2017 3:07 pm

      Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb part

    37. Laashya on June 13, 2017 4:05 pm

      Sorry for commenting last episodes because just now I registered in TU… I already read your all stories…all stories are mind blowing…keep rocks

      • Laashya on June 13, 2017 4:06 pm

        This part is also superb

    38. Rehna on June 13, 2017 9:46 pm

      Superb dear, ragini also hurted laksh but since she is pregnant not punish her

    39. hemalattha on June 15, 2017 2:14 pm

      Nice

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