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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 11 by darshu and folly
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Don’t stay away it kills me -RagLak ff part 11 by darshu and folly

DarshiniBy DarshiniJune 2, 201736 Comments6 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me -11
Hi dear all..,did u got surprised..,yes you are right..am posting this ff on weekdays..hehe!!thank you everyone who commented on the previous update and my silent readers too…
This one’s for asra..,dear come back soon with a bang (everyone is waiting for u…gws)and dharu all d vry BST for your exams..!!
Ok here we go..!!
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“Ragini..!!”laksh ran behind her…
Ragini entered her room and she falls on her knees and started crying..!!
“Ragini..!!”laksh uttered softly and he placed his hands on her shoulder ..!!
Ragini looks at him with guilt and bends down her head…laksh lifts her chin upwards and says”Ragu..!!he said with frustration..,you’re not responsible for that incident..,it’s all started bcz of me…so u need not feel guilty and all…”
Ragini (sobbing):but sanskar was right na laksh..!!i have done wrong na..
“Ragini..!!”laksh tried convincing her but she was repeatedly saying the same that she have done wrong..!!
It irritates him…!!
“Ragini..!!”he shouted at his highest pinch which made her dumstruck…
Laksh:am saying na u didn’t do anything..!!it’s all started bcz of me and all the sufferings are to you..!!am sorry Ragu…!!
Ragini sobs more when he apologized her…
“but I was wrong na laksh..!!i shouldn’t done that with swara..my love for you hid everything infront of me..,that makes me to kill my sister..,i should have been punished…!!”Ragini cries madly and slaps her cheeks with her own hands…
Laksh drags her into the bone crushing hug and the tear starts escaping from his eyes..!!
“i won’t leave you sanskar..,you will regret for this..!!”laksh says to himself and gritted his teeth…!!
Laksh (cupping her face):Ragini..,whatever happened..,it’s all bcz of me only..!!yes Ragini…,I was the trouble in your life.., from the day we met I haven’t gave u happiness..!!i always hurted u ,you gave me all the happiness that I never dreamt but in return i gave u only pain..!!it’s all because of my impulsive brain..!!even today I was not able to rescue you…!!i must be punished Ragini..!!i must be punished(his tears gushed out like streams and he slammed his hand on the table nearby hardly and the things placed gets fall over)

“laksh..!!”Ragini covered up his hand with her’s tightly and took him towards the bed…she opened the draw and wipes the blood using cotton and applied ointment..,he winces and holds her shoulder..!!Ragini caresses and blows air on the wound..,laksh grins and caresses her hair with his other hand and tucks it behind her ears..!!

“laksh chup kar..!!”
But his eyes got glued on her..,he wasn’t listening anything but wiping her cheeks which tears occupied..!!
“laksh..!!”
“shshh…i love you..”laksh said and kissed her forehead..!!
“I knew it..!!love u too laksh..!!”she hugged him..!!

Laksh (pouting):that’s it..??where is my birthday gift my dear wifey..??
Ragini (blushes):laksh..!!
He pulled her and pecked her cheeks lovingly and says”am there for you..never ever broke down whenever am not around you…!!whatever other’s say..,you need not to pay attention to anyone except your loveable laksh..!!deal…this is my birthday wish…will you promise me sweetheart..!!”
Ragini nods and hugged him..!!laksh wipes his eyes where the tear drop waited till to come out…!!
There in swara’s room..,sanskar was trying his level best to convince swara but failed in his attempts..,she wasn’t listening to him still crying..!!
“swara..,this is not good for your health..!!”

Swara(sobbing continuously):but sanskar..,till now laksh didn’t came here to console me..!!he was around her only from the day I came..he is not happy for my return..!!
Sanskar heart ached the most..!!
“kyun kiya swara…i was waited for you believing that you are alive somewhere else..,my love for you bring back u alive but the moment u hugged lucky saying him as your husband broked my heart into pieces and even now you’re thinking about him saying that he wasn’t showing care for you…am dying here for you swara..does my love isn’t true..??you aren’t understanding my feelings for you swara…i love you swara..!!”sanskar lost in her thoughts…!!
“Swara..!!”
Sanskar came out from his world when he heard parth’s voice and turned towards him..!!
“jeeju..!!you know what..!!”
Before swara could complete..,parth gave her a tight slap..!!
“jeeju..!!”swara said holding her burning cheeks..!!
Sanskar rushed to her and drags her behind and clutched parth’s collars and says “how dare you raised hands against my..”
Parth(rudely):Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari..,just stay away from this matter..!!I warn you(pointing his finger against him)
Parth(to swara):how dare you took word against Ragini and tried to harm her…!!
Swara:you don’t know about them jeeju..they both went together outside yesterday night (she says sobbing)
Parth:do you know were they went..??do you..how would you know..(sarcastically)..!!listen to me..,Ragini and laksh came to bring me back home…!!did you know that I wasn’t back home yesterday night..,(swara stands shocked)yes swara ,my car got punctured near forest area and I have no signal in my phone..!!even though me and Ragini have issues..,she feared that something had happened to me..,so she tooks Laksh with her and bring me back now..,but what you did with them..!!u just spoiled their character..can’t you open your eyes and use your brain (am sorry swara but I can’t control my temper when someone points their fingers against Ragini (glared sanskar))
Swara cries badly and apologized to parth…!!she then stood up and ran outside..!!
“swara..!!”sanskar ran behind her and tried to stop her..!!
Swara then reached the room where raglak were..!!she then opened the door immediately without knocking and found laksh consoling Ragini by holding her hands..,but swara found nothing wrong in that..!!
“Swara “Ragini shocks..!!
Laksh stood up and the next moment swara drags him into her hug and says”am sorry…!!am sorry laksh..now only jeeju explained everything..am sorry…”
He pushed her away..!!
“am sorry laksh..”swara holds her ears..,laksh didn’t pay any attention…!!
“atleast you can forgive your sister na Ragini..!!am sorry I didn’t pushed you with any intentions..,I just did it in frustration..am sorry Ragu..”
“how can I get anger on you swara..”Ragini opened her arms widely..,the next moment swara ended up hugging her..!!
Laksh was gritting his teeth’s and thinks”how can you forgive her so easily Ragini..!!but I won’t forgive her and her husband easily..,they will regret for speaking against you…that idiot claims that you harmed her wife na..,then why he is begging us for his wife’s sake..!!today I will open up every mystery to swara..!!”
“swara..!! We need to talk..”
Before laksh could complete..,sanskar pleaded him through eyes and Ragini holds laksh’s hand not letting him to move further..!!
“I said I wanna talk to you Swara..”laksh said with his anger in peak..!!
Swara:haan laksh..tell me..!!
“you are not my wife and sanskar is your husband ..!!”laksh words stopped swara’s world and her head starts revolving..!!
Swara fainted and collapsed on floor..!!
“swara..!!”sanskar rushed to her..!!
To be continued •••

Precap
Ragini slapping laksh..!!

So done with the chappy..am sorry for the short update but still I want to update this..!!if you have any suggestions..,you can share with me..!!
Thanks for reading
~Darshu

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    36 Comments

    1. Sreevijayan on June 2, 2017 9:29 pm

      Awesome update dr

      • Darshini on June 4, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thnks a lot shree? glad that you liked it..!!

    2. tëìtō kUn on June 2, 2017 10:54 pm

      Superb…. Precap is :(…..

      • Darshini on June 4, 2017 1:53 pm

        Thnks a lot teito? glad that you liked it..!!

    3. Mintu on June 2, 2017 11:17 pm

      Awesome sisy … Its very emotional update.. Poor raglak..!!! ?????Omg.. Ragu is gonna slap laksh..they suffered lot na sisy..!!! Pavam la laksh..achao..aiyoo next ena aakum nu paka waiting da…!!Post it soon sisy..!!! Take care da??

      • Darshini on June 4, 2017 1:56 pm

        Aww ..!!tq so much da sissy ?
        Yaah dear..bt solli daana aaganum..
        Hmm da poor raglak..!!
        Sure da sissy will post soon..!!
        Tc too da??

    4. P112111 on June 3, 2017 12:04 am

      Awesome deary

    5. Aim on June 3, 2017 12:27 am

      Wow Awesomeeee.Loved today’s chapter.I hope Laksh gives a dose to Sanky

    6. A.xx on June 3, 2017 5:55 am

      Fab and love luckys decision xx

    7. Arjuna on June 3, 2017 6:55 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    8. amul on June 3, 2017 7:06 am

      awesome

    9. Monu on June 3, 2017 7:13 am

      Awesome episode

    10. Monisha on June 3, 2017 7:52 am

      Awesome

    11. Vini on June 3, 2017 7:54 am

      Poor raglak

    12. avika on June 3, 2017 8:23 am

      Nice

    13. Sinni on June 3, 2017 8:38 am

      Awesome keep posting

    14. Soumya on June 3, 2017 9:30 am

      Awesome di….is Ragini slapping laksh for swara?…post nxt soon

    15. Asw on June 3, 2017 10:02 am

      Amazing precap is sad? keep going

    16. Jiyani on June 3, 2017 10:55 am

      Superb

    17. Sherin on June 3, 2017 10:56 am

      Awesome

    18. aleeza on June 3, 2017 12:05 pm

      Awesome

    19. Puni on June 3, 2017 12:11 pm

      Wow!the story also superb and precap supero super please update it soon it is very much interesting thank you akka

    20. dharani on June 3, 2017 12:25 pm

      awesome darshu… thank u for the wishes… and i am sorry in advance because i may not be able to read and comment in further episodes for few days… u know right exams…. once i am back again i will be reading and commenting… till then take care… bye love u lots and will miss u and ur ffs and miss me as well???

    21. Ammu on June 3, 2017 1:30 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are beautiful. I really loved Laksh’s decision for revealing the truth to swara. Just like Laksh, me too not forgiving swasan easily. Precap is scary dear and plz don’t separate Raglak. Eagerly waiting for next episode and post next part ASAP

    22. Malu on June 3, 2017 2:59 pm

      Superb part nd can’t wait for next

    23. Ashly on June 3, 2017 3:26 pm

      Superb awesome amazing

    24. Aamy on June 3, 2017 3:53 pm

      Awesome

    25. Elizabethlovely on June 3, 2017 4:47 pm

      Fantastic episode

    26. Anju on June 3, 2017 5:51 pm

      Awesome update

    27. Rehna on June 3, 2017 7:10 pm

      Fabulous episode dear

    28. Pearly on June 3, 2017 8:54 pm

      Awesome

    29. Vennila on June 3, 2017 9:04 pm

      It’s interesting

    30. lovely7 on June 5, 2017 7:59 am

      Nice

    31. hemalattha on June 5, 2017 11:21 am

      Nice

    32. Follybraverl on June 6, 2017 12:37 pm

      Oh no precap is scary akka….My poor lucky Awesome episode love it

    33. IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 10:42 pm

      oh my god darshu di it was a fab episode
      loved it
      my poor lucky bhaiyaa he will get a slap so bad
      waiting for the next part

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