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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me-RagLak ff by darshu and folly part 9
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Don’t stay away it kills me-RagLak ff by darshu and folly part 9

DarshiniBy DarshiniMay 21, 201732 Comments7 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me 9
Hi my dear lovely friends…am really sorry yaar for this delay..i know you all are angry on me…i went for vacation and it was not a planned one..!!that’s why I was not able to update my ff’s…
So is there anyone who remembered the last part.??ok let’s go for a short recap if anyone forgot that…

Recap:
Laksh punctured parth’s car to make him stay away from ragini…Raglak had some happy moments outside mm…
Part9:
RagLak enters inside and they parted away to different room’s since swara is staying with them…
Laksh was hell tired that’s why he slept in couch and found swara slept already…
He takes a deep sigh of relief and sleeps occupied his mind..!!
Ragini doesn’t gets sleep…she was dying for something,no no someone,who was that..??obviously our laksh only..!!
She keeps on staring the watch..
“11:40”

Saw the next moment..,it’s 11:40 Again..!!
“why this clock is running slowly..shit..!!”Ragini bites her nails..
She saw the watch again after few minutes and she twisted her lower lips…
After few minutes..,she gets happy and covered herself with a shawl and goes out…!!
She then slowly opened the door and peeped inside…
She leans forward and suddenly she gets pulled by someone…
“oii..what brings you here..!!”laksh pulled her towards him without opening his eyes…
“laksh..!!how did you found that it was me…!!”Ragini asked staring him surprisingly..!!
“why couldn’t I..??even your breath is mine…!!I love you Ragu..!!”he kissed her cheeks..
Ragini turns crimson red due to shyness..

“come with me..!!”Ragini released herself from his grip and drags him..
Laksh:where…!!usually I used to peep inside your room but today you did it…how cute this hide and seek was..!!
“shut up and come..don’t make noise orelse..”Ragini couldn’t complete her sentence before that Laksh says”stop taking her name often..you are my wife..keep it on your mind first..”
Ragini:ok ok..i won’t scold you for today…got it…please come with me…
Laksh:aww mera bachcha..!!
Ragini then removes her shawl and blindfolds him…

“Ragu..what’s this yaar..??” he pouts…
Ragini:wait na laksh..!!
She then makes him sit inside the car and puts seat belt…
Unintentionally her hands touched his abdomen and created tickling sensation to him…
She blushes and sits in the driver seat…

“Ragu..!!you don’t know driving na..unfold it…i will help you orelse we will landed into trouble …”laksh was about to unfold the shawl…
{just imagine that Ragini doesn’t know driving before…}
Ragini:laksh..!!please na..let me drive…just few hours please be quiet…please(she pleaded cutely…!!)
“ok ok darling…!!”laksh plastered his mouth…
After some hours Ragini then somehow stopped the car with the jerk…

“get down..!!”she says and drags him outside…!!
Ragini takes laksh forward by holding his hands…it seems to be steepy…laksh realizes that they are stepping into some rock like thing…
“Ragini..!!where we are..??”laksh asks cutely in excitement…
Ragini then drags him more by seeing her watch and takes him to the top of the mountain…
She then says “don’t open your eyes till I ask you to do so..”
Laksh nods..Ragini stands behind laksh and unfolds the shawl…
“laksh…!!just feel the breeze…”
She takes his hands with hers and stands like that for a moment and they felt eo’s love enjoying the nature without opening their eyes…
Ragini countdowns “10..9..8..7……….

………3…2…1”
“Happy birthday Laksh…!!”she kissed his cheeks…
Laksh was hell surprised…he doesn’t know what to do…he simply hugged her tightly and smiles through his tears..!!
“thank you so much Ragu..!!I really I have forgotten my birthday..but even in this situation too you remembered my day…thank you Ragini..!!”laksh hugged her more tightly…
Laksh:how did you remember Ragu…!!
Ragini:I remember everything linked with you laksh..!!because I love you…!!

“I was surprised when you drive…finally you learned it…”laksh said…
Ragini:I learned because you insists…i thought to surprise u..!!that’s why I didn’t reveal about my driving classes…
{note:laksh asked Ragini to learn driving but she keeps on refusing due to some fear…but to surprise him she learnt it…}
Laksh:Ragini one more question…!!you didn’t wish me on 12’o clock and this is early morning…why did you wished me now…

“ugghh..!!hell with your quizzes…ok I will tell you why did i wished now…bcz..bcz @ 2:40 only you have came to this earth…maa said once so I thought to surprise you…and I don’t want someone to wish you first so I took you here from the house @ 11:59 itself and I switched off your mobile…”she said kiddishly…
Laksh gets tears and he uttered with full of love”I love you Ragini..!!I want to be with you forever…with you till my last breath…please don’t stay away from me Ragu…!!”
Ragini nods and says in filmy mood “picture abhi baaki hai my love…”
Laksh:one more surprise..wow..!!today you have turned out from my Ragini into my angel…haha!!fulfilling my wishes..not bad wifey…!!

Ragini gazed him intensely and takes his hand and places it on her tummy…
Laksh widens his eyes and he wasn’t able to believe this…
“Saachiii..!!”he smiles sheepishly…
Ragini nods…he then blown kisses on her forehead and then moved to her tummy and kissed there…
“I love you princess..thanks for coming in our life…”laksh gets emotional and wipes his tears…
Ragini bends down and hugged him…

“it’s time to celebrate laksh..!!happy birthday and congratulations we gonna become parents…”

Laksh:this is my best birthday gift Ragini…i love you so much!!thanks for everything Ragini,if you weren’t in my life then I won’t be this much happy…!!I love you..love you forever..!!
“I know Laksh..!!love you too…let’s cut the cake..come…”Ragini took him back to the place where they parked their car…
She opened the car dicky and tooks the parcel and unwrapped it..
There it is..

His favourite chocolate cake…
Ragini lighted the candle and sighs him to blow…he blown off the candle and takes her hand with his and cuts the cake…
Ragini tooks a piece of cake and fed him..he then takes a piece and was about to feed her but ate instead saying”yummy…!!”
Ragini pouts…
“ok ok..”said he and feeds her…

Ragini ate the cake like a kid…he wipes the cream at the corner of her lips with his hand and licks it…
“it’s more yummier…”he winks sheepishly…
Ragini beats him playfully…
He then pulled her towards him facing her back by folding her hands with his hands…
“am falling for you day by day..!!”laksh whispered near her ears…
Ragini blushes…

“tu aata hai seene Mein…
Jab jab saasein Bharti hoon..
Teri dil ki galiyon se..
Mein har Roz guzarti hoon…”plays in bg..
Laksh make side moves not to stress their baby…
“hawa aake jaise chalta hai tu…
…”
He then leans forward for a kiss instead his mouth gets tasted with chocolate cake…
“Ragini..!!”he glares her who is laughing victoriously…
Laksh takes the piece of cake and applied on her face…
{our doll is not at all inferior na…}
Ragini tooks that cake and bumped on his face…

Laksh takes out that wrapper from his face and pulled Ragini in an unexpected moment…
“please laksh..!!leave me na..”said she pouting..
Laksh smiles and rubbed her cheeks with his cheeks and both of their face were covered with full of chocolate flavour…
Ragini pouts while Laksh smiles…

To be continued •••
Precap:the same precap…

*****************************************
Sorry for the short update dears…i got some free time so I updated it today itself…
I know it’s too short but I will try to give long updates…
Quiz time:
Tell me do u like the beautiful naturistic village or chaotic busy cities??
Mine was nature’s beauty village only…bcz there we can njy the nature and live peacefully..we lost that happiness in this tall waala buildings…

That greeny…mitti smell…nature I love everything about it…
Do comment about this too…ok!!
Thanks for reading and take care…
Don’t forget to comment…

Bye for now!!
~Darshu

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    32 Comments

    1. dharani on May 21, 2017 8:08 pm

      awesome… i really loved the surprises of this epi laksh birthday and ragini’s pregnancy, and their moments are awesome… and i love village a lot, the crops which are full of green, big trees, small lakes, children playing on the sand roads everything is just awesome there

    2. shrilatha on May 21, 2017 8:12 pm

      Finally akka…awesome waiting for next eagerly

    3. Sherin on May 21, 2017 8:18 pm

      Awesome

    4. Jayanti on May 21, 2017 8:18 pm

      loved it darshu di……super duper awesome…such a cute surprise by ragu….and next part soon……superb di

    5. Naz_Temish on May 21, 2017 8:18 pm

      Awww how strong their love is…I loved it that she switched off his phone…Ragu is pregnant and things get complicated….waiting for next ?????

    6. aleeza on May 21, 2017 8:21 pm

      Awesome

    7. Ammu on May 21, 2017 8:27 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are really beautiful specially Ragini’s surprises for Laksh. I loved beautiful naturist​ic village because I’m living in a beautiful village. I love mitti smell specially in rainy day. It’s so beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP ??????

    8. Anju on May 21, 2017 8:50 pm

      Awesome

    9. A.xx on May 21, 2017 8:50 pm

      amazing xx

    10. Mintu on May 21, 2017 9:07 pm

      Awesome sisy…wow.. Ragu laksh kuda sendhu avalum romantic aaiytala.. Supr surprise.. Athuvum exact ah.. Laksh birth time apo wish panadhu dhn da sema.. I loved it..!! Nala vela swara varala. Ilaina avalo dhn..!!?? ragu pregnant supr.. Innimay dhn iruku..laksh care innimay kuditey irukum..!!! ?? Waiting for next part dear.. Post it soon da..!! Tc ?

      • Mintu on May 21, 2017 9:11 pm

        Coming to ur quiz..Comparing to city.. Village is the best..Its my opinion..!! People may move to city.. But we can’t deny the fact.. the nature nd atmosphere is the best place to live..!!

    11. Punitha on May 21, 2017 9:10 pm

      Please update it as soon as possible iam waiting for your beautiful update it was super mind blowing hands of to u.i like village only and you too take care…….

    12. Aadya114 on May 21, 2017 9:29 pm

      Amazing. Raglak scenes were beautiful and ragini’s surprises too.
      I also love village

    13. Soumya on May 21, 2017 9:50 pm

      Awesome di….raglak part ws superb

    14. asra on May 21, 2017 10:17 pm

      darshu dear awesome update dear….ragu correct laksh birth time key wish panirka…superbb la….phone switch off panathu superbbb….laksh oda irunthu laksh mathiriyae think pana aaramichu ta ragu…omg ragu pregnant sema…sumavey laksh ragu va vidu yeagaiyum vara madan…swara and Parth kida irundhu ragu va thani kudidu varuvan….Ipa pregnant Vera Parth seithan…Parth unala inimey ragu voda nelala kuda nerunga mudiyathu…..eagerly waiting for nxt one dear….
      and ur question…ofcourse village than dear….Green fields,lakes superbbb ra irukum la….na China vayasula lake la kuluchathulam neyapagam iruku…but Ipa water illa….tkcr dear….

    15. Asw on May 21, 2017 11:23 pm

      Amazing yaar raglak to cute in their celebration & happiness, my choice is nature is in high mountains like Kodak,ooty like that keep going

    16. Ammy on May 21, 2017 11:33 pm

      awesome

    17. Fairy on May 21, 2017 11:35 pm

      Omgg Hahahaha cake vala uodate..superbbbbbb marvellous amaznggg outstanding uodate dear..litterelyyy amZngggggg!!!!! Enjoyed so so sooo muchhh.hahahah brthday party fab.? Isssh cake romance? ….
      Aww!!!dey r going to be parents so cute???
      Loved my sweet si baccha rago???
      N laksh?? aww!!mera baccha?
      Beautiful update dear..really…
      M smiling so much after reading it???
      Thnx a lotzzz????
      N I never went to ny village so I donno about it..Bt in cities also sweety dere r such places which r full of greenary… I love to njoy n see d nature a lot?????
      Keep smiling n stay blessed dr….loatz of love tc???

    18. Sindhura on May 21, 2017 11:41 pm

      Nice

    19. Sinni on May 22, 2017 6:15 am

      Superb eagerly waiting for the next one post soon

    20. amul on May 22, 2017 7:35 am

      super

    21. lovely7 on May 22, 2017 10:00 am

      Awesome

    22. Arjuna on May 22, 2017 10:18 am

      AWESOME

    23. Malu on May 22, 2017 11:29 am

      mazing part nd can’t wait for next

    24. Malu on May 22, 2017 11:30 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    25. avika on May 22, 2017 12:28 pm

      Superrrr

    26. Follybraverl on May 22, 2017 1:20 pm

      Oh my god such an lovely update

    27. Ashnoor on May 22, 2017 2:49 pm

      Wow dear

    28. IQRA222 on May 22, 2017 3:30 pm

      darshu di it was the sweetest episode ever
      loved it so much
      raglan moments were simply awesome
      the present ragu gave lucky was very sweet and really unforgettable
      can’t wait for the next part
      and for me naturistic viallage as even I love greenery the smell of wet soil all these are really amazing

    29. Arjuna on May 22, 2017 9:04 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    30. tëìtō kUn on May 23, 2017 12:57 am

      Amazing….
      Raglak moments are Cute….

    31. Megha on May 23, 2017 6:15 pm

      Awesome

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