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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t stay away it kills me-RagLak ff by darshu and folly part 4
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Don’t stay away it kills me-RagLak ff by darshu and folly part 4

DarshiniBy DarshiniApril 15, 201749 Comments7 Mins Read
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Don’t stay away it kills me 4
Hi friends…shri i fulfilled your wish da…. back with the next chappy of my continuation ff…sorry for taking so much time…here we go…
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Ragini gets shocked with swara’s question…she doesn’t know how to tackle her…
Ragini (stammers):Wo…swa..swara…
“Shona beta….”sumi interrupted…
Ragini takes a deep breath of relief…
Swara: maa…
Sumi:Shona..laadoo…come let’s have dinner first…you have came today only na we can talk about rest tomorrow…come come…
Ragini:maa..i will help you in kitchen works…
Sumi:haan…laadoo…I really need it…
They finished their dinner and goes to their room for welcoming their sleep…
Sumi asks swara to sleep with her…swara nods and went with her…
Ragini goes to her room and bolted the door…she got freshen up and changed into her night dress…
“laksh don’t forget that Ragini is your sister in law…”flashed before her…

Ragini’s eyes turned wet…and she thinks about laksh…

“aah…”Ragini screams and picked the stone which hits her cheeks…
“Laksh”Ragini rushed towards the window and founds laksh…
Laksh didn’t uttered anything he simply stares her…a tear drop escapes from his eyes…
Ragini waves her hand…laksh sighs her through eyes…

Ragini(nervous):why did you came now…
Laksh:because I missed you…
Ragini:laksh don’t be silly…if swara sees then…
Laksh:wait!!if we talk like this then we will get caught by swara…am coming darling…
Saying so laksh climbed to ragini’s room through pipe…
Ragini forwards her hand and pulled him…they fall on the floor…
Laksh:what did you say!!silly hai na..my love is silly for you…
Ragini:am sorry laksh…i said so because if swara sees then it will hurt her health na..what will you do if swara stays with me in this room…that’s why I said…
Laksh (smiling):what did you think about your husband my darling…am I an idiot…no…i already told sumi maa to take swara with her…hehe…so I can spend time with my bacha…
Ragini glares him…
Laksh:this is not the time for those glares…this is the time for…close your eyes…
Ragini:laksh…
Laksh closes her eyes with his palm…and takes a cover from his pocket…he unfolded the cover…
“Happy holi darling ??”laksh applied colors on her cheeks…
Ragini gets teary eyed…
Laksh:areyy…stop crying yaar…you cried a lot today…so please stop it…i came here to spend few minutes with you and moreover this is our first holi together…i didn’t apply colors on you…so…
Ragini closed his mouth when she hears anklets sound…
“Ragini…”someone knocked the door…

Ragini:Swara!!I told you na laksh…now what can I do…go go…go away laksh…
Laksh kissed her palm…
Ragini takes her hand away and was about to open the door…

Laksh pulled her towards him and wiped the colors on her cheeks with his cheeks…
Ragini then wipes the colors on her cheeks with her pallu and sighs him to go…

Swara:Ragini…Ragini…
Ragini:haan..swara..am coming…
Ragini turns back and found Laksh getting down..she then opened the door…
Swara:Why do you take this much time…
Ragini:Wo..swara…i was tired so I slept…that’s why…
Swara:but Ragini…i can’t get sleep yaar…i said you na about the flashes…that came again when I closed my eyes…i don’t want to disturb maa so I came to you…
Ragini:swara don’t stress more…we are there na…soon you will get back your memory…god is with us don’t worry…
“I hope so Ragu…”said swara and places her head on Ragini’s lap…
Ragini caresses her head and soon swara slept while Ragini sleeps in that position… the whole night…
It’s morning…sumi woke and she didn’t find swara beside her…
So she searches her in entire house…she then rushed to Ragini’s room and found swaragini sleeping peacefully…

“Hey Ram ji…please don’t play with my daughter’s life anymore…”sumi wipes her tears and moves forward…
Sumi:Laadoo…Shona…get up…get up…
“Maa…5 minutes na…”both said at a time…
Sumi:areyy…it’s already late…get up my dear sweeties….come on(patted their cheeks)…
Swara wake up and sees Ragini sleeping in that position…
Swara:Ragini slept like this whole night…oh no…
She rubbed ragini’s knees…
Ragini:kya Hua swara…
“kuch nahi…it will be paining na…so only am doing this Ragu…”said swara and do the same…

“nothing gives more pain than staying away from laksh…”Ragini said under her breath…
Swara:Ragini…what’s going on in your mind…wait wait…let me guess…you’re thinking about your hubby right…haan hai na…
Ragini:Swara!!chup karo…
Swara:then it’s confirmed…you’re thinking about my brother in law only…hehe(cute smile)…won’t you tell me his name…
“Parth…”a man sounds cool…
Ragini(shocked):Parth…tum!!
Swara(shouts):who are you??maa…
“areyy chill na swara…don’t scream like you have found the thief…am none other than parth…your ragini’s husband…shocked hai na Ragu…”said parth and winked at Ragini…
Swara:wow…infact I was asking about you only…but Ragini didn’t uttered a word about you…
Parth:I know…because she is angry on me…
Swara(confused):angry…what do you mean!!
Parth:haan…we two fought on silly issues recently…so my sweetheart is angry on me…I came here to take mine back…
Swara:that’s so sweet of you…
Ragini:parth…what are you doing here…just leave I don’t want to see your face…just get lost…
Swara:Ragu I don’t know what happened between you two but he is so nice yaar…please understand him and solve your problems…bye..i will leave you guys now…
Ragini:Swara…swara…

“so Mrs.Ragini Maheshwari…how are you…”parth landed on couch…
Ragini:Parth…just leave from here…why did you say that you’re my husband to swara…i didn’t expect this from you…
Parth:chill na Ragu…I said without any intention only…yes Ragini I heard about swara’s health so I came to meet you…that time only I heard your conversation…you struggled with swara’s question so I made a lie…that’s it…not more that…believe me yaar…
Ragini:how can I believe you parth…you did wrong by saying yourself as my husband…i can’t even think about someone as my husband other than Laksh even in dreams too…
Parth:Ragini…you’re thinking me wrong…yes I loved you but it was my past…today I said like that just to help you nothing more than that…
Laksh and sanskar came to baadi…laksh eyes were searching Ragini…while sanskar found swara busy in kitchen…

“swara…”sanskar uttered…
Swara:dekho maa…your both damaad are here now…
Sanskar smiles widely hearing “both damaad…”
“Swara…you remembered everything…am so happy…”sanskar was about to hug her…
Swara:nahi sanskar…I don’t remember anything…
Sanskar(sadly):then how did you said two damaad…

“Woh that one huh…ragini’s husband came to sort out the problems between them…so I said like that…”said swara smilingly…
“What!!”sanlak at the same time…
Swara gave a weird look…
Sanskar:Wo..when did he came…
Swara(casually):just now…
Laksh goes towards Ragini’s room…

“areyy areyy…laksh give them some privacy na…care about me too lucky…always caring about Ragini…”swara said and makes a pout…
Sanskar sighs laksh and he drags swara saying something…
“swara..will you clear something in playing guitar…i have a doubt…”sanskar changed the topic…
“sanky…you are saying it…really…wow yaar…”swara got excited and takes him to dida’s house…

Laksh tooks this chance and goes to ragini’s room…
His eyes turned red seeing the scene happening there…
Parth was consoling her by holding her shoulders and wiping her tears…
Laksh banged in and pushed parth away…
“laksh…what the hell!!”parth stumbles a little…
Laksh:stay away from my Ragini…
“laksh…let me explain…”parth tried to say something but he get the glares from laksh…
Ragini:laksh…what’s this…
Laksh (pointing towards Ragu):tum chup karo…and you(pointing parth)leave from here before I kill you…
Parth leaves feeling awkward…
Laksh gazed her with his red coloured eyes…
“laksh..”Ragini uttered…
Laksh moves towards her…Ragini steps backward and he pinned her with the wall…
Laksh(angry bird avtar):how dare you Ragini…why did you said him as your husband…
Ragini:I didn’t laksh…he himself involved in this matter…he said that he is helping me…he was just consoling me that’s it laksh…
Laksh:consoling…haan…why Ragini you’re playing with my feelings nowadays…i just can’t see you with other men…when he was holding you..i felt like murdering him…please Ragini don’t do this with me…am saying ok for everything doesn’t mean that I will accept everything…don’t dare talk with him again orelse…
Ragini:orelse kya baaba…(wrapping her hands around his neck)
Laksh:orelse…
Ragini raises her eyebrows…laksh hugged her…
“don’t appear in night dress before anyone except me…”laksh wipes his tears…
Ragini:Wo…that’s the reason…possessive kid…

“yes am possessive about my wife…you’re mine…mine always…”said laksh…
Screen freezes with Ragini’s happy face and laksh’s jealousy face…
To be continued •••
Precap
Raglak moments…

So done with chappy…do you liked it…folly and Vidhu are you happy with this chappy??
Take care dears…
~Darshu

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    49 Comments

    1. IQRA222 on April 15, 2017 9:40 pm

      awesome episode darshu di
      loved it i wish shona gets her memory soon
      raglak moments were superb
      waiting for the next part

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 1:44 pm

        Tq so much my dear iqu ? I wish the same the same da…will post soon dear…

    2. Ashnoor on April 15, 2017 9:43 pm

      Amazing dear

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:14 pm

        Tq dear ashnoor? glad that you liked it…

    3. Ananya on April 15, 2017 9:46 pm

      Wow! Awesome part.. Plz update next part soon..

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:15 pm

        Tq so much dear ananya? will update soon ?

    4. shrilatha on April 15, 2017 9:55 pm

      Awesome akka thank u

      • shrilatha on April 15, 2017 11:13 pm

        U know akka I feel like princess..all my wishes r coming true…first teja’s come back now this…I am happy

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:16 pm

        Tq so much da shri…infact am also so hpy that teju is bck…
        Am happy that u liked it…

    5. lovely7 on April 15, 2017 10:05 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:17 pm

        Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

    6. Follybraverl on April 15, 2017 10:10 pm

      Nice episode Parth nice choice

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:19 pm

        Tq da sweetie..nee sonna scenes nxt update la podren da..am sry…parth uh Nikhil la vechuten…and a diary milk for u?? for informing abt teju’s return…hope u liked this chappy…

    7. gayu on April 15, 2017 10:19 pm

      Awesome dear. Feeling so bad for RagLak.

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:20 pm

        Tq so much da gayu…yes me too felt d same bt d plot is like that da…tc..

    8. Mintu on April 15, 2017 10:54 pm

      Awesome sis..!!! Magzchi da…Wow… Laksh is so romantic..evalo asaya ragu mela color apply pana vandhurukan…!!! Parth negative ah dear..???? laksh Voda possessive sema…Last scene la laksh kovam la dhn end aakum nu nenaichn…idhu supr da…!!!hehe.. aiyoo konja neram kuda avan la.. Ragu mela kovapada mudila..!!! Waiting for next part dear

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:23 pm

        Tq my dear sissy ? unakkum folly kum dis chappy da as a gift for informing me abt teju’s return…a diary milk silk for my sweet sister ??
        Hope u liked it…
        Hehe!!
        Aama knja neram kooda ennala avangala apdi paakka mudilla da adaan…

    9. Mahi on April 15, 2017 10:56 pm

      Awesome episode akka…Pls next part soon…Eagerly waiting….

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:24 pm

        Tq so much mahi..and yes I will b regular hereafter…tc…

    10. Asw on April 15, 2017 11:27 pm

      Always amazing keep going

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:25 pm

        Tq so much dear…glad that you liked it..

    11. Sreevijayan on April 15, 2017 11:47 pm

      Amazing update dear….

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:25 pm

        Tq dear shree ? glad that you liked it…

    12. AimRagLak on April 15, 2017 11:48 pm

      Awesomeeeeee??Loved it.How awesome it would be if swara suspects that Laksh loves Ragini&burn in jealousy then my revenge would be complete hehehe ???Please post the next part soon.You took long time,?

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:27 pm

        Tq so much dear?
        Hehe!!I will try your suggestion dear…
        And am Cho chorry for taking such a long time…
        Hereafter I will regular dear..tc?

    13. Shreya on April 16, 2017 12:34 am

      Loved the jealousy sooooo much . Awesome chapter .

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:28 pm

        Tq so much dear Shreya ? glad that you liked it…

    14. deesh on April 16, 2017 7:48 am

      Awesome darshu

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:29 pm

        Aww deeshu..tq so much dear u surprised me with your comments…tc da …

    15. avika on April 16, 2017 12:40 pm

      Superr

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:30 pm

        Tq dear avika ? glad that you liked it…

    16. vyshalivyshu56778 on April 16, 2017 12:45 pm

      awesome chapter…waiting for the next chappy

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:31 pm

        Tq dear vyshu? glad that you liked it…

    17. aleeza2 on April 16, 2017 12:51 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:32 pm

        Tq dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it…

    18. asra on April 16, 2017 2:35 pm

      awesome darshu dear….na ivalavu naala Indha update kuthan wait panen en oda waitness ku mudivu vandhirchu….laksh oda possessive ku oru aalavey illa….Indha laksh knjm romantic ka knjm possessive va knjm naughty ya irukan….love thz laksh darshu…Parth nallavana illa kedavana….darshu dear teju back…am soooo happy….nenga yeapadi feel panrenga….eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 3:35 pm

        Asra dear first of all am so sorry for making u wait for such a long time…
        Tq dear for loving the plot..u mde my day…
        Naanum semma hpy da…wow our rasagulla is bck…yippie…open ur mouth…say aah??…Srirangam vantha sollu rasagulla tharen…hehe!!ippo thaiku ithu adjst panniko? tc too da..

    19. dharani on April 16, 2017 3:39 pm

      awesome darshu i loved laksh’s possessiveness

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 4:02 pm

        Yippie Dharu cmnted…tq so much dear ? glad that you liked it…

    20. Ammu on April 16, 2017 8:31 pm

      Awesome episode and Raglak scenes are beautiful. Poor parth. Eagerly waiting for more Raglak scenes

      • Darshini on April 16, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thnx a lot da ammu? raglak scenes will be more in nxt prt…tc dear…

    21. Akshata on April 16, 2017 9:15 pm

      awsome, possessive laksh… that was my dream which never came true in the serial, but i am happy that u r showing him possessive towards ragini. update soon

      • Darshini on April 19, 2017 12:25 pm

        Tq akshi dear. ..am so happy that you liked it…will post soon dear…

    22. Ammy on April 17, 2017 9:58 am

      awesome.i like this ff very much.plz dont be late next time, update soon asap

      • Darshini on April 19, 2017 12:28 pm

        Tq dear ammy ? am glad to hear from you..and sry for being late…

    23. tëìtō kUn on April 19, 2017 3:25 am

      Amazing…
      Loved Laksh possessiveness…
      Precap is Awesome…

      • Darshini on April 19, 2017 12:30 pm

        Tq so much teito ? aww …am hpy that you liked it…

    24. A.xx on April 20, 2017 7:53 pm

      fab and love his jealousy xx

      • Darshini on April 20, 2017 8:47 pm

        Tq so much dear ? am so hpy that you liked it…

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