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Home»Fan Fiction»DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 72
Fan Fiction Naamkaran

DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 72

KiraBy KiraFebruary 28, 2018Updated:February 28, 201833 Comments10 Mins Read
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DON’T NEED YOU

        EPISODE 72

The Next day , It was a sunny morning .

Angel was doing her boxing practice outside her Hostel in the garden .

Veer comes and stands in front of her .

Veer : I need to talk to you .

Angel : But I don’t want to .

Veer : I know you were there at the Minister’s house last night .

Angel : Yes I was , I work there , It’s my Part time job .

Angel removes her gloves and goes to drink water .

Veer : Didn’t you know , That the Minister is A rapist .

Angel : what are you saying .

He holds her hand , Twist her around , Clutched her shoulders . Both of them had their mouths close .

Veer : Why don’t you tell me , That you are My Pari , why You are doing all this .

Angel’s sparkling eyes were looking into his .

Veer : You know 3 years ago , Everyone Forced me to believe that Pari is dead , But it was only me who didn’t believed .

Angel : I don’t know what are you talking about . What is the problem with you ?

Veer : I don’t know what is the problem with you ? Tell me why are you doing this !!.

Angel : I’m not your Pari , I’m Angel , Okay , Go away .

Veer : Okay if you Are not Pari , Then why are you wearing this ‘ Mangla Sutra ‘

Angel : Because it gives me power and strength.

Veer : This is that , Which I gave you 3 years ago .

Angel : Yes this was given to me by my husband .

Veer : Where is he ?

Angel : I don’t know !!

She pushed him back . Veer Had trust in his god . He was disappointed

Veer goes and sits down on a bench .
Angel looked him from behind .

Angel to herself – (( I’m hurting you , Just to Keep you secure , I have to take a revenge , I need to take a avenge , Of my every single tear from him ))

Angel was in anger , She goes to her room . Takes out a Pen drive , Bangs her hand on table strongly , Blood comes out .

Angel : My plan is on the right track , Khan, Get ready , Now you are In my Game , it’s all about me tonight , Wait for me Khan ….

She takes a knife and scratched Khan’s picture .

It was now Breakfast Time .

Aunt : How’s food ?

Veer : It’s good Mam .

Angel : Yes .

Angel and Veer were having breakfast.

Veer : From now you will not work with that Khan .

Angel : Who are you to tell me ?

Veer : He is not a good man .

______________________________

Khan was in aggression , Nikhil was with him .

Nikhil : How did it happened ? Who can do it ?

Khan : I remember , I was drunk last night , A girl was with me .

Nikhil : Who was she ?

Khan : Can’t recall .

Nikhil : You know what , I think , That girl , Your new Caretaker .

Khan : Can she ???

Nikhil : These girls , Think that they are very smart , But they’re stupid . Mark my words , From today itself keep a strict eye on that girl .

Khan : I think you’re absolutely right !!! Don’t worry I’m a master of masters .

Nikhil : Okay now I’ve to bye .

______________________________
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Angel : I’ve to work , I can’t take my steps down .

Veer : I won’t let you go .

Angel : Oh really !!!

Veer told her what we came across last night .

Veer : Now you tell me , Who was that brave girl who saved them .

Angel : I can’t say , I left his home early and I was in a coffee shop .

Veer : Show me it’s Receipt

Angel : I threw that away .

She goes to her room .They were staying in a large living room separated by two bedrooms.

Angel : I’ve to do something , Somehow I have to make veer Believe that I’m Angel not Pari . Otherwise , My plan could be interrupted .

Veer comes in , She was sitting on the sofa , Holding a magazine .

Veer : Hushhh….From where is this Smoky smell coming from .

He goes and opens the window .

He saws that Angel is holding a book from where greyish gas was coming out . He removes that book .

Veer : Yeuwww,, You are smoking ?

Angel : Any problem .

She made a fake cigarette , Rolling a paper ….

Veer : Oh my Gosh !!! Give it to me .

Angel : Nope , I’m addicted to it , Since last year .

Angel in her brain ( Now you will be assured that I’m not Pari )

Veer : I can’t see this , I’m going out .

Veer moves out and walks across the streets .

Veer to himself ” How harder is to explain yourself that your love is dead when she’s just in front of you , Oh Lord save me ” , ” I don’t know when she’ll understand ”

____________________________

Angel : Oh It’s 4 I should leave now ,

Angel reached there.

Khan was distressed talking to someone : I don’t know , How did it happened , Where are those girls .

Angel : Hello sir , May I come in .

Khan: come , Do your work .

Angel : what happened sir , You look so distressed today .

Khan : Nothing , Mind your own business .

Angel goes to Kitchen , The waitress Asked her ” Mam are you okay , I got to know that yesterday some abducted girls were released from this house ”

Angel : Yes !

Waitress : Who did all this ? Mam you need to take care of yourselves .

Angel : Don’t worry , It was only me who did this .

Waitress : what !!! , This man should be put behind the bars .

Angel : Ya , I’ve this ( shows her a pen drive ) , All the clues are in this , Once this it is in public , Khan would be in prison .

Waitress : Boss !!!( Completely terrified )

Angel turns back

Khan : So my suspicion was right , It is you only ,,, Tell me who are you ??

Angel : I’m a fire , I’m flame , So bright can burn your whole body

Kahn : Shut up , Guards catch this fish , Let’s see how it will taste .

Three guards come and attacked on her , She Throw them away on ground .

Angel : How weak you are ?? Never underestimate me !!! I’m out of my mind now .

Kahn ” You are super fool.

He hold and pressed her neck .

Khan : Give me that Pen drive , Otherwise I’ll kill you right here .

Angel : No one can stop your Destruction now .

Khan grasped her hairs and threw her on the floor .

Khan : ‘ Latoon ke bhut batoon se nahi mante ‘ ( morons can’t understand until beaten )

Khan Took a rod and goes to beat her .

He raised his hand , Angel turned her face away , Someone comes in front of her .

Angel : Veerrrrr !!!!!!!!

Khan : who are you !

Veer : A Savior , Protector of truth .

He snatched the rod and beat him . He tied him with a rope .

Veer comes to her ” Angel are you okay ”

Angel : How did you come here ?

Veer : I was worried about you , I came here to see you , Then I met the waitress at door , She told me everything .

Angel : Thanks .

Veer : Years back My wife also protected me like this , She took the hit of a whip on her body .

Angel’s eyes filled with tears .

Angel : Thanks for being here .

Veer : Let’s go .

Angel : No something is left .

She was completely warmed with anger , Eyes red hot like a volcano .

She took a rod , And moves slowly towards Khan

Angel : I told you , Don’t underestimate me , I’m a fire , I can burn your eyes .

((((Background music –
Looks like a girl, but she’s a flame
So bright, she can burn your eyes
Better look the other way
You can try but you’ll never forget her name

This girl is on fire
This girl is on fire
She’s walking on fire )))

She recalled how girls suffered due to people like him .

She goes to him and beat him Once , Twice , Thrice with rod .

Angel : Now now one can stop you from being behind the bars .

They both left .

Khan shouts : Catch them , Snatch that pen drive from her .

Guards were running behind them , Veer and Angel goes and hide in a shack ( cottage) .

Veer : How mad you are , It could be so dangerous for you !

Angel : You need not to worry about me .

Veer : Why not , You are my wife , You are wearing this Mangla sutra

Angel : Why can’t you understand I’m not Pari .

Veer : Then why were you after that Minister.

Angel : Because I want to eradicate crime from this world .

The night was growing more darker and Cooler , Their phone’s weren’t working due to network issues .

Angel : Oh lord we’ve to spend out night here .

Veer : Yes , Just because of you

Angel : Me ??? !!!

Angel was shivering , She became lame , She already had used her power .

Veer : I can’t understand you , You are a puzzle .

Angel : I’m going from here .

She tries to move out . But he holds her arm .

Veer : Now where will you go Ha!!! Already we’ve put our lives at risk .

Angel : I can’t live here ,Bye

.

Veer : Shhhhh!!! See you have fever . Sit down .

Angel : How can we light a fire here .

Veer : You smoke , You must be having a matchbox with you .

Angel : No I don’t have it .

Veer removes his shirt and puts over her .

Angel removes that away . He again put’s it over her .

Veer : Okay , Just being a friend you can take help from me

Veer : I don’t know when will you understand

Angel looking to him and saying to herself: To keep my love safe , I can be your friend instead of wife ,,,Everything is fair in love& war ,,

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WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND PLEASE ???

Bye love u all

Kira

Listen to song above – https://youtu.be/e7xsVF_XTEs
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    Hi I'm back after so long ?

    33 Comments

    1. Zain on February 28, 2018 12:45 pm

      Amazing Kira . Hats off to your skills .
      Lovely episode . Waiting for next ,…. Episode 73

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 2:10 pm

        Thanks zain , I’m really happy reading your comments always ???

    2. Aryan Bhattacharya on February 28, 2018 1:28 pm

      Di.. Daarun.. Superhero ne kya entry diya.. Superb episode… How caring Veer is!! Nice..
      Di.. Please can you say me when is your birthday… Please please please please.. ?

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 2:12 pm

        Thanks Aryan?????
        My birthday is on 12 August .
        Well what about you ???

    3. Zain on February 28, 2018 2:04 pm

      Episode 73 :::::: ——– ???????

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 3:34 pm

        Sorry but for next I shall get late , Maybe I could post by tomorrow at 1 or maybe at 9 pm .

    4. DBRSR1822 on February 28, 2018 2:42 pm

      Amazing episode dear……..
      I have no words to express how much I am in love with your ff…..
      All the Best…….
      Have a pleasant day…….

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 3:33 pm

        ??????thanks

    5. Aman on February 28, 2018 2:51 pm

      Loved the episode post the next one soon❤️❤️

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 3:32 pm

        Thanks dear

    6. Shruti on February 28, 2018 3:53 pm

      Love and caring by veer for pari was amazing. Ur photo ang background song or music timing is amazing. I think u like Hollywood more than Bollywood. …. talking about the episode its amazing. Pari has fought very nicely. The minister should be behind the bars soon. And not only minister but nikhil also. I think its enough for today……..
      I hope u have a happy and relaxing day
      Bye
      See you again in next episode

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 4:29 pm

        Thanks for writing , Well , Yes it’s 50/50 I like both Hollywood and Bollywood .
        Bye
        Love u ?????

    7. Aryan Bhattacharya on February 28, 2018 5:50 pm

      Di… I am so so so happy bcoz Our birthday is in same month ?? My birthday is on 4th August.. 2001..

    8. Aryan Bhattacharya on February 28, 2018 5:51 pm

      Di thanks for telling your birthday…. And thanks for telling the time ?

    9. Aryan Bhattacharya on February 28, 2018 6:57 pm

      Di.. I am so so so happy bcoz Our birthday is in same month.. My birthday is on 4th August… ☺️ and di thanks for telling me about your birthday and thanks for telling me the time of your next episode ?

    10. Aryan Bhattacharya on February 28, 2018 6:59 pm

      Sorry by mistake I have written 2 times… I am sorry sorry sorry… Actually there was network error so it was not showing that whether the comments has been posted or not so I have written again… I am so so so sorry for it…

      • Kira on February 28, 2018 8:18 pm

        Sounds great we’ve our birthdays in same month ….???

    11. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 1, 2018 8:20 am

      Good morning di.. Have a charming day ?

    12. Addii on March 1, 2018 1:35 pm

      Episode 73 ????

      • Kira on March 1, 2018 1:54 pm

        Hi all my dear ones , Its and apology I have to go out of station in emergency , My grandmother got fracture . So I can’t post till two days

        Sorry
        Bye
        In an emergency
        Kira

    13. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 1, 2018 1:56 pm

      OK di… No problem…

    14. Zain on March 1, 2018 7:44 pm

      sorry to disturb you .
      Hope she gets well soon .
      Happy Holi .
      Hope to hear episode 73 by / on Saturday .
      Bye

      • Kira on March 1, 2018 8:36 pm

        Thanks

    15. Avneil lover on March 1, 2018 8:56 pm

      Love it all lot
      Pls upload next episode

      • Kira on March 2, 2018 3:05 pm

        Ya I’ll try my best . Thanks for loving my story

    16. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 2, 2018 12:04 am

      Baar baar din yeh aaye…. Baar baar dil yeh gaaye… Holi khelo hazaro saal yeh meri hai arzoo Happy Holi to you… Happy Holi to you Kira di..

    17. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 2, 2018 8:48 am

      How is grandma now??

      • Kira on March 2, 2018 3:04 pm

        Thanks a lot arayn bro
        Happy holi to you to , My Granny is okay now

    18. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 2, 2018 8:03 pm

      You are most welcome di… ? Di… I want to do friendship with you…. Di.. Will you be my friend???

      • Kira on March 3, 2018 8:38 am

        Okay brother

    19. Aryan Bhattacharya on March 3, 2018 9:20 am

      ?? Thanks di… How is granny??

    20. Addii on March 3, 2018 9:28 am

      Hi Kira,
      So how is grandma now ?? . Hope you enjoyed HOLI. Have a good day . Can I know your profession ??.
      Episode – 73 ????

      • Kira on March 3, 2018 10:21 am

        Arayan and addii she’s good now , Next is out

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