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Home»Fan Fiction»DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 54
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DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 54

KiraBy KiraFebruary 13, 2018Updated:February 15, 20184 Comments5 Mins Read
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DON’T NEED YOU

Episode 54 

 

Veer : Pari at 8: Am food  is served in the NGo .

Pari : Oh yes , Help me distribute food to children .

Veer : Yes . Hmmmm… the food looks tasty .

A child : Who are you uncle ?

Pari : Uncle ,,, Hahha

Veer : Beta ( kid ) I’m Veer your new friend .

child : Hi bhaiya .

Veer : Hi all my lovely children did you liked the food .

Everyone : Yes Veer bhaiya ( brother )

Veer : Okay after having breakfast we’ll play cricket .

Children : Yeehhhhh …

A little girl : I don’t want to play cricket , I will play with my doll .

Small boy : Bhaiya we only boys will play .

Pari : No all girls will also play .

Veer : Oh really do you know even A B C  of cricket .

Pari : I know till X Y Z , Are you afraid of playing with me .

Veer : With you !!! Really , I need a tough fight .

Pari : come on the ground , we’ll see who wins .

Child : What will winner get .

Veer : Okay if girls win then I’ll do what your Pari mam says and give all the girls chocolate and if boys win then Pari mam has to kiss me and she has to give all boys a chocolate .

Children : Yeeeehhhh!!!

Pari : Greeta get the cricket kit .

Child : who’ll be the umpire .

Sunny lands there : Wait wait , I’m going to be the Umpire and commentator .

The pitch is ready , Stumps are set , Its time for the toss .

Veer : I’ll choose heads .

Sunny tossed the coin …

Sunny : It’s a tails .

Pari: Yipeee , Get ready to be defeated ..

Veer : Don’t just speak show some action .

Sunny sitting on a chair .
” Lady’s and gentleman , We’re are going to begin with 20 balls match , She’s pari caption of ‘ Singham team ‘ and there’s Veer the captain of ‘ lions ‘ team . Let’s see who wins .

Girls as they won the toss has chosen to ball first .
Here comes Ritika to bat first and our little bowler kaju .

Veer : Kaju we want wicket .

He rolled the ball and throws it .

Sunny : And here goes a four .

Girls shouts .

Pari : Laaaalala …..( making faces)

Next comes the other one and unfortunately she’s out .

Veer : Yehhhh my kaju … do well

Sunny : Girls are playing well its the 15th ball, ……. Oh its a catch out .

Pari : oh shit ! . It’s my turn .

Sunny : Friends an Epic moment . we’ve Pari on the spot . Veer is going to ball . Score is 11 runs . 5 balls left .

Pari ( I’ve to score , to make more than 20 )

Sunny ” Here comes another ball and ………….
Its a six , Good job Miss.Pari ”

Veer : Oh Yar , Now you see .

Sunny ” Now after a big six , Another Ball by our captain to the captain ………….And its out …..

Pari : Oh god .

Sunny : Batting by girls is over . They’ve made a big target of 18 in 20 balls and 3 wickets . Now it’s turns for the boys .

Veer : Shiv you go first okay .

Sunny : And on first ball it’s a four .

After some time.

Sunny : Guys a strange moment . Target is of 18 . Score is 15 . Veer is on the spot . Pari is going to ball . Two balls left .

Sunny : Today truly ‘ Aata majhi satakli ‘

Pari to herself ( I’ve to win ) . Veer In his mind ( Today Pari will loose , I want her to ….)

Everyone shouting .

Sunny : Friends Wait , She’s running , Going to throw , Veer touches the ball and it’s ……………………. oh my god I can’t believe , No I can’t ……….. Veer wins . It’s a big four .

children stood up and starts dancing .

Veer comes to Pari and says silently : You know why I won because I was so eager to be rewarded .

Pari : What ????

Veer : Yes don’t you know what will winner team captain get .

Veer : So kids did you enjoyed .

Children : Yesss. Boys won . Now we want our gifts .

A kid : Pari mam kiss our captain, Because girls lost the game .

Pari : it’s just a game . Okay . Just a a game .

Sunny : No no , Rules are rules , Yes or no .

Kids : yes , yes .

Sunny : Until the rules are not followed we all will keep shouting . Ye ye !!!!!!

She goes near him , Her eyes were closed . Her mouth was near to his , But she stopped , She was shy .

Veer : Come closer .

Greeta. comes with a tray full of tasty cookies , Everyone ran there . They pushed Pari and finally she kissed him .

They all goes to Greeta
. Pari’s cheeks were red .

Veer : Wow how sweet is when one wins .

Pari bangs him in stomach and runs away from him .

Veer : We’ll play cricket daily !!!

what’s next ?
– Rise of the evil
– No medicines

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    Hi I'm back after so long ?

    4 Comments

    1. Shruti on February 13, 2018 8:53 pm

      Thanks kira for ur birthday wish. Actually I wasn’t able to reply yesterday. Todays episode was really good. Very nice idea as well as creativity. Cricket match was amazing. And the winner gift was also amazing. Keep it up.

      • Kira on February 13, 2018 9:58 pm

        Thanks sis. For ur love . hope u had a amazing birthday . Sending a gift for u ???????????

    2. -pari- on February 14, 2018 9:46 am

      ? girls lost the match! ? Poor girls. Anyway, the episode was amazing!! Nice dialogues between them. Sunny is always funny ?? Veer is smart ? post the next one asap. Eagerly waiting. Good luck.

      • Kira on February 14, 2018 11:28 am

        Next is posted

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