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Home»Fan Fiction»DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 53
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DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 53

KiraBy KiraFebruary 12, 2018Updated:February 12, 20185 Comments5 Mins Read
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DON’T NEED YOU

EPISODE 53

53 ✨

The birthday day ….

Veer woke up as he could heard a message has arrived on his phone ..

Veer : Pari’s message .
He reads ” I don’t want to say this , But you’ve done something that has completely broken my heart . Don’t want to be with you any more , Meet me at the garden and wear something new , either I’ll breakup ”

Veer : what , what I’ve done …

____________________________

Pari just woke up , it was her yoga time .

Pari : A message from Veer .

She reads it .

Pari : Oh my god , what I did , I think I slapped him that is why he’s upset .

They both were crazy to find out what’s the matter . They had to wore the new dress kept beside them as their cupboards were locked and keys vanished .

They both hurriedly goes to the garden ( backyard) .
When they reached there they saw a big tent .
First veer goes in and it was all dark there  and Pari comes into then .

Veer : Hey Pari , Did you put this tent here , Where are you ?

Pari : Veer you’re here , Who placed it over here .

Then little lights are turned on .

Pari : Aaaa !!! who are you ??

Veer : OhhhhAaa who are you ???

Sunny comes in , “Hello Miss. Pari and Mr.Veer ”

Sunny : Before you ask me anything I explain .
You both had your birthday today and you both told me to book a table in hotel , Fortunately you choose one hotel and that was full , I didn’t told you , coz I don’t want to spoil you mood .

Veer : And so you did this .

Pari : You texts us from each others phone .

Veer : but why I can see this kind of arrangement over here .

Sunny : Its a horror theme party and I’m going out , It’s your day , Keep some cake for me
bye .

Veer : You’re looking awful in this bright red gown , , blo*dy lips , moreover your mask is amazing

Pari : And you look so cute in this dark red coat , Horns on head , creepy face mask .

Veer : This little tent is amazing , let’s celebrate this horrible birthday .

Pari : See the cake , Its red with our names .

They both cuts it and offers to each other . Then automatically sweet music is played .

Veer : Its my favorite song .

He starts dancing .

Pari : Your moves are not that good .

Veer : Really show me your dance .

Pari : I don’t like dancing .

Veer : I already know , You can only fight , My Lady singham.

Pari comes to dance floor and rocks it .

Veer : wow .

He comes and joined her .

Ultimately lights are turned off . And they falls down , Over each other.

Sunny : Oh sorry some issue .
He comes in.

Sunny : Oh did I came at the wrong moment.

Veer : Wait , I tell you .
He rises and goes to him in anger .

Sunny : Sorry , Sorry bro.

He goes and picks him .

Veer : Today we’ve a new demon in the party .

Veer goes and does some makeup , Pari helps and they make Sunny look like a real demon .

Sunny looking at the mirror : Wow I look cool , Isn’t it .

They both laughs .

Then they all clicked selfies .

Veer : Say cheese ….

# A horror birthday party in a tent .

They they had brunch .

_____________________________

At the night .

Three were on the sofa .

Sunny : Hey , Exchange your gifts . Before that let me give you my gift .

Veer : Sunny , thanks , okay let’s see what Pari has for me .

She hangs him over a big box .

Veer : Wow a Pair of heels .

Pari : what I got shoes .

veer : Yes they are shoes with sharp ends .

Pari : oh ya now I remember that the lady with me at the shop was buying it and we both exchanged our boxes .

Veer : Wow a great gift . Whatever , what  is your present .

Pari : A pair of story books .

Veer : Isn’t it a great gift , You could tell stories to children at NGO.

Pari : really !!!

Sunny : Yes , Mine gifts are much better than yours .

Veer : Yes a pen

Pari : And a Hair clip .

Veer : But this is good than this heels .

Pari : Much better than bed time story books .

Sunny : Thanks , And you know my total bill came out to be 200 rs/ – .

Pari : Thanks sunny , The party at the tent was totally amazing .

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    5 Comments

    1. Kira on February 12, 2018 11:00 am

      Did you ever had a crazy birthday something like this . What was your experience?

    2. Shruti on February 12, 2018 6:39 pm

      Actually my birthday is tomorrow only. The episode was amazing. A very good creativity. Finally there birthdays are celebrated in a very unique manner. There birthday gifts were little surprising for me. But overall it was an amazing episode. Can’t wait for next episode. Please post your next episode asap.

      • Kira on February 12, 2018 8:12 pm

        Thanks shruti .
        And yes a very happy birthday and hug day to you . Keep smiling ????????

    3. -pari- on February 13, 2018 9:59 am

      Aww! A different Birthday party !!!; ?? Sunny is so funny ? Love this episode ? Finally they had a good time .. Waiting eagerly for next part ?

      • Kira on February 13, 2018 11:36 am

        ??

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