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Home»Fan Fiction»DON’T NEED YOU -A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) – Episode 8 to 10
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DON’T NEED YOU -A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) – Episode 8 to 10

KiraBy KiraJanuary 31, 2018Updated:February 7, 201813 Comments7 Mins Read
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DON’T NEED YOU

EPISODE 8

Pari was sitting completely engaged at her laptop , Searching about the black men’s gang as it was a part of her secret mission .
Miss.Sophia* comes in with a little girl , She was about 8 or 9.

” Hi, Sophia . Who is she ? ”

” She’s Laura , Laura say hello ! ”

” oh she is so cute but why do she looks so shy of me ”

” Wait , Pari , Laura my cutie see there’s a big garden there , Go and play ”

When she lefts . Sophia like a stroke of wind drags Pari and they both sat on lounge .

” Sophia , You look tensed is everything ok!” – Pari
” Nothing is okay honey ” – Sophia

She explains her . She told her that Again The black men’s gang , Abucted ( kidnaped ) three minor girls . Our team saved them , Two are sent saftly to their homes but Laura’s home is in another city . She has to go to another town because of a terrorist attack there . Laura can’t be kept anywhere , She has to be taken to her home . Black mens’ Boss wants to kill her as she is the only child who can help revel their identity .

” Don’t you worry officer , i alone can handle this task ”
” But are you sure , i mean ! The boss is searching for you and Laura everywhere . He will shoot you the moment he will point you ”

” God is with me , He is our saviour , Its’s my duty to take Laura saftly to her home ”
” i’m very sorry i’ll not be there to help you ”

” I understand sophia , In this sensitive case we can’t trust any other ” – Pari

” She has just suffered something horrible , She is a child , She was raped , She is mently disturbed ”

” Yah ! you are right , I will send my best police force with you ” – Sophia .

She explained to her the whole plan , That how Pari would travel by Train and will go there in Burqa* . Lauren would be her little sister .

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*sophia – police inspector .
* Burqa – A burqa is an enveloping outer garment worn by women.

!””!!”!%!”!$!!””*?$!+’

What’s next ??

– pari all set for mission

– Veer on same train

– will black men’s gang find her?

EPISODE 9

” Come Laura , Sit here , It’s a good window seat ” – Pari

” Didi ( big sister ) please don’t leave me alone ( She was afraid ) ” – Laura

Pari hugged her and gave her a warm kiss. ” Laura , Keep quiet and smile , I’m always with you ”

She sat with her . She took her hand and started reading a book . It was 8:am and 15 minutes left for the train to begin its journey . Laura falls asleep.

___________________________________

She heard someone coming in through the door . It was a man with a big office case . He was speaking something .

” Ohhh !! I’ve reached , It’s my first ride on a train ”

” I must say trains are pretty spacious rather a plane ”

After he made his large bag rest , He asked his passenger .

” Madam , At what time the train will start ? ”

She removes the book from her face and looks into her watch and raises her head to answer his question . She finds out that it’s again VEER . she stops for a moment but then replies it’s 8:12 sir .

In her mind she spoke ( again , Veer , Now how will i ……. Shit …shit )

The train begins to move slowly and a couple of minutes later runs fast .

Breakfast has arrived …..

” Laura wake up , Have breakfast ”

She serves her . But she herself didn’t eat . She was afraid that to eat she has to remove the burqa.

” wow , Tasty sandwich , hummmm….. ” he spoke

” Madam why arent you eating , Are you on a diet ??? ”

” Shut up ,,, i do what my heart says ”

” okay , chill , I was joking , Did you know your voice , The way to shout shut up reminds me of someone ” – he said .

She gets silent .

After a while , When his meal was done . He asked her where is she travelling .

” Look , i don’t talk to strangers ….” She spoke this and her throat got irritated ,,,she was coughfing .

” I don’t why girls shout so much , Ha !!! , Take this, have some water”

Instantly she removed the cover and drank water .

” You , You were there in this Burqa , Ohhh !! That is why i was thinking , Why your voice is so familiar ”

In her mind she thought ( how brainless i am )

” Heeyyy , what are you uttering , I think you are praising me hummmm…” – Veer

” I don’t praise folish people you know , You should better keep quiet ” – Pari .

” ok I will , But you need to answer my one question ”

” I don’t want to talk to you ”

” Please tell me your name , How bad it is , we’ve met atleast four times and we dont know each other names ”

” I won’t Mr. Veer ”

” wait how’d you get to know my name ? ”

She stops , slowly ” oh no !!!”

Laura starts crying ” Don’t fight Pari didi”

She makes her feel comfirtable and gives her video game.

” Yehhhh!!!!” He stood up and starts dancing . ” i know your name , Yipeee”

Laura laughs ???.

” Laura stop laughing now ” .

He sits down and again spoke ….

To be cont..

EPISODE 10

10

HE sits down and asks ” How is your health now after that incident ”
” I’m good now , Just a minor cut “- Pari

Veer : why re you very weird ?

she glares at him .

Veer : I mean first when we met you cried a a lot , You were so scared , Then you fight all alone with those men ,,, How , Who are you ??

Pari : I’m just a human being

He phone rings
” Hi I’m Sophia , Pari I’ve got to know that Black men’s gang men are in your train ” She just said this much and due to network issue the signal cut , Call ended .
” Sophia , Sophia answer me , hello ” – Pari

she got tensed and worried .
” pari , What’s up ?”
” nothing ”

**************

A man wearing white turban , An old pair of pants comes and asks for tea .
Both of them said No . He glared both girls for some time and then leaves ..

Pari stood up and calls him ” Hey , Hey wait , wait ”

he didn’t replied and ran away to other section of train .

Laura be seated her I’m just coming after a minute. Okay …

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what’s next ??
– what is Boss’s plan ?
– will Laura be killed ?
– Veer , what will he do ?

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Kira

    Hi I'm back after so long ?

    13 Comments

    1. -pari- on January 31, 2018 6:14 pm

      You are arousing my curiosity always ? I’m uneasy till I get to know what is going to happen next. Post next one soon. Really you are very talented in this ?

      • Kira on January 31, 2018 8:30 pm

        Thanks very much

      • Kira on January 31, 2018 8:31 pm

        I’m bringing some twist in next episode . You’ll meet one of the enemies of Pari , Nikhil

      • -pari- on January 31, 2018 8:40 pm

        Ah! New twists! Getting interesting!!

    2. Kira on January 31, 2018 8:29 pm

      An edit toward the end its Laura be seated here not her .
      Sorry for that .

    3. Maya on January 31, 2018 9:04 pm

      Fabulous

      • Kira on January 31, 2018 9:11 pm

        Thanks Maya hope you will read all episodes and I don’t upset you

    4. niyati on January 31, 2018 9:12 pm

      Amazing dear

    5. Shruti on January 31, 2018 9:42 pm

      Amazing

      • Kira on January 31, 2018 10:09 pm

        Thank u

    6. Adii725 on February 1, 2018 1:07 pm

      nice update…pls post next episode soon…..very curious ……

      • Kira on February 1, 2018 3:07 pm

        Thanks very much ?

    7. Kira on February 1, 2018 3:06 pm

      My dear friends thanks for your love and support . I was quiet busy today , So toady I will post next episode at 8 pm and then tomorrow it will submitted by Telly update team . Hope you understand . Bye , Love u all

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