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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t dare to leave me you have no right:raglak and swasan episode 9
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Don’t dare to leave me you have no right:raglak and swasan episode 9

Chandana_hariBy Chandana_hariDecember 22, 201726 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello every one….sorry for late…and really u people r toooo gud…u r liking such crap too…

Swarnaragput, aamy, sherin, monisha, sandhiyaswasanian, fariha, thahseem, ashly, asra, arjuna, monisha, pearly, anju, elizabethlovely, raglak_fan, malu, laashya, vennila, monu, soumya, tani, pinki, jiyani, vini, ammu, zoya….thank u all for ur love…..literally…I am at verge of crying when I saw such huge response…love u all…

Heyy frnds…I am going to write a ss on ragsan and nairan…and I want to gift it to alia(A12345) buddy…for all her lovely stories…plzzzz my dear swasanians and raglakians if u all don’t have any prob…then do read that also..
(SAPNA:ragsan and nairan)

Let’s start…

Swara:sanskar!!!what was the need to tell we r going to marry?
And u r a doctor…is this a way u beat some one?
San:looks at ground controlling his anger
Swa:answer me sanskar…dammm ittt
San:swara if u don’t want to say u r daughter of central minister…then don’t…but listen…u r and will always be swara sanskar maheshwari…and I sanskar maheshwari…don’t like some one touching my wife…did u get that…
(Again shouts)did u get that???
Swa:sanskar….y
San:swara bcoz I love u
Swa:still…y
San:bcoz I can’t live without u
Swa:y
San:bcoz I already built a palace for u in my heart
Swa:y
San:bcoz the day I saw u I felt u were mine…only mine…
Swa:y
San:bcoz we r two bodies and one soul…

(A perfect situation…sooo obviously its raining)

Both swasan r drenched completely in the shower of love…
San: runs his fingers all over her face…all the time maintaining eye contact….these eyes, nose, lips, everything…every single thing of you is mine…
Swa:closing her eyes…feeling Shiver down her spain…sanskar…
San:hmmmm
Swa:what if some thing happens and we two get sepe…
San:places his lips hard to hers…biting her lower lip as a punishment to talk like that…
After some time…they break it…(Why?…u all know it)

San:swara listen one thing carefully… DON’T DARE TO LEAVE ME YOU HAVE NO RIGHT…understand???u r mine and only mine…
Swa:hugs sanskar tightly….

At raglak’s colz…

All 4 go to near by park…
Laksh takes ragini and sits on a bench…
Lasya is going there while rohan holds her wrist and nods a no…
Rohya stays far from them in their own world…
Rag:lucky…
Lak:hmmm
Rag:yyy did u leave that preeti…I thought u will slap her…
Lak:ha ha thought to…but…she is ministers daughter sooo afraid of her…keeps serious face…
Rag:seriously lucky…r u afraid of her???and that to because her father is a minister?
Lak:nods his head in yes
Rag:lucky if her father is a minister then my dad is central minister…okkk…don’t get afraid of her…
Lak:exactly…senorita….ur father is strength to you…not ur weakness to avoid….and in fact u should be proud of him…
Rag:keeps her head down…I know laksh but I am afraid that every one will love me by my father…not by what I am…which will not last longer…
Lak:seee baby doll…

(THE ONE WHO LOVES YOU…WILL ALWAYS LOVE U HOWEVER U R….and THE ONE WHO DON’T….U DON’T NEED TO THINK ABOUT THEM…)

Soo stop feeling like that…okkk
Rag:hmmmm okkk
Lak:u r impossible…I expected a hug atleast….
Rag:yyy hug…don’t u want kiss…
Lak:with pleasure…common…fast
Rag:shut up lucky…I just like that said it…
Lak:u know what rags…I always used to dream my perfect first kiss with my lady love in a park on bench with rain…
Rag:ohhhhhoooo lucky…kiss should not be planned…it should be a flow of emotion…our love…our togetherness should be felt in that and that should be lasted long…with only two heart beats sounding one…

(…..**Shhhhhh**…
Heyyy they r in same city…logically it should rain here two…soooo here it comes three two one…)

All the people over their run to save themselves from catching cold and fever…even rohya…runs two a tea stall…sharing 1/2 tea enjoying in rain…

Raglak closed their eyes and felt the rain…until they r completely wet…

They opens eyes at a time…and see each other…
Ragini is shivering due to coldness…
Both r having a naughty thought traveling in mind and blushing…

(A song is played in the tea stall as BGM with loud sound)

From kuch kuch hota hai….

Tum paas aaye…

Lak touches her hand which is shivering due to cool breeze touching the love birds…

Yun muskuraye…

Slowly ragini starts blushing…seeing her smile laksh also smiles…

Tumne na jaane kya
sapne dikhaye

Lak:ragini…
Rag:laksh….

They share immense love through their eyes…

Ab to mera dil jaage na sota hai
Kya karun haaye kuch kuch hota hai

Lak:catches ragini’s face in hands…looking at her lips…
Rag:immideatly locks her lips with this….

That was a gentle…kiss lasted long…

(BGM is playing)

After some time god gave a thunder to remind our love birds that they r in public place…
They both get separated…
There is an unknown silence…

Both r revining what happend
And blushing hard harder and hardest…

Ragini buries her head into laksh chest…
Lak:rag’s…
Rag:hmmm
Lak:once more plZz
Rag:looks in his eyes while blushing…
Noooo
Lak:plzzz plzzzz…
Rag:nooo laksh…
Lak:plzzzz ragini all the time u kissed me it took me to differentiate whether ur lipstick is strawberry or caramel flavor…
Rag:hits his chest…laaakkkshhh…
Lak:plzzzz rag…
Rag:soooo tell me which flavor is it? Lak:Its strawberry
Rag:how do you know about lips stick flavors??
Roh:laksh…ragini…now if ur romance is over then we need to go home…
Both composed themselves and let a smile…departed in opposite directions…

Lak:thanks bro…u almost saved my prestige…
Roh:what happend??
Lak:smiles and keeps his hand around rohan shoulders and let out a smile…
Nothing…come…

Rag:(in mind)I should find out how he know about lipstick flavors…

That’s it for today

PRECAP:pressmete…and more masti…

Heyyy lovely people plzzzz do tell me what u felt about this epi…and any requirements…then let me know…I hope u all like my new story tooo…bye bye…
Keep smiling and take care…

Lods of love:chandana

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    26 Comments

    1. Fariha on December 22, 2017 10:49 pm

      amazing

    2. Fariha on December 22, 2017 10:50 pm

      superb

    3. Fariha on December 22, 2017 10:51 pm

      cute swasan

    4. Fairy on December 23, 2017 8:41 am

      Hahhahahaa awwwww!!!Raglak r cho cute????????????loved it????? keep rockng n stay blessed

    5. Monisha on December 23, 2017 11:33 am

      Superbbbbbbbbb

    6. Aamy on December 23, 2017 12:21 pm

      Awesome

    7. Arjuna on December 23, 2017 12:46 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    8. harneet on December 23, 2017 1:10 pm

      hello di ….. welcome back … after a long time …. juat loved it …. so romantic … ahem ahem… m still innocent??…omg a ragsan ff …. m waiting …. bye tc … love u

    9. Vennila on December 23, 2017 4:05 pm

      Awesome episode

    10. asra on December 23, 2017 5:14 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…Ohhh my cute raglak….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

    11. Sherin on December 23, 2017 5:33 pm

      Superb dear

    12. Malu on December 23, 2017 5:57 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    13. Elizabethlovely on December 23, 2017 7:18 pm

      Awesome

    14. Raglak_fan on December 23, 2017 7:26 pm

      Fantastic dear

    15. Vini on December 23, 2017 8:21 pm

      Loved Raglak, keep going

    16. Anju on December 23, 2017 8:38 pm

      Superb episode

    17. Thahseem on December 23, 2017 8:53 pm

      Nice

    18. Jiyani on December 23, 2017 9:35 pm

      Amazing dear and do continue

    19. Pearly on December 23, 2017 9:50 pm

      Nice part

    20. Monu on December 23, 2017 10:19 pm

      Superb dear

    21. Tani on December 23, 2017 10:26 pm

      Awesome

    22. Ashly on December 23, 2017 10:47 pm

      Fantastic awesome superb

    23. Laashya on December 24, 2017 4:58 pm

      Lovely episode didu

    24. Soumya on December 24, 2017 7:45 pm

      Superb di…post next soon

    25. swarnaragput on December 24, 2017 9:46 pm

      Awesome dear???and i love sanskar so much and continue soon

    26. Ammu on December 25, 2017 8:28 pm

      Happy Christmas dear ???? I’m sorry for very late comment. It’s interesting episode dear ??? Raglak scenes are beautiful ???? eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care ????????

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