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Home»Fan Fiction»Don’t dare to leave me you have no right :raglak and swasan epi 10
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Don’t dare to leave me you have no right :raglak and swasan epi 10

Chandana_hariBy Chandana_hariDecember 30, 201731 Comments5 Mins Read
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Heyyyy lovely people…soooooo sorry every one….I am sooo late right?but what to do I am in full depression these days….its kind of tough phase of my life….but its okk I made it easy….sorry if I bored u….heyy I made it 10…and decided to end it at 30…sooo I hope u guys will support me as now…
And specially take a hug from my side all the people who liked,disliked and commented…love u allll

Let’s start…

At GM…

Both ragini and swara come to shekar and does kneel down

Rag:papa…
Swa:papa…
Rag:we r sooo sorry…
Swa:we r sooo bad daughters…
Rag:we r sooo selfish…
Swa:we r sooo self-centered

They both look at each other…

Rag:we hurted u soooo much
Swa:we don’t have right to be called as ur daughters…

They both again look at each other

Rag:we….

Shekar:(shouts)…stopppp!!!

I don’t care what u both think about ur self…but dare u two…I will not spare if I hear any thing bad against my daughters…u two before being ur self r my daughters…mind it…

Swaragini hug shekar emotionally

Sh:now what happened

Swaragini:papa we want to be introduced to the world

Sh:aren’t u two kidding??

S,R:noo papa we r serious
Sh:I am sooooooo happy u know…my happiness have noo limits…I always wanted this day…I always wanted u two to be known as ragini gadodia and swara gadodia D/o:shekhar gadodia
To the world…

For the first time in this world I am happy as what I am…

Dadi and shomi listens to this and feels very happy…

Dadi:arrey shekar I have a gud news for u…just now I got AP ji’s call…she said day after tommorow there is an excellent muhurath for engagement of swasan

She:then what about raglak???
Dadi:ohhh unfortunately according to their names…we don’t have any muhurath for next 1 month…

Rag:its kkk dad…plzzzz agreee…its just engagement…
Sh:if u don’t have any problem princess then even I don’t
Rag:then shopping???
Shomi:let’s goo tommorow…
R,S:noooooo
Dadi:what happened….
R,S:you r not going to come…
Sh:then???
Rag:I and di will go
Sh:nothing like that ig gonna happen
Both the families r going together fr shopping…
Swa:papa…not fare…
Dadi:shona…all these r small dreams which all the parents see for their children…soo don’t say no…
Swa:kk dadi…

At MM….

All r sitting at hall and having evening snacks…

Dp:so every thing is set right…
Ap:yess…and tommorow we will go to shopping…
Rp:bhayya do u think all of us r needed for shopping also…children will go and come…
Suji:atleast make some time for son’s marriage…u anyways don’t have time fr me….says dramatically….
Ap:sujiii…
Suji;sorry jiji

San:badi maa…shopping…..fr what???
Ap:fr engagement sanskar…
Lak:wow maa this is sooo good news…
Suji:lucky…
Lak:when is engagement date…
Suji:lucky beta….
Lak:even gadodias r coming with us for shopping??
Suji:lucky beta suno…
Lak:did u inform them???
Suji:laksh….

Hearing laksh from sujatha laksh gets shocked…as she always calls him as lucky…

Lak:what happened suji maa…
Ap:day after tommorow is engagement…
Suji:but only for sanskar and swara
Lak:whattttt???
Suji:haaa lucky…according to ur names there is no muhurath soon…so urs is after 1 month…

Lak:then yy is bhai getting this fast??can’t he wait till 1 month??

Suji:because according to their names day after tommorow is the most auspicious day…

Lak:one last question suji maa…

Suji:what lucky??

Lak:promise on me…that u won’t lie…
Suji:will I ever lie to u…
lak:dramatically….who kept my name as laksh???

All the family members starts laughing….badly

Suji:lucky…jiji only kept that name…
Lak:I thought itt…she always only cares fr bhai not me…
Suji maa u r best…in next birth…u only give birth to me…

DP,AP,RP and Sujatha r shocked to listen this…

Ap and goes to her room crying….

Sujatha,RP and DP goes behind her leaving laksh and sanskar behind her…

San goes to her room….
And signs everyone to leave from there…

San:Maa…
(Usually san calls her badi maa)

Ap:breaksdown and cries on his shoulder…and sleeps hugging him

San: comes out and asks DP…. why did badi maa react like this??

Dp is about to speek but RP cuts him saying…that’s not needed to know…every one go to their room…

Lak:feels guilty and goes to his room crying…followed by sanskar

Suji:starts crying…

Dp says RP to console sujatha and went to his room…

Rp:sujii now don’t cry plzz by tommorow morning…everything will be fine…
Suji:I know ji…but today when my own son asked me to give him birth next time….I felt like….

Rp:what r u talking suji….
Laksh is DP bhai and AP bhabi’s son…that’s it…don’t get unwanted emotions in ur heart…he is infront of us only right???be happy….no matter what ur son loves u….

(Actually….in maheshwaries…always…the first bahu’s r not blessed with children…and soo accordingly suji will first give birth to sanskar whom AP rises like his own….and then suji will have laksh and DP:asks RP and suji to give to them as their child…because DP don’t want to snatch their first child from them….but after becoming mother to laksh also AP loved sanskar more and as suji gave her son to AP as her own by all rituals she feel like she lost her parental rights over him but always loved laksh to the core…)

That’s itt friends….

PRECAP:shopping and fun

Friends….I wrote this epi in emotional turmoil…soo if it seem like crap…then plzzz forgive me….and if u have any doubts then do ask me….

Heyyy people…
My name is HARI CHANDANA
From ANDHRA PRADESH
Exactly from VIZAG

Any vizagians??? Or tamilians???….

Can I have the pleasure of being ur friend or sister????

Any ”one” atleast????

Lods of love:chandana

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    31 Comments

    1. Monisha on December 30, 2017 10:03 am

      Superbbbbbbbbbbbb

    2. pravee on December 30, 2017 10:48 am

      cute

    3. Aamy on December 30, 2017 11:33 am

      Awesome

    4. Vennila on December 30, 2017 1:22 pm

      Awesome episode

    5. asra on December 30, 2017 1:32 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one….
      am tamilan…tkcr dear

    6. Sherin on December 30, 2017 1:40 pm

      Superb dear

    7. Elizabethlovely on December 30, 2017 2:43 pm

      Awesome

    8. Malu on December 30, 2017 3:21 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    9. Raglak_fan on December 30, 2017 4:34 pm

      Fantastic dear

    10. swarnaragput on December 30, 2017 4:46 pm

      Awesome

    11. Thahseem on December 30, 2017 5:08 pm

      Nice

    12. Arjuna on December 30, 2017 5:23 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    13. Anju on December 30, 2017 5:39 pm

      Superb episode

    14. Fariha on December 30, 2017 6:41 pm

      superb

    15. Fariha on December 30, 2017 6:44 pm

      amazing

    16. Fariha on December 30, 2017 6:45 pm

      cute swasan

    17. Vini on December 30, 2017 7:39 pm

      Superb one, keep going

    18. Laashya on December 30, 2017 8:19 pm

      Amazing part didu
      Waiting for raglak

    19. Pinki on December 30, 2017 8:29 pm

      Nice

    20. Ashly on December 30, 2017 9:31 pm

      Awesome superb

    21. Sandhiyaswasanian on December 30, 2017 9:55 pm

      Very nice dear.iam tamilian dear.but my birth place was tirupathi.i know read and write Tamil and telugu.iam studied kg to 5 standard telugu and 6 to college Tamil.iam your friend or sister what you like call me.☺️

    22. madhu.r on December 30, 2017 11:14 pm

      Advance happy new year sis

    23. sahithya on December 30, 2017 11:16 pm

      nenu telugu dude but from tn

    24. Sweatha on December 30, 2017 11:25 pm

      Hey. Superb dr. I’m a tamilian. U can call me Wat u like. Waiting for raglak

    25. Tani on December 31, 2017 8:35 am

      Amazing

    26. Pearly on December 31, 2017 2:33 pm

      Nice part

    27. Ammu on December 31, 2017 3:49 pm

      Firstly Advance Happy New Year dear ?????????? it’s interesting episode dear ??? but missing Raglak scenes. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP with more Raglak scenes. Love you dear and take care ???????????

    28. Monu on December 31, 2017 4:08 pm

      Interesting dear

    29. Zoya on December 31, 2017 9:39 pm

      It’s nice

    30. Jiyani on December 31, 2017 9:41 pm

      Amazing dear and do continue

    31. Soumya on January 1, 2018 10:51 am

      Superb di…Post next soon

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