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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»Dil ka dard-an os…
Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

Dil ka dard-an os…

PrettypreetiBy PrettypreetiMarch 1, 20175 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys its preeti.i m back again with another os dil ka dard…guys sorry but this os will not be a lovey dovey having a good end..actually its different from my usual style..
Ok now lets begin..
Sumo:shravan u will never understand my heart feelings…
Shravan: r u talking to me..mrs malhotra u know what i feel..
Sumo:mere dil ka dard tum kaise janno ge agar tumme dil hi nhi hai..
Shravan:right,i only have heart made of metal .pathar ka dil haana..
Sumo:dont talk with me.
Shravan:btw i am not interested a bit also..

Sumo:ok…now leave my way..
Shravan:go anywhere..
Both turn their face and went back to their room and tears fall from both eyes…
(Now guys dont u wanna know how this couple is so angry…lets know)
Flashback..
Shraman marriage…
Sumo:shravo..so now i m mrs.malhotra.
Shravo:any doubt…
Sumo:yessss…
Shravo:wht???
Sumo:kidding…
Shravo:ok so from 2morrow u would cook food for me…
Sumo:no….can u..
Shravo:not really…
Sumo:ok i think we need to sleep.
.Like this they were enjoying their life…

After few months..
Shravan was in the bathroom shaving where sumo came..
Sumo:shravo i want to tell something to u..
Shravo:wht???
Sumo brought a toothbrush and placed it in the holder..
Shravan understands and hug her..
Shravo:really sumo…
Sumo:yess…
Shravo was caring her and loving her alot..

After few months-
Sumo:shravo what will u nams ur baby??
Shravo:wht u want??
Sumo was thinking in time she start having pain in stomach and shravo got worried..
Shravan take out car and take her to hospital..
Shravo was waiting outside.When doctor came
Doctor:congo u had a girl..
Shravo was happy and went to her..
Sumo :shravo see just like me..
Shravo:no like me…
The three were now a family.small and cute family…the girl was named tanya..
One day the trio was going on a drive…
Sumo:shravo i love u
Shravo:i love u tooo

Sumo:i love u three
Shravo_:i love u four
Sumo:i love u five..
Shravo:i love u infinity…..Tanya:where is my love??
Shraman looked at her..
Shraman:in our heart..
As they both looked at her the car hit them and tanya died on the spot…
Their life was devastated.. Now shraman never talk to each other with love and slowly their fights started…They didnt move on..
Now back in reality—-

Sumo in her room.
Sumo:wht happened to you???
Shravo in his room
Shravo:sumo why u changed??
Both wanted to talk but were not able to………
One day..
They again broke in fight…
Shravan:sumo u know whts ur problem is??

Sumo:noo…actually u should know..i m really confused wjy u r like this??
Shravo:really same..
Sumo was really frustrated and got out of the house..
Shravo:go go away……..
It was half an hour sumo didnt came..
Shravan got tensed and went out.
He was finding her then saw sumo on the top of the bridge.she was seeing water deeply and crying..
Shravan:sumo what r u doing here?

Sumo:shravan i love u..
Shravsn:is this the answer..
Sumo:no shravan.i dont think i could regainMyself now…
Shravo:wht do u mean?
Sumo:i mean i love u……
Shravan:sumo(very sweetly)
Sumo looked at his eyes
Sumo:shravo give me a hug..

Shravan hug her…
Shravo:sumo..wht r u doing??
Sumo:u know…
Shravo:sumo take me with u…i cant take up now.
And thennn….
Both jumped and finished their life…
“Some relations r really sensitive which need to be taken care…”
“Dil ke dard dil hi jaane”

The end…

Love u all….
Sorry but i want to try something like this…..

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    5 Comments

    1. IME on March 1, 2017 2:42 pm

      OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ?????????????????? ??????????????????
      It wassssssssss so good loved it dear
      ?????????????????? ?????????????????? ?????????????????? ??????????????????still crying ??????????????????
      Keep posting
      Love you
      Take care
      Byeee

    2. RANdomfANCreationz on March 1, 2017 4:50 pm

      Areh prettypreeti yaar yeh story bohot sad hain yaaar pehla half bohot happy happy tha but bechara shraman and in the end they died. No!!!!!. And gonna read ur other os now

    3. Nikita on March 1, 2017 6:08 pm

      Awwwwwww…
      This was just so cutee ♥♥
      I loved it. You arr amazing.
      Rula diya yaarr..
      Love ya!

    4. christie123 on March 2, 2017 6:39 pm

      At first I am really sorry for late comment. I just loved the O’s. And it was really emotional ???????????????. It was fabulous!!!

    5. Starshine on March 4, 2017 12:18 am

      It was sooooooo good
      Loved it…

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