Fan Fiction

Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai Part-3.(Shivay meet his son Shivansh finally with full Tadi).

Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur valuable comments.Keep commenting if u like my FF.Thanks for ur support & Love.
A warm welcome to my FF.
If anyone new to FF.Read introduction part then u can easily understand the story as well as characters.
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Thanks for your comments & suggestions,
Sairan,Adhar(Dhar after a long time. I see ur comment thank u.),Niriha,FFFan1234
(Yes dear i am pairing kids strongly with
Mahi & Shankar.They deserves it.),
Alekhika 20,Anju,Anshi(Yes dear ur wish
Shivansh’s kanji eyes accepted.),
Nikita-jai29(Thank u nikki dear.Sorry for calling u nikki if u like reply or else ignore it),Sagithya,Kajol,setu,Lauren(Yes dear ur
wish Shivansh’s kanji eyes accepted.)
Aashi,Ashwinee(U call me bhai dear,no
suggestion u just order ur bhai.Lovely
sister.),UF,Madhuani,Gayathri(Yes,dear
ur wish Shivansh’s kanji eyes accepted.),
Banita(Thank u bani dear.Both kids have kanji eyes. if u like i call u bani or else ignore it.),Sashi(Love u dear.Thanks for ur comment & support dear.I miss u)&Arthi.
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Part – 1(Please give Link here).
Part – 2(Please give Link here).
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The story starts,
Oberoi mansion :
Meghana : Shivay till now u didn’t accept me.U still love ur wife.U didn’t forget her.
U won’t come with me for functions or
parties neither for parks nor for shopping.
Shivay : It’s not like that meghana.I love her it’s true.She is my past,u r my present
& u will be my future.I don’t like all these
things meghana.So,now tell me what u want?
Meghana : I want u shivay.I want ur happiness.I want to spend my whole day & rest of my life with u.I want to go for park.Will u come with me shivay?
Shivay : Meghana i can understand ur feelings.Ok,let’s go for park.
Malotra mansion :
Park :
Anika : Gauri don’t worry dear i bring all snacks of their taste.After playing they get tired and feel hungry.So i bring their favourite snacks.
Gauri : Di,thanks a lot.U know na i don’t like hotel food.
Anika : Pagli,thanks for what?jaisa ansh,anshi mera baccha waisa hi om & irika.They r our kids.I am not their badi maa i am their own maa.
Gauri : Love u di.U r my world’s best di.
Anika : Love u too.U r my world’s best sister gauri.
Mahi & Shankar at a time says kya dono behan ek ki ek tariff kar raha hai?kabhi
Kabhi humara bhi tariff karo tum dono!
Anika & gauri smiles and says it’s not like
that mahi & shankar/shankar ji.
Shankar : Where r my 2 princess & 2 prince charms.
Gauri : Shankarji they r playing with ball there,on left side.Now u get it.
Shankar : Ya.

Shivay and Meghana’s entry to park :
Shivay : It is the best park.Actually i don’t
like parks but this one is nice.
Meghana : Thank god.U liked it.Actually
this park is only for officials.Only rich people and their kids r allowed.She says
with pride.
Shivay : Meghana wait a second!I am getting a business call.This is important call.U sit here,just for 5 minutes.If u don’t mine,is it ok for u?
Meghana : Sure.I am ok shivay.
Shivay going to pick up the call.Suddenly
a ball hits shivay.He lost his hand grip.
The phone falls down & it breaks.
Ansh : Om why u throw ball in that speed.
Now see,that man’s phone break because of u .U must apologize him.
Om : I am getting fear bhaiyya.See his face burning like red chillie in anger.
Ansh : No need to fear om,i am with u.We must apologize because our elders tells us that if any thing wrong happens,we must made the things right or else it creates scene.
Om : Ok bhaiyya.Let’s go i will apologize
him.
Ansh : Good.That’s my brother om.Anshi & Irika u 2 stay here don’t say to any one about this matter.
Shivay : What the wuck?who ever did this?i don’t leave them!
Ansh : Excuse me.
Shivay turns back and saw his son for the first time.His eyes become wet unknowingly.
Ansh & om shocked to see shivay. Because he is just like mahi.
Om : He is bade papa bhaiyya?
Ansh : No om,see dad is there on left  & that too this man has kanji eyes.Dad eyes
r black.

Om : Just like u & anshi this man also has kanji eyes bhaiyya.
Ansh : Om leave it.A person has his/her carbon copy of 7 persons through out the world may be he is one of them.
Shivay : Who r u?what u want?
Ansh : Om,now apologize him.
Om : Sorry.Actually i am playing with my brother.Suddenly the ball comes in force  by mistake & hit u.Ur phone break’s because of me.I am really Sorry.
Shivay : So u r the one because of u my phone breaks,and i missed my important
call.Where r ur parents & ur family members?they don’t have responsibility of their kids.
Ansh : Hay Mr what u think of ur self?why
r u bringing my family in between all this!
my brother apologize for what he did?not
a single word against my family or my brother.
Shivay shocked & as well as surprised to see his shade in ansh.
Ansh : U want ur phone right then,i will buy & give u a new phone.
Shivay : U don’t know who i am?I am shivay singh oberoi.I can buy phone company in one go.What is ur name?
Ansh : It is none of ur business.
Shivay : U fear of telling ur name.
Ansh : No.I am Shivansh malohtra.

Shivay : Don’t show attitude.U r a kid.Be like a kid.
Ansh : I am grown up kid not kid.But one thing be like a man not like a kid.
Meghana calls Shivay.
Shivay says i must leave.I don’t fight with kids.He is about to leave but ansh stops him & says wait a second,
Mr.Shivay Singh Oberoi if we meet again
by mistake then i will return ur phone.
Shivay : No need of it.Good bye.Shivay left the place.
Ansh & Om also left the place.
Anshi,Irika : Is everything ok ansh bhaiyya
& om bhaiyya.
Ansh : No,nothing is ok.But i made things
right soon.U all trust ur bhaiyya.
Om,Anshi&Irika : Yes bhaiyya.We trust u.We r with u.
Ansh : Thank u.Don’t tell this matter to any one.
All says ok bhaiyya & hugs him.
Ansh says one for all & om says all,anshi
says for & finally irika says one.
Lafzoan ka yae rishta nahi plays.

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Precap : Omkara & Gaurika’s first meeting!Sahil’s surprise visit!

Give ur valuable comments.I hope u all like it.If u all like it tell me how u feel when u r reading?I am sending shivansh
photo.Please comment me.U all like him.

Sorry tommorrow i will update omkara,
Gaurika’s & Sahil scenes(Sahil is perfect after his surgery.I will reveal past story later).
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Sakash.

A Lovely Son of my Maa,Dad,Grand maa & paa. A lovely friend & bhaiyya.

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