Fan Fiction

Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai – Part-2

Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur valuable comments Friends.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF.
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Thanks for ur comments for “Aap sae dhoor jana nahi shivay”.Just title names r different but story same.
Setu,Ananyagour,UF,Aashi,Banita,Sairan,
Gayathri,Ashwinee,Ash,Nikita-jai29,
Madhuani,Sagithya,Arthi.
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Thanks for ur comments for “Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai”,
Anju,Crazygirls,Aashi,FFFan1234,
Sangeetha(Thank u dear),Ashwin(Thank u Love u too ashwa),Banita,Anshi(Thank u dear.),Gayathri(Thank u sissy),Sairan,
Niriha,Lauren,Nikita jai-29,Neha-17(Thank u dear,Love u too),Alekhika20,Sagithya,
& Stuthi(Thank u dear.What a coincidence? and nice name).
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Part – 1(Link here).
The story starts :
Leap after 6 years,

Malohtra mansion :
Anika : Gauri,go & wake up ansh,anshi,om
& irika.(Nick names).Because of summer holidays effect.They r getting late to school.
Gauri : Anika di,chodiyaena actually mahi bhaiyya nae school teacher ko inform kardhiya.After 7days they will attend classes.
Anika : Ok.I too miss them after 7days.
Gauri : Yes di.Ansh,Anshi,Om&Irika.When did u all woke up?
Ansh : Mom(Anika) & choti Maa(Gauri) i want to go to school may be i will miss my important notes of my Favourite subject maths 1st class.
Anika : Ansh i know but dear this is ur last 7 holidays.We want to spend with u all kids.Ur dad & chotti papa planned picnic.
So please agree dear.
Ansh : Ok fine mom.Anshi,Om&irika.

Get ready for picnic.
Anshi,om&irika : Yes bhaiyya.
Ansh : Mom & chotti maa u forgot to give ur hug to all of us.Now we want hug & kiss.
Gauri & anika give hug & kiss to all kids.
And send them to get ready.
Anshi – Ansh bhaiyya u r looking perfect.
Ansh – Anshi my sweet sister u r looking beautiful.
Om – It’s not fair ansh & anshi.How i am
looking.
Ansh,Anshi – Superb.

Irika – om bhaiyya how i am looking.
Om : Asusual just like an artist.
Ansh,Anshi – irika u r superb.Come on,we r getting late to picnic.
Irika : Om bhai i want to become an artist,
i love paintings.So i like ur compliment chirohta.
Om : Ok chirraya.
All kids laughs.Because they r imitating
Gauri.

Anika & Gauri saw this & laughs seeing their strong bonding.
But gauri fears about gaurika,all her habits r just like omkara.
Anika fears about ansh & anshi.All their habits just like shivay.
Shankar : Gauri,where r my princess & 2 prince charm’s.Did they all get ready for picnic.
Gauri :  Yes Shankar ji they all get ready.
Shankar : Where is anika bhabi?
Anika : Shankar i am here.Where is mahi?
Mahi : I am here anika.Call my kids.
Anika : Ansh,Anshi,Om&irika come down.
See ur dad & chotti papa came.
Ansh,Anshi on cloud nine seeing mahi

& om & irika on cloud nine seeing shankar.
Ansh,Anshi : Papa they ran & hugged him.
Mahi : Ansh sorry dear for holiday u miss ur maths subject.
Ansh : Dad i love u,nothing more than u & ur love.
Mahi : He smile & says Thank u prince.
Anshi : Dad love u.Thanks for holiday.U r my khidkithod dad.
Mahi : He smile and says Love u too my princess.
Shankar : Om & irika.
Irika : Papa i love u.U r world’s best papa.

Thank u papa.
Shankar : For what princess?
Irika : U send sketches & crayons.
Shankar : My friend suggest me one great
artist.He will teach u after 7days.
Irika hugged him & kissed him.
Om : Papa u forgot me?
Shankar : No my prince i bring ur favourite
15 Saffari(Fuse) choclates.Take it.

Om : Thank u so much papa.Love u.
Shankar : Love u too.
Shankar : Ansh,Anshi & Irika come here.
Ansh,Anshi&Irika : Chotae papa/Papa.
Shankar : This is ur favourite Dairy milk silk choclate.Take it prince & irika.
Ansh : Thank u chotae papa.Love u.
Shankar : Anshi this is ur favourite Diary milk dry fruit nut choclate.Take it my princess.
Anshi : Love u chotae papa.Thank u.
Shankar : Love u too. Welcome dear.

Anri happy.
Shankar & mahi at a time says let’s go for picnic.
All r happy.All shares unbreakable bond.
Ansh : Mumma i forgot where is sahil mama?we all r missing him.Say anshi,om
& irika u won’t miss mama.
Anshi,Om & irika : Yes ansh/bhaiyya we r
missing mama.
Anika : My dear kids mama will come tommorrow.He want to give u all surprise.
So don’t tell him i said u.What i said u kids?
Kids : Secret & surprise yay…yippie…yay.
Anika : Good.

Gauri : Hey kids,now let us go for picnic.
Kids : Yay … Masti time.
All went for picnic.

Oberoi mansion :
After 6 years passed.Shivay move on in his life.But never forgot anika.Next week he is going to engage with meghana.
Omkara : After leaving gauri.He come to know about buamma sins.
He search for gauri.But he fails to locate

her.He became life less person.At the depth of heart he believes one day he will get his gauri back.Seeing his condition,all family members r worried especially shiv,ru,janvi&dadi.
Saumya & Priyanka’s kids went for tour for summer holidays.
All miss anri badly because omru,saumya & janvi knows truth about anika.
Dadi too became life less person.

Pinky is enjoying with kitty parties & busy with shivay’s engagement preparations.
Shakti & Tej business war.Nothing changed.

Precap : Sahil’s surprise visit.Omkara going to teach painting for irika?Ansh shivay’s 1st meeting in park.
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I hope u all liked it.Give ur valuable comments.
Small suggestion : I give kanji eyes to shivanshi.Did u liked it or do u want both
Kids to have kanji eyes.I will post child images.Give ur comments.I want shivansh eyes to be like anika.If i got more comments about kanji eyes to ansh.Then i will change.I send shivansh & shivanshi image.
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Sakash.

A Lovely Son of my Maa,Dad,Grand maa & paa. A lovely friend & bhaiyya.

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