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The Devil’s Child (Prologue)

GummiebearBy 41 Comments2 Mins Read

Hey guyzzz this z supriya……. i love to experiment new things and you people are aware of the fact…..so here I am with a complete different story…….actually a supernatural thriller…..I don’t know you people will like it or not but I just wanted to give it a try…..so let’s start……plz do read it full
PROLOGUE….
Protected by the moon light…..shadowed by the dark forest…..was the the devil’s child born only to cause destruction to the mankind…..he had a innocent face just like a man’s child but had supernatural powers beyond imagination….. He was conceived only to end the world…..the devil had chosen him to end every possible living thing which worshipped the god…..but what will happen when he will grow up and fall in love a girl who can’t even hurt an ant deliberately…. Will her love stop him from doing the destruction for what he was born?let’s see…..

Characters…..
Arjun Mehra…..Born only to destroy…. even an ant can’t breath when he z near…..conceived by a human but blood of devil….his only motive z to destroy every possible thing which worship god….He will question his deeds or should I say sins the day he will meet a girl who can’t even hurt an ant deliberately….. Who will win this battle than? the person who created him for destruction or the person who breathed life in him…..
Radhika Mishra……Created and crafted by god only to love endlessly….most probably his best creation owing to her beauty and selfless heart….full of light and life both radhika z someone who can melt even the heartless person….but will her ability to spread life work on the ruthless demon born only to destroy…. Let’s see….
So guyzzz this z it….I remind it z a supernatural flick so not for the lame heart…..well nesam are not there because this z a complete different story…..something beyond anything….. It z the battle between good and evil which means battle between god himself and devil……
I don’t know should I continue or not but everything depends on you people…..if you are really interested than let me know…..
Waiting for your reviews……..till then love you all..

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41 Comments

  2. aastha on

    seriously are you mad ???????? well I’m impressed by your talent dear……..you are a multi talented person…..coz its ot an easy task to write 4 ff’s at a time…………u really are a super natural being…………..love u…………..

    hmm the plot is something no one has discussed………I’m eagerly waiting to see how the story is going to unfold……………..love u……..TC….muah….

    • aastha on

      I hope you wont be hurt by my 1st line……….I just told it out of my excitement………..

    • Supriya on

      Assthu don’t say sorry……yes m mad abt aradhika….. I love them like hell…..m not a supernatural thing just a human who z a crazy fan…..will post next one soon…..love you sooooo much……muaaaaahhhhhh…. Tc???????????????

  3. Rg on

    Hi supriya.. Well to put it in simple words any ff which ends with ” credit to: supriya” am interested… Especially a Super natural stuff tat involves ardhika… Pls do continue along side ur other ffs. The prologue is eerie and stupendous …. Peaks ones curiosity…. I am dying to read this… Plz continue this one…. It’s brilliant.

    • Supriya on

      Thx Rg….indeed a huge compliment….. I …even m soo much eager to read ur comments dear…..I don’t have words to thank u……love u loads tc…..

  6. Krity on

    Amazing storyline i would luv to read it..luking forword for more…come soon god bless u dear..<3

  8. Gauri on

    Supriya….seriously…you have so many different stories running in your mind…girl u are talented….just wow…I loved it…keep it going…will wait for you to post …love you 🙂

    • Supriya on

      Thx di….ossum comment… Will post soon di….love u soo much…..muaaaaahhhhhh.. Tc?????

  11. Naaga on

    Priya, Pls give some rest to ur brain ma. But i like ur super natural story this is very different from other ardhika stories. So, pls continue dont stop 🙂

    • Supriya on

      Thx naaga…..m trying something different this time…..will update soon dear….love u tc

  12. susi on

    No word to say…Srsly..kitna talented..ur amazing dear…I really proud of u ….nazar naa lage tumko……great thought..amazing start dear…update soon ….thnx for 4th one…I really loved ur dedication….love u soo much…muahhhhhh ..tc…

    • Supriya on

      My janu I loved ur comment….. apno ko apni kii kabhi nazar nhi lagti….awsme comment….. Will post next one soon….love u alot tc muaaaaahhhhhh?????

  16. Heena on

    it’s sprb frnd keep going when is the next update can any one tell the scene in the pic of this ff comes in which episode

  17. deeva on

    Stunning….. awesome…… fabulous… amazing…….. Plz continue………. I love it……. desperately waiting for next………. tc?

  19. ammu on

    supriya dear…who r u really???how can u manage all dis stories?u r really amazng dear..nice n unique plot..waitng 4 nxt part.

  20. Roma on

    Awesomeeeeee, lovely, marvellous idea….you’re so so sooooooo muchhhhhhh talented….I loved this concept n the fight between God himself n devil…we all know God will win….but how? I want to see that….plz plz plz continue. …your each story is very interesting n unique. …your mind is like box of pandora…keep going girl….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh

    • Supriya on

      Thx for the lovely comment Roma darling……I keep on reading novels this z the reason m always full of stories….. I love to write abt aradhika…. will update soon dear….. Love u sooooo much muaaaaahhhhhh???????