Hey guyzz this z supriya…. Sorry I know m late in updating the first part but had to complete some prior commitments…..well thank you so much for your wholehearted response through your comments….. Now let’s proceed with the part 1……
A man in black cloak walked alone in the darkness of the night….night was more darker and frightful that day but he loved the darkness which had kept all his secrets hidden…. The moonlight was falling on his face making him look like some Greek god but no he was not a god…..he was the ruler of dark world which was sinful beyond anyone’s imagination……
He was the devil’s child……who was born only for destruction….. Normally anyone will get terrified in this dense jungle but he loved it because this was the place where he was born….this jungle was dense and dark but not more than his dark sinful existence…….everyone including the birds in that jungle were aware about his presence…..they were scared to death….he was successful in fooling the world by his looks exactly like a human but not this creatures who could sense the poison in his every breath…..
For the world he was Arjun Mehra who was brooding handsome,renowned and rich but this was his reality…….He was a darkened soul trapped in his sinful existence…..
But today he was not here to kill…..he was here to meet his father….the one who was responsible for all his deeds or should I say sins…..the king of darkness…. THE DEVIL himself…….
When he reached away from the humans……he stormed in his inhuman speed…..he was faster than the air…..even wind was unsuccessful in tracing his shadow….. He stopped infront of a big mansion…… It was unkept but scary enough to send a chill in any human’s spine….but arjun was not even a bit scared because this was the place where his father lived…..this place was haunted for the world but for arjun….it was his most precious possession….
He went inside swiftly…..that house was lost in the darkness just like his soul…..there was not even a single beam of light inside….
Arjun removed his cloak and flaunted his strong physique….. He was amazingly handsome but beauty z in one’s heart and he was not even sure of him having a heart….he got on his knees to bow in respect towards the one he worshipped….
So guyzzz this z it…..hope u liked it….plz do comment and give me your reviews….I am eagerly waiting for them….till then love you all…
PRECAP……Devil’s deadly command to arjun…..arjun has to commit a deadly sin…..unexpected meeting ahead….
32 Comments
Sorry guyzz I did a typing error……it z not part 2 but part 1…
Awesome episode, waiting for radhika’s introduction and next update. 🙂
Thx brin….will update soon…tc
Oh dear supriya. U have made me extremely curious. Ur story is wow…. Awesome.. Plz update soon. And a bit bigger plz plz preety plz…. I love arjuns intro… Devils child will fall for God’s child. Hmm plz update soon.
Thx Rg…..loved ur curiosity and excitement…. next one will be long….promise… will update soon….loads of love tc..
Ohh woww suppu its super dr….so u gve arjun’s intro wat abt our angle radzz intro ???? Seriously waiting update soon….luv u a loads tc ….
awesome story supriya…how mysterious it is !jst waitng h 4nxt update.
Thx ammu….will update soon…tc
Wow I loved D way u explained aru appearance 🙂 dats really superrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 🙂
Thx darling… Keep rocking
Priya super ☺ But it seems small, i want more & more plssssss ?
Thx naaga….next one will be long….will update soon….stay blessed..
Hey suppu darling its awesome intro fr cold prince bt wat abt our angle radzzz intro??? U always rock’s dr luv u…….tc
Thx darling…..abt radz I have to think alot to make it lovely just like this one…..will update soon…..loads of love tc?
awesome episode……
Thx subha….tc
This was just awesome Supriya…waiting for Radhika’s introduction and their first meeting…pls post the next one soon 🙂 love you 🙂
Thx di….ossum comment…. will post next one soon….love u alot…tc????
No words dear. Really amazing. Waiting fa d next one.
Thx dear….will post next one soon..tc
I’m extremely sorry my cutie pie for the late comment……………well what should I say……….. the way you described his devily nature and his inhuman speed…….it was wonderful…..I imagied myself to be i the same old jungle ARJUN was in………….a shock ran through my spine imagining the unkept dark palace……………what is the deadly deal Arjun has to do ???? So when is Radhika going to share the lime light ???????? Will Arjun be able to accomplish the task laid upon him ???????? ……..waiting for the next part……..ad your other ff’s…..plzz post ” love you forever ” sooooooooooooon………………..love u…..TC……muah…………
Don’t be sorry assthu….. well this plot z scary so m happy dat u r scared…… abt radz I have to think of a good intro for her.. She will come but for now let arjun enjoy the limelight…..abt updating love u forever then I have not even started….. Maybe by wed can’t promise but will try…..will update soon…….love u loads….muaaaaahhhhhh tc
Wow….sweety amazing…his intro very terror…something interesting yaar…waiting for rads entry..update soon…love u loads…tc..
Thx susi…..will update soon dear…loads of love muaaaaahhhhhh tc???
Dear priya.its reallly verynice.i loved it and excitedly waitng for next chap.cmpletely different plot.i love to read all ur stories.its all very nice.
Thanks rasha?stay blessed?
Awesome
Thx bhabya…..
superb…….thank u.
Thx dear
Hi supriya, it’s ok. …plzzzz upload next part soooooooon. ..I’ll be waiting. …love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh
Thx dear….love you too..??