A Devil That owned an Angel (Episode 11)


the cries were heared..the shouts were heared..the breaking of things were heared..and the devil was relaxing on his sofa..enjoying his victory..
and the angel was just crying..

he was enjoying his wine..she was drinking the sorrow..

he was hopefull she was helpless..

he was winner..she was a bloddy looser to the nature to the society..
she rejected regreted being a girl..

after sometime..he walked inside her room taking the foodplate..

he -here have it..
she -i m not hungry..i dont need it..
he -look i m not asking u to have it..nor m i enquiring if ur hungry or no..
just ordering you “HAVE IT”
and i dont like repeating things..

she still cried..
somewhere in his heart..he felt bad for the girl..but did he ever listened to his heart till now?
naa…he dint..
nor ll he ever do that..but he felt an erge to console her..
he had seen the society and he knew she need someone..

“he sat next to her and forwarded the plate..
hmm..have it twinkle(he said in a low athorative tone..”yet with a firm control in the anger..

she had a morsel..

“this society is cruel..th more u run after ritual the more u go on to them..the more they ll capture you..
be the u be the real within you..
have ur own rules and follow them..
if u run after these society they ll rip u..!”

these were the only words he said and then left the place..

and she had her dinner and lied on the bed recalling the things that happened..
those words were haunting her..rining in her mind like a bell..

kunj – how dare you how dare u go from the mansion and what you think you can easily escap from me?nah baby u just cant do it..
i dont deal with people to get nothing?
no babe..
he just held her wrist tightly..and was draging her when she barked..!
twinkle – if my dad get to know u are destroyed .. he wont leave u ..mind it ..
kunj : ( stops and see in her eyes and muved from her and said) ohhh um sacred .. really … hmm he will ..
twinkle : hmmm he will not spare u mr for felling ur bad eye on his’s daughter ..
kunj : ohh realy he luvs u a lot and u think if he get to know he wpont spare me right ( folding his hand on his chest)
hmm den y he dealt with u ?
twinkle was just he said he recalled his word and thinks “ he dealt with me ? wat he want to say ? kya matlab hai and wat dealt she looked at him and asked
twinkle : matlab ?
kunj : matlab ki wen ur dad is so protective about u then y he sold u to me ? haan ?
twinkle was beyond shock wat he just thinks “ he sold her ?” no it cant be true nahi yeh jhoot bol rahe hai ? kaise papa mujhe bech sakte hai .. this guy is telling lie just for his lust .. tears rolled down her brain was telling “ no it cant be true he cant do this to her she is his daughter but sumwhere her mind was finding a truth in this .. she brushed all her thoughts and said
twinkle : no .. nnnooo.. u ..are liieng .. my papa cant do this to me … hes ur frnd na i meean client and how can u blame sucha thing on ur blame
kunj : client my foot do u thing that type man can be client … huh he is nothing to me got that he is not able to be my employee and u are saying my….? no twinkle was beyond the shock she disnt knew how to react tears were dried up and she was just unable to speak .while he continues
“it’s the truth he sold u to me “he sold u for money sweet heart .. I paid the money and”I OWN YOU” …
twinkle was unable to accept the fact …. It was the bitterest truth of her life her brother sold her just for money

tears rolled down her beautiful eyes..when she remembers about this bitter reality of her life..

and the tears flowed down more when she remembered another harsh reality of the day..


kunj : u don’t belive me right ??
twinkle: (in tears) no … I don’t belive u .. I know u are lyieng ..
kunj : thik hai u want to go back to home ? right ?
twinkle just look at him with suspectious look wat he is planning to do just few minuite he was not letting her to go now he is asking her to go wat he want ? she was lost in her thought when kunj smirk and said
kunj : hey wat ? go ….. u want to go so go to ur home
he just draged herand made her sit in the car and asked his driver to take a U turn to twinkle ‘s home..
she was just lost in her taughts when he leaned towards her and wishpered in her ear..”but he wont let u in inside ur house ? u know y ?because u are sold “ I own u “ he smirk and twinkle just turned back and look at him she was just beyond shock she look at him without blinking her eyes for a while ”


and then some more bitter words echoed in her ear..
the words that her father spoke..
the words that pricked her the most..the words that confirmed that she was actually sold..though he never admitted directly…
but she got to know the bitter reality..that her father just taught her a mear burden in his life..
and nothing more…

” she will not enter this house nor today nor any day in future got it ..she is dead for us ..he announced to his family”

“u want to know the answer right?yes the answer is yes.. I dealt u with him.. u are sold u are nothing to me nor to dis house now get out … don’t create any scene um tired now so get out .. get out ….. hearing the world the world shake from her feet ..and she acnt belive dat her papa..who should actually protect the daughter from the evil crises of the society has delt her… sold her for sum money how culd it be ? but it was true she was shocked and dats when he pushed her out of the gates and she was going to loose her balance and was felling down but kunj hoild her in his embrace again”

(sorry guys i actually wanted to write the words that might bring this story more lively but i myself cant write such things coz those are beyond my lines..
being a dad’s girl i feel ashmaed of thinking that such people do exists..)

next episde after 6th..
till then saiyonara!


  1. Crazy

    Swaer guys if their z no response this time then their ll b no episodes hense forth
    Think this to b last episode

    Fed up yar it takes hardly sec to write a good nice r just to send emoji

  2. Nithu


  3. Please continue crazy it’s fantastic I love all my our ff please do continue

  4. Sohi

    The episode was emotional feeling very sad for twinkle I think their is some reason of her father doing like that post next episode soon

  5. Hey crazy……don’t be upset…..I luv ur ff very much yaar and i will always comnt ur ff……so plsssssss don’t stop writing…. Plssssss i reqst u………the epi was good and felt bad 4 twinki….how can a father sold her own daughter its sooo disgusting….. Luv it very much…….plssssss don’t stop writing and post next epi soon……coz I m waiting desperately….. Luv u lodsss….tc….byyyyy……..

  6. Awesome amazing
    Really felt bad d twinkle
    Plsss asap Loved it

  7. Amazing episode crazy I loved it to the core and plz don’t stop writing I love ur ff

  8. Priyanka (Hyderabadi)

    Awesome episode crazy loved it.. eagerly waiting for next episode.

  9. Chiku

    Woaaah its amazing ?????lovely. I really love dit. Ppzzz dont end it. You are an amazing writer. Nowadays every ff gets very less comments. Dont be disheartened
    Plz post mext soon
    Loads of love?

  10. U just nailed it.. ….

  11. Very nice episode☺ feeling bad for twinkle? but anyways…. episode was awesome☺☺☺

  12. Hey crazy,
    Sry for not cmting.Too busy.Now lets go to the epi.Too gud.Luved it.Awesome amazing lovely ff.U r an amazing writer.Post soon.

    Lots of luv,

  13. Kanchi

    Crazy don’t be disheartened we all love ur ff
    N ya this epsode was superbbbbbbb post soon love u

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing shocking emotional epi…

  15. Crazy

    Thanku so much everyone
    For such cute cmmnts
    Overwelmd !!

  16. Aanya_pandey

    That ws really good episode yrr..

  17. Baby

    crazy di dis was amazing………
    bt like srsly twinkle’s dad sold her to kunj……..
    oh god awesome bt feel ashamed of sch ppl…. 😀
    love u lods♥♥

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