Fan Fiction

Devakshi OS: The Land By 4nshika (Part-1)

By the time Vicky has joined the company as sales manager. Radharani is very happy that her son got all what she has planned. Ishwari was happy that under the shade of her son’s huge shoulders, rest of the people are flourishing well. Neha is still home and by now nobody is so much bothered to send her back. She is happy to be back to luxuries and everyone else is happy to find her happy.

Here, Dev is waiting for nine days to get over. Tomorrow is the last day, Sona is in her home for Durga Puja.

Dev returns from office and is heading towards his room as usual to get glimpse of his loving wife

Ishwari: dev, aa gya tu….
Those fast steps stop at one stair as he hears his mother calling from behind
Dev: haan maa….
Ishwari : sabne khana kha lia hai…tu aaja…hum fir saath khayenge…hmm
Dev: maa sona?….usne bhi kha lia…?

Ishwari’s smile fades as she hears it….Her son is so much into work and her orders that he forget his wife have gone to her parent’s house….

Ishwari : sonakshi apne ghar gyi hai….bhul gya beta!
Dev: acha haan!!
He starts moving back towards his room
Ishwari turns to the dining table to set everything for the awaited dinner with her son.

Sonakshi’s House
Bijoy: oho… Asha….what smell!!!
Sourabh: sach mein maa…tumhare haath mein jadoo hai…

Sonakshi is lost in her phone and after everyone’s judgement…family look towards sona for her saying….but she is engrossed in her phone…sona looks so tensed that they all get serious….

Elena: shona! Ki haulo…??
Sona: dekhna elena…yeh mr. Dixit phone nhi utha rhe hain…
They all pat their heads with their hand in sync…
Sonakshi: what…
Sourabh: shona!! Kamse kam kuch der ke liye hi bechare ko chodd de….
Elena: aur nhi toh kya….pichha chuda rhe hain tujhse….tere mere Mr. Dixit
Sonakshi: how dare he….

sonakshi leaves the dinner table and starts calling him again and again…

Ishwari and Dev are having dinner…Ishwari is very happy that even after getting married her son is just the same…after a long time she was having quality time with her son….
Ishwari: teri pasand ki bhindi ki sabji bnayi hai….lena beta…
Dev: kitna khilayegi maa….ek din mein mota ho jaunga….fir woh teri nutritionist bahu…saal bhar ki dieting ek baar mein krayegi….
Ishwari: koi zarurat nahi hai….ek dum thik hai tu…
Dev: arrey maa….mein toh majak kar rha tha….

Nikki:Bhai….
Dev: kya hua nikki…
Nikki: apka phone kahan hai…
Dev: phone?.. …room mein hoga shayad….kyun…
Nikki: aap phone nhi utha rhe the….toh bhabhi itna worried ho gyi ki unhone mujhe phone kia…

Dev face get lighten up as he hears that his beloved was worried for him…this is the first after marriage that they are away from each other….and such small things were feeling so loving that can’t be expressed….
As he Got to know that sona tried calling him several times he went running towards his room to get his phone and hear that mishti voice

Ishwari: dev!!!! Beta khana……..
Dev while running over the stairs…
Dev: mera ho gya maa….
Ishwari took those action as the bitter sip…she tightens her clinch…but can’t make any changes….she lost her son….who is running to catch the missed calls of his wife…

Sonakshi is trying to sleep in her room…which is feeling strange for her now…
Elena: sona…kya kar rhi hai…stop rolling over the bed….soja!!!…aur sone de…
Sonakshi: mein kya karun yeh mattress bahut hard hai…
Elena: yeh mattress hard nhi hai madam….aapko soft soft arms mein sone ki adat ho gyi hai…
Sonakshi shies away all those “aise-waise” khayal
Sonakshi: shutt up!

Sonakshi’s phone rings…
She jumps to pick it up and then stops to control her excitement….they still behave like teenagers….there is one who left his dinner and angry mother to have some love talks…and there is one who have turned into tomato to see her hubby calling…
And then she finally picks it..
Dev: hello….
Sonakshi: hmmm…
Dev: hmm…..so gyi thi kya?
Sonakshi: hmm……
Dev:Ohk… toh shayad kissi aur bhabhi ne Nikki ko call karke mere bare mein phucha hoga….
And there she lost her calm….
Sonakshi: what!!!!! Kaun bhabhi….
Dev giggles a little …
Dev: Ms. Khargosh jab apko acting aati nhi hai toh karti kyun hai….
Sonakshi: acha thik hai….. mein nhi so rhi thi…
Dev: kyun….mere bina neend nhi aa rhi…. mein aa jaun….
Sonakshi: acha mein kahungi toh aap aa jayenge…
Dev: bilkul…..
And their chit chat goes on till morning….

Ishwari have called sona back to home in the morning to attend the Navami puja…She guided her in all the instruction and our poor sona tried to cope up with all those rituals….
When the pooja was over….she thought to go and surprise….her hubby who was still in bed….
She by escaping all the haunting eyes made her way to their room….and there her prince was sleeping….hugging the pillow tightly….
She went near to him….moved her fingers into his hairs….and then smiled looking at the innocent face…..
She thought of taking out his clothes…so that when he gets up….everything will be ready around him…..
As she tries to get up…the man pulls her back into the bed….and holds her tightly by her waist….
Sonakshi: aap jaag rhe the….
Dev: mein toh soya hi nhi tha….
Sonakshi: fir…..acting..
Dev nods no cutely….
Dev: tumhare sapne dekh rha tha…..
Sonakshi: nautanki….
She pushes him….to get out of his grip…but fails miserably…and then she gave in….their eyelock continues….

Ishwari: ahem!!
Sonakshi and Dev both get up from the bed….
Sonakshi: maa!….mein bus niche aa hi rhi thi….
Dev: mein fresh hoke aata hun…
Ishwari enters the room…with those cold steps that had motive of fire in them…..
Ishwari: tumhe apne ghar bhi jana hoga na….
Sonakshi: haan maa woh….sindoor khela….ke liye….
Ishwari: mein driver ko kah deti hun….
Sonakshi: maa….dev office jayenge…mein unke saath chali jaungi….
Ishwari: nahi sonakshi….aaj ke din….dev mujhe mandir leke jata hai….tum driver ke saath chali jao….
Sonakshi nods in yes…sensing Ishwari’s anger….
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Tina: sir, we have called the property dealer for meeting in the evening…
Dev: tina, this land is very important for me make sure that we get this land at any cost….
Tina: yes sir!! Only we will get this land…
Dev: i am going right now but i will be back till evening…
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Mrs. Banerjee: Asha!!…shona after marriage…ki bhalo lagchi….
Elena: only after marriage….
Mrs. Mukherjee: ahaan! This is love….elena you will understand after marriage…..
Sonakshi smiles reminscing the love dev have added in her life….
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Tina: Sir will be here in few mins….
Property dealer: you are telling us this from last 1 hr….where is Mr. Dixit…???
Tina: sir must be busy in something…. otherwise he never comes late…
Property Dealer: we will wait for 10 mins more….if Mr. Dixit comes then it is good….but if not we have other buyers…

Tina calls Dev….
Dev was coming back from temple with Ishwari and was trapped in traffic…he was stressed that because of that he might miss this land deal…and seeing her son disturbed Ishwari also gets disturbed and suggests dev to let vicky handle this deal in his absence…dev was reluctant for this….as he very well know by now that vicky will not make up thing but might ruin the already built things…..but he had no other option….so he commanded tina to let vicky do the meeting and get that land….

Vicky enters the cabin…
Vicky in full swag settles down in dev’s chair seeing it as a golden chance to take over dev’s position….tina was avoiding all this as she was more interested in making the deal happen…

Vicky asks tina to leave the cabin as he knew well she will be a threat to his noble job…..

Vicky: yes, mr…..jo bhi apka naam ho…kaunsa land hai yeh….
Property Dealer: dwarka ke pass ke muncipality land…
Vicky: muncipality land…..kitne ka hai
Property dealer: 2.5 crore….
Vicky: 2.5 crore ki jhopad patti….hume nhi chahiye….not interested!!!!
Proprrty dealer: soch lijiye…
Vicky: soch liya…..

Property dealer comes out in anger…
Property dealer: jab land khareed na hi nhi tha toh itni der wait kyun kraya….
Tina: sir….please….i don’t know what happened….but sir please wait….dev sir is in traffic….he is coming…
Property dealer: tell your dev sir to get better staff….

Property dealer leaves the office…tina tries hard to convince them and stop but….nothing happened…..

Hello !!! Missing you guys sooo badly…..
Now tell me how this was…..and what you think can be in second part…..

4nshika

Papa ki Doctor Bitiya! :) :)

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