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Home»Fan Fiction»(DevAkshi) Love…pehli dafaa hai ye episode 23
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(DevAkshi) Love…pehli dafaa hai ye episode 23

V.V.harshitaBy V.V.harshitaApril 24, 20179 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey guys bak With the nxt one….and Ya ..actually I posted will she love me but it got rejected so I hav posted it again….so though of updating this …anyways let’s start
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Sona leaves to home…..
It’s almost 6:05
Ranveer was sitting on the couch….
RV:Hey sona itni jaldi aagayi (Hey sona ….u came so fst)
Sona:haan vo….Mr.dixit aur Nikki ….bahar shopping keliye jarahahai…isiliye mein jaldi aagayi (actually Mr.dixit and Nikki…r going out fr shopping so…I came fst)
RV:aacha tum araam karoo…(kk go and take rest)
Sona goes inside hr room…
RV calls Dev….
Dev:hello..Mr.Vaghela
RV: hello Mr.dixit and plzs don’t be so…formal u can call me Ranveer …
Dev:kk Ranveer and u can also call me Dev …
RV:kk Dev..
Dev:so…kyu call ki aapne??? (Why did u call me ???)
RV: Mr.dixit I thought ki aap sona kk saath time spend karenge….kyuki ghar mein koyi nahi hai….par aapne toh bahar shopping keliye gaya…(Mr.dixit I thought tht u and sona vil spend time together ….coz no one is thereat home….but u and ur sis went out fr shopping….)
Dev:kya….mein aur…shopping …Omg!! Mr.Vaghela I don’t knw hw to even shop…I don’t like shopping…I mein…mujhe shopping karne hi nahi aatha…toh hw can I go fr shopping….and the too….Ms.Bose ne hi toh kaha ki…u all r going out….
RV:kya ???hum log shopping keliye nahi jarahahai Dev ……
Dev:and me too..
RV:sona mujhse jhoot kaha (sona lied to me)
Dev pov:of course she would ?
RV:so…abh hum kya karenge (so nw Wht can we do)
Dev:mere pass ek idea hai Mr.(I hav an idea)
RV:Ranveer
Dev:haan Ranveer ..
They both make a plan (muted)
RV:kk …Mr…I mean Dev…
Dev:bye
RV:bye..
RV takes his phone and does some thing …
Then he goes inside sona’s room…
RV:sona…
Sona:haan…(yes)
RV:sona actually mere pass 5 tickets hai…movie keliye…..aur vo toh horror movie…kya tum aaogi(sona actually I hav 5 tickets ….fr movie…tht to its a horror movie wil u cm???)
Sona:horror ??….nahi nahi…mein nahi aaungi..chayiye toh tum log jaoo..(horror…no no…I am nt cming…if h want u guys go…)
RV:pakka???(sure???)
Sona:haan pakka(yes sure)
RV:kk. Then bye…
Sona:bye
Except sona everyone went out..

Outside the house Dev was standing…RV shows him a thumbs up sign…He too shows it bak…
Aftr they leave Dev….aftr sometime Dev goes up to hr house….He presses the calling bell ..
Sona:yeh Ranveer bhi na….kuch aur kuch bhool ke chali jata hai…
Again she hears the bell..
Sona:haan haan aarahihu…
She opens the door…and Dev really got surprised to see sona with face pack…
Dev:Omg!!! Kya mein galat time main aagaya hu…????????
Sona:Ranveer…
Dev:Ms.Bose mein Dev hu…
Sona:kya..
She takes the cucumber frm hr eyes
Sona:aap…
She makes him sit in the couch..
She goes near the wash basin….washes hr face….Dev was totally admiring hr…
Sona:Mr.dixit …
Dev:……
Sona:Mr.dixit….(snaps)
Dev:haan….(yeh)
Sona: Mr.dixit aap yaha kyu aayi ho ??(Why did u cm Herr)
Dev:vo….mein..
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Precap:may be like ä proposal..and Suspension too…

Srry if it was Boring….and vil surely Post soon….
Until then Bye frm….akshada and vv

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V.V.harshita

    A PURE DEVAKSHIAN AND A ISHQBAAZIAN TOO!!! LOVE TO READ......ONLY FAN FICTIONS

    9 Comments

    1. Richa144 on April 24, 2017 9:19 pm

      Dying to read further.. please please please please post soon..love you loads

      • V.V.harshita on April 24, 2017 9:55 pm

        Thnxs vil post soon ?????

    2. nikkita0194 on April 24, 2017 9:49 pm

      that’s gr8 dii love it n eager to read the nxt portion
      love u a lot
      post asap

      • V.V.harshita on April 24, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thnxs…vil post soon Or nt tmrw ????

    3. Sgatik on April 24, 2017 10:35 pm

      Super episode. Pls pls post soon

      • nikkita0194 on April 25, 2017 4:56 am

        Thank u so much

      • nikkita0194 on April 25, 2017 4:58 am

        M really sry di actually I was typing thank u’s in my os so…
        I didnt remember when this page was open n i had posted a thank u

      • V.V.harshita on April 25, 2017 11:21 am

        Thnxs vil post soon

    4. Princess. on April 25, 2017 7:59 pm

      Awesome

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