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Devakshi – Break Ke Baad #6

#6
Recap: Asha asks Sonakshi to get married. Sonakshi denies. Elena too tries her best and asks sona to move on. Dev comes to Sonakshi. They confess their love to each other.

Link of previous episode: episode 5

After the love confession, they had bitter but necessary good bye.

Dev is driving his car…
Song plays in behind… yeh dooriyan bhi hai zaroori …zaroori hai yeh dooriyan !
Dev remember the moment they met…
Flashback: (song lines are in brackets)
Their first meeting when wheat flour falls on him…( Dooriyan Bhi Hai Zaroori, Bhi Hai Zaroori, Zaroori Hai Yeh Dooriyan)
their sweet nok-jhok moments…(Zyada Nasdeekyon Mein Dooriyon Ke Hote Hain Ishaare)
their memorable friendly moments…(Hum Toh Leheron Ko Chakhna Na Meethay Nahi Paani Hai Yeh Khaare)
his love confession “I love you…like a man loves a woman”… (Love Kahe, Mere Paas Tum Na Aana)
their moments in neha’s marriage…(Door Se, Accha Hai Timtamana)
his name in her mehandi…their wedding vows…everything…just beautiful…and then when they aparted…(Varna Adh Mein Hoga Dard-E-Jaana
Hai Ziddi Yeh Badi Majbooriyan Bhi
Dooriyan Bhi Hai Zaroori, Bhi Hai Zaroori
Zaroori Hai Yeh Dooriyan)

Dev stops his car…he falls suffocation…he get out of the car…the location is very isolated…covered with tress on the both sides of road…he gets sounds of his mom saying no to their relation and sonakshi saying I love you to him…they echoed in his mind…suddenly a car came from behind and hit him…he was tossed in air…and then fall on ground with his chest…he was bleeding…all red !!!

DEV HOUSE:
Ria: maa ! aap ne khana khaya…? (mom! You had your food ?)
Ishwari: pta nhi beta ….aisa acha nhi lag rha…dev kha hai? ( I don’t know…I am not feeling well…where is dev?)
Ria: maa apne medicine nhi li hogi….aur bhai toh office gye hain…aap khana kha lo…warna hume bhai ko bulana padega…(mom you might have not take your medicine…and brother is gone to office…you have food or else I will have to call bhaiya here…)
Nikki: maa..!!!!!!!!! Ria di..!!!!!!! maami…!!!!!!!!!!!
Ria: kya hua chila kyun rhi hai….? (why are you shouting…)
Nikki starts crying… Ria di Bhai…..

SONAKSHI CABIN
Sonakshi is in his past moments spend with dev…actually she is mostly with dev in her dreams and rarely comes to present…immense love….
Nidhi (having deep breaths as if came running): Mam ! Mr. Dixit is bought to the hospital….he met an accident…
Sonakshi without listening to her just ran out of her room…she was panicked…in hyper mode…running …crying… and then she stopped…who am I too him…?…the question raised in her mind…and then again the other thought…
Sonakshi: main dev ke liye kya hun mujhe nhi pta par mere liye wo sab kuch hain(I don’t know who I am to dev but I know he is everything to me)…and she again ran…as she was about to enter his room. A voice came from behind…
Nikki asks the receptionist about Dev’s ward
Sonakshi turns and sees the whole family…she steps back and stands behind a pillar holding her all pain…
Sonakshi cries: I was right…I have no right over him…his family is here to take care of him…
Flashback…“Neha’s sangeet scene”
Dev : Sonakshi mein pyar karta hun tumse…aur pyaar sare hak de deta hain…(sonakshi I love and love gives all rights) “Neha’s sangeet scene”

Present:
Sonakshi: Dev ! pyar sare hak deta hai par… aapke aur auntyji ke pyar ne… mere sare hak le liye (dev love gives all right…but your and auntyji’s love has taken my all rights)….she cries and sits down on the floor…
She consoles herself…and moves to her cabin…

SONAKSHI CABIN
Sonakshi enters her cabin, her shoulders down…face down completely wait with tears…eyes red…as if lost everything in stock market “poor baby”
Nidhi: you met him?
Is he ohk…?
Critical…?
He saw you…?
You didn’t met…?
Sonakshi just sits on her seat helplessly as if all she had is now of someone else…all lost…
Sonakshi: why will he meet me…?
Shouts in grief…who am I to him…?…..friend…girlfriend…wife….who? got damn !!
Nidhi: you are everything to him …I know that…and he too…
Sonakshi: sab jhoot hai..!!!!!!!….yeh sab !!! (everything is all lie)
Nidhi: I think iss waqt hume unki tabiyat par dhyan dena chahiye….(I think right now we should focus on his health)
Sonakshi cries….

DEV’S WARD,
Dev was unconscious,
Dev just got some consciousness and he whispered Sonakshi in grief…
Ishwari got stunned seeing his son in pain and even then saying Sonakshi…
Doctors ask them all to leave him alone…
Out of the ward,
Radharani: Jiji ! meine toh pehle hi kaha tha yeh kahani aise khatam nhi hogi…par..(I have told you earlier this story is not going to end like this)
Ishwari: bhabhi ! meine aapse pehle bhi kaha tha…dev guman hai mera…aur aisa ho hi nhi sakta ki wo mere khilaaf jaye…(I have told you too he is my pride…he can never go against me…)
Radharani: wo wapas aa gyi hai…ya phir yeh kahun ki who toh kabhi gyi hi nhi thi…humesa dev ke dil mein thi…(she have returned…or should I say that she have never gone…always there in dev’s heart)
Ishwari: bhabhi ! dev ki tabiyat thik nhi hai…(dev is not ohk)
Radharani walks away…but this seed got sowed in Ishwari’s mind and she was only thinking of this…

SONAKSHI’S CABIN,
Dr. Sinha: Dev met an accident. We have to make a major surgery but…
Sonakshi: but what…..i hope everything is ohk..
Dr.Sinha: Hain ! actually for operation dev’s body is not prepared…nutrient and mineral content…this is his report I want you to be with him at his house…he is going to be discharged today…you have to report from tomorrow onwards is it ohk….?

DEV’S WARD,
Ishwari(in her mind): Mein nhi janti ki dev ke mann mein ab bhi sonakshi hai ki nhi par…mein bus itna chahti hun ki dev thik ho jaye…hey bhagwan mera beta thik kar do…
(I don’t know whether dev still feels for her…but I know one thing only that son gets alright…oh god ! please make my son ohk )

All that mother heart have is love for her son…after all he is her pride…her love…No matter what difference they had in his love life…at the end he is her son.. !..loving son !!!

Dev gets conscious,
Doctor: Mam ! hum inhe aaj discharge kar rhe hain …yeh abhi operation ke liye tayar nhi par hum ek hafte mein operation karnge…
Ishwari looks worried,

SONAKSHI’S CABIN,
Dr. Sinha: Sonakshi ! I am asking you…is it ohk..?
Sonakshi: yes !! Dr Sinha…

Precap: Sonakshi enters dev’s house. Everyone looks at her with shocked eyes

Well ! Well ! People i am very glad…oh sorry glad is very small word…but my dictionary fails in expressing my feelings…so happy i am that you all appreciating it so much…loving it….and commenting too….unfortunately my last ff didn’t go really well…But you guys made this go well…go superb !!
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4nshika

Papa ki Doctor Bitiya! :) :)

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