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Home»Colors»Bepannah»~DESTINY~ Short Story – Part 8
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~DESTINY~ Short Story – Part 8

Jiya ABy Jiya AMarch 28, 20234 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hii… I’m back with next part of my story… 

Let’s Start… 

It’s evening….

Raj saw aditya outside a bar…he follows him and saw him drinking…After Sometime he got completely drunk…
Raj: which pain are you trying to forget?….
Aditya: Hey… Hii…. Come sit… Have a drink with me….i know you.. You.. You… You’re zoya’s friend… No… No… Zoya’s best friend…..
Raj: I also known you… You’re her rude boss… We’re meeting for the first time…. Right…. So I’ll introduce myself…. I’m Raj Purohit…..
Aditya: I just said I know you…. You calls zoya again and again in office…. I don’t like it….
Raj: Why?… Why you don’t like when I call zoya….
Aditya: Actually…. I.. I don’t know….
Raj thinks: I am feeling from starting that he loves zoya….i will clear my doubt today….
Raj: Tell me… Aditya…. Why you don’t like when I call zoya Or talk to her…
Aditya: Leave it…. It’s doesn’t matter now. . . .
Raj: Why?… What happened?…
Aditya: she calls you her best friend… She didn’t tell you… That…
Raj Interrupts him…
Raj: She’s getting married with yash…
Aditya: So you knew it…. Great….

A person is listening their talks….

Raj: Zoya…
His phone rang… And he leaves from there….

That person who was listening their thoughts say to his friend…

Person: Every girl is lier in this world… They just play with our feelings…. They thought that we are toys…. They can play with us whenever they want…. He points towards Aditya…. Her girl is also a lier….
Aditya:Don’t say anything about her… When you don’t know her…
Person: I can understand your pain… Every girl is characterless… She… What is her name?.. Ahh… Zoya… That zoya first played with you then with your friend who just left for attending a call… And now she is going to play with her to be husband…. She is also a characterless girl….
Aditya gets angry… Aditya punch him… And start beating him badly…that person start laughing and says: You’re crazy in her love… She was just playing with you….
Aditya gets more angry…
Aditya: Who are you to say bad about her?… Who gave you right?… Do you even know who zoya is?….

Aditya beat him very badly…

Raj comes… And try to stop Aditya….
Raj: What happened Aditya.? Why are you beating him….
Aditya: He sad wrong about zoya… He insult her…
Raj: Plz stop Aditya… He will die…
Aditya: It’s good if he dies… How can he say like this about zoya?..
Raj: Aditya try to understand… He is drunk… He is not in his senses…. See…. That’s a small matter… Don’t beat..

Aditya interrupts…

Aditya Shout: Small matter?… This can be a small matter for you but not for me…. I can’t bear if someone say bad about my love…
Raj: Your love…
Aditya: Yes…. I love zoya… I love her very much… I won’t spare anymore if someone say bad about my zoya…

Aditya again beat him…

Raj: Your zoya….
Aditya stops and thinks what he just said…
Raj to that person: Leave from here… And next time… Thinks thousand times before saying bad about someone….
He leaves from there….

Raj: So Aditya what you just said?…
Aditya again start drinking….
Raj: You can share your feelings with me…. Zoya is my best friend… And i will always think good for her….
Aditya looks at him for a while… And smiles…
Aditya: You know what?…. I like you…
Raj: What?… Really?…
Aditya: You’re really a true friend….. But you should maintain some distance from zoya… I mean… I know you’re her friend…. But I don’t know why?… I don’t like it…
Raj smiles….
Raj: So you really loves zoya…
Aditya: Yes… I love her very much… But It doesn’t matter because zoya’s getting married with yash…. I always thought that zoya also have feelings for me…. She also.. But…. I was wrong…
Raj: If I say you was not?..
Aditya: I’m already very sad…. Don’t make fun of me…
Raj: I know zoya since childhood…..I can easily understand her feelings…. And in previous days I notice some changes in her… I think she also like you… But she is not aware of her feelings…
Aditya: Are you telling the truth?….
Raj: I’ll help you… But first you have to believe me….
Aditya:You know… You’re very sweet… You’re a true friend… You’re the only one who understand my feelings…. You’re amazing…. You..

Raj interrupts…

Raj: Stop buttering….
Aditya: I’m not buttering… I mean it… You’re really a good friend….
Raj: You’re very drunk… I’ll drop you home….
Aditya: No thanks… I’ll manage..
Raj:Sure?…
Aditya: Yes…
Raj: Ok… Then… I’m leaving…

Next morning….

Someone pour a jug of water on Aditya…
Aditya: What the hell…. Who…
He rubs his eyes and saw that person…
Aditya: You?…
Someone: Yes…. Me…
Aditya: Finally you’re back… When you came… You should call me before arriving…
Someone: Seriously?… Will you plz check your phone…
Aditya check his phone and get shocked…
Aditya: 50 missed calls…

That person start beating him….

Hope you guys like it…. Bye.. ❤.. 

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Jiya A

    4 Comments

    1. harsheeee on March 28, 2023 10:24 pm

      great that raj is supporting aditya to get zoya that’s what true friend does , he know what is right for her and if i’m guessing right pooja is back and she is also gonna help his brother now it will be interesting to see how they both get together with the help of raj n pooja

      • Jiya A on March 28, 2023 11:05 pm

        Thanks… There’s a surprise in next part for my readers…. ❤

    2. Ishana_stories on April 2, 2023 8:23 pm

      Wow, it was cute and funny to see Aditya and Raj interacting. Especially when Raj asked him to stop buttering him. I loved this duo!!! Im curious to know who is the person that poured water on aditya, is it pooja? Im excited to see what Raj has planned for uniting Zoya and Aditya, Great writing!

      • Jiya A on April 6, 2023 2:55 pm

        Thanks❤

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