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Home»Fan Fiction»The destiny-Never let’s you go away (Naamkaran Avniel fan fiction) episode 7
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The destiny-Never let’s you go away (Naamkaran Avniel fan fiction) episode 7

DeeyaanaBy DeeyaanaApril 17, 201822 Comments3 Mins Read
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Deekshya: Okay let me open my jacket……

Someone from behind: WAIT …

He is none other than Ketan.

ketan

Dayaben: ( confused ) K… Ketan, you ???

Deekshya: Yes mom it bro and U am your dear daughter Deekshya.

Nanno: YOU TWO ??

Deekshya: Yes, it’s us who kidnapped your granddaughter and it is me who killed your daughter.

Dayaben: ( kind of falls down on floor ) Deekshya, Ketan how could you ? I never knew that i gave birth to devils.

Ketan: ( catches Dayavanti ) Mom, you gave all your property to bro and now you are about to give it to Avni and you say we are devils ?

daya is shocked

Dayavanti is shocked.

Nanno: You people did all this for money ? Shame on you.

Deekshya: Oh, oh lady lord we donot need your lectures now. We will kill you three and then we’ll sit in peace forever.

Deekshya takes out a gun.

Nanno carries Avni who is still faint and runs together with Dayavanti. Ketan and Deekshya chase them. They enter inside a jungle. Daya, Nanno and Avni hide behind a bush catching their breathe. Deekshya and Ketan see them and run after them. All of them run but stop in front of a cliff. Nanno and Dayaben look at each other and panic. Deekshya and Ketan smirk. Deekshya goes front to shoot.

Ketan: Wait Deekshya why should we waste our bullets on them when we can kill them without leaving any proofs ?

Deekshya: Wow bro, how can we do that?

Ketan: Just push them down the cliff.

Both of them go towards Dayaben, Nanno and Avni.

Deekshya: (going towards Nanno) Bye bye lecture queen!

She pushes Nanno. She falls down.

Deekshya and Ketan go towards Dayaben, who is scared.

Dayaben: N.. no you can’t kill me..

Ketan: You should have thought about this before transferring your property. You turned your own children into beggars. Sorry mom, we have to kill you.

With tears both of them push her. Dayaben screams and falls down.

Deekshya: Now it’s this Rahu’s turn. If she dies everything will be solved. ( to Avni ) I had lots to talk with you but you have to die as soon as possible.

Both of them catch Avni (who is still faint) and throw her down from the cliff.

———— leap of 11 years ———-

A police station is shown. An ACP enters.

A Sub-inspector: Sir, your wallet dropped in the jeep.

He takes his wallet. Opens it and looks at Avni’s photo. Comissioner is seen and he addresses the officer.

Comissioner: ACP Neil Khanna.

Neil: (With a salute) Yes sir.

Comissioner: I have decided to handover you the Sukoon ghar case.

Neil: Sir, the orphanage run by Neela Parikh?

Comissioner: Yes, they are being troubled by goons and I want you to visit them.

Neil: Yes sir.

Precap: Neil goes to sukoon ghar in off dress and collides with a girl. She beats him badly.

So sorry guys for the late update. i was busy travelling cause i have holidays. Please bear the errors cause this is my 1st FF. And silent readers, don’t forget to give feedbacks. If you want to remove or add any characters after leap, please suggest them and sorry to say Prakash is dead in my FF. Please comment if you want Sweta cause I am in a dilemma about her character.

 

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Deeyaana

    You are my fav Daydream.I ❤️️ you more than you’ll ever know.In your ? I see something more beautiful than ?.I will always ❤️️ you,no matter what happens.Cause you are my Life

    22 Comments

    1. DBRSR1822 on April 17, 2018 6:16 pm

      Continue writing dear……we AvNeil fans are always there for your support……
      Plzzzz update soon and keep up the good work…..
      Good Evening and Take Care??????

      • Deeyaana on April 17, 2018 6:51 pm

        Thank you so much yaar. I once thought about completing it in a single episode because dislikes are continuously growing. But I again gave a second thought about not ending it so soon maybe I may gain more followers if I continue writing!!

    2. Lucie on April 17, 2018 7:26 pm

      Amazing episode dear. I am mentioning clearly. ……. dont worry its not any problems with ur ff. Its with my behaviour I.e. I have a childish behaviour. So its a humble request please dont mind such lines. Ur ff are very good. Keep writing and according to me shweta and bebe both should be there in this ff.

      • Deeyaana on April 17, 2018 8:24 pm

        Thank you so much Lucie

      • Lucie on April 18, 2018 12:39 pm

        If possible please add Tina who was avni friend in childhood

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 12:47 pm

        Ok thank you i have already sent ep 8 for moderation. i will try my best to add her

    3. Neil on April 17, 2018 7:34 pm

      Nice episode…. Don’t stop writing this… It’s lovely…

      • Deeyaana on April 17, 2018 8:25 pm

        Thank you Neil

    4. Ayeesha on April 17, 2018 7:43 pm

      hey nice epi
      continue writing
      waiting on the next update

      • Deeyaana on April 17, 2018 8:25 pm

        Thanks a lot Ayeesha

    5. Jaspreet on April 17, 2018 7:49 pm

      Keep on it dear it’s interesting to see their tashan once more???

      • Deeyaana on April 17, 2018 8:26 pm

        Thank you Jaspreet

    6. -pari- on April 17, 2018 8:35 pm

      Awsomee ?? Oh no Avni ,?? hope all three will return. How rude deekshaya is ! Killed her own mother!! ?
      Eagerly waiting for the next part ? Don’t worry ?? I’m here to read your ff ?

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 6:21 am

        Thank you so much Priya ( I wish my keypad had stickers)

    7. Ayesha_malhotra on April 17, 2018 9:43 pm

      Deepshu you are an amazing writer . I hope AvNeil’s meet will be amazing . Keep writing more and more and I liked this episode a lot – Ayesha

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 6:28 am

        Thanks a lot Ayesha 🙂

    8. PRJ on April 17, 2018 10:20 pm

      Finally u updated. Nice episode hmmm. Carry on. Waiting 4 d next episode

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 6:29 am

        Thanks a lot for reading and supporting me

    9. Pavithra1616 on April 18, 2018 11:02 am

      U rocked , dear… It is really awesome.. Wow. ! Continue writing.. And pls don’t worry about dislikes and bad comments. OK.. I have got dislikes more than likes in my ff and still I am continuing my ff without much problem.. U should ignore negativness. And u have great skill so keep writing.. Update soon..

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 11:07 am

        Thank you so much Pavi

    10. ImRagela on April 18, 2018 11:24 am

      Hey Deepshu..Awesome yaar..Keep writing..love u ????

      • Deeyaana on April 18, 2018 12:33 pm

        Thank u Reji. Love you too ????

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