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Home»Fan Fiction»Destiny distancing us….(KKB) Episode 1
Fan Fiction Kumkum Bhagya

Destiny distancing us….(KKB) Episode 1

MayaBy MayaJanuary 14, 201734 Comments6 Mins Read
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Destiny deals with distances between destinations. The destinations can be places of interest to people…. but sometimes this destinations can be dealing with places of interest to learn…to live……to love….So let’s see what happens here in this story….
In the evening, Abhi was walking down to take his bike. That’s when he saw cutie sitting alone sadly with her hands on the chin. She was looking at the pond in front of her with sadness.

Abhi “Hey cutie! Why is this fish looking at pond?” Cutie remained silent. Abhi sat beside him and asked in a worried tone “What happened cutie?” Cutie “Nothing friend….” Abhi “Friends always share their sadness with each other….” Cutie looked at Abhi and asked “Really?” Abhi “Yes! So now tell me what happened…” Cutie “Hmm what never happened friend…Everything happened today….” Abhi “Why this much of sadness?” Cutie “You tell me friend if u look at someone and they always scold u then what will u do?” Abhi “I will feel sad….” Cutie “Same here friend….” Abhi “Who scolded u?” Cutie “Who else? AK 47!” Abhi was taken aback and asked “What? Who is that?” Cutie “My teacher….everyone calls her like that….” Abhi with a slight laughter said “Is she that bad?” Cutie “Worst!” Abhi “Tell me more about her!” Cutie “Her name is Abhaya Kishan!

In short it’s AK 47! She came to our school last year as our English teacher…..she always scold me…I never do anything friend and she always scold me….” Abhi “You never do anything but she scold u? How can it be possible?” Cutie with hesitation and looking timidly at him said “Friend….I mean I never do anything…” Abhi “Haan that’s why I am wondering why she scold u!” Cutie “Oye Friend….she scold me as I never do anything in her class!” Abhi now understood what she meant and couldn’t control his laughter…Cutie got angry and was about to leave. Abhi “Hey cutie! Sorry!” Cutie “I am leaving friend…u are laughing at me!” Abhi “Sorry friend….don’t leave as I will feel lonely here….” Cutie “Ok…I am not leaving friend…” Abhi “Now tell me…why u never do anything?” Cutie explained to her as looking at her teacher she don’t feel like doing anything. She always looked fierce and never smiled at all. Cutie wished her teacher to be like her di.

Abhi hearing that thought for a while. Cutie seeing that said “Friend…can I ask u something?” Abhi nodded his head response. Cutie “What is AK 47? I am scared to ask others…I am scared others will laugh at me….” Abhi with a smile said “Nothing big cutie…It’s a name of a rifle…” Cutie looked confused and asked “Rifle means…is it food? Like waffle?” Abhi chuckled and said “No it is a gun!” Cutie “Why u never tell it’s a gun! Yes friend she is like a gun who shoots words!” Cutie made sounds of dishoom dishoom for the gun’s sound and acted like her teacher. Abhi “Okok enough! I will tell u something and after that your problem will be solved!” Cutie hearing that was shaking her body in excitement. Abhi “Cutie! Stop doing like this!” Cutie “Faster tell friend!” Abhi told her and Cutie looked at him in shock. Abhi “What happened now? And why are u silent?” Cutie “You are telling the same as di!” Abhi “Really?” Cutie “Yes friend, she also said that you should try to show that u can do everything in whatever situation u face…..”

Abhi hearing that found it interesting as Cutie’s di had the same thought as him.
Abhi “Now you see Cutie…Both your di and friend is telling the same thing….which means u should follow that!” Cutie looking at Abhi said in a teasing tone “Di told u this right? You are copying everything from her just like me!” She gave a hi 5 to Abhi and asked him to bent down a bit. Abhi bent down and Cutie kissed him on his cheek. Abhi “Why is this kiss for?” Cutie “For this!” She winked and showed the chocolate packet that she took from his t-shirt’s pocket. Then she ran away from there!
Abhi from where he was “Be careful! When can we meet next time?” Cutie from a distance said “Same place! Same timing! Tomorrow friend!” Abhi showed thumbs up to her and she continued run from there.
Abhi smiled heartily and hoped at least over here he have a friend like Cutie unlike the previous houses where he lived…..he lived….he lived with loneliness who was his friend…..

With that thoughts, he took his bike and drove off to start his work.
His work ended very late at night and he was very tired. He walked passed the same pond area where Cutie and he had conversation earlier in the day.
There he saw a photo on the bench. He went near to see whose photo it was. Abhi saw the photo with a girl’s face covered with veil and only her eyes can be seen. Abhi thought, The eyes are very mesmerizing and it’s main attraction of this photo. Whoever took this photo should be a well-trained photographer. I should meet the photographer someday to get some advice….In that way I can improve my photography skills too!

While holding the photo, he heard Cutie’s loud voice “ Mine!! Mine!!!” Abhi turned behind and looked at her running towards him. Abhi “Hey Cutie! You still haven’t sleep?” Cutie “No friend….I just remembered I left di’s photo here….” Abhi “It’s your di in this photo?” Cutie “Yes friend! How is she?” Abhi “Whole face is covered and only her eyes can be seen!” Cutie “I know friend….i ask her photo as I went for summer vacation camp…and I said I will miss her….then she gave me this photo….” Abhi “Ok…here u go…. take it!” Cutie “See behind the photo friend! It’s her message in it!” Abhi “Is it?” Cutie nodded her head vigorously and said “But I don’t understand her hand writing friend…can u tell me what is it?” Abhi with a smile looked at back of the photo…He tried to read it and was shocked to see what was written.

Thanks for all the overwhelming comments and I will try not to self-analyse what I write from now onwards haha hopefully I can control myself. So sorry for that and Lopez whatever it is I am glad that somewhere my writing makes u happy! Keep smiling 🙂 Thanks for all the wishes for both Pongal/Sankranti and my Grandma’s birthday….What can I say about my grandma…there is nothing to say as I am not that close with her….but still like u all I am wishing her too…..Just thought of uploading this as I couldn’t sleep…..

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    34 Comments

    1. abhigya on January 15, 2017 12:11 am

      awesome maya

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 8:53 am

        Thank u Abhigya

    2. Akshaya on January 15, 2017 12:44 am

      Nice dii….cutie is very cute….want to know to the reason for abhi’s shock…. post the next one soon..

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 8:55 am

        Thank u Akshaya sis and I will try to upload next one if I have time sis

    3. lopez on January 15, 2017 5:07 am

      tooo Sweet sweetness keep writing and happy anniversary love uuuu I wish u could update soon

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 8:56 am

        Thank u Lopez and I will try if I can

    4. Prabhi on January 15, 2017 7:35 am

      Nice one update soon

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 8:58 am

        Thank u Fatima. I tried commenting at man mayal..but not sure whether my comment was posted. Awesome story with unique emotions and waiting for the next one

    5. Reshma_Pradeep on January 15, 2017 8:37 am

      SUPERBBBBBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!!! INTERESTINGGGGGGGGG YAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 8:59 am

        Thank Reshu!!!!!

    6. lokha on January 15, 2017 8:38 am

      Superbbb akka…cutie is really choo cute..loved it alottttt akka..u know wht akka when abhi tries to read wht pragya written..I’m eagerly to know that but I scroll down to next line..it finished. .ufff..eagerly waiting for the next one akka..love you so much akka.?

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 9:01 am

        Thank u Lokha sis. Sorry sis I was tired by then and that’s why I didn’t continue further….thanks for the wait sis

      • lokha on January 15, 2017 10:58 am

        Don’t be sorry dhiii..I can understand..take rest dhii..love you

      • Maya on January 16, 2017 11:34 am

        Thanks for the understanding Lokha sis! Love u too

    7. Aliza on January 15, 2017 9:55 am

      It was superb!???? Cutie is so cute!????? waiting to know what was written in the letter and why was abhi shocked!

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thanks for ur waiting Aliza

    8. Cutie on January 15, 2017 10:05 am

      Awww Pls make Cutie as another main lead in your story na ! Her Cuuteness To its Peak ! And very curious to know what was written in the back of the photo by pragya !
      Okay so Abhi is a photographer in your story ! right ?
      Anyways take care sweetie ! love u .???

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 4:50 pm

        You will see how she plays a part in this and yes he is a photographer in this story. Take care too cutie.

    9. Asmithaa on January 15, 2017 10:41 am

      superb dii.. and dont sare to say that souls interwined out of is boring.. do u know i have been waiting day and night to read it.. you are so bad di.. telling my fav f as boring.. And this ff is awesome!!!! day by day i am getting crazy of ur writings!!

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 4:51 pm

        Sorry Asmithaa sis…here on i won’t talk bad abt it. Thanks for ur craziness sis

    10. Mokshi on January 15, 2017 10:49 am

      So srry sissy as iam unable to comment 4 past updates????? first belated pongal wishes n belated bday wish r ur granny????????????? totally suprised sissy new plot exicted more n more n update s just cutee????????? abhi n cutie convo s so cutee Ak47????? loved it sissy???❤❤❤ keep rocking??? eagerly waiting for ur nxt update sissy??❤❤??????

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 4:53 pm

        Its ok sis! Thanks for the wishes and thank u as usual for the lovely comment!

    11. Prathi on January 15, 2017 11:51 am

      What is written behind the pic? Wanna know wanna know now.. Impatient me you always make me one

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 5:00 pm

        Pls wait and u will know it soon…i think so…

    12. Sugan on January 15, 2017 12:52 pm

      Awesome dear…. Interesting…

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 5:01 pm

        Thank u Sugan

    13. priyanka on January 15, 2017 2:33 pm

      Superb dii. ..abhi and cutie scene was cute di?..waiting for nxt part. .

      • Maya on January 15, 2017 5:01 pm

        Thank u priyanka sis

    14. Somiya on January 15, 2017 7:00 pm

      Again so different and creative ? Like the cutie , episode was cute too ?

      • Maya on January 16, 2017 11:35 am

        Glad that u find it Different and creative!

    15. Minu on January 15, 2017 7:32 pm

      wow superb episode di cutie is so sweet all the scenes are nice very interesting

      • Maya on January 16, 2017 11:36 am

        Thank u Minu sis for sweetness filled comment!

    16. SamyuSam on January 15, 2017 9:06 pm

      Nyc di….. Superb episode, I like cutie character a lot…. Plz update next epi soon… Wat was dat msg…. Feeling restless dear….

      • Maya on January 16, 2017 11:38 am

        Thank u sis! Don’t have to be that restless. I just uploaded it and hopefully u will know what is the message soon! Thanks for liking her character too!

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