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Home»Fan Fiction»Its Destiny Dear : Devakshi FS Shot 1 by Pavithra
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Its Destiny Dear : Devakshi FS Shot 1 by Pavithra

Pavithra1616By Pavithra1616December 29, 201737 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys, this is Pavithra here. I am writing something on devakshi or any serial couple for the very first time. I want all your support. This is a FS ( few shots )… Hope you guys enjoy this….
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The story is same as krpkab till the divorce,leap,Suhana and Sonakshi is at Dev’s house for Suhana and later they confess love and reunite. But Ishwari-Dev’s mother doesn’t like Sonakshi but agrees to make Devakshi marry. But later Devakshi understands that its not them who are getting married. But its Dev with another girl… Dev have no way but to do what his mother says as he loves her a lot and don’t want to loose her… So there is no way for Devakshi to get marry… Thus, Sonakshi takes a drastic decision to sacrifice her love and leave from here with Suhana….

The day before the marriage…
At night….

Someone knocks at Dev’s room…. Dev opens and was surprised to see Sonakshi and Suhana…

Dev: Sonakshi, tum?

Sonakshi: Dev, I came to say what I have decided.

Dev: what?

Sonakshi: now its sure that we cannot get married. So I have decided……

Dev: what did you decide? ( without knowing what he is about to hear )

Sonakshi: you should forget me, Dev. You should forget everthing – our marriage, our love, divorce, Suhana and me. I know its very difficult.. But you should do this,Dev… You should start a new life…

Dev was spell bound! He had his nose and eyes red and he was in tears!

Dev: Stop, Sonakshi.. Stop your joke please!

Sonakshi: Do you think I am joking??

Dev: Yes, I think.. Maybe I want to think only like that..

Sonakshi: please do what I am saying…

Dev: its sure that we cannot get married. But why forgetting??

Sonakshi: For our future, for our Suha.

Dev looks at Suhana. And she goes to him and hugs him. He kisses her in her face. He cry.

Dev: Suha, I will miss you.

And looks at Sonakshi who was already in tears.

Sonakshi to Suhana: Suha, you go to Elena. OK..

And Suha goes.

Dev: what are you doing Sonakshi? Why are you doing this? How can I for…..

Sonakshi puts her finger on his lips…

Sonakshi: its for our goodness, our future. We should forget each other. I am going from here with Suha. But don’t think I am a bad mother who separated you from your daughter. I had to..

Dev: Sonakshi,Mujhe jodkar? Par kyun?

Sonakshi: Dev, I know its painful. We have to separate. I am going. And you should never try to find me. You should live happily with your new wife. OK ( smiling with tears)

She moves closer to him and they brings their nose together…

Dev: I am gonna miss you more than anyone….

Sonakshi smiles…… Tears rolling down…

Before turning, she went closer to him and kisses him in his cheeks and says

” I am going now. You shouldn’t try to find me. You should live happily with your new wife….OK… Forget me and everything….I know its not possible… Still you should do this… You are the great Dev Dixit na!” ( smiling now)

Dev: maybe I will not think of you and start a new life but don’t think that I will forget you…

Sonakshi could not stand there for more time as she would break down if she hears anything more from Dev…

Sonakshi turns without looking at him and wipes her tears away…

Dev: Sonakshi…..

Sonakshi stops…

Dev: Miss you…

When she heard this, a drop of tear rolled down from her right eye… She turned her head half way.

Sonakshi: Miss you too….

She runs away without even looking back!

Devakshi remembers their romance and all and cries…
(Background:- Rang rahe)

Dev shouts out her name very loudly….
SONAKSHIIIII……
And cries….

Sonakshi at her house…

Sonakshi was in her bed crying…..

Sonakshi: This is my second life…. I am gonna live without Dev now… I had once but that time in my heart it was hatred..but now it’s still love… Dev…… I don’t know if you will forget me but I am not going to do so….
She cries…….
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TO BE CONTINUED…..

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Hope you guys enjoyed this one… Ignore any grammatical or spelling mistake. Ignore the short forms if any.. Ignore if the Hindi words are wrong.. I don’t know Hindi much that’s why..

This FS probably have 5 Shots… Mmmm maybe more than that.. Not sure of.. But it won’t exceed 10….

Thanks for reading. Do let me know what you think of the story by dropping in a comment… Don’t forget to hit the like button too…

I will try to update as soon as possible…

By,
Pavithra?

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    37 Comments

    1. fenil on December 29, 2017 12:38 am

      Superb !!

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:53 pm

        Thanks bhai !!

    2. arshiya_princess on December 29, 2017 12:42 am

      You really wrote well nd it’s seems more interesting so waiting to know further about it ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:54 pm

        Thanks di? so sweet…?? love u princess

    3. MANSINAIK on December 29, 2017 12:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:55 pm

        Thanks Mansinaik….

    4. Ghvpriya on December 29, 2017 12:30 pm

      Wow dear. You wrote really fantastic….. I loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next part…..

      • niyati on December 29, 2017 1:23 pm

        Awesome as always my lil sis….I really loved the way of writing…All the very best to u for ur future….waiting for next one….Lots of love to u sis ? ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:58 pm

        Thanks sooo much niyu di? really glad you loved it?? thanks di… I will try to update soon as possible.. Love you too… ?????

      • niyati on January 2, 2018 3:24 pm

        Happy New Year lil sis & love u ? ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:56 pm

        Thanks priya di… Glad you loved it… I will try to update as soon as possible… Thanks once again…

    5. Ashnita456 on December 29, 2017 1:31 pm

      Outstanding amazing pavi. Luv u and keep writing.

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 5:59 pm

        Thanks a lot ashu… Glad you liked this one.. Luv u too…

    6. riyarocks on December 29, 2017 3:18 pm

      pavi dear, this one’s really amazing……….got to read something on devakshi after soooooooo long………thnku so much sweety for this……….luv u a lot………..bye………tc

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:01 pm

        Thanks di?? thanks a lot di… Ya… Glad you like this… Luv u too???? and happy new year di

    7. farie on December 29, 2017 3:51 pm

      Hey its Superb episode with awesome love..waiting for next..ping me dear while uploading next ????

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:02 pm

        Thanks di… Thanks a lot…. I will definelty sent u the link…. I will try to update as soon as possible…

    8. qwerty123 on December 29, 2017 4:30 pm

      Awesome..i never saw this serial but it looks i have to see … awesome .???
      Countinue soon

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:03 pm

        Thanks di… Thanks a lot… She should definelty see krpkab because its awesome and incredible… I love it sooooooo much? I will try to update as soon as possible..

    9. -pari- on December 29, 2017 6:42 pm

      It’s so awesome ? I have never watched the serial though ? I like your writing style ? Good luck.. waiting for next shot ?

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:05 pm

        Thanks a lot di..oh u should watch krpkab di.. Thanks…. I will update as soon as possible…

    10. Mansi on December 30, 2017 12:25 am

      Amazinggggggg work little sis???Loved it completely❤❤❤❤Ur way of writing????Eagerly waiting for the next part???Love u??❤❤❤

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:06 pm

        Thanks di…. Thanks a lot I will try to update s soon as possible… Love u too??

    11. vanu on December 30, 2017 2:38 am

      its amazing
      update soon

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:07 pm

        Thanks vanu… Thanks a lot… I will try to update as soon s possible…

    12. ShonaLaado on December 30, 2017 1:53 pm

      I was not knowing the show or couple but am eager to know from the story of yours.

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:09 pm

        U should watch this hemi… Anyway thanks….

    13. Krishnakumari Ng on December 30, 2017 6:46 pm

      Superbs post next part as soon as possible by the way Happy New Year all Devakshian

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:10 pm

        Thanks.. I will try to updates as soon as possible.. Happy new year to u too…

    14. Cgegeg on December 30, 2017 11:17 pm

      it is a very interesting plot devu.. i am very curious for the next chapter ..this chappy was emotional:( hope they get together soon …

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:11 pm

        Thanks charu…thanks a lot.. This has a happy ending…

    15. Raja on January 1, 2018 10:15 am

      u r fab my real cutie…. happy new year too to all the actors of ur shots………

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:12 pm

        Thanks bhai…happy new years to u too…??

    16. Aadila on January 1, 2018 12:54 pm

      pavuz….. When I imagine this story in my mind….tears rolled in my eyes. It’s was amaizing…so so so good??

      • Pavithra1616 on January 1, 2018 6:13 pm

        Thanks aadu dear… Thanks a lot…???? luv u

    17. Meher on January 4, 2018 1:53 pm

      Amazing!
      Loved it!
      Almost in tears!
      DevAkshi rock!
      With love,
      M Di

      • Pavithra1616 on January 4, 2018 5:22 pm

        Thanks M di… Thanks a lot.. Luv u.. Thanks for commenting M di..

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