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Home»Fan Fiction»My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 18 by Jerry
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My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 18 by Jerry

Jerry_36By Jerry_36June 23, 201791 Comments7 Mins Read
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He wrapped his arms around her neck and asked “My Shaitaan Chuhiya is feeling hungry ?” with a smile playing on his lips. She was too shocked to react to anything. She knew he was flirting with her but how could she say something, she was feeling an obnoxious sensation inside her. It seemed that all the butterflies around the earth have happened to be in her stomach right now. All she could do was stare at him and the smile, which has now been frequently placed on him every time.

He saw her staring at him with those coca brown eyes which were opened wide enough to swallow something big. He could see his reflection in her eyes which he always longed for. And then he understand the reason behind those bulging eyes. He was standing close to her, very close. He quickly folded his hands at the back and took a step back.

Shivaay mentally smiled seeing her shocked state. He took out his cell and clicked a picture of her. “Tit for Tat.” He spoke. “This is wrong !!” She said trying to snatch the phone. “Shaitaan Chuhiya why are you trying to be romantic ?” He asked mischievously, raising his eyebrows. “Wh..what ?” She stammered. “Ohho, haven’t you watched movies. If a hero takes something from the heroine, she try to take it back. In this process they both come very close.” He said coming closer to her. “Like this and then they fall on the bed !!” He went more closer when she folded her hands “Okay, okay I understood. I am sorry. I didn’t did it deliberately.” She said. “Aur Mujhe laga tumhe mujhse ishq ho gaya. ( I thought you fell in love with me.)” She now stood rooted to her place and then went to the kitchen fastly, touched her cheeks and found it hot. She couldn’t believe herself, she was blushing !

He also came from behind and asked  “So what do you want to eat ?” “Aloo Puri !” She replied hands still on her cheeks. “What is that ? I don’t know how to make.” He said. “Well then I will teach.” She became the teacher.

She explained the whole recepi to him. Both began working with their respective jobs. Anika was cutting the vegetables. Her hair were disturbing her. He saw this and came from behind and gently took all her hair from the behind of her ear and held it. She smiled. She didn’t wanted to show that she was hell nervous ! She started chopping the vegetables carelessly when he saw that her finger was on the way to be chopped. He jerked her hand and his finger got chopped. Blood oozed out like anything. “Oh my god, Billu ji !! What have you done. Are you nuts or what. Like totally crazy. Stupid ! See how much cut it has caused and Gosh, see the blood.” She was scolding and scolding and then made him sit in the bed. She took the antiseptic. “See it will pain, be strong..okay ?” He smiled like anything. “Don’t smile like this. So much blood is flowing. If something happens then toh you behave like a baby, eating 8 tablets and here you are laughing !” She once again chided. “This time you are here to take care of me no,” he said maintaining the grin. She shaked her head in disbelief. Then closed her eyes and applied the ointment. Once the ointment was placed she blowed over the cut. “Its only a cut Shaitaan Chuhiya !!” He said trying to make her understand. “Now you will not do any work.” She said ignoring his question.

Anika was working now with full dedication and at times murmuring, “What was the need to save me, he is really a billu ji !” She didn’t saw that the food was ready in the microwave. He saw and tried calling her but she was in her own world. He went and was going to take out the dish when she saw him and stopped him. “Billu ji, why did you came here, you haven’t wore the gloves, let me take out !” As the hot skin of the microwave touched her she winced in pain.

He instantly took her hands on his already injured hands. “You were scolding me, what about you ? You also haven’t wore the gloves. Careless creature !” He too began scolding her. “Now let me call the doctor.” He said. She tried protesting. “Hello Doctor, well there is a girl.” He eyed her. “She has burned her hands. What should we do.”
“Okay thank you, doctor” He was going to cut the call when she snatched the phone and told him about his condition. “Thank you doctor.” She said with a satisfactory smile.

“Doctor has said not to bend your hand, stain will be more!!” Both said at once and then giggled. “So how are we gonna eat the food. We did a lot to make it and now we cannot eat it.” Anika said being sad.

“Well I have an idea we can feed each other, then our hands will be straight. What say ?” Shivaay said casually as he began doing gymnastics in his heart. “Okay then !” She said not being able to get any idea, feeling really hungry.

She took a morsel and placed in her mouth. He ate it delightfully savouring the food as well as her fingers. She didn’t spoke anything, thou a pandemonium was created within her. He also made her eat. She took it gently like a good kiddo. “My baby” he said to himself.

After a lot of argument it was decided that Anika was going to sleep on the couch and Shivaay on the bed. Both slept feeling content inside his heart.

The moon descended and sun replaced it. He woke up first and went towards the couch. “Morning beauty !” He exclaimed and kissed her forehead and then her burned hand. He was going towards the washroom when she woke up. She instantly went towards him and said “Billu ji, let me please go first. I have to go to the cafe.” “No, I woke up first I will !” He was adamant. “Please !!” She spoke with such cuteness that he was at the line of melting. “No you don’t have to lose, you have a deal today and its already late.” He thought. He kissed her cheeks and went towards the washroom as fast as his legs could take.

She kept her hands on the cheek and was going to collapse when he held her from behind. “Oh my god, of you will be collapsing like this then what will happen in future.” He said and went to the washroom. She didn’t understood the hidden message and cried “Billu ji” and then let out smile remembering the kiss.

He peeped outside from the washroom after bathing and saw that she was not there. “Maybe she has gone to some other room.” He came out in a towel.

Anika was busy catching the ant which was disturbing her when she was seeing her Facebook. She was behind the couch and then catched her and threw it far. She dusted her hands and praised herself mentally. She stood up from behind and what she saw made all the words ditch for the author too. She could only say “Billu ji !”

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Heya cuties, I am back again with a new chapter. Do tell me your views every one along with silent readers. And the teasing session will be tomorrow. Hope you enjoyed. Will be waiting for your reviews. Also now I will be a little irregular as school and coaching are just going to start. Thank you for reading❤

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    91 Comments

    1. fffan1234 on June 23, 2017 7:05 pm

      Super cute update

      • Jerry_36 on June 26, 2017 6:58 pm

        Thank you so much dear !?

    2. Ahaana on June 23, 2017 7:06 pm

      Aww… jerry.. it was so cutiiieee??

      • Jerry_36 on June 26, 2017 7:07 pm

        Thank you Ahaana di. Glad that you found it cute !?

    3. Debdutta on June 23, 2017 7:11 pm

      Awesome

      • Jerry_36 on June 26, 2017 8:58 pm

        Thank you tons Debdutta !!?

    4. sumitha on June 23, 2017 7:23 pm

      Adipoliiiiii super love ittttt ……post next soon ……ending of this part make me sad always put curiosity at end …… Amazing one drrrr

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 1:52 am

        Hey Sumitha Di!
        Thank you so much dear, well Sana told me the meaning of Adipoli !!?
        Really glad that you loved it. Yeah I always try to create one so the readers interest get glued? Thankuuu again❤

    5. CrazygirlS.P on June 23, 2017 7:32 pm

      Superb Jerry yaar, I love it❤️❤️❤️ Love you and take care of yourself???

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 2:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear. Love you too, take care of yourself !?

    6. thedreamsoul on June 23, 2017 7:33 pm

      Hey cutie pie , this is awesome . It looked like I could never get tired of reading your stories , flawless ! I loved it and it amazing , mind-blowing​ , fantastic , bombastic ! Girl you are rocking . The scene where theh are concerned about each other was amazing​ . I was smiling till the end and the way they made aloo puri , wow ! Words will not be able to say how much good and awesome it is . The last scene I cupped my mouth – oh my god ! Lol , eagerly waiting for the next part . Everything was beyond perfect not to mention Shivaye’s flirting and Anika’s blushing part . You are amazing writer and day by day you are increasing your brightness ! I love you and take care jerry . Hugs and kisses to one of my favourite authors !

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 3:10 pm

        Hey Sana !
        Thank you so much. It means a lot. Really glad that you couldn’t get rid of my stories also I will make sure you could not??
        Oh my God, these many words, thankuuu again sweetie !?
        Aloo Puri, yeah it was a very crucial point in the start of their love story.
        Awww, you liked it so much?
        Well, okay I too did that while writing it?
        Will try to post soon, but I think I will be late this time. Yeah Shivaay took help from his dumbell oberoi for Flirting??
        I am happy that you find these qualities in me. Love you more than you. And not to mention, getting appreciated by a better author is always a achievement❤

      • thedreamsoul on June 27, 2017 4:24 pm

        Seriously , everyone here knows who is ‘better’ here ! Thanks girl ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:05 pm

        Hey Sana, well not everyone but I know that you are and always will. Welcome?

      • thedreamsoul on June 27, 2017 6:10 pm

        I was talking about you telly update Star – vedhika or my Cutie pie Jerry ! You are a different level gurl and you are one of the best author we have here .well , I am on cloud nine reading your comment , you always make me happy and make my day better . Love you infinity ??

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:09 pm

        Hey Sana, thank you so much, it really means a lot coming from you !? and I am glad that I made your day !!❤

    7. nikita_jai29 on June 23, 2017 7:48 pm

      It is awesome dear.. Lots of love dear

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank you so much Nikku di. Love you too !?

    8. sid on June 23, 2017 7:53 pm

      Awesome dude. Really cute anika was all dumstruck

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 3:17 pm

        Hey Sid, thank you tons. I am happy you like this Anika and yeah wait for the next chapter to found out more. Glad to find a new reader !?

    9. pooja26 on June 23, 2017 8:08 pm

      haha !!!!!! catching ant !!!!!! seriously 😉 😉
      anika will be anika 😉 😉
      awwww soooo chweet chappy……..
      adorable billu yr……..
      post nxt asap…….\
      tc…… jerry dear 🙂

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 4:04 pm

        Hey Tom !
        Yup, you are right. Anika will be Anika??
        Gals that you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for the appreciation. Will try to post soon, maybe this time a little late.
        Take care❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 4:05 pm

        *glad typo?

    10. mj on June 23, 2017 8:15 pm

      It was amazing…finally some romantic shivika together!!
      Today only I was thinking of this ff…n it popped up I was soo happy
      Sry…i coudnt comment on ur previous episodes…but I couldn’t stop myself from commenting on this episode…it was awesome!?
      Plzz update asap!..cant wait?

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 4:08 pm

        Hey Mj !
        Thank you so much for commenting. I was really very happy while reading your comment. Yes, as the story will progress I will try to add more. So delighted that you were thinking of my ff, it feels great.
        It’s okay dear, I understand life ! And I am so happy to discover a new reader, thankuuu again. Keep supporting.
        Will try to post soon, maybe this time a little late !!❤

    11. alekhika20 on June 23, 2017 8:16 pm

      Lovely update

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 4:16 pm

        Thank you loads Alekhika !?

    12. Dhar on June 23, 2017 8:24 pm

      Cuteness overloaded ?????????? loved it to the coreee superb episode ??, u just nailed it yaar. Pllzzzz post the next update ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 4:23 pm

        Hey Dhar ! Thank you so much. Cuteness overloaded !! ??, glad that you liked it. Really appreciate that. Sweetie will try to post soon❤

    13. gayathri.visu on June 23, 2017 8:29 pm

      Awww!! Vedi, for u we r cuties but for for me u r the most cutiest writer! Lovely part dear… Shivaay rocks n Anika shocks!!

      Don’t worry dear. I can understand ur situation Vedi. Whenever u free, u can update ur ff…..ok! Eagerly waiting for next part dear…

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:38 pm

        Heyoo Gayathri di.
        Thank you so much. Awww, that’s a very sweet as well as a cute compliment. Yeah you are correct Shivaay rocks and Anika shocks??
        Hey ! Thank you for understanding, you know I had cousins in my house since yesterday and tomorrow is my school plus coaching classes?, but still will try to post soonish.
        Love you❤

    14. joy on June 23, 2017 8:30 pm

      dear writterji
      omg this is one of the best fanfriction I have read till now… congratulations for Ur epic writing skills…uff I can litterly image the scenes in front of my eyes …and simple in lov with it writing….kept up the good …no great…no no…. greatest awsomest work….
      yours truly madly reader??

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:42 pm

        Hey Joy !
        I loved the way you greeted me ‘Writer ji’, got a great feeling?
        Thank you so much dear, its always overwhelming to hear such beautiful compliments from silent readers ! Was so happy while reading it. I am really delighted that you like my works this much and I promise to give you more like this. Thankuuu again. Loved the last line too.
        Much love to you❤

    15. VHM on June 23, 2017 8:48 pm

      soo cute …cuteness overloaded…what more to say …actually i am going irresistible in need of reading more and more…

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:44 pm

        Hey Harika di !
        Thank you so much. Really happy that you liked it. Di, will try to update soon not sure when… Still thankuu for commenting❤

    16. Shivika on June 23, 2017 9:21 pm

      Awesome….Loved it…❤
      Shivika caring fr each other….
      Shivaay kissing Anika & Anika’s reaction to it…?
      Shivika r too cute…?
      Waiting fr d nxt…?

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:46 pm

        Dearest Shivika !
        Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you loved Shivika and the way they cared. Yeah Shivaay has become very naughty !!
        Will try to post the next soon when I will get time. Love yaa❤

    17. Ashwinee on June 23, 2017 9:48 pm

      Heyoo Jerry , not at all fair?. Jab bhi main yeh ff padtihoon , meri toh band baj hi jaata hai. I tried my level best to control my laugh but ended up laughing louder.
      Today’s update was a complete package of entertainment. Like you even I am going to be busy from the coming weeks , so I can’t guarantee you to post my opinion. So sorry in advance . And all the best , jho karogi achhe se karo and love you loads ???

      • Jerry_36 on June 27, 2017 5:50 pm

        Heyoo Ashwinee Di !
        Thank you so much for commenting. Hey that’s so cool, you know we should always laugh as laughter is the best medicine !! ??
        Really happy that you loved today’s update. Okay di, but remember I will always wait for your opinion ! Thank you for the wishes.
        Love you more ❤❤

    18. anagha on June 23, 2017 10:37 pm

      Woahaaaaaa yaar… Meri chotu sis !! Tum toh chupe rustom nikli..! har bar ki tarah it was a splendid work ! ?.. phenomenal!!. Billuji is soo naughty! Anika is sooo damn lucky ! I must say.. Aloo Puri had a very pivotal role ???.. poor doctor, that man didn’t have got any idea about the sparkling romance between Billu and shaitan chuhiya. Ek aur baath , all the best for your new academic year .. have a blast sissooo!! Love ya ???

      • Jerry_36 on June 28, 2017 9:44 pm

        Hey Anagha !
        Thank you so much dear. Chupi Rustom??, okay I am..I ma gals that har baar ki tarah this time also you liked my work. Getting an opinion from you is always a blessing?
        Yeah Billu ji, has gradually become naughty, to be precise. Yeah Aloo Puri deserves the credit of their moments !!
        Poor Doctor, awesomely said.??
        Thankuuu again, you know I am not going in a new class but the school is reopen !! Still thankuu. Love you too very much❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:12 am

        *am *glad ??
        Sorry for the typos, was in a hurry !?

    19. Sara on June 23, 2017 10:55 pm

      It was really awesome.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:11 am

        Thank you so much Sara. Really glad that you liked it sista !?

    20. kanfi on June 23, 2017 11:06 pm

      Hey jerry….
      Frstly srry for not commnting on previous part…
      Bt u’ve read it,.
      Coming to this part….ammmazing,,,fabulous,..
      Just koved it…
      Shivay is becoming shameless singh oberoi???
      Gd night

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:20 am

        Hey Kanfi !
        Its okay dear?
        Really happy that you loved this part. Thank you so much !!
        Yeah Shivaay is becoming Naughty ?
        Love you, good night ❤

    21. navz on June 23, 2017 11:52 pm

      Cuteness ka koi aur naam hai toh woh “my CCD” hai…waah…i am just blushing now also…soo sweet …..missing shivikas togetherness onscreen and this part came as a pain relieving one..tq jerry.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:22 am

        Awww, Navz what a compliment !! Thank you so much. You are blushing, then there will be a lot to come !?
        Yes, I am also missing them like anything. Its been quite a while since we saw them together. Your welcome.
        Love you ❤

    22. aryaraju on June 24, 2017 12:11 am

      Ha ha….. Loved it ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:24 am

        Hey Arya, thank you so much dear !?

    23. Sairish on June 24, 2017 12:46 am

      heyyy Jerry this was awesome ..loved it to the core…i was a silent reader but not anymore..your each and every part is just like a treat to my mind and heart …you are one of my favourite writers here ..keep writing and stay blessed

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:27 am

        Heyoo Sairish !
        Thank you so much dear. Really happy that you loved this chapter. And I am happy that you decided to comment, thankuu?
        Delighted that you like my writings this much !! And I am honored to be your favorite writer?
        Yeah, the next chapter is uploaded. Do check it !!❤

    24. Madhuani on June 24, 2017 1:14 am

      Sorry dear today chintusa comment as feeling very sleepy.
      Fabulous,amazing n waiting for next.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:28 am

        Hey Madhu ! Its okay. Thank you so much for commenting. Even a word, means a lot to me. Next chappy loaded.
        Sleep tight, good night love❤

    25. Niriha on June 24, 2017 7:55 am

      Awesome ??????lovely update
      Waiting for next update soon

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:30 am

        Thank you so much Niriha. Next chappy uploaded, check it out. Glad that you loved this one !?

    26. Lalitha on June 24, 2017 8:49 am

      Wow jerry!!!! This is extraordinary….
      U know what this is the first time I read this ff & now I’m in love with ur ff…. I read all the parts in one go….. U r amazing dear….. Superb ff…. Loved it to the core…..
      Excited for the next part….. Plz post soon….
      Love you??
      Tc…

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:32 am

        Hey Lalitha di !
        You don’t know how happy I was when I saw your comment, thank you so much. Really happy that you like my writings. Good that you tried to read and appreciate it. Love with my ff, that’s a huge compliment, thankuuu again.
        Di, the next chapter I updated. If you have time, do review it !!❤

    27. Mrunal on June 24, 2017 4:14 pm

      OMG….
      cuteness overloaded…?????
      with increasing number of episodes.. cuteness is also increasing that also rapidly…???
      such a mind blowing update…
      sso is taking full advantage of situation???
      their care for each other.. awww…??
      and the conversion with doc… itani si baat ke liye doc ko call kar liya… uff ye shivika???
      and that hidden meaning in a simple comment… anni is too dumb to understand the naughty plans of RSO aka romantic singh oberoi…???
      waiting for next epi eagerly… wanna see annika & shivaay’s reaction… i know it’ll damn awesome…
      love u dear…???

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:38 am

        Hey Mrunal di !
        Thank you so much for the immense love that you showered through your comment. Really feeling at top of the world.
        Cuteness is increasing??, thankuu for the compliment. Glad that you loved this update. Yeah SSO is in full mood, he will not leave a chance !!??
        Di, you don’t know Shivaay, he call doctor for petty things and this was about Anika, then toh for her he can take out a mountain??
        Yeah, Anika bechari !! Zyada seedhi hai. Slowly and steadily she will understand, I will give her tuitions personally?
        Di, the next chapter is updated. Do review it ! Love you more sista ❤

    28. Sofiya. S. on June 24, 2017 4:48 pm

      Awww-dorable update ??…
      Loved it ??…
      Shivika were sooo cuuuteee ??…
      I loved the kitchen scene…
      Post soon dear ?❤…

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:41 am

        Hey Sophia !
        Thank you so much ! Really happy that you liked this update as well ! Shivika yeah they are !! Kitchen scene !! Okay me too??
        Next chapter posted. Do review it. Love you ❤

    29. Zainab on June 24, 2017 9:24 pm

      mohabbati update! wished OmRi were also there but its okay!! bahot hi zyaada badhiya tha!!???? lovely!! post the next too!!?
      Bye!?

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:43 am

        Hey Zainab !
        Glad that you found it as a “Mohabbati Update” Yaar have you changed the party, from Shivika to Omru !!??
        Kidding, well I will try to add more for you.
        Hey the next one is posted. Check it out.
        Bbye, good night. Love you❤

    30. Banita on June 24, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awww!!!!! It’s just AMAZING dr…. Biluji is soo cute #Cute Singh Oborie# naught also…. Luv it…. Luv it…. Luv it 2 d core…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt….

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:47 am

        Hey Banita ! Thank you so much dear. I am happy that you loved this chapter. Cute Singh Oberoi??, correct title.
        Glad that you loved it, three times ! Woahh?? Next chappy is uploaded, do review it❤

    31. Annika51 on June 24, 2017 11:40 pm

      Amazing Update Jerry..
      Loved it sweetheart..
      Update soon

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 12:53 am

        Thank you so much Di, can I know your name please. Actually you are bugger then me, so dear don’t suit. Only if you are comfortable ! Next chappy posted, review it. Love you❤

    32. Nila on June 25, 2017 8:14 am

      Thank u vedu for this amazing part full of shivika?????love u dear??

      And now my doubt is clear (mentioned in previous cmt)

      Cheek kiss?? she was blushing???
      (Chalu cheese oberoi)

      Billu Ji( shivaay was in towel)????????

      OMM I gonna crazy for ur writing ??. ?
      It was really awesome????
      Post next one soon???

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:13 pm

        Nila di ! Thank you so much. Your comment nowadays energize me. Your welcome, Shivika re my favorite, so there will be more coming?
        Okay !?
        Yeah Chalu Cheeze !!!!???
        Yeah The great Shivaay Singh Oberoi was in a towel !!!!!!???
        Thankuuu again, I am glad that you are now somewhat addicted to my ff??
        Thanks again. Next chappy posted.
        Love you❤

    33. Nilash on June 25, 2017 11:32 am

      Heyyyyyyyyyy…. at first loads of apologies from my side. Actually was busy a bit due to my admissions so could not read it at time. Sorry…
      Jerry i will gift you a dictionary of amazing words…. seriously I would….. now I hate repeating words but I have to again repeat them…. amazing, awesome, super cute, super cool, super lovely…. and what not. Thank You so so so much for this part.
      Wait now I got the reason why all the butterflies are vanished from my small garden…. Not done Anika you can’t feel all the butterflies together. Shivay ahem ahem… we all are reading your naughty romantic ideas…. so be careful to romance
      Jerry awesome part thank you soooo much.
      Love you immensely

      • Nilash on June 25, 2017 11:42 am

        And forgot to mention Shivay and Anika take care of your hands. Anika now blushing holding her cheeks not bad. Good good…. that feeding moment super awesome.
        Now surely Anika will have hard time controlling her after looking Shivay in towel.
        And of course Jerry don’t overstrain your self to post the next part soon. Divide your time wisely for your studies and other stuffs.
        Love you so much

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:22 pm

        Hmmm, they will surely take care of them….now toh no stain was there na…Shivaay’s khidkitod idea saved them??
        Anika blushing??, yeah and the feeding moment…thanks again.
        Well I hope you read what’s in store next !? and enjoyed it too.
        Yes di, I will do as you say because seriously I am overstaining myself, I slept at 2:15 at morning and got up at 6 and also didn’t slept in afternoon. Lots of assignments are there to complete too. Also was not having net, just got it few minutes back…thanks for your concern !!?

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:17 pm

        Heyoo Nilash di !
        Thank you so much, I am so happy to read your comment. No need for apologies, I am also late this time?
        Hope your admissions went well !
        Thank you so much di, you know your bahar of words make me search enough words to thank you. Thank you big vala for appreciating this much, love you…
        You don’t need to thanks me but still your welcome love?
        Hey okay, so now you got. Seriously its not fair, but I think whenever Shivaay nears Anika butterflies get attracted to her???
        Okay, true said. I will make Shivaay understand that is a family show and NIR much romance is allowed…?
        Your welcome again. Love you too dher Sara ❤❤

    34. mehakchalag on June 25, 2017 4:12 pm

      Jerry i m love with your ff.O god u r making me crazy.So cute shivika very caring for each other.Shameless shivaay he kisse her cheeks.And the hint of next part o god.U r awesome,amazing.Mere words katham ho gye h.Love u jerry.Keep writing.Full of romance and fun u made my weekend superb.Byy.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:25 pm

        Hey Mehak !!
        Thank you so much dear. Love with my ff, awww glad that you love my writings?
        Yeah Shameless, he gas become after the realisation of his love !!
        Well, I hope you have read the next chapter too. Words ended??, okay but seriously thanks for the encouraging words, love you more❤

    35. fenil on June 25, 2017 7:22 pm

      Hey Lil Jelly Angel (:P:P)

      As i made promise ,i fulfilled it.i read all the chappies.

      Amazingly written each chapter.

      Marvellously portrayed each moments of Oberoi Brothers , Shivika ,Gaurikara or Rikara (I love Ishkara and missing them like hell:*:*@):-), Rumya (missing them like anything), Priveer , Cute Sahil and Tia.

      Loved the bonding Oberois share with Tia, AniRu.

      Fantabulous Fabulous Job.
      Now no more bakbak , meri jaban rukti nahi.

      Shivaay turned Shameless Singh Oberoi.

      I love your work.

      Love yaa .
      Fenu.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:29 pm

        Hey Fenil Bhaiya !
        Jelly ?? Me…? Like seriously??, okay..
        Still thank you so much for commenting, well I was quite surprised when I saw tour comment but I loved to read it, a long comment indeed.
        Thanks for soaring time and reading it. I am glad that you like all the youngsters, about rumya I too moss them like hell but I know you are a ishkara fan, and you write a ff on them. I know I said that I will read that,??but pucca give me some time, then I will for sure.
        Next chapter is updated ! If you have time, do check it out..
        Happy that you liked my work ❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:30 pm

        And seriously I am so sorry for the typos that too dangerous one…??
        *your *sparing *miss
        Sorry?

    36. Pui on June 25, 2017 11:51 pm

      Super awsmly written Jerry !

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:31 pm

        Hey thank you so much Pui !
        Happy that you liked it !?

    37. Zaveesha on June 26, 2017 6:34 pm

      Awesome update Jerry… loving Shivika bonding…nd also loving everything about ur ff..so don’t want to say that again nd again (bit lazy I’m)…
      Just accept one word…
      AMAZING..

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:33 pm

        Hey Zaveesha !
        Thank you so much dear !! I am glad that you are liking Shivika’s bonding..
        Hey its okay, lazy !! Me too yaar??
        Thanks again for appreciating.
        Love you❤

    38. Tanz on June 27, 2017 6:09 pm

      Waah? such a cute and lovely part….But I really felt sad for Shivika due to their wounds?but….that led to whole lot of fun… incredible. Shivaay has great presence of mind, how he can bend the conversation to his own benefit without even being blamed…. I couldn’t stop laughing by thinking of both of their expressions when Shivaay comes out of the bathroom…. priceless…??? Today even Shivaay got his turn to scold….nahi toh bechara???
      Jerry it’s alright, because studies are important too. I am facing a similar situation…but Haan whenever you post, please do send me the links and I’ll be here?
      Take care….and all the best for your studies ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:37 pm

        Hey Tanz !!
        Thank you so much dear !!
        Well you were feeling sad here but the lovebirds were enjoying themselves to the fullest?
        Yeah you don’t know Shivaay’s presence of mind till now, wait till more chapters and then you will get what more he can do?
        Well, I thing that you enjoyed that chapter too, I am seriously sorry for replying so late..
        Ohh ! So you understood my situation..yaar seriously can’t get rid of those srudies?
        Thankuuu I will always try to give my best.
        Love you !

    39. Abbi on June 28, 2017 5:42 am

      Hey Jerry!
      Sorry for commenting extremely late, pity me please.
      Well, the update is extraordinary great, I love you for this and I love you for your writing. Okay it’s gittin’ cheesy 😛 But what can I do? Still I love you. 🙂 <3
      Do post soon.

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:40 pm

        Hey Abbi !
        Dear its okay, I am also late for replying and you know was waiting for your comment. Thank you so much.
        ???I love you too dear !?
        The next chapter is posted, do review it. Also waiting for your ff, eagerly❤

    40. shivika123 on June 29, 2017 1:38 am

      Hey
      How could I got all ur episode

      • Jerry_36 on June 29, 2017 7:12 am

        Hey dear !
        You can click on my profile and then on the pen icon there for all my works and still if you don’t get, I will provide you the links?

    41. Neha-17 on July 2, 2017 5:18 am

      Hey yo! Choti writer, I am back so is my comment
      Aww, so much concern, care love, OMM
      Shaitan Chuiya sounds so cute
      This Shivaay is flat on Anika, love their chemistry
      Fantastic as usual, you are a show stopper in writing
      Amazing and Awesome
      Loved it!
      Love ya!

      • Jerry_36 on July 3, 2017 4:34 pm

        Heyoo Neha di !
        Thank you so much, yeah I can see that you are back in your commenting mode?Shaitaan Chuhiya..glad that you like this word. I am glad that you liked Shivika in this chappy?
        Thank you, whenever you so say na..’Choti writer’ believe me I go on top of the world.
        Love you more !❤

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