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Home»Fan Fiction»My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 16 by Jerry
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 16 by Jerry

Jerry_36By Jerry_36June 17, 2017Updated:June 17, 201796 Comments7 Mins Read
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Anika’s POV
Oh Bete Ki what I saw in front of my eyes was totally out of the blue. How come Billu ji is here, I mean he had to go for Prinku’s wedding and, now I got it ! The wedding is in Goa. Well ! That’s a great news for me but wait why are we colour coordinated..? And…why my favorite song is being played. Billu ji hates bollywood songs as per my memory, don’t know what’s happening.

One minute he was staring at me continuously and now without saying a hello, at least he sat down on the couch and began doing his work.

Suddenly an idea popped in my mind, sometimes my brain is useful too. I went ahead and stood behind the couch and kneeled down. I brought my fingers up to his neck and tickled him, he instantly jerked and saw that no one was there, I was kneeling no.
End of Anika’s POV

Shivaay’s POV
Gosh ! Who is now tickling me ? No one is there in the room. I know I again hallucinated Anika ! And now I am smiled foolishly while seeing her picture on my laptop, wish I could meet her now. She has become my world and my life revolves around her. Suddenly someone again tickled me, gosh why I feel this touch familiar. Don’t know, what’s gonna happen to me !
End of Shivaay’s POV

As Shivaay was busy fidgeting with his laptop seeing Anika’s picture, Anika was seeing planning to do some mischief with a smirk on her face. Then there was a sudden sally of a shooting star. Thou Shivaay didn’t believe in these superstitious things but he made up his mind to ask for a wish. He closed his eyes and made a wish ‘To see Anika at this moment !’ And after completing his thoughts he looked towards the window, grinning to himself. He knew this was not possible, still there is no harm in trying, he thought.

Anika stood up from behind the couch, summoned up her hands and began tickling Shivaay to the fullest. Now she was clearly visible but Shivaay was not able to see her. He was asking the person tickling him to stop instantly and was laughing hysterically, no limits. For a moment Anika left him and saw his laughing and glowing maintaining a innocent face. She thought how can someone be so cute but then brushed of her thoughts and commenced tickling him. After a minute or so she left him and sat on the couch. He was lying on the floor holding his stomach.

Anika waved a hello at him. Shivaay was too shocked to react and stood there dumbfounded. “So you are ignoring me..?” Anika asked laughing from inside seeing his shocked face. He was gaping at her like anything, eyes opened wide as a eagle, holding his stomach from one hand while his body on the floor. She thought there could not be a more perfect moment than this and she took out her cell and clicked a photo of him.

She gave him a hand to get up and he sat beside her on the couch. “Won’t you speak something today or are you having a fast kind of something for a better life partner..” Anika giggled to herself. “Does our wishes come true if we ask something seeing a shooting star ?” Shivaay asked his first question. He was still not believing that Anika was actually there. “What ? Ohh Shooting star, I don’t know but people say.” Replied Anika.

Shivaay’s POV
And oh my god, Anika is there in front of me, I can’t believe she is for real, my life sitting on the couch looking beautiful as ever in that same blue dress. Who said that we fall in love once ? I am here toh falling in love again and again. I instructed her to stand up. “Why ?” The question came from her. “Because I am saying.” I maintained a strict tone. To my surprise she stood up, my scaredy girl !! “Statue” I told her. She obliged like a small child.

She stood there standing perfectly. I checked her out from top to bottom, “Beautiful” I murmured. Then I brought my hand near her hairs, scooped a little and smelled it, yeah it was the same jasmine smell that I love. And then I instantly hugged her not able to resist more. She reciprocated.
End of Shivaay’s POV.

Shivaay went where his cell was kept and changed the song to Raabta, another heart stealing song.

Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye
Tera Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara Maanu
Mujhko Banaya Tere Jaise Hi Kisi Ke Liye 

“Shaitan Chuhiya, I missed you” Shivaay managed to say looking straight into her eyes. “Me t..what Shaitan Chuhiya, where is she ?” Anika instantly jumped on the bed. Shivaay laughed seeing his situation, he thought if she hates mouse this much, then what will happen when she will come to know that it’s her name only..

“Actually, this is your pet name ! A revenge” Shivaay smiled. “What ?” Anika screamed. “No really, I like it very much.” Shivaay tried to make her understand. “But I don’t, Billu ji” Anika said protesting. “Take it in your habit” he said while imaging his whole with her. He pulled her Cheeks, “Billu ji, don’t do it na..” She pleaded this time and tried to use Rudra’s puppy eyes trick.

Shivaay adored her more. He moved forward towards her in her gaze and then he sneezed “Achuu….” Luckily anika managed to escape and he earned a scolding from her. “Actually I forgot to take the medicines.” Shivaay spoke.”Saare romance ki oh my Maata kar di es sneeze ne…” Thought Shivaay as he gulped the medicine, this time only one.

Mujhko Banaya Tere Jaise Hi Kisi Ke Liye
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta 
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta 
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata 
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Tu Humsafar Hai, Phir Kya Fikar Hai
Jeene Ki Wajah Hi Yahi Marna Issi Ke Liye 

“Woh I forgot to ask why have you came here, you were toh out na..” Shivaay spoke softly while making her sit comfortably in the bed. “Actually I I have to got to Goa only and I didn’t knew about this thing..” Anika told. “Its fine, I mean its super fine, you will also be there we will have lots of fun, but how come you came to my room ?”
“I came here in search of the person who was the boss and asking his manager to move me out of my room. ” Anika said as a matter of fact. “Well I only said that” Shivaay said now getting everything clearly. “Anika, you can fight with anyone na..” He said admiring her. “Any doubt” She smiled.

“Dadi you can take the room, I will manage.” Anika said to Dadi, she got the whole matter and didn’t want Dadi to duffer at this age, her comfort should be the priority. “But beta, where will you find another hotel, its quiet late, you can stay with Billu if you want.” Dadi said feeling sad for her. “But…” Anika once again wanted to keep her point of view. “No ifs and buts, you will” and Dadi waved good night to her. Shivaay’s heart screamed in happiness. While going Dadi did a thumbs up to Rudra.

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Heya cuties !! I am back again with another one, hopefully this time a little early.
This part is dedicated to Somya aka Rutuja, one of my best friends. A very happy birthday sweetie !! Love you to the moon and back.
Also the story is gonna last only a few chapters so put up your views everyone, silent readers too.
And Raabta is my favorite song, now also, so thought to include.
Thank you for reading❤

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    1. navz on June 17, 2017 5:30 pm

      Again jerry…u r making me type same words…its super duper cute part.
      Shivay….kitna cute ladka hei yeh…haayee.
      Anika aur billuji..ek ssath ..puri raat…??what a super offer for shivaay.

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:07 pm

        Hey Navz, thank you so much !
        Shivaay, yes he is the cutest of all?
        I know Shivaay happiness in just growing double the times each passing second, you wait for the next part, I will try making it interesting too <3

    2. Debdutta on June 17, 2017 5:32 pm

      Awesome. Waiting for the next part.

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thank you Debdutta !
        Will try posting soon 🙂

    3. ruksy on June 17, 2017 5:39 pm

      ⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘ loved the update. Totally amazing

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:09 pm

        Thank you so much Ruksy !
        Happy that you liked the update ?

    4. aryaraju on June 17, 2017 5:43 pm

      It’s so beautiful.. Loved it.. Waiting for the next ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:10 pm

        Thank you tons Arya !
        Will try posting soon <3

    5. Ahaana on June 17, 2017 5:53 pm

      Awww.. such an awesome part cutieee?

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:11 pm

        Ahaan di, thank you so much. Your comment always summons the energy inside me?

    6. Niriha on June 17, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awesome????lovely update
      Waiting for next

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:12 pm

        Thank you Niriha di !
        Will try posting soonish <3

    7. mehakchalag on June 17, 2017 6:22 pm

      Amazing part.Loved it.Billuji and shaitani chuiya is best nickname for them bcoz they always fight like tom and jerry.Statue and shivaay checking her remember your post image scene tadna lesson.Raabta song i loved it too.Excited for next part.Hum tum ek kamre main band ho aur chabi koh jaye.Shivaay is very excited.Waiting for next.

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:17 pm

        Mehak, thank you so much !
        And you are absolutely correct, they always fight, but lobe increase with it na..??
        Ohh, am happy that this update refreshed an old memory of ishqbaaz, truly that was such a awesome scene !
        Will try to post soon sweetie ?
        Okay, so a same pinch, its an awesome song, I believe..
        Yeah Shivaay is, don’t know what will happen next..love yaa <3

    8. Ashwinee on June 17, 2017 6:23 pm

      hey Jerry , you know without seeing the shooting star only my wish of reading your update got fulfilled (though i have not seen in real) . thank you sooo much . coming to the update , SSO is seriously dumb that he couldnt recognize(realize) anika standing there . lol. and dadi+rudy combo seriously nailed it. vaise shaitan chuhiya anika nahi tum ho !!!!!!!!! kahaan se aathi hain aise imagination . all the while i was silently laughing to my heart content

      . and the last two sentences why did you even mention it :-(.

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 1:22 pm

        Hey Ashwinee di !
        Awww, that’s so sweet of you?, I am happy that you love reading my ff didi..
        You don’t need to thank me but still the pleasure is all mine *bowing head*?
        Shivaay is na thinking that he hallucinated her that’s why he kept thinking that she will be his dream, zada side affect ho gaye?
        Rudi !! Combo, thanks again..
        Ohh, I am naughty, well yes I am *hiding my face with my palms*, okay so about these imaginations, I am a insomniac and I don’t sleep early *thou I know I should*?, so I keep thinking to what to add new so you all will love it !!
        And the last two sentences.. Means..? Could not understand what you said ?
        Love yaa <3

      • Ashwinee on June 18, 2017 3:15 pm

        Hey Jerry, what will I do it you end this ff ?. I will be one among them, who will definitely miss this ff to the core . Love you loads ??

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:05 pm

        Ashwinee di, I will try to continue till more chapters, don’t be sad..
        And if I end this one, I will definitely come back with a new ff?

    9. VHM on June 17, 2017 6:30 pm

      aweeee..choooooooooo cutee……….it’s so beautiful..i am just imaginating or rather hallucinating about Shivika …superr Vedika…will have to wait for the next episode …

      and one more thing:

      MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY Somya aka Rutuja …WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY….

      Vedika i hope your friend reads this else convey wishes to her from my side!!!

      • Rutuja on June 17, 2017 7:05 pm

        Hey..thank you so soo muchh..VHM?

      • VHM on June 17, 2017 7:40 pm

        Always my pleasure…enjoy your day to fullest and may you have many wonderful years of health , happiness, prosperity and wealth….si happy that you got so many good friends here…keep smiling

      • Rutuja on June 17, 2017 8:40 pm

        Thank you soo much..VHM
        Yeh..im so lucky to have frnds like jerry nd neha dii..thanks alott once again..?

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 2:29 pm

        ??

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 2:28 pm

        Hey Harika di.
        Thank you so much !
        I am happy that you loved this chapter too?
        Yeah, I will try to post the next chapter soon.
        Yeah, she replied?
        Thanks again <3

    10. shivika4eva on June 17, 2017 6:31 pm

      Wow jerry, billuji ka tickling ka revenge to banta hai??

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 2:30 pm

        Thank you so much Shivika !
        Yes, you are correct, tickling revenge should be there..<3

    11. Sofiya. S. on June 17, 2017 6:35 pm

      Awesome update jerry ??….
      The tickling part was too cute ????…
      Loved it ??…

      Nooooooooo…..
      You are going to wrap up the ff in few parts…. Are you kidding?!!…
      Don’t do this yaar….
      I really love your ff…
      My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day is one of my favourite ff ?…
      I eagerly wait for it everyday….
      Please dear jerry ?☺( making puppy face)…

      Post soon ❤
      Lots of love to you ?…

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 2:33 pm

        Heyoo Sophia !
        Thank you so much dear, I am happy that you loved the tickling part..
        ???
        Hey that’s a very big compliment that you love this ff sweetie, but sorry to disappoint you, I think its not gonna last long but I will try to extent as Mich as required, okay, really sorry..
        Will try to post soon.
        Love yaa <3

    12. Nila on June 17, 2017 6:38 pm

      Awww???? amazing vedu??? OMM going to end ??? I love the way annika tickled shivaay omg I too want to witness that shivaay’s cute smile???? same colour wow??raabta?I donno which movie? Sorry I am not so much updated?oh bete ki ?annika aur billu ek kamre me ?dadi and Rudy ?????? kya
      plan!!!? so sweet dadi & Rudy and I am eagerly waiting for next one

      • Jerry_36 on June 18, 2017 10:16 pm

        Nila di, thank you so much !
        Yup, it is but I will try to make it interesting till the remaining chapters?
        Shivaay’s cute smile, well I wish that you this wish will get fulfilled, okay..
        Yess, colour coordinated.
        Raabta is of the movie : Agent Vinod, do listen this song, its heart throbbing?
        Yup the duo is up to something, you will find it soonish.
        Will try posting soon. Love yaa <3

    13. Rutuja on June 17, 2017 7:12 pm

      Thank you so muchh..jerry for such an amazing update..i jus loved it..u nd neha di jus made my day..love uh both alottt..cant express how lucky im feeling..to hav frnds like uh in my lyf..”bff’s foreva”in very small fraction of tym our bond become so stronger..hope it remains forever..love uh too..❤??

      • Zaveesha on June 17, 2017 8:03 pm

        A very happy birthday to u dear..always be happy nd keep smiling..

      • Rutuja on June 17, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thank you so much zaveesha..?

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:47 pm

        You don’t need to thank me Somya, it was your day and your two friends thought to make it special.
        I am really happy that you liked the update and also that you comment?
        Yes and our bond will be much stronger in the coming days dearie.
        Love you loads bff <3

    14. Shivika on June 17, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awesome….Loved it….
      Anika tickling Shivaay & Shivaay thinking it to be his hallucination…..Too cute….
      Shivika r adorable…
      Anika staying in Shivaay’s room seems interesting….
      Post Soon… 🙂

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you Shivika !
        I am happy that you liked the update.
        Yup, Shivaay thought he was hallucinating her?
        Hmm, they are..
        Well I won’t destroy your interest and try to post the next chapter soonish <3

    15. Payal Sahoo on June 17, 2017 7:42 pm

      It’s so cute…lyk d bestest …post ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:52 pm

        Paayal, thank you so much dear !
        Really appreciate that?
        Will try to post soon <3

    16. pooja26 on June 17, 2017 8:01 pm

      haha these both r just couple goals 😉 😉 😉
      amazing chappy……
      loved the teasing & tickling 😉 😉
      fantastic…….
      good u post soon….. otherwise m on d way to eat u jerrryyyy !!!!!!! 😉 😉 hahahaha 😉
      post nxt asap…..
      tc… baby……

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:55 pm

        Heyoo Tom !
        Thank you so much? Glad that you loved the teasing and tickling sessions..
        Ohh, sure I will post soon Tommy?
        Lolzzz !!??
        Take care you too.
        Thanks again and I will keep your warning in mind <3

    17. Zaveesha on June 17, 2017 8:05 pm

      The episode was too good…soo cute..loved it..

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:56 pm

        Thank you so much Zaveesha !
        I am happy that you loved the chapter bestie <3

    18. anagha on June 17, 2017 8:12 pm

      Raabata is my personal favorite tooo.!!. And I love youuuuuuuu and this awsum ff !!. I can’t imagine the mere thought of you ending this ff !!. Awsum chapter Jerry…nahhh. vedika !! Amazing writer , awsum bestie iv got over here..my chotu sis!!. I envy your writings. Loved it to the core !! Love ya !!

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 2:59 pm

        Anagha, thank you so much dear?
        That’s good, same pinch !!
        Love you too sista and your awesomeness filled words..
        I will try to bear it for more chapters, okay na..
        Thanks again?
        Yess, and you are also an amazing bari behna, always supporting me??
        Bestie !!! Love yaa❤❤❤❤

    19. Dhar on June 17, 2017 8:27 pm

      As sweet as Malai kulfiii , cuteness overloaded ?????????plzzzzz plzz do post the next update ASAP

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 4:25 pm

        Awww, such a sweet comment.
        Thank you so much Dhar !
        I am happy that you liked it and will surely try to post the next one soon <3

    20. Sanskriti120 on June 17, 2017 8:28 pm

      Heyo jerry….
      Arrey waahhh!!! Shivaay ne chowka maar dia… Anika and shivaay in one room closed…
      I find Ur’s better than mine… You know in ur ff they will be innone room in mine from past three episodes they are still in the open biggggg wala stadium… They aren’t getting out????????
      Jokes apart…..
      But seeing shivaay’s situation my joking side is again arising… He is still thinking anika is just his imagination???….
      Aankein kholo Aur dekhoooo anika in front of u?.
      The epi was just fantabulous(new word in my dictionary?)
      Post soon.
      Love❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 5:11 pm

        Hello Kriti !!
        Thank you so much sweetie ❤, yeah Shivaay is really excited.
        No, its not that but still that are in a big stadium and ussi mein app sab kuch kara do…all his wishes???
        Yeah Shivaay is still not out of his dreaming situation !!
        He couldn’t still as with open eyes also he hallucinate her, like literally act as a love struck teenager?
        Thanks again for the new awesome word !!
        Will try yo post soonish !
        Love yaa <3

    21. alekhika20 on June 17, 2017 9:02 pm

      Superb update

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thank you dearest Alekhika <3

    22. sumitha on June 17, 2017 9:17 pm

      As always it’s amazing ….love it

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 5:15 pm

        Thank you so much Sumitha, where had you gone earlier, we were all angry on you, glad that you are back but, thanks sweetie <3

      • sumitha on June 19, 2017 9:15 pm

        Hey don’t angry ….hw can I leave tu if I leave after ur ff???

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 9:57 pm

        Okay dont do it the next time?
        BTW awesome dp..❤

    23. Mrunal on June 17, 2017 9:46 pm

      Loved it yaaar di it’s amazinggg

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 5:16 pm

        A new reader ! thank you ❤
        Really happy that you loved the update.

    24. fati on June 17, 2017 11:05 pm

      OMG Jerry… That’s so cute?
      And that becharay billuji, a love struck teenager❤? feels he’s hallucinating?
      And he had given perfect name to Anika “Shaitaan Chuiya” ? He’s the cute billuji while she’s the chuiya? the jodi of tom & jerry❤
      And Dadi and Ru.. ?
      The update is sooper dooper awesome?

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 7:36 pm

        Hey Fati, thank you so much !
        Yes, seriously you are correct, the perfect teem : love struck teenager?
        Thanks again?
        Tom and Jerry, suits them nice. Good that you understood the hidden meaning behind the names?
        Thankuuu <3

    25. Pui on June 18, 2017 12:45 am

      Awsm Jerry! ! Loved it !

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 7:43 pm

        Thank you so much Pui ! Means a lot <3

    26. Banita on June 18, 2017 1:53 am

      Fabulous epi jerry….. U nailed it…

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank you Banita !
        Glad that you liked it?

    27. Abbi on June 18, 2017 6:06 am

      JERRY! Can I be you Tom? Pleaseeee…
      You wrote it off the wall, just loved it. I’m fan of yours, not only of your storyline but also of your comments. ?
      I’m having glimpse of upcoming Shivika’s conversation, abhi se.
      Update this sooner, love. ❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 7:47 pm

        Hey Abbi, thank you so much darling !
        Well, of course you can be my tom, one is already there #pooja di?
        I am so happy that you loved it..
        Comments ! In the sense the way readers comment or the way author comments..?
        You keep having guesses, till then take care ! Will post soon.
        Love yaa <3

    28. Neha-17 on June 18, 2017 6:07 am

      Heyy #choti writer….wow..I felt like reading a book..two chapters together double maza
      Shivaay hallucinating Anika was the best..the ticking haha..
      ..How can anyone resist tickling?
      Super team by Dadi and Rudra- Shivika in a room double funn
      Only, few episodes left, hey don’t do that yaar….
      Every time you update, I wanna know little more story, I get excited for that.
      Rabta songggg myyy favvv tooo…you brought a smile on my face!
      Reamarkable update, amazing as always!
      Love ya !!??

      • Jerry_36 on June 19, 2017 10:03 pm

        Hey Neha di.
        Thank you shoo much ! And I really hope that you enjoyed both the chapters?
        Hallucinating and Tickling, thanka again.
        Yeah, when my brothers do this to me, believe me, I laugh like a maniac..
        Yess, I will try to make it interesting.
        I will not try to end it soon and really delighted that you love my updates?
        Awww, my pleasure dearie !!
        Thanks again and again for this awesome comment..
        Love you too <3

    29. gayathri.visu on June 18, 2017 7:01 am

      Wonderful dear… I really enjoyed it! Eagerly waiting for next part dear. Sorry Jerry, this time no long comment. I m busy with my relatives.

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 12:42 pm

        Thank you very much Gayathri di !
        Am happy that you liked it. Will try to post soon. It’s perfectly fine di, I am happy that you spared your time to write a few words of appreciation <3

    30. thedreamsoul on June 18, 2017 9:44 am

      Hi cutie pie , the whole chapter was awesome and amazing as usual ! Completely loved it . The first part was so fun like Shivaye thinks it is his imagination ! Dadi is the best and yeah now they are gonna sleep in one room , wow ! No matter who it is Anika will always fight and everything was so perfect . Jerry ,you are doing a great job and update asap !
      Love you lots , take care ???

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 12:47 pm

        Hello Sana !
        Thank you so much for commenting ! I am really delighted that you loved the chapter.
        Yes, Shivaay thought it was his imagination.
        Yess, I will try to continue your interest in the next chapter too.
        Yeah Anika : the Jhansi ki Rani?
        Thanks again sweetie?
        I have started writing the next chapter, will update soonish.
        Love yaa too. Take care <3

    31. Tanz on June 18, 2017 9:58 am

      As you said, this part was definitely fun-filled….loved it. Shivaay thought he was hallucinating again ???? and then Annika tickled him-??and I loved how Shivaay examined her if she was real or not and then the magical hug….
      And ofcourse if he sneezes in front of her, scolding is a must….. Daadi and Rudra are the jodi-makers in OM , I believe.
      I’m waiting for the night- stay…
      PS: I too love Raabta❤

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 12:53 pm

        Hey Tanz.
        Thank you so much ! I am really glad that you loved this chapter. Yess, today’s charm was hallucinating and tickling !
        Ohh I am glad that you loved the way Shivaay scooped his hair to smell the jasmine scent? and of course the hug part??
        Trues that, what else can be expected from Anika, yesterday she hit the auto vala in real ishqbaaz !!??
        You wait, till I update *good rhyme*
        And that’s super cool. Love yaa <3

    32. kanfi on June 18, 2017 11:38 am

      Hey jerry,’,,
      From where u got this word shaitan chuhiya….
      Its so adorable,,,,,i was laughing whenever i was reading that word….
      Whole part was well wrttn,..
      Phr se is ….achuuuuuu….ne romance ki OMM kr di….ha ha ha….lived this line…..
      Now both are in same room….
      Ahem ahem..
      Lets see what happen…
      Post soon

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:00 pm

        Hello Kanfi, thank you so much dear for commenting !
        Ohh well, I thought a lot about the nickname thing and at last settled with this one, glad that it made you laugh.
        Thanks again sweetie?
        And I am super happy that you loved the line…
        Yess, ahem ahem let’s see what’s gonna happen. Will try to post soon.
        Love yaa <3

    33. Nita D on June 18, 2017 1:37 pm

      Once again an awesome episode Jerry…..I love these sweet nothings that u put in every episode…..!

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:07 pm

        Thank you so much Nita. Really glad that you liked it. Thankuuu for the compliment di ❤

    34. CrazygirlS.P on June 18, 2017 2:36 pm

      Fantastic dear, sorry for the late comment??

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:09 pm

        Thank you tons dear !?
        And its absolutely fine, I know you have exams, study well, okay.
        Love yaa <3

      • CrazygirlS.P on June 20, 2017 1:36 pm

        Love you too?? and I promise that I will study well✋?

      • Jerry_36 on June 21, 2017 12:47 am

        ❤️❤️

    35. Ankita27 on June 18, 2017 3:19 pm

      Amazing update..

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thank you loads Ankita for commenting?

    36. Madhuani on June 18, 2017 5:13 pm

      It’s amazing…
      I was imagining shivaay laughing being tickled n his position in which anika clicked a photo of him??
      Update next soon dear.

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:13 pm

        Hey Madhu, thank you so much !
        Ohh well I believe your imagination was hilarious, isn’t it ?
        Will try to update soonish.
        Love yaa <3

    37. Mrunal on June 18, 2017 7:19 pm

      ??????
      another awesome episode….
      whenever i read ur ff… a cute smile spreads on my lips… i just imagined shivaay ignoring annika thinking it’s hallucination and annika tickling him..????

      shivika’s dress colour coordinated…??
      and that song playing on his phone…???

      annika ka reaction on shaitan chuhiya…???
      aaj kal rudy ki trick kam nahi karti…???

      shivaay ki toh lottery lag gayi… annika and shivaay in one room… dadi & rudy r best….

      just loved the episode to the core…
      ??????????????

      love u dear…??

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:19 pm

        Hey Mrunal di !!
        Thank you so much, so happy to see your comment. And that’s a big achievement for me that my ff is spreading a smile every where, may it never leave your face?
        Yup, may be its a coincidence or destiny’s play….and yeah that song is mahh favorite too.
        Shaitaan Chuhiya !!??, glad that you liked it..and yess, rudra ki trick usi par kaam karti hai !!
        Dadi and Rudra, literally love them yaar !
        Thankuu so much for an awesome comment??
        Love yaa too <3

    38. Adia on June 19, 2017 5:27 am

      Love your Fan fictions they are on fleek expesialy the Shivika romance parts I bow to you, you have used such describing words also loved the Rudy boy scenes I am just waiting for the next FF.Keep on the good work!!!

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:24 pm

        Hey Adia !!
        Thank you so much dear for commenting. I am overjoyed that you love my fan fictions. Ohh thankuuu so much, you bowing to me, awww such a sweet gesture??
        I am happy that you loved Rudy Boy Scenes and I will give you more in the next chapter, pinky promise.
        I will try to post soon the next chapter and about the next ff I will start when I will get time. Thanks again.
        Love yaa <3

    39. Diyaa on June 19, 2017 7:02 am

      That was a beautiful episode Jerry. So many lovely lines! ” Who says we fall in love only once. I fell in love with her all over again.” That was wow! And Raabta is my absolute favorite ever since I heard it for the first time. No other song gas replaced its position except maybe the siyaah raatein version of Raabta. So I loved it that you included this song. Keep on rocking with your awesome writing ?

      • Diyaa on June 19, 2017 7:03 am

        *Has ?

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:30 pm

        It’s okay 🙂

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:29 pm

        Hey Diyaa di !
        You don’t know how happy I am to receive a comment by you, getting a great feeling.
        A big fan of your works, so a request try updating soon…
        And I am really happy that you liked the update. And that line thankuuuuuuu to the infinity, overjoyed that you loved that line?
        Raabta, well mine favorite too, hi five..
        I am glad that you liked it. And your last line made my day, surely I will??

    40. nikita_jai29 on June 19, 2017 12:34 pm

      It is awesome and lovely dear… Sorry I am late…

      • Jerry_36 on June 20, 2017 1:31 pm

        Thank you Nikita di. Gals that you liked it. And its okay??

    41. Zainab on June 24, 2017 9:01 pm

      Ek dum MOHABBAT update tha!

      • Jerry_36 on June 25, 2017 11:28 am

        Thank you so much dear !
        Glad that you love it?

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