A desire of star to get moon (LAST EPISODE) ”ek duje ke vaaste”

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Hey guyz!!! Ik u all must be suprised seeing last episode with tittle plus u guys are not done reading pre part as well so its ok take ur time… and Yeah its last and final epi of ‘a desire of star to get moon’ i know yesterday i said that i,ll end in 30 epis but things never go like i want…….

So what happend that my friends decided that before our classes start that will be on 15dec i think… lets go out for week or two to enjoy…and if i,m with my frnds i really cant write they will never let me..and i dont wana pause this again so will make this last one sorryyyyy…… And yeah this is gona be hell long as i hv to complete my story in one epi and then a thanku note so read when u hv enough time than let me know ur veiws…take ur time no need to hurry…. So here i begin….

Last episode…..

Suman,s pov

ahhhh!!! It has been around two weeks that we ‘sharvan and i’ hv not spent time together…. There was lot of work of shanaya and vihaans wedding yeah they got married two days ago… Finally they are together forever now and enjoying their time in paris…..and now its time for other couple to unite that is……. “tring tring” here my phone rang….


”hello! Suman mam! All preps are done as u said..still U can check if u want to”

”ahh!! No i,ll reach there at 9pm sharp…hope i,ll get everything perfect”

”for sure!!”

i cutted the call and breathe out!!!…. And made an other call…

“hey sharvan wasup!”

and from other side his husky voice reached at my ear..

” nothing much.. was Thinking about u” and i could hear his giggle..

“ahhhhh!!! Good than meet me tonight at 9pm”

”i,m soo sorry i cant!! i hv an imp meeting at that time”

” idk anything! U r coming and thats it!”

”ok baba! But where???”

”will text u”


ok sumo show time now….today i,ll confess my feelings to sharvan….


at night,,,,

i stepped in venue its a pretty lawn and its decorations are just perfect as i wanted and my looks also look perfect like i,m wearing a pink gown that is falling on ground from back with full sleeves.and my hairs being set in messy bun.but that high heels..uhhhhh!! I,m not habitual of high heels but that mr tall sharvan! What i hv to say him today, for that i hv to look directly into his eyes and for that i need heels offcourse he has got great height… Ok i had cruse his height enough now lets move on to look at preparations…but as i stepped damn!!!!! This gown came beneath my heel and i,m gonna fall for sure..but no suddenly a hand holded my hand and i felt other hand at my shoulder..THANK GOD!! But who it can be?? And as i looked at my side my eyes met with deep brown eyes of him that was showing a care at a moment ” carefull! ”

and somehow i managed to get my balance back and to stand……

There was silence a deep silence and i just looked at him with a smile….

His charm is at peak as always.. That white tee with black blazer go perfect..nd so does his hairs!!! Perfect!!!..
As he stepped towards me i so wanted to step back but no!! This time i just stood looking into his eyes and now those eye are close enough as his hand got a grip on my waist… And my heart is beating fast his that much closness made me nervous…closer..more closer and my eyes got closed as i could scense his warm breath at my ear and then his voice” do u want to kill me today.. U r looking beautifull!!!” saying this he get apart at once and move on to look at preparations ”and this all is wowww!!” he exclaimed with joy…
And i took a deep breath and as again i took a step towards him my gown mess with heels… ‘y r u being so dumb today sumo!’ i accused myself….and got his cool gesture…. He came back to me and knee down taking off my sandals.and stand back to take off his own shoes as well. I could not make out what he did.”listen we are not walking on thorns..if u r not comfortable we will walk like this” he said and that played a wide smile over face…”sharvan!! But now how will i reach till u..y r u so tall” i teased him..
“ahh that thing!! I hv a better way”as he said and i asked ”and what is that way”
and in respond he lifted me up my arms wrapped over his neck ”now okay?”.. I didnot got anything to say but ”I LOVE U” as those words reach at his ears a smooth melody filled the air as i hv planned and there start a snowfall with rose petals..he looked at the change of environment He was shock at first as it was sudden but then his face reflected never ending happiness ”I LOVE U TOO” he said and landed me on his feet and touched his forehead with mine….
That moment was of pure bliss..we confessed our feelings.as every relationship demands confession but in ours confession was not nessecity but a formality coz when ur heart and souls are connected these things are not of that much of importance…..
That moment we both wanted to stay like that in embrace of each other..but to stay in that position for whole night would be awkawrd..no?.. so we got apart…. And as he holded my hand we move towrds the table that was hidden in white curtains as we got into those curtain there was not that much light as i wanted but the smooth light of candels only……..
Things are going as i wanted just perfectly…we had a dinner together and talked about lot of things…. But then he excused himself and went out of that dinning area…and as soon as i heard his guitar tones i also went out and there he is standing with guitar…..his voice was the only need of time…and he started..

Mn baarish ho jaaunga
Tum baadal ho jaaogi
Dekh lena.. dekh lena.

He walked towards me
and knee down before me

Itna tumko chaahunga
Tum paagal ho jaaogi
Dekh lena.. dekh lena..

On standing again he holded my hand and placed a kiss

Kehta hai sunn, yeh dhoop kinara
Tera hua, main saara ka saara

his other hand wrapped around my waist and i kept my hand other hand at his shoulder..and danced slowly

Dekh lena, tere honthon pe hamesha
Main hansta hi rahunga dekh lena.. Dekh lena..

He spinned me and again pull close to him

bheegi jo teri aankhen
Aankhon se main bahunga dekh lena..

I looked into his eyes there was not a certainity but a hope that there will be a future full of happiness and love

Hmm.. Dil toh hai har seene mein
Hai pyaar lekin mujhme
Sabse zyada dekh lena Mmm..apni lakeeron mein
Main likh lungi khud hi tumko
Hai mera vaada dekh lena

i moved and as he pulled me my back falled at his chest..and he lifted me on his palms

Kehta hai sunn, yeh dhoop kinara
Tera hua, main saara ka saara
Dekh lena tere honthon pe hamesha
Main hansta hi rahunga dekh lena… Dekh lena..

My head is resting at his shoulder and we closed our eyes to feel that moment..the moment where we hv hold eachother close enough.

bheegi jo teri aankhen
Aankhon se main bahunga dekh lena…

2 years later

Sharvan,s pov..
Sky looks so beautiful in nights those stars that moon……moon (her face flashes before him) she was also like a moon, bright moon and i,m so called star of the age but world dont know that i hv got my shine from her…like star desire for moon to get shine… It was also my desire to get her…but that desire………….
From here stars look so close to each other and bright but if one will look at them from close they are alone at their place miles apart from others… I,m also like that i appear as a celeb surrounded by million peoples who love me but if one will look at me from close they will get to know how much lonely i,m without her……
I moved my eyes from sky to ground where traffic is moving, everyone is busy in themselve that make me realize that life never stops it keeps moving on….
As I turned back into my room from balcony every wall of my room hang our pics.. There are also pics of that night when our soles unite and i hold her closest to me..but that night only she left me as well…our story was just perfect but the perfect stories have not an perfect ending….


as sharman get out of venue..sumo insisted for a walk..so they left the car and start walking…
On their way roads were completely empty…that moment was itself beautiful without any talks there was silence enough to play its magic…..but suddenly sumo pulled sharvan she wrapped her arms over his neck and placed her lips over his (sorry.if anyone is not comfortable with this) both were in that position only lost in each other in a mid road when car hits them..and they fall apart from each other..both are drenched in blood..perhaps taking their last breathes and all they want is to hold hand of eachother..but cant help it and at last their souls leaves their bodies and unite forever……

Flash back ends

sharvan,s pov continues
i wish i also had not survive..what i do now with this life.. I,m a body without soul..as that day my soul left my body.but a single thought is yet enough for me…. That is the world in which i exist she is far away from me but the world that exist in me that is built up of my thoughts and dreams ”SHE IS ALIVE TILL I,M ALIVE”


ok so here it ended i hope that it was upto expectation and u guyzz are satisify with ending but if not than i,m really sorry but this story was never meant to hv a perfect ending……… And now a big thankuuuuuuuuu to all of u my writings are not that much good but yet i try my best to put some charm in it and give u all some good stuff to read and offcourse u guys has always appreciated….that means alotttttttttttttt…. Thanku every silent reader that u guyzz take out time to read this and thanku to those who keep commenting or dm me their veiws to support me……..
And yeah i wana thanku all for another thing as well if i hv not share my results with u all than telling now that i hv passed my entrance being in top 5! see ur prayers and wishes played a great part sooooo thanku all for all the wishes i,m blessed to hv u all in my life TU has become a part of life now…..ok thats all i hv talked alot so its bye from pari just as a so called writer for some time i might not write any ff but os/ts for sure if i feel to write something but i,ll be here only to read and comment on ur posts….coz these days i enjoy reading alot morever u guyzzz can suggest me some good books recently i read fault in our stars and that was beautiful story… suggest me more if u can coz before i take up my heavy medical books i wana read some good stories…….

Ok enough of my blabbering

take care all

and once again thanku all

loads of love

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  1. Hey ! It was awesome,cute,and also emotional..
    I just loved it!!!!

    1. _pari_alisha

      Awwww thanku soooo muchhh!!!

  2. Nikita

    Aww Alisshaaaaaadii!
    Suchh an adorable confession…
    I’m gonna miss this ff so much, best one everr!
    That did not have an perfect ending, it’s fine.. It’s perfect until or unless LOVE does not die…
    You’re a great writer di, no one can deny it..
    Vihaan-Shanaya-Shravan-Suman, happy people… I seriously loved it di, you’re amazingg…
    You made me cry!
    See I’m in a pool of tears right now!
    Very beautiful.
    That thank you note stole my heart!
    Best part of this ff:
    Shravan’s maturity, Sumo’s childishness, Shanaya’s fashionista look, Vihaan’s friendship with Sumo.. That is overall: the best part about this ff is EVERYTHING.
    You make the simplest scenes adorablee and seamlessly beautiful! That’s a pure writer!
    Dekh Lenaa <33 my current addiction! Their dance, romance!
    Di you're amaaazinggg
    Please come back soon, I'm gonnaa miss youu!!
    Write more OS/TSs/FFs..
    I lovvee youuuu !!!
    Loads of love,

    1. _pari_alisha

      Awwwwww nik!!!!! Stop making me blush with ur every single word thankuuuuu soooo much u r a sweetheart……

      Thankuuu soo much such a overwhelming appreciation lov u loads…. And dekh lena is also my current addition ass well hi5! and no need to miss me i,ll be here commenting on ur posts so start soon okkkk

      lov u loads take care

  3. Diya

    Such a wonderful episode !! Loved it very much !! Will really miss this ff ! Come back with another ff di…plz !!
    Love u loads !

    1. _pari_alisha

      Awwww diya thankusoooo much i,ll also miss ur sweet comments…glad u liked it loads of love take care!!!!!

  4. Beas

    Wonderful episode. You wrote sooo beautifully throughout. But the ending was a bit emotional of which I never thought before. But overall it was very good. Will really miss u and ur ff alot. Enjoy ur outing with ur friends and best of luck for exams. Plz come back soon with another beautiful ff like this. Loads of love ❤

    1. _pari_alisha

      Heyyy beas thankuuuuu soooo muchhhhh glad u like it… Wil miss ur cmments and thanku sooo much for wishes dearie!!!!

      Take care love u!

  5. omgg!! di how do you write it this well,
    hats off di…. it was wonderful,
    the last part made me cry and the way you justified the title…. amazing.
    shraman are<3<3<3
    i am feeling bad that this ff's gonna end, but never mind , di…
    love ya…<3, u can try nicholas sparks, books , every book is cool…

    1. _pari_alisha

      Awwww mirra thankuuuuu soooo much for such an overwhelming comment sweetheart lov u loadssss and i,ll also miss ur comments and thanku for suggestion i,ll surely go with it … How is two by two?

  6. it has been hell long since i have commented.. u made me cry.. lovely ff dear. the characters were potrayed so well. pls be back soon wid new ideas. enjoy ur recess wid friends…
    loads of love

    1. _pari_alisha

      Heyyyy deo where were missed u..how r u???….and thankuuuu so much for such a sweet cmment loads of love take care

  7. Prettypreeti

    Ohhh dido u don’t do did.u ended whyy??it was superb I just lived it I was surprise seriously I loved ur story.
    I just liked the song u put.
    It was awesome.
    Last epi u nailed.
    Sumo and shravo awwwww.
    I m mad reading it.
    Mai aapke result PR bhut khush hu.
    SAP aisi tarakiyan krte Raye.
    God always saty with u.
    I m soon keen of ur writing.
    Come back soon.
    Love u

    1. _pari_alisha

      Awwwww preetoooo thankuuuuu soooooo muchhhhhhhh yar glad u liked it :)….

      U r tooo sweet
      and thankuuuu so much for ur wishes love u loads take care!

  8. The confession was sooo cute. Loved that. But then she died ? I literally had tears in my eyes. Loved the episode though.
    I’m gonna miss you and your ff a lot.
    Congratulations for your test. And best of luck for your future.
    Much love. Take care ?

    1. _pari_alisha

      Thanku sooo much zainab for all wishes and i,m so glad u like it….will miss ur sweet comments as well…

      Take care loads of love 🙂

  9. WeirdSister

    Okay…so Alisha..
    First of all..I m so so sorry..coz I m commenting really late..
    But what to do..these exams….!!!!
    I must say I didn’t expect the ending…!
    The confession part was so cuteeee!!!
    U potrayed emotions really well…
    Will miss ur ff a lot..
    But I hope that u stay in touch…!
    Love u loads nd loads…..!!!!!
    Take care..
    Nd may god bless u aid loads of happiness

    1. _pari_alisha

      Hey ws!!!! Its completely fine i can understand stress of exam days so its ok……

      And thanku soooo much for compliments dear lov u loads and offcourse i,ll stay in touch and will keep commenting on ur ff….

      Take care 🙂

  10. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey pari api !!!!! First of all a big big CONGRATIONZZZZZ !!!!!!!! See u completed ur FF nd plus u got admission being in ‘TOP 5’ … thats a great newzzz .. now i want a treat..hehe :p
    Well !!!! abt this episode .. this was MIND BLOWINGGGG … ‘Last Part’ was really a BANGGG … u naillledddd itt … really emotional …. though it was a sad ending bt u portrayed it really nicely .. just loved it ,,
    Whole FF was a BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE .. u dont know how much i liked it ..
    btw enjoy ur trip wid frndzzz … hopefully u’ll comeback with something awwwesome ..
    till then take care
    stay blessed
    stay awwesome
    Allah hafiz

    1. Fatimagulesarfraz

      nd nd SOOORRYYY m again lateee

    2. _pari_alisha

      Thankuuuuuuu fattuuuuuu love u and treat for sure yar to tm karachi aaogi ya mn lahore aaon????? 😀

      or ufaq ko kahiyo tu ko shakal dikha jae kbhi kbhi :p

      and a big thanku for all compliments love u siso and sorry i didnot replied to ur cmnt on pre part so thanku for that as well……, lov u take care loads of love

      ps: r u at any social site fb or twitter?

    3. Fatimagulesarfraz

      Neither i can come there nor u so forget abt that treat .. hahaha y not i will tell her r bettr pull her ears ..
      Nd m on instagram only ..

  11. Ariana

    Here comes the latest comment…..
    girl I read this part 10 mins after it got uploaded but it was 1 am n i had to sleep. Then all busy school stuff so couldn’t manage. N these weekends rn’t even chilling coz ‘ting ting’ exams!! 🙁
    anyways I don’t think justification is required coz u’ll excuse me
    coming to this chap-
    Their confession date was sooooooo cute!!! Looollll Sumo is like me, no space for high heels on life. Nd the way Shravan took off her heels n picked her up <3 <3 <3 I can't stop going awwww
    then finally Sumo ka tata-bye bye! uh really? Well loooonnng ago at ur intro I guessed something like a sad ending coz of the 'star' logic n myth but then as the story kept progressing, I felt like I was proven wrong….but tada!!! Sumo died.
    This whole ff has been such a wonderful journey of not only the characters progessing but also a great build up of our friendship. I'm glad I could come across a great writer, sista (as u r older than me) n ofcourse friend like u.
    U r awesomeeeeeee.. top to bottom all lit. with an extraodinary brain
    I should ignore talking abt ur pure heart coz I guess my words'll b too short n I'll b carried away with stupid emotions (to an add up to Sumo's death!)
    I love u girl… u r sooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet. U always made me feel special tho I'm not but trust me, ur magical powers r HIGH. Thanks for a support like a great frnd n a wonderful ff which just ended. I really can't get over this write up. I loved it from the core of my heart possibly as much as I love u. U deserve being admired till the last inch of 'u'
    stay blessed and happy
    Enjoy ur tour with frnds n keep rocking
    all the best for ur bright colgate white future :p (I'm waiting for Dr. Alisha (or pari))
    Ok this seems like a last letter from me to u, all sad sad, so I'll cheer up
    We'll stay in touch through twitter nd I hope u'll visit this site too
    pls don't vanish coz I don't wannna cry out
    take care honey
    love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    all my best n warm wishes for a better life ahead
    Keep writting like a creative soul
    ps: Hope u find ur Namku someday soon (do let me knw)

    1. _pari_alisha

      Hanjiii now i got y r u late..itna butter collect krne mn time to lagega e na…..aruuuuuu u hv turned me into red tomato now…. But a BIG thanku with a tight hug lov uuuuu……

      And no worries for being late its ok baba and i,m soooo glad u liked it,,,,yeah the ending part was planned from begining…..
      And i,m also sooo blessed to hv u in my life but heyyyy stop putting soooo much butter i,m not that much good…. And whatever i hv told u till now about u so there is no magic in me but in u…. U r an adorable pie….

      Hahahhaha thanku for wishes for colgate white future and about dr alisha i,m also super duper excited but still it will take years….and i,ll surely be here TU is my home yar :p nd twitter for always with u all……..

      Ahhhhhh namkuuu thing no chance for that for years i,m happy dreaming about namik paul…..ok it has become really long.

      So take care and loads of love no need to miss me i,ll be here only 🙂

  12. Rukhsar

    OMG pari it was amazing i m speech less sweety i was on the verge of crying……it was beyond my expectations too great……u know i never understand the title till date but when i started reading it i had a feeling that someone will surely die and when i read the ending i was about to cry but composed myself……u r amazing and so as ur ff…… and i also read the book the fault in our stars it was a great book ok time to go take care and be back soon love u bye

  13. Alina

    Alisha..it wass Soo good ,very nice confession, they way u guys portrayed the confession is much much better Than edkv actual confession..the feel which I get while reading this is beyond anything I loved this to the core.. U wrote soo nicely yr you made me cry in the end..this part was superb -that day our soul left our bodies It was soo emotional scene.. U know what Alisha if someone writes a Happy ending it doesn’t take much time to forget that story whereas sad ending put a remark..its very difficult to forget.. Hats off ?? I have no words to describe how much I loved it..thank you so much for this beautiful, heart touching ff..
    N congrats For ur achievement..May u get everything u want in your life..Ameen
    Love u..

  14. Neeti

    rula diya na mujhe, I am really sorry itna late comment, mai avi dekh rahi hu ki apne ye end kar diya!!!!! di uk it was 1 of my fav ffs, I really mean it, it was my fav ff…..Sumo!!! ooh man!!!!! I really started crying!!! I am glad that this time atleast u didn’t say you will leave us forever!!! the word I hate the most!!! actually the SEntence! uk now I am listening to Banjara song, nd sometimes before Hamari Adhuri Kahani, Ek villain and Hamari Adhuri Kahani both didn;t have perfect ending, u reminded me of these two movies, I am crying, now give me chocolates bcz u made me cry 😛 sry, I jst wanted to change my mood, but I am not able to, I just can’t stop crying, may be people say r8 girls have low mental strength…. I really wish that you come back soon with a ff (ff ha nt os or ts) and congo, itna padhai karna mat ha warna will become pagal and people will call you pagal doctor 😛 !!!! no but ab mujhe do do personal doc mil gaya, ek aha ek Pak mai, mera ilaz free mE karna parega, pehlei bata rahi hu, ha nahi to!!! accha I think nahi likhungi nahi likhungi karke kuch jyada hi likh diya nahi, accha sorry ab jati hu and yeah time mile to mera Ishqbaaz ff padh lijiyega, kuki maine to ab Edkv ff likhna band kar diya hai to Ishqbaaz ff hi padh lijiye ga, https://www.tellyupdates.com/ishqbaaz-night-changed-lives-part-6/ arahi meri latest epi ka link, time mile to padh lena….. ok bye, luv you, have a great life, Allah kare ap mera ilaz free mai kare 😛 aur apko bohot bara bohot bohot bara doc banane ke bad vi hamari yad dilaye rakkhe and hamare touch me rakkhe 😛 and obviously apko sabse bara doc banaye (meri behen mar dalegi mujhe 😛 ) luv u- Neeti

  15. Ruchi

    Hey Pari.…
    A big sorry as m very late…
    Anyways how r u dear??
    wow the confession was so beautifully written…
    confession was so cute…
    nd the heels part was amazing…
    u nailed it…
    didn’t expected the end in this way…
    but it was amazing
    nd i love ur ff…
    hope to see u wid another amazing story soon…
    take care…
    Love u loads…

  16. Ufaaq

    heyyyyyy my deary berra gharaq ho tu walaon ka
    i posted the comment when u poste the last epi mar jaen ye log
    and ya got ur msg hehehe fati tere tu
    han han u can pull my ears
    hehe well theepi was dammmmmmmmnnnnnn ammmmmaaaaaazzzziiiiiiinnnnnng
    di sad end was not expected but u did so it look gud
    ammmmaaaaazzzziiiiing epi
    sorry for delay yar studies back on my head so i hope u understand
    acha love u
    take care

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