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Home»Fan Fiction»Decisions Make Destiny- Part 1
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Decisions Make Destiny- Part 1

VasuBy VasuDecember 31, 202012 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey,hey,hey everyone!

Well I wanted to write a ff and an idea was desperately roaming in my head, so I finalllyyy decided to pen it down. This is my first work so I am not sure if you would like this but it’s probably worth a try.

Now, coming to the story, I would rather like to out rightly start the story without any intro because the characters are almost same & I love to showcase their relation’s shade in the story itself. However if any of you would want to have that I will definitely write it.

I don’t personally like obsessive people..but do let me know if you would like obsessive trait in the story too..

Your support is always needed (Seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!) & suggestions alwayyyysss welcomed:)

PS- Sejal in my story is Mansi Srivastava(the girl playing Ahana in IMMJ2) However u r free to imagine the person playing it.

So here is the first part——————-

                                             ALREADY IMPRESSED? BUT BY WHOM?

In the hall of Riddhima’s house, Time: 2 pm

“Riddhima, I always felt that life has been unjust to me until I met you!! I love u so so so much. I want you to be at my side for the rest of my life, would you marry me Riddhima??”

“Ahh Kabir..I don’t have any problem in marrying you but being honest it’s just because you are such a good friend of mine. You have always supported me in my thick & thin. & I love u too but just as a friend.

Lest there was no need of proposal & these filmy lines because I know you can’t tolerate me for a day, leave your entire life. Aur waise bhi Kabir G shaadi already fix ho chuki h, aap kisi aur duniya mai the kya tab [And nevertheless the wedding has been already fixed..were you in any other world that time], hm..must be at your resident..hell”

K: (dramatically sarcastic)Ohho Riddhimaaa can’t u be a little less humble? & I very well remember

R: Acha? Location?

K: Ur house

R: Dealers?

K: What the

R: I mean, the matchmakers

K: Ahh..Your uncle and my father.

Date fixed- After 1 month, Venue- The Paradise, Time- Wo tabhi dekh lenge[We will see later]

So I suppose my memory test is done. Now your highness, can I get some of your very precious time? I want to tell u a very important thing”

R: Ya..If your flattery part is over then you probably can. Waise strange combo btw

(After seeing his confused face) You and important things..unbelievable..And ya I have agreed to listen just because you are nevertheless going to spit it up even if I ask you not to. So uglo

K: Ohho Riddhimaaaaaaaa…You and your poor timing are..(seeing her raising her eyebrow)forget it..

R: You better do

K: Ah..Ye ladki..huff..Kabir better not argue and just bark I mean tell her..

Riddhima please listen carefully, I know it will be shocking

R: (excited)Are you a gay? Loves someone else? or or You r a criminal? or having any..No I actually wouldn’t be shocked but more than happy to get a nice reason to #break this wedding

K: Riddhima why you are hell-bent to break the marriage..& as for all this crap Stop it yr!!

S: Why would my bff stop? She is unstoppable(Sejal comes downstairs laughing)

K: Han yahan bas isi ki kami thi aur mere sir pe nachne ke liye[Ya now only she was left to dance on my head]

Speaks in 1 breath-

I am not a PT teacher. I am a CBI Officer. I could not tell you my identity before because I was on an undercover mission. I didn’t deliberately lied to you..I am so sorry guys..I know it will be shockinn..

Interrupted

S: (giggling)Who said it is shocking..btw mujhe ni pta tha ki CBI ki building mai jhadu pocha lagane wale bhi khud ko CBI Officers bolte hain [I didn’t knew that cleaners of the CBI Buildings also refer themselves as CBI Officers]

R: Hm ya..I am impressed by CBI that they are so nice to let people do that

K: Would you guys please turn serious for a minute? I beg you..please..

R: Oh..Finally..So as a matter of fact we have known your identity since the start. Now you don’t need to put pressure on your tiny mind..I will make it easy for you. After all itne saare ehsaano mai ek ehsaan toh m tujhpe aur kar hi sakti hun [ You owe me hundreds of favours, another favour won’t make much difference]

So Mr. Kabir the day we had became friends I acquired all information about you from my sources, none of your business to know who they are. Now don’t ask me about trust n all..Looks can deceive, even talks can be manipulative,  so don’t blindtrust people you don’t know well..Oh what a line(pats herself)

and by the way trust is not given it is earned..But I had forgiven you considering it was your duty’s call. Must say CBI has such an incompetent officer. When I found about your identity then anybody else can(chuckles). Well it’s okay I would help you with that if you want. Ab kuch bolo[Now speak up something]

Kabir was speechless, contemplating what just happened.

S: Arre Riddhima, ise chodo[Ignore him]..Today you have to be at the Cruise Party at 4 pm. You know na we have to plan a party..So meet u there girl, have loads of work to do. Bye

After Sejal was gone (Perhaps Kabir was waiting for Sejal to go)

K: Riddhima, the CBI Team is constantly trying to catch a mafia businessman but are unable to do say because he is very sharp and leaves no clues behind. Even a week before, after our wedding had finalised, I was trying to follow him but he successfully managed to knock me down. It took me a week to recover.

Flashback shows Vansh-Kabir fight when Vansh leaves after igniting fire around Kabir. His colleague Mishra was able to track him & got him bandaged.

Riddhima as a CBI officer I have to ask u something.

R: (Realising the seriousness of the situation) What is it Kabir?

K: Can you enter the world of Vansh Raisinghania to defeat him? His kingdom is build on the lives of so many innocents. Will you bring justice to those souls?

Just make sure that he should be broken from within, to not have any strength to fight back.

R: And can I know what makes you think that I am gonna do that? & when you haven’t got any proof against him how are you so sure that he is the culprit? Are you hiding any personal grudge that you want to break him from within? & why me?

K: Riddhima, please try to understand me. I can’t attack Vansh from outside, he should trust someone, I need someone who isn’t from police and secret agents, I want someone who helps me in catching Vansh, I can just trust you, I thought to keep you away from every difficulty, I m putting you in a big trouble, knowing maybe we will win or everything will end, can you go close to my enemy for the sake of our love, our friendship.

R: You know what, you better tell me something worthy then I can even start to think about it. My answer is gonna sum up on the fact that you have something, even a slight piece of evidence to support what you are saying.

As for putting me in trouble, oh ya you are doing that. But as long as it is for those innocent people I am probably okay with it.

Precap- “Kabir you know what I have thought about it & I think it would be better if you choose someone else for your not so reliable mission”

Please do let me know that you liked it or not. & Any suggestions? and please ignore if there r any silly mistakes, I am tired of finding them now.

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    12 Comments

    1. Vasu on December 31, 2020 3:49 am

      Hello everyone!!😊
      Plz do comment whether you liked it or not. Honestly speaking, now when I read it again even I am doubting on this update😅😅..but trust me the story has some really exciting stuff…
      I seriously wanna appreciate all the awesome writers we have..u guys do such an amazing job!!! Like I felt that b4 too but now I kinda know how much time it actually takes to pen down an idea..Kudos!
      So finally today is the last day of the year…
      Happy new year to evry1 in advance🥰🥰🥰

    2. Diha on December 31, 2020 6:18 am

      Is ridhima not being too rude!! 🤔
      Well so nice to see her character like this 😂
      So amazing update dear!! 🥰
      Excited for the upcoming story!! 😍
      Lots of love to you dear 💗💗

    3. Yasmine khan on December 31, 2020 7:31 am

      Yeah plEase bring obsessive track for Vansh I will really enjoy this track😍😍😍 and please clear my doubt that riddhima also loves kabir or not Nice episode

    4. Shivangi on December 31, 2020 7:49 am

      Amazing episode🥰🥰 please bring the obsessive track😁….

    5. Riaa on December 31, 2020 8:08 am

      This sounds good! Gotta look forward to what you have in store 🙂

    6. Jayashree on December 31, 2020 8:59 am

      Wow good and great track. It’s really interesting story. Iam waiting for riansh meeting. Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❤️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❤️.

    7. Priyadharshini on December 31, 2020 9:00 am

      So nice starting episode 👌😍😍
      Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️.

    8. JJ on December 31, 2020 9:01 am

      It’s really awesome episode 👌😍😍.
      Waiting for next one 💖💖.

    9. Vkjhp on December 31, 2020 9:02 am

      Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️❤️😍.
      Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️.
      Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.

    10. Astha on December 31, 2020 9:31 am

      I really wanted this to happen in start of the show..
      Really enjoyed
      Waiting for the next one..

    11. Riansh lover on December 31, 2020 10:33 am

      Sounds amazing dear✨🌟…love riddhimas attitude.🔥…Please update soon ❤❤❤

    12. Aafrin on December 31, 2020 11:28 am

      Welcome dear,
      “Decisions make destiny ” is true .
      And l think your story will be amazing .

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