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The dead patient ( Ardhika forever – mmz fanfic) chapter 1

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” they call u as my dead patient ” arjun spoked to radhika who was not in a mood to open her eyes.
Arjun continued without response :-
” i didn’t say anything ……now don’t be angry with me…..this image of yours is created by you only ….i will not waste my energy ….by fighting and requesting them to show some concern ” .arjun complained.
” and …don’t u dare think that iam in love with u ..u are only my patient ..” ….” what if i had left my everything…..and had become your personal doctor….really ….i want to curse you ….making me dance on your index finger….bad move ….very bad move …miss mishra …..” .arjun continued.

” Hey ….now don’t smile and stop smirking ….in your mind …i swear …the day you woke up from your slumber..the first thing i will do……is to f**k you right here in the hospital bed” ….so ” now like a sweet and shy girl ….stop smiling” .arjun continued complaining to his sleeping beauty.
” i want to tell u something ….now promise u will not laugh on that .. okay ….my mom nandini really want me to get married…to a girl of her choice…..now don’t laugh that much …it will give u stomach ache.” ….” u know what ….arrange marriage suck…..so i…i ..told her that i had a girlfriend .” Arjun continued and lil stammered .
Radhika who was still in coma …….words entered her ears….but are not reaching her mind…or may be reaching …but she won’t able to respond .
” Now don’t hit me …okay …when she asked me the name of my girlfriend …all of a sudden …i didn’t get anything in my mind ….and i blurted out ….out your name ….your name radhika ” he said in a scared voice ….after few minutes…
” Again …u started …now stop laughing ….stop embrassing me…..i know many ways to close of a mouth of a girl” …saying this he looked towards the lips of radhika .
He took a doctor cream and applied on her lips…” this will protect u …juicy lips …” he said while caressing her hair.
” you know what… first of all ..people used to call me … Doctor se*y …..u know earlier …they used to call me with this name ” ….but when i took ur case they started calling me …” Doctor crazy….” …so hillarious ….” Doctor crazy ” …saying this he laughed holding his stomach….

Outside nurses who were roaming halted on seeing him laughing like a kid .
Sister maria .:- ” love is really …f**king dangerous” .
Priya with fake tears :- oh god i can’t see a handsome doctor like this ….pls help him …
Arjun ….” u know what a new intern ..was calling me …crazy doctor se*y ….it is not that bad too …”

Arjun smiled again ..” i can smell something is burning ….now don’t be jealous ha …..i will not leave until i quenched thirst from u ….now start blushing ” .
Arjun halted seeing her patient’s body …..her cheeks had started turning crimson red ……..he never understood ..after reading so much science…that how can she in her unconsious state ..can blush ….surely she is listening to him ….her case was not much complicated ….she can be brought back from her deep sleep ….just need some endless efforts.
” Your brother …neil once …tried to advise me.. to leave your case….and provide the services to others too….but how would not appreciate it …..if i tell him ..that your cousin is a god damn witch …who does black magic ….and she had heavily possessed ….otherwise a doctor like me ….so handsome ….and intelligent …will not be latched to your sister….like a blo*dy revengeful soul to any god damn human body ” he spoked in one breath getting lil irritated.
” By the way ….iam going out with laila to have burger… if u want u can join us….” he looked towards her….hoping for a respond ….but radhika was still not in a mood to wake up .
“Damn …womwn ur are so lazy ….even demons don’t sleep that much .” Saying this he moved out of the room.

Precap:- radhika rocked …arjun shocked.

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64 Comments

  1. sammy on May 14, 2016 3:45 pm

    Wrote it in a haste but in next update will write arjun’s emotions more when radhika will get up ….guyz read it slowly

  2. Gauri on May 14, 2016 3:53 pm

    Sammy I want to hug you for this update….The way you wrote the Ajun’s words to sleeping Radhika…went directly to my heart…keep it going loads of love 🙂

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 4:01 pm

      Thanks gauri di ..love u a lot

  3. Dev on May 14, 2016 4:01 pm

    Hai sammy….a touchy epi…..d epi was cool with d dialogues of arjun to his sleeping beauty….
    Love u lots tc

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 4:37 pm

      Thank u dev:-D

  4. aastha on May 14, 2016 4:14 pm

    hey sammy loved it…………..arjun’s wrds are sooo full with love 4 her………..i was happy reading that the blush covered her face…………………plzzzzz update lost patience…………love u…………..

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 4:37 pm

      Thanks aastha ya will update it soon

    • aastha on May 14, 2016 5:41 pm

      Sammy are you writing Neet second time ????

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:46 pm

      Yeah aastha i will apply for 24th july

    • aastha on May 14, 2016 10:41 pm

      are you writing any other exam ?????

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 7:30 am

      Yeah aastha appearing for aiims.

    • aastha on May 15, 2016 5:16 pm

      27 ???

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 6:03 pm

      I didn’t get u …aastha aiims is on 29th may

  5. nita on May 14, 2016 4:17 pm

    Nice episode…… waiting for Nxt one precap is interesting.. Wll radhika too respond to his love???? Wll she loves him??

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 4:35 pm

      Thanks nita…and offcourse radhika is made for our arjun only

  6. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 14, 2016 4:25 pm

    This is out of the world??????…..srsly ur story is fantabulous?????…..sammy i r really an amazing writer……..❤

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:48 pm

      Thanks natasha ..love u 😀

  7. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 14, 2016 4:27 pm

    *u r

  8. Emz fasa on May 14, 2016 4:33 pm

    Amazing sammy i loved arjuns dialogue on his looks that was hillarious pls update next chap today itself

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:48 pm

      Thanks fasa ..and pls do check out my other ffs

  9. hima on May 14, 2016 4:40 pm

    nice sammy..such an intense love…really felt it through arjun’s words..precap is interesting.everyday you are making us crazy with your stories.tc dear…..

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:50 pm

      Thanks hima …and iam happy that you are enjoying my stories

  10. suga on May 14, 2016 4:41 pm

    Sammy darlzzzzzzz u r really some kind ??? u r tooooooo good yar ✌✌✌ loved it ??? love u darlzzzzzz ✌?? u r rocking ? ur precap oh. wowwww. wat a rhyming?? waiting for. d next with soooo much eagerness 😀 😀 loved it 😀 😀

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:50 pm

      Thank u so much suga ..ur comment always motivate me ..love u:-D

  11. nisha on May 14, 2016 4:46 pm

    U know what sammy your story is such a sweetheart story

    I mean the dialogues you wrote is just amazing 7

    I loved it to the core

    waiting to see the dead patient very open her eyes and

    also waiting eagerly what’s new you are going to add in the story

    Rads profession

    Rads personality ( because its still very closed, I mean how it going to be bold , shy , straight forward , soft ,

    how ??????
    7
    But I loved Arjun character

    there is so much to unfold

    lets see what’s up in your mind

    waiiting eagerly love

    sammy see u soon with next part.

    love u keeps smiling

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:47 pm

      Thanks nisha ….and try to connect with the lost series and the stolen world

  12. Hope on May 14, 2016 4:46 pm

    Its so emotional….

    actually in my childhood
    i used to talk wid a mango tree lyk its my bff..#lol and i really thought dat he communicated wid me through falling leaves and moving in wind..
    #crazycutechildhood…

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:45 pm

      Thanks hope ..u have a really cute childhood ….i know u must be missing it:-D

  13. Rosie on May 14, 2016 4:47 pm

    Omg Sammy…why is it end…..i want moreeeee….the precap …oh god i can’t sleep now…update both of this n lost patience….???

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:43 pm

      Thank u rosie….will update soon

  14. Meghna shanti on May 14, 2016 4:50 pm

    It so cute

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:42 pm

      Thanks shanti ….and stay connected with the lost series

  15. bisha on May 14, 2016 4:53 pm

    It was nice. I was smiling whike reading his emotions. Keep writing

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:40 pm

      Thank u bisha and pls check out the lost series too

  16. Chinmayi on May 14, 2016 4:54 pm

    Sammy its beautifull ……i m again in luv with this arjun! Here sammy rocked….doctor arjun is very sweet..
    Keep on rocking dea..bear my hugs and kisses :* :* i wanted to appreciate u for ‘my lost patience’ also…i read all ur works…keep on rocking gal 🙂

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:36 pm

      Thank u chinmayi and comment on the lost series too

  17. pankh on May 14, 2016 5:04 pm

    nice… even I was laughing like crazy..
    waiting 4 nxt..

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:37 pm

      Thanks pankh and pls try to connect with the lost series

  18. Shree on May 14, 2016 5:37 pm

    Too too good… It’s so emotional.. So I donno.. I cried.. He loves her so much… Keep up with the good work dear..

    Love you ??

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 5:41 pm

      Thank u shree….hehe u cried don’t worry next part will be funny

  19. Asmitha on May 14, 2016 5:52 pm

    HEY……its to best……..i liked it a lot……waiting for next epi……

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 7:06 pm

      Thanks asmitha.will update soon

  20. Brin on May 14, 2016 6:28 pm

    Outstanding episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 7:08 pm

      Thanks brin and will update soon

  21. lavanya on May 14, 2016 7:00 pm

    very emotional…arjun made me cry…how pure can a bond be…you have showed it…please keep going…your stories are indeed fabulous

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 7:09 pm

      Thanks lavanya and stay blessed:-)

  22. Raaga on May 14, 2016 7:03 pm

    Hai sammy
    wonderful update yaar…
    loved it how arjun is trying to bring her back …
    thank you dear

    • sammy or ashita on May 14, 2016 8:58 pm

      Thanks raaga…for appreciating

  23. Supriya on May 14, 2016 7:11 pm

    Sammy yaar rula diya tune meko…..m not lying but srsly the words r really worth my tears…..the way he was provoking her to wake up was just splendid….. Sammy u know after lost patience this one z my fav…..the love bwt them z something indescribable in words….Sammy tusi toh badi changi lines likhte ho…..loads of love

    • sammy or ashita on May 14, 2016 8:56 pm

      Supriya…lol u have a great sense of humour …but thanks for appreciating

  24. Kavina on May 14, 2016 9:25 pm

    I love it. Please update soon

    • sammy on May 14, 2016 9:51 pm

      Thanks kavina ….and stay connected with the lost series too..do give ur views there too

  25. Gianna on May 14, 2016 9:44 pm

    Sammy what do u eat that u write all these stories and write them so well. Pls send me the recipe. U are like the Pandora box always giving us amazing stories. Loved this so so so very much. Pls pls post the next one soon. God bless u ????

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 7:02 am

      Thank u so much Gianna ….. I mean u 10 times better ff writer than me….but still thanks for the appreciation ….love u a lot:-D

  26. Roshni on May 14, 2016 11:07 pm

    Aww I feel for arjun. A total opposite arjun. Sammy the precap must be…
    SAMMY ROCKED! READERS SHOCKED!

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 7:04 am

      Thanks roshni….I am glad u all are enjoying it

  27. Umama on May 14, 2016 11:43 pm

    So cute of arjun.To much love.Nice part.Plz update soon..

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 7:06 am

      Thank u so much umana ..will try to update soon

  28. susi on May 15, 2016 5:49 am

    Sammy darling…very heart touching episode….arjun care for her..I loved it..he is really doctor crazy yaar….as always u nailed it baby…waiting for next one…love u …tc..muaahhhh…

    • sammy or ashita on May 15, 2016 7:05 am

      Thank u so much ….will update soon

  29. subha on May 17, 2016 5:49 pm

    super…………

    • sammy on May 19, 2016 7:23 am

      Thanks subha….love u:-)

  30. Roma on May 18, 2016 6:17 pm

    O my goodness sammyyy…wowwww mind blowing update. ..very heart touching n emotional. …arjun’s emotions n feelings for sleeping rads is very adorable n passionate. …can’t wait for the next episode when rads will wakeup….how will arjun rxn….what will be her condition….does she know arjun loves her….had she been listening to all his words while in coma???I’m very curious n anxious to know what will happen next. …how do you do it my honeyyy. …so many lovely stories with very different concepts n plots….I’m loving all your stories n getting crazyyyyy for each n every one….keep it up honeyyy. ….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡

    • sammy on May 19, 2016 7:22 am

      Thanks Roma 2 chapters are already updated pls check out that…..iam glad u are liking it:-)

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