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Home»Fan Fiction»The day when we met kanchi os by niyaa
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The day when we met kanchi os by niyaa

niyaaaBy niyaaaJanuary 1, 2018Updated:January 1, 201822 Comments9 Mins Read
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31 december 2017.. Mid nit 11:00pm ..

Within one hr. Start of new year… Everyone celebrating the day… Party music masti and all…

A bunglow shown..A Men drunks and his legs r shaking nd due to affect of alcohal he fall down.. Nd crying..why i did this.. bcoz of me i lost her .. Aaj usse bachane ki kosish m hi usse barbaad kar diya??

Fb start-

@xyz cafe

A group for around 6-7 college students r playing truth or dare..

Bottle spin towards …A girl in jeans and crop trop..

All shout dare dare dare..

One of them-no she only choose truth she is coward

The girl stand nd spin the bottle again – dare sanchi mishra ne kabhi harna nhi sikha… Rit ishgya nd give hifi to her bestie

All-woahhhhh

Ria- so sanchi ur dare who one came ist in the cafe u have to insult them … That too verybadly..

Sanchi- what type of…

Ria- ohhh plzz don’t make excuse.. U can say u can’t

Sanchi – ok done… Wait for someone entry

Isha -what a guy yaar .. Mr hottie

Pragya – abeo yaar kasamse sanchi kuch  krna but isko chod de

Sanchi nd all turns to see – a dashing handsome guys???..talking on phn

All give thumps up to sanchi…

Sanchi smiled forcebily “bappa bacha lena aaj meri ijjat ka sawaal hkahin sabke samne faluda na ho jayeee plzzz plzz”

With lill step reach near his table- hi may i seat here

Men- sure

All gang peeping on them

They both talked something that not listen by the gang(àctually normal convo.)

Suddely sanchi shouts- what u think

Men- hey listen

Sanchi -what i m not like the girl who can  spend a night with anyone just for money

Everyone in cafe look at the men in a disgusting way..

Sanchi closes her eye”m sorry jo kiya bappa maaf krna”

The gang cheers for sanchi..

Suddenly everyone stop sanchi turns nd the men stand their folding his hand..

Sanchi -m sorry actually this r just a dare

Men – whattt one lakh for just one night..??

Now its time for sanchi to embarras..

Men -ab hua hisab baraber… Sorry

Sanchi frowned??

Men forwarded his hand – hi im kabir…kabir kapoor.. Frnds

Sanchi smile -why not nd shaked nd introduce to all gang…

In no time they became good frnd… Infact came close to each other..

As usual day kabir decided to confess his feeling to sanchi..

On call..

K – sanchi i want to meet u

S – me too kabir i want to say something very imprt

K – then see u soon on xyz cafe at 5

@cafe…kabir practicing to propose sanchi..from opposite side of the road sanchi coming.. Kabir mesmerized to see her..he going to bid her suddenly a men from behind..

Men – so hot yaar

Kabir glared him

Is’t she , ifu don’t like her … I will make her mine – men said evilly

Kabir anger on top -don’t u dare to touch her

Men – oopss itna gussa abhi se… What will u do when i get marrige her nd ??..

Kabir close his fist nd going to hit him

Men – relax bro.. Vishwas nhi ho raha look at these pic his father accepted my purposal.. Nd we get marred soon..

Kabir – don’t call me ur bro… What u with dad…??.. U don’t deserve to call my bro

Men – thats not my fault u always snatched everything from me ist dad second u always top in bussiness but not again… Sanchi will be mine only mine.. Nd i make sure i will make her life hell.. Nd laughed evilly

Kabir – raghav i love her

(So his name raghav kabir’s step brother.. Hethink bcoz of kabir his father leave himnd his mother..)

R – so what

K – i pleaded u  don’t involve her in this

R – ok done but at one condition

K – deal what u want i give u everything

R – no bro mujhe kuch nhi chahiye

Then what u want – asked kabir

R – jo main na kar ska wo karoge tum sanchi k sath…that too before marriage nd leave her?

K – i can’t she trust me

R – ok then see her in live hell .. Goodbye chotee bhai..

K – ok done but u have to promise me u leave sanchi

R – deal nd goes from there

Kabir stand like a statue

Sanchi – kabir kabir..what happen

Kabir – nothing… I have to go now sorry but can we talk tomorroq 6pm at hotel abc..

Sanchi – allright bye see u soon

Nxt day @ hotel abc-

Knock knock

Kabir opened the door – hi sanchi come in.

Kabir offeredsome drinks to sanchi .. After drinks sanchi feel dizzy and

@morning-

Veer – bhai (kabir’s bro)what r u doing for that bl***y raghav u cheated ur lovee

Kabir – stop it veer i don’t love her

V- really bhai then why u put cctv camera in ur room

K – bcoz i don’t want anyone raised finger on sanchi’s character

V – u care her why u doing all this

K – veer i need ur help plzz

V – m sorry bhai but i can’t… Nd leave

Suddenly sound came from sanchi’s room..sanchi wake up nd try to remind last night but everything is blurred..

Kabir made a call- look i win the beat… That sanchi mishra in my bed.. I did everything withher before marriage… Nd laugh

And turns a tight slap on his face given by sanchi

Sanchi – how can u do this kabir… Just bcoz of u i reject raghav purposal nd goes against my family… Mujhe khud se nafrat ho rahi h maine tum jaise insaan se pyaar kiya nd leave cryingly..

Kabir gets shock to listen her…”what i have done”

Otherside sanchi agree for her marriage with raghav nd tell whole incident to their bestie..

Kabir searches camera in the room but missing..

Raghav- what r u looking for kabir..

Kabir held his collar – u lier

Raghav frees himself – yes i lied .. sanchi rejected my purposal bcoz of u but now only bcoz of u she accepted nd we r getting married tommorow…thanks bro tere wajah se hi aaj tujhse jeet gaya nd one more thing don’t try to find out the camera bcoz already they r with me..nd so on u have no proof against me nd in favour of u..laugh evilly nd goes from their

Some listening their convo…

Kabir bend down nd crying

Fb ends-

Kabir – aaj mere yaar ki shaadi ho koi gaana bajao nachooooo.. Nd take the bottle on the head nd starts dancing with teary eyed… Suddenly stammer nd going to fall someone help him to stand..

Kabir – kabir beta u drunk too much u see sanchi every where or aaj to do do sanchi..???

After one hr.. Time 12:1 am means 1/jan/2018

?????????????????

Sanchi – stop it kabir its me sanchi

Kabir – what r u doing in bridal dress..today is ur wedding go now

Yes today is my wedding not with raghav ..but with u nd took kabir with her..

Nxt day-

Kabir in his room – ohh god this headache… Suddenly listening someone is ??

Kabir turn nd shock to see sanchi on the floor.

Kabir – what happened u r here nd what happened why r u crying??

Sanchi start crying more loudly (melodramatically)- haaye m lut gyi barbaad ho gyi kahin muh dikhane layak nhi rahi iss aadmi ne… Iss papi ne kahin ka nhi choda mujhe??

Kabir – what i did sanchi ??

Sanchi – what u did ..? u married me forcibly nd cross ur limits??

Kabir – ?? no i can’t not even my dreams

Sanchi – then what i m doing here on my wedding day ?

Kabir – i don’t know but i never do this with u sanchi

But why – sanchi

bcoz i love u dammed?? – kabir said frustrated

Sanchi smile and slowly slowly came near kabir nd push him on chair.. Nd seat on his lap and both hand in his neck

Fb show-

kabir and raghav convo listen by pragha nd isha they collect proof against raghav nd show the video to sanchi.. Sanchi break the marriage with raghav..

And marry with kabir in temple last night exact at 12 :00 when one year end nd satrt new one.. They united ..

Fb end

Kabir smile to listen and held her from wàist – so my ñewly sweef wife where is my new year present nd smirks ??

Sanchi try to escape but fail… Both feel each other breath could listen each other heart beat… Kabir give a peck on the lip corner that shiver her from toe to head…

Kabir – and this one for coming in my life and again trying to kiss her but sanchi pushes him nd ran towards washroom…

Ba patidev aaj k liye itna hi kafi??.

Kabir smile nd blush at same time to remind what happened juat few seconds??

Uffffff finally i write a os finally i finished it don’t know what u guys think about me after read this one but as i promised to post an os an new year .. I hope nd pray u all like it plzz give ur view???.. I know this s so crappy os but bear it ?.. Nd lovv u guys for supporting till now???

Regards

Niyaa

Lovv u all guys and happy new year all of u ???

 

 

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    22 Comments

    1. swethaa on January 1, 2018 6:40 pm

      awesome os simply amazing loved it

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:31 pm

        Tysm dear.. Lovv u sweety??

    2. vanu on January 1, 2018 7:04 pm

      amazing
      thanx
      happy new year

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:32 pm

        Thank u so much sweety.. Glad u like it bye tc lovv u??

    3. cherry on January 1, 2018 8:13 pm

      amazing
      just loved it

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:32 pm

        Glad u like it .. Thanks so much.. Lovv u??

    4. riyarocks on January 1, 2018 8:22 pm

      zombuuuuuuuuuuu………wow………just too good……..yaar, tune pehle os kyun nhi likha…main iss baat k liye gussa hoon tujhse………abt os………sab kuch tune tod daala……..khidki, darwaaza……..sab………ab sun, isko repair karne k liye mere acc me paise deposit kardena………haha……..just kidding………yaar, superrrrrrrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrrrrrrrrr waala os tha………meri baat rakhne k liye, shukriya(dekh, thnx nhi kaha…….haha)………luv u meri zombu………bohut saaraaaaaaaaaaaa…..milte hain ig pe

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:45 pm

        Aaye haye tujhe pasand aaya matlab mera jeevan safal ho gaya..?? ab rahi baat khidki darwaze todne ki to aage se pehle hi likh dungi read at ur own risk sawari apne samaan ki khud jimmedaar h.. Aapke nuksaan k liye authoriy ka koi lena dena nahi h????.. Chal tujhe repairing ka achaa sasta tikau rasta batati hun fatafat apna beutifull sa ff posf kar mere ladakoo os ka nuksaan tera sweetu sa ff hi kar skta h???.. Bahut hui bak bak.. Sukhtiya meri jaan nd lovv u so much.. Bye tc milte h ig p????

    5. Risu on January 1, 2018 11:17 pm

      It’s amazing

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:33 pm

        Tysm dear.. Luvv u??bye tc

    6. Amnaa on January 2, 2018 12:04 am

      Its so sweet…. I really enjoyed it

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:34 pm

        Awww thank u so much sweety.. For ur constant support.. Bye tc lovv u??

    7. Aafiya on January 2, 2018 1:24 am

      Happy New Year…
      It was amazing.

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:35 pm

        U too dear.. Nd thank u somuch for liking nd commnting on it nd most imp. For giving ur support always.. Lovv u?? bye tc

    8. Anee on January 2, 2018 9:43 am

      superrbbb niyu

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:36 pm

        Sukhriya anee.. Tujhe achaa laga mere liye yahi badi baat h.. Bye tc lovv u???

    9. Ashnita456 on January 2, 2018 1:40 pm

      Sorry niyu late hoon. Kya damekar os tha. Esa hi mujhe aur os chaiye samjhi zombu chuduail ka order hai. This os was out of the world. Love you alot

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:39 pm

        Oyee cp chaloo mat kar pehle apne ff complete kar fir mere os milenge?.. Samjhi late se kya hota h tune isse padha commnt kiya wahi mere liye badi baat h lovv u so much chal bye milte h ig p????

    10. RuCh23 on January 3, 2018 8:39 am

      ??? Niyaaa………. it was UNBELIEVABLY FABULOUS!!! no words to describe dear, loyally mindblowing. Sorry for wishing you late, I read this just now ??? Happy New Year ???

      • niyaaa on January 4, 2018 12:40 pm

        Thank u thank u thank u so much ru aka dinu .. Praising from one of my fav. Writter ??? itni tarif mat kar ki m hawa me udd k gayab ho jaun???.. Lovv u sweetynd happy new year again.. Bye tc milte h ig p if u came..nd plzz plzz post ur ff??

    11. miya321 on January 7, 2018 7:27 pm

      Hey 🙂 Sry for being late but it was really cute!!!! Keep it up

      • niyaaa on January 10, 2018 12:32 am

        Awww thank u so much sweety nd don’t worry about late commnt?.. Glad u like it.. Lovv u ??.. Good nit☺

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