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Home»Fan Fiction»Dastur A Love Story Dependent On Time And Destiny chapter 3
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Dastur A Love Story Dependent On Time And Destiny chapter 3

--Jia--By --Jia--January 5, 201833 Comments6 Mins Read
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Author’s note:

A very thx to Swethaa, Dhruviii, Sanveer, Amnaa, Anu88, Dhruti, Priyanshipp, Aafiya, Ruch23,Riyarocks(Priyanka di) Niyaaa, Sanjana900 for commenting on my previous post and sorry for being super late past few days were too hard for me I lost many friends nd even hope to stay happy .I nearly felt to leave writting nd I even deleted my TU nd FB accounts but soon I understood that I can’t stay away from such lovely people so I m back again .Enough of my bak bqk let’s move on to the story

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Recap: Kanchi’s first meet nd their growing friendship A short look in Sanchita’s life

Let’s head down to today’s epi

Sunday morn at malthotra mansion

Kabir was sleeping peacefully in his room bt veer u know him again a prank he went to kabir’s room nd when he saw him sleeping peacefully after so long then his heart also melted

V-I m leaving u now bhai bt I will take my revenge soon yesterday u teased me a lot Wait I cn still hv my revenge what if ria cums for bf bhai will luv to meet her (Here ria is a collegemate of kabir nd her behaviour is like show bt she isn’t anand’s daughter)

He calls ria
Their convo
V-Hello Ria
R-Yep
V-I wanted u inform u that kabir bhai was missing u so he wanted to ask will u accompany us in bf
R-Really
V-If u can’t cum then it’s ok I’ll tell bhai that u can’t cum
R-No no I’ll cum
V-That’s gr8 bhai will be glad that u r cuming
End of their convo

V-Mujhe chidhaya tha na ab jhelo chipkali ko waise mujhe hi hamesa itne brilliant ideas aate hai ,mujhe naaz hai khud par(U teased me so now beair that lizard BTW I always get brilliant ideas. I m really proud of myself)

Timeskips to bf

Ria sat on the chair beside kabir veer in front of him to see his reactions Anand left for an emergency case

R-Kabir what do u feel about me

Kabir choked his food nd gave an why u did this wala luk to veer nd veer retunrned him aur lo mujhse panga wala luk to kabir

K-I don’t know(An idea came in his mind he called someone nd said to cum fast)

After 5mins a girl reached inside malhotra mansion veer was shocked to see her nd she was shocked to see veer

K-Sanchi cum I want to talk with u urgently

S-K

They leaf from the dinning area veer follows them

K-Pls save me from ria

S-Means???

K-Whenever that chipkali says anything pls cut her don’t give her any chance to speak

S-If u don’t like her then why u hv called her for bf

K-Actually my bro veer called her so that he cn take revenge from me

S laughing -Revenge then I wud support my bestie

K-U know each other

V came from behind nd kept his hand on kanchi’s shoulder -So now what will u do bhai now I hv a patner too

S-Mood changed I will save kabir

V-What???

S-Because he called me for help not u

Kabir became glad nd gave an victorious smile

V showing fake cry-Dost dost na rha(Lines from an hold hindi song means friend didn’t stayed as friend)

Kanchi together-Notanki(drama)

V showing his tounge to them-I hv enjoyed a lot due to ria nd it will be fun to see how sanchi will save u because today we r going to watch movie nd ria will cum along hope that sanchi saves u bt I think god sud save sanchi

S horrified -Why

V-Because…

S-Because

V-Because…

S-Cum to the point

V in scarastic tone -She is chudail

after this he started laughing

S while beating him-Idiot stupid duffer nonsense u almost scared me
V-Stop frightened angry bird

K started laughing after which he got an death glare from sanchi

Spot-Kabir’s car
Destination-Movie theater

sitting arrangement-Kabir on diver’s seat sanchi at the seat beside him veer nd ria at back
Mood-Jolly nd mischievous
Song playing on radio-Suhana safar aur hassen hamsafar

V in mind-k so let the fun begin

V passing smirk to kanchi-So Ria who is ur crush or probably luv

R excitedly -Kab she was inturpted by sanchi

S-What if we play something like antrakshari let me switch off this radio

V-*Smat bt let’s see till when will u save bhai* k then u start

S sang lae dooba luking at kabir who was lost in her voice still bit concious about driving (accident thori karwana hai)

S-Now veer ur turn

V sang tere sang yaara luking at sanchi while remembering his days with sanchita

V-Now Ria

R sang I luv u luking at kabir

V passed an ,see it’s really tought for u wala luk to sanchi

S gave him wait nd watch luk while kabir was enjoying sanchi’s company
R-Kabir ur turn

K-I hv stopped singing long ago

S-Pls kabir for me

K-ok

V-did the sun rise from west

S-Why

V-Because bhai is going to sing

K-Very funny

K sang hamsafar luking at sanchi

R-Kabir u r she was cuted off by sanchi

S-U sing really well

V -we hv reached theater

It was an horror movie going on in the theater kabir was sitting at the corner sanchi sat beside him veer sat on the seat nxt to sanchi ria sat after veer A sence came due to which kabir veer nd ria got frightened so kabir nd veer holded sanchi very tightly while ria got no one to hold

S-*Both the brothers r same hey what if I tease them I m feeling bored seeing this stupid movie *

S-Kaveer r u scared of ghosts

Kaveer trying to save their reputation – No we rn’t

S-Gr8

She made a very scary sound due to which kaveer sarted chanting hanuman chalisa

S laughing -Coward kaveer

Kaveer understood what she did nd gave her a death glare while ria was furious on sanchi

After the movie ended the all landed into the car again this time ria sat in front inorder to sit veside kabir bt poor luck sanchi sat on driver’s seat as kaveer were badly frightened so they sat at back nd sanchi drove the car to malhotra mansion

V-Still the day is left

K-I m tired so I’ll spend rest of the day resting

S-I m going as I promised Ishgya that I’ll hv lunch with them

V-I think ria u sud also leave

K gave a thank u chote wala luk to him nd ge gave baccha smajh ke chor rha hun wala luk to him

8 years leap

Kanchi started feeling for each other while sanveer’s friendship became more strong . Sanveer were doing their internship in sdch while kabir was their mentor nd sanchita was doing her internship in a very reputed hospital of pune . Kanchi didn’t confessed till now nd even veer don’t know that kanchi luv each other

Today when kabir returned home he thought to tell his feelings to sanchi after a week as on that day it wud be exact 8 years after the day they met so he choose that day

Veer decided to tell her after completing internship

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Authour’s note:

Thx for reading this article if u feel that it was nice then pls presslike nd if u think that it’s not nice then pls press dislike nd if u hv 2mins for me then pls comment criticisms r wlcm. Luv u all tc bye

Regards
Reni

 

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--Jia--

    A 17 years old teen who luvs to sing nd write. Previously known as riru

    33 Comments

    1. Aafiya on January 5, 2018 10:26 pm

      Superb… Thank you for posting… Hope to see you and your friends happy… Don’t be sorry.. Waiting for the next update.. Post it as soon as possible…

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:07 pm

        Thx a lot dear nd I will try my best to post ASAP

    2. Anee on January 5, 2018 10:33 pm

      Reni it was too good dear keep writing

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:12 pm

        Thx a lot dear

    3. Dhruviii on January 6, 2018 12:22 am

      Keep writing dear coz u r very talented writer…aur jldi update kr naa plzz???

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:15 pm

        Thx a lot dear nd I will post ASAP

    4. Amnaa on January 6, 2018 1:08 am

      Its amazing

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:18 pm

        Thx a lot dear

    5. Dhruti on January 6, 2018 1:36 am

      superb writing………….love it….specially theater wala scenes……………post next asap……………and don’t say sorry……………tc…………..love you a lot………………

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:20 pm

        Thx a lot dear tc luv u 2

    6. Anu88 on January 6, 2018 9:14 pm

      So so amazing and outstanding and superb and mind blowing episode yaar…… waiting for the next part yaar…… Happy New Year dost…….tc…….

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:23 pm

        Thx a lot yaar nd i know i m late bt happy new year 2 u too dost. Bye tc luv u

    7. Ishi on January 7, 2018 6:35 am

      This was amazing sorry was nt able to comment on last episode
      Post nxt part asap

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:27 pm

        Thx a lot yaar nd don’t be sorry i cn understand

    8. swethaa on January 7, 2018 7:35 am

      thanks for posting…really missing you alot dear..awesome fab fantastic..waiting for next part..

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:28 pm

        Thx a lot dear

    9. Samidha on January 7, 2018 11:13 am

      Nice Episode. Post next one soon

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 5:19 pm

        Thx a lot dear

    10. Niyaa on January 7, 2018 1:24 pm

      Amaz mindblowing epi yaar especially theatre scene ???.. Kaveer nok jhok.. Too good lovely.. Don’t say sorry yaar we can understand .. Tc nd post nxt asap bye ???

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 2:29 pm

        Thx a lot dear tc luv u bye

    11. Khan__sannah on January 7, 2018 2:44 pm

      Glad u r bck dea…n don’t u dare 2 think abt leaving writing…coming 2 ff it waz o7m mindblowing…post nxt part soon n keep writing n dats an order…hahaha luv u loads dea n sry 4 commenting late.
      SANA

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 5:15 pm

        Kaan pakar ke sorry dubara kbhi aisa nhi krungi pakka promise. Nd thx a lot don’t be sorry yaar .tc luv u bye

    12. Khan__sannah on January 7, 2018 2:46 pm

      Glad u r bck dea…n don’t u dare 2 think abt leaving writing…coming 2 ff it waz o7m mindblowing…post nxt part soon n keep writing n dats an order…hahaha luv u loads dea n sry 4 commenting late.

    13. Priyanshipp on January 7, 2018 3:18 pm

      First of all tell me how did u thought to leave us. This is not fair. And from next tym don’t ever dare to leave ok. … and coming to the episode it was mind blowing dear. Especially that look wala lines. Superb dear.and ya post as soon as possible. I enjoyed throughout the whole episode. Luv u sweetie ? ?

      • --Jia-- on January 7, 2018 5:18 pm

        Sorry yaar actually situation hi kuch aisi thi .Thx a lot nd i wanted to ask u r in 11 standard or ur age is 11.bye tc luv u

      • Priyanshipp on January 7, 2018 6:21 pm

        I’m in 11th nd I’m running 17 ☺☺Nd u

      • --Jia-- on January 9, 2018 7:52 am

        I m in 8th running 14

    14. Niyati on January 7, 2018 7:33 pm

      Amazing dear oil sis…….loved it….lots of love ? ?

      • --Jia-- on January 9, 2018 7:47 am

        Thx a lot di luv u bye tc Gm

    15. Sanveer on January 8, 2018 8:48 am

      Awsome epi! Post next one asap

      • --Jia-- on January 9, 2018 7:50 am

        Thx a lot yaar

    16. riyarocks on January 9, 2018 6:07 pm

      reni, tune socha bhi kaise hame chodke jaane ki………not fair……….hum sab tere liye koi nhi hai kya……….sweety……..don’t worry……..log studies ki wajah se shayad cmmnt nhi kar pa rahe hain…….oops, main baat batana toh bhool gyi………..epi was ek dum khidkitod…………kaveer, kanchi scenes…………sooooooooooooooo hilarous………..luv u sweety pie………..bye………….tc

      • --Jia-- on January 9, 2018 9:06 pm

        Sorry di main comments ki wajah se nhi chor rhi thi mere ghar kisi ki death ho gayi hai aur same mere friend ke saath bhi hua h due to which we r unable to connect nd he was my bestie isliye I felt more bad nd so all this ….. waise thx a lot for ur words bye tc luv u

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