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Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

Dastaan – Ishqbaaz ff ( episode 23)

niyatiBy niyatiSeptember 8, 201747 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hii guys, Niyati here with the next part. A big thanks & lots of love to all who comment on previous part.
Thanks Mansi di, Aashi di,Raina di, Nandini, Nikita,Alekhika,Soni,Pihu,Bhargavi,Sadaf, Arya,Niya, Anamika,Pihu,Maya,Sadaf, Mishthi,Bhargavi,Anu & Vrisha for your support.

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In RM(rathore mansion) –

All elders return & shocked to see the scene.

Anika : O bete ki ! Party without us.

Gauri : Bhojai , They didn’t wait for us. Haraharai ke party kar li tum logon ne.

Bhavya : Mujhe toh pehle hi shak tha ki ye log koi toh kaand karne waale hai.

Yog : It’s nothing like that choti ma, This party is only for youngsters.

Yug : Yo, Dad is right Ma has always problem of doubt.(whisper in his ears.)

Yog give him a deadly glare.

Dadi : Chal khothiya, mein toh jaise budi ho gayi .

Yagya : No babes, no one is more younger than you.

Anika patted on his head.

Anika : Yagya , She is your p.d.

Yagya : Ouch…Ma, She always my babes for me.

Gauri : We brought prasad for you all.

She keep prasad in everyone hand.

Gauri : Kaurwaki, take this.

Anika & Bhavya look at each other.

Kaurwaki : Auntie, I already told you I don’t believe in God.

Gauri : Vishwaas kara nahi jaata ho jaata hai. Tumhare manne ya na maanne se sach badal nahi jaayega.

Kaurwaki : I don’t want to do argument with you because you are elder from me but every one has its own choice. I don’t believe & it is only the truth. No one can change it.
Please don’t interfere in my matter.

She leave from there while she stand there.

Aicchik : Auntie, uski baat ka bura mat maniyega. She is just say anything to anyone .

Gauri : It’s ok beta , you take this.

Everyone move their respective rooms.

Yagya : How dare she talk to choti ma like this.

Yog : She might be have some reasons.

Yagya : She think that no one is better from her. Just a egoistic person.

She stand in her room balcony.

Aicchik : You don’t talk like this to Auntie .

Kaurwaki : Ya, This one is also my mistake right.

Siya : He don’t say this.

Kaurwaki : Every time, It was my mistake. I am only the reason behind your troubles. Just, leave me alone. Stay away from me.

Siya : You get it wrong, we didn’t mean that.

Aicchik : We just want that you realize your mistake.

Kaurwaki : I already told her about this. Why she remind me every time ? You know what you guys don’t need to leave, I only leave from here.

She leave while Aicchik & Siya look at each other.
She collide with Yagya.

Yagya : How can you do that. You respect elders so much right,then what happen to you.

Kaurwaki : It didn’t matter to you.

He pinned her to nearby wall.

Yagya : Why it didn’t matter to me. It is a question of my family. I can’t tolerate that anyone hurt my family. Get it ! I don’t understand What’s the problem with you. When I think now finally I understand you then you do something like that which I never expect. Why just answer me .

Kaurwaki : Jab mein apne aap ko samaj nahi sakti, toh tum kya samjhoge. Leave my hand.

Yagya : Kaurwaki , Give the damn answer.

Kaurwaki : First of all Miss rathore for you & Who are you? Why I answer about this. Who gave you rights to interfere in my matter. Be in your limits.Next time, don’t tried to touch me.

She pushed him & walked away. He stamp his hand on same wall.

Yagya : Why this girl is so difficult to understand . I never forgive you for this.

She is in orphanage ,the only place of peace for her.
She is still thinking about incident. She closes her eyes . A drop of tear fall from corner of her eyes.

( Main chaand hun ya daag hun (Main kon hu plays)).

Kaurwaki P.O.V –

(I don’t know reason why this is happen to me. I don’t say full truth to anyone & also don’t know how to lie. What I am doing now.They are right it was my fault. I hope she forgive me).

She didn’t notice that her bare feet. A small stone is pinched into her feet. Some blood drops oozing out from her creamy white skin but she didn’t feel pain . May be she has much pain from this in her life. She tried to wear her heels & notice blood. She nods her head in disbelief because there was not a single day in which she don’t have any injury. Sometime she hurt herself or Sometime she get hurt.

Rahi(orphanage manager) : What happen to you Mam, You wait here & I get the first aid.

She nods her head. She do bandaged.

Kaurwaki : Rahi, Thank you for this.Don’t call me mam.

Rahi : Hmmmm…….Are you sure you are able to go or If i call Aicchik.

Kaurwaki : No, I am ok.

She directly go to pool area. Siya & Aicchik talking to each other.

Kaurwaki : How do you know that I am coming here only.

Aicchik : Subah ka bhula shaam ko ghar hi aata hai.

Kaurwaki : You say it wrong. It is not like that.

Siya (in a teasing manner) : So what ! Everyone has it choice na . Don’t interfere in anyone’s choice. Right Aicchik.

She very well know that she tease her by repeating her sentence. They both give hi -fi to each other.

Kaurwaki : OK, That’s enough.

Siya : Shit!

Aicchik : Ab kya hua,tune aisa chehra kyun bana kar rakha hai ki koi ne teri zammen hathiya li ho.

Kaurwaki : Aicchik, Don’t use such type of words.

Siya : Phail gaya raita ! I forget about dares.

Kaurwaki : Bhot bada raita phail gaya . I also forget.

Aicchik : You scold me for use these type of words, now you only use these words.

Siya : Mein toh ek ghante chup nahi reh sakti,pure din kya khaak rahungi. Ye toh mere bachpan ke Maths test se bhi zyada mushkil hai.

Aicchik & Kaurwaki look at each other.

Aicchik : You compare this dare from your childhood maths test.

Siya : So, what. What should you do tomorrow .

Kaurwaki : Just say sorry to Aunt.

Siya : I talk about your dare.

Kaurwaki(smirk) : I know about that. Mujhe pata hai kaise complete karna hai.

On other side-

Her words still echoing in his mind. He is really hurt by her behaviour.

Yog : What should we do?

Yug : Isse accha toh Miss Chipku(kittu) upar ka ticket hi katwa deti.

Yog was really shocked because Yagya is not react after listening. He shake him.

Yog : What happen to you?

Yagya : Nothing……..What were you guys talking about.

Yug : Yahan humari watt lagi hui hai,inhe sapnon mein khone ki padi hai.
(We are destroyed & he lost in his dreams only).

Yog :We are talking how we complete our dares.

Yagya : I have no problem.

Swadesh : Ya, guys why are you so tensed?

Yug : You only say because you choose truth.

In Anu’s room-

Anu : How I live without selfies.

Shree : I also don’t live without shopping.

Sona : Mera kya hoga .

Shree : What’s the need of showing so much attitude to Yug Bhaiya.

Sona : You are chamchi of your bhaiya.

Shree : You are also your di chamchi.

Anu : Why are you two fighting ? Just think about how we complete our dares.

PRECAP-

Their weird tricks to complete dares.

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I hope you like it & sorry for wait . I know many of u want that they complete their dares.I will do that in next part. Thank you Aashi di for giving suggestion & don’t worry mystery about kaurwaki is unfold soon.Thank you Mansi di for encouraging
me . Kindly Ignore grammatical & spelling errors. Do comment & Keep smiling. Be happy & Stay safe. Thanks once again for your support.

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    47 Comments

    1. Riana on September 8, 2017 6:25 pm

      Kaurwaki was a bit rude to Gauri…Though the episode was emotional and sweet…??…Great !…Updt soon…??..Take care…?

      • niyati on September 8, 2017 7:43 pm

        I know she is different character. Thank you di for your lovely comment.

      • niyati on September 8, 2017 7:44 pm

        Ya , will posted soon. You too Good night & take care. Thanks once again for your support.

    2. Anaya on September 8, 2017 7:07 pm

      Hii Niyu di.How are you.

      I waited that how they complete their dare but this part was also amazingggg.
      I really love the way how Siya compare her dare with Math test but you don’t know di, Maths test is horrible than this dare. Main kon hun is my favourite one song nowadays & really suited on kaurwaki’s character. I love Aamir khan & Zaira . They really portray their roles very well in Dangal. Luv the part & you too di.Waiting for next part. Update soon.

      • niyati on September 8, 2017 7:47 pm

        Hii Anu, I am fine. Thank you for your sweet comment. Anu , This is too much dear.Maths test is not horrible like that . I know it’s give michmichi feeling. I burst into laughter after this line of your comment.

      • niyati on September 8, 2017 7:49 pm

        This one song is also my favourite. I too love zaira & Aamir but I am fan of Srk. Ya, will post soon .Good night & take care.

      • Vrisha on September 8, 2017 10:24 pm

        I also burst into laughter after read her coment. I too love SRK . I also like Aamir & Zaira too. This one song is amazing.

      • Vrisha on September 8, 2017 10:22 pm

        Anu , This is very childish comment. Maths test is not any kind of punishment as you think.

      • Anaya on September 8, 2017 10:28 pm

        Hii didu, It’s not childish comment. You didn’t know about so much pain of giving maths exam because you are good in maths. ewww……Maths. I hate it to the coreeee. You don’t know I have so much pain ,in fact more than Kauru.Maths is really headache.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 12:22 pm

        Vrishu , Her comment is cute & don’t be so strict dearie.

    3. preethi on September 8, 2017 7:59 pm

      pls write in english

      • niyati on September 8, 2017 8:37 pm

        Ya, sure dearie for your coment. How are you preethi. For you I write in english statements in brackets. Stay tuned !

    4. Mansi on September 8, 2017 8:47 pm

      Wowwwwwww Niyu?????loved it completely❤❤❤❤???but I felt kaurwaki a bit rude to Gauri???precap is cool??update soon ?

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 6:47 am

        Thank you souch di for your sweet & lovely comment. I am glad that u liked it.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 6:50 am

        Ya, she is bit rude. Glad to know you like precap. Once again thanks di for your comment. Update today only. Post your ff soon.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 12:20 pm

        so much**

    5. Vrisha on September 8, 2017 10:18 pm

      Hii niyu dear. So sorry for late comment. Loved the today’s part. It is too emotional . I have pity on our kauru. No one can understand her. But only one question that do you portray Kauru as grey shaded character.Awesome precap . Update soon .

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 6:52 am

        Awww, That’s so sweet of u dearie. Thanks for your comment & Ya, posted today only. Kauru is not a grey shaded character. It’s just different .

    6. Pihu on September 8, 2017 10:46 pm

      I also felt sad for our Gauri chiraiya. Loved the episode. Don’t make our kauru a grey shaded character because I think she is the best character written by you. Make her some sweet. She is little bit rude but very clean heart. Realizing her mistake very soon. Update soon.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 6:55 am

        I also feel sad when I was writing it. I didn’t want to hurt our Gauri. They both have very clean heart.Ya, She is not at all grey shaded character. Update today only.

    7. Anamika on September 8, 2017 11:08 pm

      Amazingg dear. I felt ad for our kauru. It was too emotional. Waiting for precap. Post next part soon.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 6:57 am

        Thanks dearie for your comment. Post today only.

    8. Arya on September 8, 2017 11:12 pm

      I love Kaurwaki character so much……loved today’s episode…….superb precap………Update soon Niyati.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 7:00 am

        Hii Aru, How are you. I too love kaurwaki.Thanks for your comment. Ya,will post today only.

    9. Pihu on September 8, 2017 11:21 pm

      Fabulous chappie dear…….loved the episode & luv u too. Eagerly waiting for precap. Post next part soon dear.

      • Maya on September 8, 2017 11:23 pm

        Awesome Niyati. Waiting for next part. Post next part ASAP.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 12:13 pm

        Thank you Maya dear for ur constant support.

      • Misthi on September 8, 2017 11:25 pm

        Superb Niyu….loved the eoisode……Post soon.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 7:21 am

        Thanks Mishthi for your constant support. Post next part today only.

      • Niya on September 8, 2017 11:29 pm

        Lovely dear………Update soon.Waiting for it.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 7:03 am

        Thank you so much Niya for your coment. Keep suporting. Ya, will post today only.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 12:13 pm

        Thank you dearie & luv u too soo much.

    10. alekhika20 on September 8, 2017 11:42 pm

      Superb update

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 7:02 am

        Thank you so much dearie for your constant support. Welcome back & stay tuned!

    11. Pihu on September 9, 2017 12:25 pm

      Superb , Mindblowing dear. So sorry for late comment. Waiting for next part.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:40 pm

        Thanks Pihu for your constant suport.

    12. Sadaf on September 9, 2017 12:35 pm

      Hii Niyati. How are u? Really sorry for late comment. Amazing update. Eagerly waiting for next part.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thank u dearie for ur lovely comment.

    13. Bhargavi on September 9, 2017 12:39 pm

      Fantastic Niyu.Waiting for next episode.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:43 pm

        Thanks dear for ur constant support. Next part is already published.

    14. Soni on September 9, 2017 12:41 pm

      I felt sad for our Gauri.Too emotional episode. Ab kya rulaogi. Waiting for next update.Lovely episode.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:42 pm

        Thank u so much soni .Stay tuned!

    15. Aashi9 on September 9, 2017 12:44 pm

      the update was filler
      love Kurwaki and Yagya’s confusion
      maths comment was nice…….I agree with it
      update soon

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:33 pm

        Thank you so much di. Glad to know that u liked the episode. Thank u di for ur suggestions on previous part di. It really means a lot to me.

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:38 pm

        Di,my next part is already published Please give ur views & suggestions in that too. Once again thanks for ur advice.

    16. nikita_jai29 on September 9, 2017 2:08 pm

      It is nice one dear.. Update soon

      • niyati on September 9, 2017 3:35 pm

        Thanks a lot Nikita for your comment dear. Next part is already published.

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