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Home»Fan Fiction»The Dark Tunnel (Sneak preview-1)
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The Dark Tunnel (Sneak preview-1)

administratorBy administratorMay 30, 201617 Comments3 Mins Read
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“Sanskar … no …control yourself….”..laksh said continue running….
Sanskar who had opened his eyes after 5 months….is running creating a rukus.in that hell …..he was made understand all the rules of their family…but …a intruder human scent ..is really mind blogging for a new born….
“Lucky ..don’t …you dare …to come in my way…”
Said sanskar..who was pushing all trees ..and was approaching towards the man who come in the forest to capture nature in his camera …..

Sanskar …almost jumped to move more fast… but laksh hold him from his waist in the mid air. And they both fall down….
“No humans……or I will rip your head from your body sanskar….”laksh warned still holding him in his grip….
But sanskar ..his thirst was on the peak ….he hold laksh and threw him away in the forest to distance of 5km from him…..

Laksh’s head collided with trees…leading to their fall…and he stopped on the ground …when his body deaccerlated…leading to the storm of dust…
Laksh clenched his fist….his blue eyes were now started showing the pigment of red …and his mind capture sanskar’s thoughts…..

“Pain…..” laksh blurted out with eyes closed interrupting sanskar’s mind…
Sanskar fall on the ground because of immense pain in his body…. he grunted like an animal…. almost screaming in pain…his all skeleton was on the verge of breaking … until laksh came and picked him by holding his collar….
Sanskar felt relieved but he was still glaring his brother …who had almost taken his life….and then he smell something different …a beautiful deer….be oz the intruder was long gone…

Sanskar run in that direction and laksh closed his eyes….
“Its a different feeling …you know this new energy…and this blood thirst…it is all different ..iam not feeling any change in temperature.and it looks like …my age is halted…” said sanskar….
Laksh patted his brother’s shoulder …and they both share a hug….”buddy because you are now a ……VAMPIRE…..welcome to the …DARK TUNNEL…….”..laksh smiled and added further…
“Lucky …why didn’t u come back…you don’t know that how much I was alone without you .”
Sanskar’s expression lost all wildness…

“Yeah …sanky ..a vampire is considered as a new born …for atleast 5 starting years of his life.. if I would have come back…then you had already become my delicious meal…full of flesh. .and waste bones.. ” laksh chuckled…..

“New borns…who are they….” sanskar asked sounding curious…
“Our kinds…in the starting days when they ate created….because of their own blood which is still lingering in their tissues….they are more aggressive …and difficult to handle…our kind is most powerful …in our initial days of this life…

A newborn …can stand agasint a thousand army …but no army can stand agasint a single new born vampire…..” laksh explained …..

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17 Comments

  1. kiya on May 30, 2016 9:22 am

    Its is only a sneak peak…spare me guy for any mistake:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Emz fasa on May 30, 2016 9:57 am

    Awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ but pls update long epi

    • kiya on May 30, 2016 11:41 am

      Thank FASA……love u a lot dear ..will try to update it soon

  3. S priya on May 30, 2016 9:59 am

    Ha ha kiya hve u seen twilight saga…actually while reading tat film oly came in my mind…..anyway I love vampires story…wr s our ragini nd swara…waiting fr tem…

    • kiya on May 30, 2016 11:40 am

      Thank s priya ..yeah me a twilight fan …love u a lot dear ..will try to update it soon

  4. Unknown on May 30, 2016 10:38 am

    Continue soon

    • sammy on May 30, 2016 11:39 am

      Thanks unknown …will try to update it soon:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Swati on May 30, 2016 10:55 am

    Awesome

    • sammy on May 30, 2016 11:37 am

      Thank swati will try to update it soon

  6. Niku on May 30, 2016 12:19 pm

    Awsome i m loving it…keep it up…

    • kiya on May 30, 2016 6:52 pm

      Thanks niku …will try to update it soon:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Akshata on May 30, 2016 12:36 pm

    i love supernatural stories.
    so update soon and make it longer ๐Ÿ™‚

    • kiya on May 30, 2016 6:51 pm

      Thanks akshata ..will try to update it soon:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. s on May 30, 2016 3:51 pm

    interesting

    • kiya on May 30, 2016 6:50 pm

      Thanks s ..will try to update it soon:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Shagun on June 1, 2016 12:11 am

    Awesome
    Update soon can’t wait

    • sammy on June 6, 2016 12:41 pm

      Thanks shagun ..will try to update it soon:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

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