Part 1: part-1
I can understand that everyone wants the entry of Ragini but we have to wait a little bit for that maybe in next part. For now we need to understand a furious Laksh. Thank u all for liking this ff π
Laksh: Get out of you rooms cowards!
Shouting and screaming on top of his lungs.
Laksh: get out I said! Oh I apologise! Mr Durga Prasad needs his beauty sleep! Oh come on dad you donβt even have beauty why do you want to sleep? Oh gosh I am so rude ahahahaβ¦
DP: LAKSH!
DP screams and sees Laksh standing there and giggling.
Laksh: oops! I woke the Satan up
AP: Laksh your condition is not stable come toβ¦
DP stops her from talking by showing his hand.
Laksh: woah Mr Durga Pβ¦ Pβ¦ Papa? You were never my papa! You never took care of us always took care of your business. You involved maa in your charity dinners and organisations that even she couldnβt look after us.
His eyes were welling up and his voice was also breaking.
Laksh: because of you I am in this state! I always wanted your attention but all you could give us was your anger and your hatred towards my lifestyle. You never hugged me to tell me that you are here for me!
DP: this empire that I created was for you and your brother!
Laksh: an empty empire without love and care! Where everybody is so selfish! Well thank you so very much
AP had tears in her eyes as she knew that she also got caught up in so many things that she forgot to take care of her own sons.
Laksh: I hate you all I really do! That Sanskar I wish he never sees happiness! What he has done to me he doesnβt deserve happiness. From now on, even Iβll be selfish. And both of you, oh whatever!
He moves towards the stairs and is about to fall but he composes himself and walks into his room.
DP: I only have one solution!
AP: we canβt force anything on him at this point
DP: we have to!
AP: do you mean?
DP: yes!
AP gets tensed and they both head to their room.
In the morning, Laksh has a massive hangover because he drank too much. He remembers the events and recalls himself saying that he never wants to see Sanskar happy! He never wanted to say that because after all he is his brother. He remembers what Sanskar did to him and jerks his thoughts. He gets out of bed and takes a cold shower trying to forget all the past events. He gets ready and sees his parents at the breakfast table and gives them a sarcastic smile.
AP: Laksh come have breakfast with us!
Laksh: what is this new drama?
DP: behave!
Laksh: you donβt tell me what to do when you donβt know how to behave yourself!
DP: come home earlier tonight!
Laksh: a fake dinner weβre having?
AP: Laksh please listen to us
Laksh: go ahead Iβm listening
DP: we want you to meet someone! Itβs time for you to become responsible
Laksh: meet who? The president? Or are you putting me in a rehab?
DP: nothing like that but come earlier.
Laksh was confused and gave them a whatever look. Everyone goes to their work and Laksh goes out with omi.
Omi: yaar you need to have trust in me you know me since primary school and we have been a team!
Laksh: I know but me and my brother have also been together since I was born
Omi: maybe he had some pressure or he had to do it for some reason
Laksh: what reason huh? What reason? The only reason is that it was their strategy to come inside the house and make their places into everyoneβs hearts
Omi: maybe Swara was pressurising him because she didnβt want you to propose her
Laksh got thinking: leave it I donβt want to talk about those people. They mean nothing to me!
Omi: letβs have fun and forget about this! Ok?
Laksh: letβs go.
They both leave and waste yet another day doing nothing and walking in and out of bars and clubs.
In the evening, Laksh gets home and sees his parents with another business tycoon: The Sanghiras and their daughter Kavya. They were having tea and snacks when Laksh barges in.
Sanghira: there he is! My boy you have grown up to be very handsome
Laksh gives DP an angry and confused look
Sanghira: here is Kavya my daughter
She eyes Laksh lustfully and gives him a smile
AP: Laksh please come and sit down here talk to them
Laksh: what for?
Kavya: we came here for our rishtaβ¦ I think you and me need some private time together donβt we?
AP gets a bit shocked: umm yes Laksh take her to the terrace you guys can get to know each other
Laksh is still confused and goes upstairs while Kavya follows.
On the terrace:
Kavya holds his arm: oh Laksh you donβt know how much I wanted you to be my spouse
Laksh jerks her hand and gives her a disgusted look
Kavya: we were meant to be I will always take care of you and will help you with business
Laksh turns around: you would betray me too like all those blo*dy business minded people do
Kavya: what are you saying baby I will be with you
Laksh: would you be able to live with me if I was poor and left my dad? And didnβt let you do business?
Kavya: hahah why are you talking like poor people?
Laksh smirks and goes near her while she gets happy and closes her eyes. Suddenly, she hears a noise and feels her cheek warm. Yes, he had slapped her! She was completely shocked and ran downstairs while crying.
Laksh shouts so everyone hears: I have had enough of people like you! blo*dy selfishβ¦
Sanghira and his wife are furious seeing their daughter in this state!
Sanghira: DP you have insulted me and my family!
DP: that was not my intention I thought if I fix his marriage he will be ok
Laksh descends the stairs and claps: good drama but itβs over these people who are business minded just annoy me!
DP: enough is enough apologise to kavya!
Laksh: what for? She should apologise to me for looking at me like Iβm her next business deal
Sanghiraβs wife: how could you do this! My daughter is worth more than your useless son! You will see weβll get our daughter married to someone who is amazing unlike your drunkard son!
Laksh: thank you so much for nothing! Get out!
DP: LAKSH!
Laksh goes in his room and he is breaking all the things around him.
Downstairs:
AP: I told you not to!
Sanghira: so you knew your son wouldnβt want to but you still did this to us? Letβs go from here
DP sits down and puts his hand on his head.
DP: he will neverβ¦
AP: he needs our love
DP: he doesnβt need our love he is just doing this for his own benefit to make us look like idiots in front of others. To defame our name!
AP: you are again thinking in a negative manner then how can he be positive?
They are sitting down on the couch when they see Laksh coming down with a bag in his hands. He is about to head towards the door when AP stops him.
AP: where are you going?
Laksh: leaving this house!
AP: you canβt leave this house how will youβ¦
DP: let him go! He will learn how to survive without all the luxuries and will know that all this is a necessity to him!
Laksh: I will show you how I can be happy without you being in my life!
AP: Laksh you canβt go like this what will I become? Both of my sons are leaving me what will I do?
Laksh: Maa this is his house and I canβt take him anymore. The day I become happy, I will come and show him that money cannot buy his sonβs happiness
AP: but why are you doing this to me?
Laksh: I think we all need this break
AP is crying standing on the stairs and DP is not ready to leave his pride and stop his children. The Maheshwari family was shattered! None of the parents knew where Sanskar was and now, their other son was also gone! Many questions were roaming in APβs head:
How are my kids?
Where would they go?
I did make a mistake by not giving my children time!
AP: this is all my fault!
She was standing there not being able to take anything in her hands
AP: I couldnβt make my family stick together! I was the mother and the lady of the family butβ¦
DP: it is not your fault! Your children donβt deserve all the luxuries we gave them! Our name, our money, they didnβt deserve any of it!
AP: you are right! They deserved love⦠I resign from any jobs to do with your business. I want to save our relation and want to try to bring our family back together⦠if my children come back, I want them to know that their maa has changed and she wants to give her sons the love they deserve.
DP: I donβt understand why all of you have gone mad. Do whatever you all want! I have to and need to run my business!
AP knows that it wonβt be of any use to convince DP so she tries to change herself. She then goes to pray for her sons and asks god for their happiness.
Screen freezes on the worried face of AP
Precap: Laksh in Omiβs house. Raginiβs entry? Maybeβ¦ Letβs seeβ¦
41 Comments
Hey Shazi,
That was a great update. Looking forward to the next one. Hope you can post soon. ?
Hey! thanks for your support means a lot <3
Super…..waiting for Ragini entry…
Next part for sure π
Nice eagerly waiting for ragini entry and i loved it
thank u π next part she will enter
awesome
thanks a lot π
Nice waiting for Ragini entry keep going
next part Ragini will enter π
Awesome
waiting for ragini entry
tnx π next part for sure
superb
thank u jii π
Interesting episode dear and I loved Laksh’s slap, kavya deserve it. Eagerly waiting for Ragini’s entry and Raglak meeting
haha i always wanted Laksh to slap Kavya so I thought to add it here :p
it’s awesome amazing actually loved it plzz try to entry ragini soon plzz next part soon don’t be late be regular plZzzzzzzz
i will be regular don’t sorry and Ragini will enter in the next part π
*worry
Awesome
tnx π
awesome dear….kavya u deserve that slap…waiting for ragini entry…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
thank u dear! I know i hated Kavya so i thought she needs a slap haha
fab and waiting for her entry xx
thanks π
Awesome one Shazi, I’m loving it βΊοΈ
DP and Lakshya fights are good ????
Looking forward to read the next part, take care and keep smiling?
Thanks a lot this means so much π next part our Ragini will enter π
Superb sis.. Waiting for next update
Thank u π
awesome loved it
thanks π
Fights are Awesome……
Loved it…..
thank you π
awesome
thanksss π
Fantastic
tnx π
there was no swasan scence.plz add some of there scene in next part.and yeah keep swasan happy.
Interesting update
Totally loved it
So laksh left d house
Kavya deserves d slap
Eagerly waiting for the raglak meet
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting to read more
Dear i have posted part three hope u like that part too π thanks for your comment
Awesome