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Home»Fan Fiction»Dangerous LOVE… But STILL I Want It – Episode 1
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Dangerous LOVE… But STILL I Want It – Episode 1

AthiraBy AthiraJanuary 20, 201720 Comments5 Mins Read
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hi guys… thank you so much for the comments… plz be regular on reading and don’t miss it…. thank you to the silent readers also….

scene 1,
Dp : is laksh wake up ready?
Ap, who’s doing chaos in kitchen looked at Dp…
Ap : how do I know? go and check.
Ap washes the dishes.. Dp nods…
Dp :(while walking) ha, always send me to wake him up… even we had a buffalo, it’ll be helpful but Laksh… don’t know which category he’s from…
Ap laughs with his compliments about laksh… Dp reached the room of Laksh..
Laksh is seen sound and sleep… Dp came to him..
Dp :(removing his blanket) laksh, wake up fast…
Laksh turned away and sleep… DP looked around for any object to wake him up and saw a water bottle… Dp goes and get the bottle.. he opened it and spread the water on laksh’s face… Laksh jerked got up from bed… he is looking with wide eyes..
Dp : hey, Laksh… here look at me…
Dp said… Laksh turned to him and rubbed his eyes then looked..
Laksh : papa, you?
Laksh yawned and asked..
Dp : ha, me…
Laksh : why you wrinkles the water on me?
Dp : see the time…
Laksh looked at the clock with a confused face and saw it 8.30am..
Laksh :8.30
Dp : it’s late, na?
laksh : today, I have classes on 10.30
Laksh lied down on bed.. Dp looked on…
Dp : okay…. I’m late…
Dp walks away… Laksh looked at him and then sleep again… Dp came down..
Dp :(while wearing watch) I’m leaving, annu!
Ap :(washing) ha, bye…
Dp closes the door behind and walks away… after few minutes, Laksh came down to the dining table…
Ap : laksh, are you woke up?
Laksh : yes, ma…
he looked bored and looked around..
Laksh : maa! coffee please..
Ap turned and gave him a look.. then handed him a cup of coffee…
laksh : thank..
laksh glad and got up… he walks to the window… while he drinks the coffee, he saw his opposite house… the house has been with some men and women…
Laksh : is anyone come to the opposite house…?
Ap come beside him and peeped out…
Ap : don’t know… but I think someone is coming.
Ap walks away… Laksh stared at the persons and the things around….

Scene 2,
on the others side, in road… a car stopped aside… inside out, a girl comes out.. she’s wearing a veil and wears a black Punjab suit… her eyes are so attractive with dark kajol…
she walks to the house…
Ragini : bhai, put it in..
she instructions a man… the man nodded and takes the bag in….
Laksh while peeping looked at her.
.he somehow got attractive to her… he stared at her…
ragini looked around with her eyes… her eyes says nothing even a smile.. she. looked still…
she then suddenly bends down… Laksh looked at her.. his eyebrows raise up… ragini took a sketch book that lies down… she wiped the dust on it…she then hugged it to her chest…
she turn and looked shekar and janki coming to the house. she silently gets in…
Laksh : who’s this girl?
he thinks and looks away and noticed janki and Shekar coming to the house… he got suspicious…
Laksh :(thinking) the girl is wearing a veil on her face like a Muslim… but they are dressed as marwari..?
he scretched his head and walks in…

scene 3,
ragini comes into a room and turned to close the door… janki and Shekar looked at her.. Ragini without saying anything closes the door on their face… shekar looked at janki… janki winks her eyes to be patient…
inside, Ragini opened her suit case and took a photo and put it on the table… she then comes to infront of mirror… she looks at her veiled face… Ragini then starts to untie it then takes it from her face…
her hair fallen on her back freely… her lips areglossy red… her eyes are applied kajol and shading… she wearing a earring…
ragini looked at herself without any smiles on her face… only a sad mixed…

scene 4,
Laksh gets ready for the college… he came down and packed his water bottle and lunch box…
Laksh : bye, maa…
laksh said.. Ap is watching serial.
Ap : okay, bye..
Ap didn’t looked at him but her eyes are focused on the serial… Laksh saw her and smiles.. he comes out of his house… he started to put shoes and looked at the opposite house…
there are people doing things… he stared for a while… after, putting his shoe, he walks to his bike…
ragini again veiling come to the window and looked out… he saw Laksh starting his bike… she sees what’s he doing.. Laksh felt and looked back but no one.. Ragini looked at him… Laksh then looked up at the direction of ragini’s room window… Ragini hides aside in anticipation…
ragini looked at him while hiding behind wall.. Laksh turned back but feels someone is watching him…
Laksh :(thinking) who’s watching me?
the bike starts and Laksh rides it away….Ragini looked at him going….

To be Continued…..

Bye… hope you’ll like it…

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    20 Comments

    1. A.xx on January 20, 2017 3:25 am

      amazing wonder what the mystery is xx

      • Athira on January 20, 2017 4:04 am

        tq

    2. Sindhura on January 20, 2017 6:16 am

      Nice

    3. tani on January 20, 2017 9:07 am

      Wonderful

    4. nikky on January 20, 2017 9:10 am

      we will regular but u should be regular plzz don’t stop in middle its awesome

    5. nikky on January 20, 2017 9:10 am

      nice awesome mind blowing outstanding plzz all raglak ff writer. give raglak ff and os ss ts but plzz write there raglak ff is decreasing day by day and yaa all who are writing is not updating left in middle plzz don’t do this and some are ending so soon plzz see Na swasan have many ff who reach above 50 and still writing but raglak is very less plzz did Temish fandom is weak plzz who raglak fan write more and new one and complete update regularly plzz guys and all those who were writing big wala thanks u keep raglak or Temish alive and plzz guys pay their hrdwork by comments

    6. sanchami on January 20, 2017 9:21 am

      Superb

    7. Raglakholic on January 20, 2017 10:56 am

      Amazing update
      Totally interesting
      Please do continue soon
      Eagerly waiting to read more

    8. Amritha on January 20, 2017 11:28 am

      Amazing waiting for the mystery to cum out

    9. abi on January 20, 2017 11:49 am

      Wow superb

    10. asra on January 20, 2017 12:56 pm

      awesome dear….what the mystery behind the veil…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    11. lovely on January 20, 2017 1:33 pm

      Fabulous

    12. Astra on January 20, 2017 2:46 pm

      aweosme dear

    13. IQRA222 on January 20, 2017 4:52 pm

      awesome and what the mystery behind the veil is

    14. lisa on January 20, 2017 5:40 pm

      nice intersting

    15. Ammu on January 20, 2017 7:52 pm

      It’s interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next

    16. Malu on January 20, 2017 10:11 pm

      Superb part

    17. dharani on January 22, 2017 1:12 pm

      superb

    18. Ragz_teju on January 22, 2017 3:22 pm

      awesome

    19. hemalattha on January 27, 2017 3:09 pm

      Awesome.

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