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Home»Fan Fiction»A danger game of love (Episode 9)
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A danger game of love (Episode 9)

WardhaRosYYBy WardhaRosYYJune 28, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys i am back with another episode. Whoever are reading this plz comment below n share your feedback. Lets begin.

Kabeer:- Dr.Saachi and Dr. Veer. I guess I have chosen kids to assist me in the surgery.

Saachi and Veer say nothing.

Kabeer:- But this is not gonna be tolerated anymore. You will be punished and the punishment is to sweep the whole hodpital..
Veer:- What! The whole hospital!
Kabeer:- Dr.Veer if you have any problem then thats not my problem.

Kabeer leaves , Riya goes behind him.
Sweeper gives the mops to Saachi and Veer.

Veer:- That Dr.Khadoos made us sweepers.
Saachi:- Therevis no use getting angry lets start.
Anyway how many floors are there?
Veer:- Not Many atleast……..8.
Saachi(opening her mouth) :- What!
Veer(closing her mouth):- There is no use gettong shocked, lets start.

Saachi and Veer start sweeping. A little boy.passing by drops his candy.

Veer:- What are you doing? Cant you see we are sweeping.
Saachi:- Calm down Veer! Its a little boy.

Saachi and Veer sweep for like 1hr 45mins and ate finally done with their work. They see an old woman, who is chewing pan and then spits on the floor.
Saachi rushes to her.

Saachi:- You know how much hardwork it takes to sweep! You know how it feels when you sweep for like 2hrs then someone comes and spits.
Veer:- Cool down Saachi! Its an old woman.
Saachi(realizing):- Sorry.
Old woman:- Even the sweepers of this hospital have got loads of attitude.
Saachi:- What! Sweepers?

Veer starts laughing, saachi stares at him.

Veer:- You have cleaned the floor, now what yourself?

Veer turns over yhe dirty bucket water on Saachi.

Saachi:- Ewwwww!

Veer runs away. Saachi goes and takes a bath. After coming out.

Pragya:- Saachi my 8yr old patient is very stubborn will you help me handle him?
Saachi:- Sorry Pagya, i have to go to Dr.Kabeer to show test results of my patient.

Saachi goes to his cabin and knocks on his door.

Kabeer:- Come in.

Saachi cones in with a file. She opens it and shows him test results and asks him suggestions. Meanwhile her hair fly onto Kabeer’s face. He moves them. They fly again Kabeer gets irritated. Saachi realizing the disturbance, tucks her hair behind her ear. She comes close again to show him something, Kabeer closes the file.

Kabeer:- I will see it, you go.

Saachi leaves.Riya smiles and looks at Kabeer.

Kabeer:- Whats it? Dr.Riya.
Riya:- Nothing Sir……
Kabeer:- Then go!

Riya leaves half heartedly. Saachi goes to her ward. She talks to her patient. Her patient Vaani, requests her to take her on a round around the hospital as her legs are useless. Saachi agrees. She takes her on a wheelchair. She shows her the blood bank, emergency area, canteen and many things. Kabeer is talking to Fernandez in the corridor. He sees Saachi and walks up to her.

Kabeer:- Dr. Saachi with whose permission, you bought the patient out of her ward.
Saachi:- Sir my patient’s legs are paralyzed. She wanted to roam. So i just……….
Kabeer:- Take her back to her ward.

Saachi starts to take her back. Vaani requests her that she wants to see the garden. Saachi is taking her towards the garden. On her way, she meets an intern and starts talking to her. She stops her wheelchair in front of a slope. Vaani tries to get back but due to prezsure on the front, it goes foreward down the slope into the garden, towards the pool. Saachi sees that and runs behind. She hits a stone and trips. Vaani is on the edge of the pool, just then someone holds it. its Veer. Saachi runs to him with tears in her eyes.

Saachi:- Thanks a lot Veer you dont know what you did.
Veer:- The problem is not yet ended.

Saachi gives a confused look.

Kabeer:- Dr.Saachi.

Saachi turns around.

Kabeer:- I have never seen an irresponsible doctor like you before.

Kabeer calls Fernandez. She cones.

Kabeer to Fernandez:- Never give Dr. Saachi any patient to handle, except in someone’s supervision. And bring all her records and files directly to me. I will check it myself.

Kabeer and Fernandez leave.

Veer:- Dont worry Saachi, Dr.kabeer will never change.
Saachi(correcting):- Dr.Khadoos.

Veer smiles.

Saachi:- Thanks again Veer.
Veer:- You are thanking me for saving someone’s life?

Saachi stares at him.

Veer:- Oh miss sneezu. This wont affect our Cute fights.
Saachi(smiling):- Never!

Veer leaves.
Saachi thinks “Veer is not that bad as i thought him to be. He is good of heart and on the other side that Dr.Khadoos”.

Precap:- Veer ties two buckets of water on the entrance of the hospital and persuades Saachi to go out , Kabeer is entering. (The entrance and exit of the hospital is same)

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    23 Comments

    1. sanyukta on June 28, 2017 5:57 pm

      Fabulous as usual.???????Keep writing dear.
      Dr.Khadoos???? how dare u to give such a punishment to our cute Sanveer.
      Sanveer fight was cute.
      I think u decided male main lead of ur ff.bcoz in this ff Veer was highlighting.?????????
      Ria there is no need to flirt with Dr.Kabeer.He is a Khadoos.And i think interns must called him Hitler.

      I was waiting for it from so many time.But finally i read it.☺☺☺☺

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:25 am

        Hey sanyukta i also like his new name Dr.Khadoos?

    2. Ayonija on June 28, 2017 6:22 pm

      Oh wow it’s so interesting….Hmm…?Sanveer are going on same track….I think that it would be a love triangle…But don’t know what’s about. But….its awesome…Loved it. Precap was much interesting Kabeer will angry more now and drenched also???Its funny also…Love it. Loads of love..Post soon.

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:26 am

        Yeah! Now Kabeer’s anger will reach its peak.

    3. RANdomfANCreationz on June 28, 2017 6:54 pm

      I liked this update ??? haha poor Sanchi and veer had to clean the entire hospital ??? this kabeer doesn’t even know how to praise his interns ??? instead of praising veer for saving vaani he is scolding Saanchi ?? how dare he! And this riya don’t have any other work dr.kabir Ke Chamche ???
      And yes thank u soooo much for finally updating it ?????????

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:27 am

        Dr.Kabeer ki chamchi?

      • RANdomfANCreationz on June 29, 2017 2:56 pm

        Haha this is auto correction’s fault not mine ???

    4. prettypreeti on June 28, 2017 7:12 pm

      oh ho what an epi!!!!!!!!!seriously u nailed it..the cute fights of sanveer r really vry approaching..i mean bucket of dirty water wow great imagination dear and sanveer rocked today oh dr khadoos okk always in anger but loved his angry avatar..today epi was awesome..thanks for uploading and again who is male lead??ok im going now leaving this comment for u..u r really superb..thanks fr writing..wardha keep it up
      love ya
      post soon

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:30 am

        Its getting clear day by day. I mean i dont need to tell you about the male lead. You will understand yourself in the coming episodes.

    5. Lucky on June 28, 2017 7:46 pm

      Yo! another fabulous chapter????
      The previous is amazing, waiting anxiously?? to know that how that Dr. Khadoos??? reacts..
      But, hey! I still can’t really guess as to who is the male lead?? , you said that it is about to get revealed ????
      Waiting eagerly for next update???

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:32 am

        Lucky dont worry. The answer to your question is in the next episodes.

    6. parul on June 28, 2017 7:54 pm

      hi guys how romantic sanchi hair fly on to kabeer’s face. plz kabeer KO romantic banao. or lovestory KO aage badao. plz pair sanchi and kabir (kanchi) .

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:33 am

        Its very soon gonna be revealed if its Sanveer or Kaanchi!

    7. Sandhya on June 28, 2017 8:05 pm

      Hey I don’t like Saachi hating kabeer,yet it is cute .Is any person from Andra pradesh following this???

      • gagana on June 29, 2017 7:19 am

        yes its me from guntur,andra pradesh

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:37 am

        I am from also from andhra pradesh not telangana?

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:34 am

        Hmm who cannot hate that Khadoos??

    8. ammu on June 28, 2017 8:06 pm

      Loved today’s update

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 7:35 am

        Thanks Ammu

    9. Nisha on June 29, 2017 9:31 am

      Hi wardha, m commenting fr the first tym….ur ff s fabulous, nd I would lyk to see kanchi pair. Nyways in the serial it’s confirmed that it’s sanveer…so at least in ur ff let it be kanchi…..nd waiting fr ur nxt episode…

      • WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 12:08 pm

        Thank you Nisha for commenting. You will get to soon about the pairing.

    10. Lucky on June 29, 2017 4:44 pm

      Plzz Update soonish????

    11. WardhaRosYY on June 29, 2017 5:40 pm

      alteady updated lucky but its taking time for review.

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