Hey guys I want you to rate my ff’s out of 5 in the comments. Hope you will. Now getting to the story.
Saachi is running behind Veer. She collides with Nurse Fernandez.
Fernandez :- This is not a playground that you run around and you are just an intern in this hospital so don’t forget your limits.
Saachi:- Sorry sister.
Fernandez goes. Veer shouts Miss Sneezu,come catch me.Saachi gets angry and runs behind him. He tackles Saachi around canteen tables and stairs.
Veer runs towards the canteen again. The floor is wet. Veer suddenly stops.
Veer:- Wait! why am I running.
Saachi gives a confused look.
Veer:- I am not scared of Miss sneezu.
Saachi folds her fist to side punch him.
Veer:- You will beat me? Come on do it. Come touch me, touch meeee.
Saachi realizes and turns to go. Veer holds her hand and pulls her back, Saachi slips.
Veer (worriedly):- I hope the earth didn’t get a crack.
Saachi gets up hurrily in anger and slips again.
Veer:- Woooh! Take care Miss sneeze.
Veer runs away.
Saachi:- Veeeeer!
Saachi hits the floor in anger.
Pragya and Isha come there.
Isha:- What are you doing on the floor?
Pragya :- Sweeping.
Pragya laughs.
Saachi:- Pragya shut up.
Saachi gets up.
Pragya:- Carefully! What happened how did you slip?
Saachi:- It’s a long story. I will go to the medical shop and get Glyceromorphic. You guys go.
Pragya:- Hurry back. That Khadoos has called for a surprise evening class, sharp 7.
Saachi:- OK.
2hrs later i.e 7:00pm.
All the interns are in the record room. Kabeer is lecturing them about how to arrange and search files in a record room.
After the lecture he tells everyone to arrange and find some files. He sets a stopwatch.
Kabeer:- Let’s see who does it first.
Everyone starts searching for files. Veer thinks”This is something I can’t do”.He sits on the ground and sees everyone fighting and arguing to find files.
Riya:- Dr. Kabeer. Its done.
Kabeer(checks):- Yes, so Dr. Riya has finished first.Lets see who does next.
Saachi:- Sir mine is done.
Kabeer:- Dr. Saachi is second. Come on interns hurry up!
Veer sees a stack of files shaking and Saachi standing right under it. Kabeer sees that too.
The files fall, Saachi bends. Veer and Kabeer rushes and hold the files from opposite directions. They look at each other. Saachi opens her eyes and looks up. She stands out.
Veer and Kabeer drop the files on the ground.
Kabeer:- Look around Dr. Saachi and be attentive.
The stopwatch rings.
Kabeer:- The class is dismissed.
Saachi comes out, Isha Pragya come behind her.
Prqgya:- Oh miss innocent I didn’t know that you are so cunning.
Saachi:- What do you mean?
Pragya :- One side Veer, other side Dr. Kabeer good.
Saachi :- It’s nothing like that…….i don’t have time for this wastetalk. I have to attend my patient.
Pragya :- Wait where is my file.
Isha:- Your file?
Pragya :- I mean my patient’s file. I think I kept it somewhere in the record room.
Isha:- Now what?
Pragya :- Dr. Kabeer will kill me. He said that he will check the file tomorrow.
Saachi:- Tell him honestly that you lost it.
Pragya :-No, I don’t want to die.
Saachi:- Then?
Pragya:- Have to sneak in the record room to find it.
Saachi:- No way.
Pragya :- This is the only way.
Precap:- I need two interns to assist me in a major surgery, 3 days later, Those two interns are……
16 Comments
I give it a 4.5 out of 5 because I want them to be longer please otherwise it’s good.
sby thank you for your rating. I will try to make episodes longer but it’s getting a little difficult .
I give it a 3.5 out of 5 because I want kanchi (kabeer and sanchi) more love scene. so sad sanchi ki help ke liye only kabeer hi hona chaye. no veer , veer is a prankster and Dr kabeer is a caring . so I hope plz more scene kabeer and sanchi .
Thank you for rating Parul i will try my best to improve on my weaknesses.
Five out of five, because this is the best ff☺☺☺☺☺
Lucky my ❤. Even i rate all your comments 5 on 5.
Wow nice epi yaar I liked it ??? haha veer always teases sanchi poor Sanchi ?, haha sweeping the floor ???, and once again interesting precap ???
For the ratings for the starting I will give u 4.5/5
Story is good, the flow is good , and it’s really funny which is what I love the most about this story. And I also like the way u update daily or almost daily cause it’s not an easy thing to update daily.
Thanks Randomfancreationz , your comments are long and enthusiastic.
3 out of 5. Becoz i can’t understand the main leads of the FF. Kabeer and Veer small confusion. And…I love sanveer that’s why.. But…if i tell about ur story it’s looks like real. It seems that its more interesting then the serial…U define every sentence with very nice words. I love it. Keep posting..And that’s the most imp. Thing that u post it daily. U are the punctualest writer. Waiting for the next part. LOADS OF LOVE WARDHA..
Thanks a lot Ayonjoa. The suspense about the male lead is about to burst out.
Fabulous episode.Keep writing dear.
I want to give u a perfect 5/5.☺☺☺
The reason is , kisi ko na pasand karne ki toh bahut wajah hoti hai par iss ff ko pasand karne ki kya wajah batau main aapko.
I know it’s filmy but i loved it.
I wanna know do u watch Ishqbaaz and DIl bole oberoi.If u watch then which one is ur favourite jodi among Shivika,Ishkara,
Gaukara or Rumya?
Plz tell me.I want ur suggestion in writing poetries.i have write two poetries on Ishkara and Shivika.
Thank you Sanyukta for rating me 5. Sorry but I dont watch any of these serials.
hey wardha royy agin a spectular epi..really dr u r awesome.i will rate it 4.5 because of the cute scenes of sanveer …really they were awesome…and yup I m waiting for male lead…just superbbbbb..loved it…….keep it up..
Thank you for your pretty comment.
I think i would rate 5/5 coz i Dont find any reason not to give.. Kaanchi pair super! I love this ff
Thanks a lot Sam