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Dangal Special OS (Rikara) – Shraddha

Shraddha-DBOBy Shraddha-DBOSeptember 6, 201719 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi ishqies & pkjs, Shraddha back with an OS. I know I’ve so much to complete, but still dangal wala rikara really touched me & so writing something about that in my imagination.

Sorry for typo errors, not proof read.Hope you’ll like it…

Om & Gouri were brought back to the haveli by the villagers.The women of the area were making an attempt to see the ladki who had fought with Balram, the mightiest person of the village.He was a vagabond too, who had always disturbed the girls of the village.But it was true that they couldn’t fight back to him or complain to his dadaji.

The elder women were discussing about how Prithviraj Oberoi had once defeated & taught a lesson to the dangal wala Dada. Now Oberoi son & the Bahu have once again defeated them. The girls were admiringly watching Rikara.

As they were about to step into the haveli, a lady came with aarti plate to greet both of them.

L: nazar Na lage, in donon pe.( smiling)
Om: no, no, it’s not needed ma.My wife is wounded , she needs rest now.

Gouri was astonished hearing this.After all it was him who had been wounded the most, but he’s talking about her & referring her as the wounded.

Om didn’t realize what he’d told until his eyes locked with hers. It was true that he didn’t want to admit his affection towards her, not because of his ego, but thinking about what she’d feel.In fact she had declared herself to be Oberoi Bahu only, not his wife. So he thought, she wouldn’t feel fine if he show his affection to her openly.

The lady did their aarti, applied till & took them to the haveli. Few minutes later, the local doctor came there to check both & gave some medicines to them.

Gouri was seeing Om. She felt angry on him for not taking those herbal medicines & applying it on the wound. She was waiting for him to do it, but he didn’t. She couldn’t control any more, it’s true that she was keeping a distance with him as bade Bhaiyya told, but couldn’t ignore him him totally in this state as he’s her….she snapped out the thought from her mind. He had done a lot for her, so she has the duty to repay those favours; thinking this she moved towards him.

Om was simply lost in thoughts & didn’t observe Gouri near him.His mind was filled with the picture of a fallen gouri on the akhada. He was trying to figure out why he had felt that immense pain in his heart to see her like that. He could feel a soft cold touch on his face & he was startled.

Gouri slowly turned his face to her & examined those fresh wounds near his nose & his lips. She slowly cleaned the wound with cloth & started applying the medicine on his face.

“Aaah…”he painfully moaned as she applied the medicine.
“Is it paining Omkaraji??” she was worried. Something pricked in Om’s heart, seeing her pouting face.He just nodded in reply.

The moments so quite, as she carefully kept on applying the herbal medicine, whereas his eyes were trailing along her face. He couldn’t believe that it was this same girl whom he had hated to the core, for past few months. All his assumptions were proved wrong by this girl. His mind & brain were always in 2 distant poles whenever he thought about her. He even doubted that his eyes were deceiving him, back in Bareilly in giving a bad impress ion on this chiraiyya.

“The talented pehelwan, fell down on his nose even b4 entering the akhada!!” she spoke, bringing out Om from his deep thoughts. He knew that she was teasing him, but the truth was that he loved it, he loved her style of making the mood light.

“waise Omkaraji , I’ve seen dangal movie. But I didn’t see any scene where the wrestler falls down on his nose, even b4 the game starts. Oh..it might your new trick, hai Na!!”
Gouri laughed harder, saying this.

Om thought, oho she’s going higher & higher, it’s time to stop her silly jokes. He faked an angry face & took hold of her hands tightly…

“Omkaraji….” she writhed in pain.
“Gouri….” Om worriedly took her name. Her eyes were red, filled with tears.

As Om took her hands to observe, he saw that her creamy white skin had been reddish all along with marks here & there. This might have happened while she fought with hands , he thought.

Om’s heart was bleeding seeing her suppressing her pain & tears.He shouldn’t have hold her like that, he thought.

“Rona band karo. Before teasing me, take a look at your bewakoofi.See all these marks.”

Gouri become angry & punched him on his hand , while Om screamed with pain.

Gouri became worried & began rubbing his hands, while she began smiling slightly.
“ajeeb chirotta hain tum!! hmm…”

Om was smiling seeing her cuteness
“it’s good to see you smile so happily like this, rather than crying.”, he accidentally blurted out.

Gouri looked at him surprisingly, while Om bit his tongue.He thought that he’s not able to control his words in front of her. Gouri was blushing hearing such words from him.

As Om looked away, he saw that kada was kept for both of them.He remember the lady saying that Gouri might have inner injuries.He took the copper vessel which had kada in it & gave it to her.
O: gouri, drink this now.So that all ur injuries would be healed.

Gouri made faces seeing kada.
G: woh…nahi Omkaraji, I don’t like to have kada.Please keep it away.
O: arey,dont be ziddy. You yourself brought troubles & now you are showing attitude.Its about your health Gouri, come on have this.
G: please…nahi… Omkaraji…
O: gouri, if you continue like this, I’ll call Dadi to come here & take care of you. She’ll definitely make you have this.
G: iski koi zaroorat nahi hai.Ill be fine.

Om caught Gouri by her head, & forcefully began making her have kada.Gouri was protesting & not opening her mouth,but she failed.
Om slowly made her to drink it while she had it with closed eyes.

The taste was unbearable that she slowly clutched his shirt, while he made her to drink it.As she finished it, she made a terrible pouting face.

That was when they noticed that Gouri’s hands were on his chest.Both of them blushed profusely; they quickly moved away.

At that moment, the lady came to them with few bottles.
L: beta, here is some oil.You can apply this is to Gouri, so that her body pain will reduce. I’m keeping this bottle here. You can apply the tel now itself, so that the pain will reduce fast.

Rikara were shocked hearing this. They were looking each other, confused on what to do….

Guys, did u like this?? Shall I continue this??
I wrote this before the episode telecast, so Idk if this is silly. Please do drop in your suggestions, I’ll update the next soon.

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    19 Comments

    1. Logesh.M on September 6, 2017 11:16 pm

      Loved it to the core shraddha….The cv’s should have resumed Dangal track more like this…but they rushed the track…!!!!!!Pleassssssss continue it …….I loved this…..Pleassssssss continue…Loved teasing parts of omri…..take care

    2. Maahi on September 6, 2017 11:18 pm

      Helllooooo @shraddha……
      After a long time u are back….
      What an awesome piece of writing….

      Even I loved the dangal track….
      The way it was show… MINDBLOWING….

      “GauriKara looked like Shiv-Parvati doing TANDAV in akhada”….
      What a bliss full moment….

      AND yes continue writing this one…. I will love to read it….

    3. Dhwani_Naidu on September 6, 2017 11:29 pm

      It’s awesome shraddha.. Do continue this.. Pls update the next one soon..

    4. san on September 6, 2017 11:30 pm

      Awesome Shraddha….Don’t know when Om realises his feeling for Gauri(in IB)….but ur update is just great….waiting for next part…..

    5. Meow on September 6, 2017 11:38 pm

      Very cute and sweet ????????????

    6. Arpita on September 7, 2017 6:50 am

      Shraddha DBO dear, it is really amazing..

      But you are absent in pkj …why??
      Maahi dear, is here also but not in pkj
      ..why ???

      Plz wapas aajao yaar….my cuties…….

    7. Nathalie on September 7, 2017 7:17 am

      Omg!!! I loved it so much. Please do continue it. I love reading your work. It’s amazing. You’re amazing. I’m really looking forward to more. Please continue. ❤❤

    8. Palak on September 7, 2017 8:07 am

      Fabulous. Keep on writing more

    9. Fidha on September 7, 2017 8:23 am

      Hey didi…..I loved this to the core
      Plz do update next part soon
      Caring om and blushing gauri..its just awesome di….don’t stop it…continue it

    10. Praneetha on September 7, 2017 10:03 am

      It’s awesome ????
      Pls post next part

    11. b.k.maha on September 7, 2017 10:13 am

      Superrrrrrrrrrr… Continue dr…

    12. Dinu on September 7, 2017 11:15 am

      I love it soooo much dr.dis is fabulous. Cvs should hv show more of dis track. Bt they rushed it like always. They don’t heed attention to our rikara.anyway I loved how u showed both caring towards each other. They r adorable. Plz continue dis dr.i’m eagerly waiting 4 nxt prt.n plz post soon ur ff too.bye dr tc

    13. nikita_jai29 on September 7, 2017 12:09 pm

      It is awesome dear.. Please continue

    14. Niriha on September 7, 2017 2:13 pm

      Awesome fabulous update Loved it dear…pls continue waiting for next

    15. Zaveesha on September 7, 2017 3:22 pm

      Amazing….do Continue

    16. Veda on September 7, 2017 5:42 pm

      It’s nice
      Plz continue

    17. Sagithya on September 7, 2017 6:09 pm

      Awesome loved it to the core…. Continue pls

    18. UF on September 8, 2017 3:27 am

      AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
      Dear Shraddha
      Love This OmRi??Please Continue…Aap RuMya Shot End Kiya Hai Kya Jo Aap Verna,Kiya Milkar Banaya Ho.Waiting For RuMya Shot.And My Fav RiKara Story ‘When She Coloured My Canvas’I Don’t Know Name Mistake Hua Ho.But That RiKara Story I Really Love It And My Fav Story Too????So Please Come Update That Part?

      Take Care And Stay Safe?

    19. Anusuya on September 14, 2017 2:45 pm

      Your Comment This is superb Di.With your every chappy you make me feel why you are not the writer of RiKara story.
      But it is awesome,you should continue & sorry for late comment.I forgot to comment.This is really enjoyable.

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