Her dance made me fall for her Episode 13 (Last Part)

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Hey guys, I am so so sorry I know I am really very late. Almost a month, actually I was busy seriously very busy. But now I am back! Today was my last test. I know this is the last episode of my ff but I promise I will come with one shot or few shots soon cause I have many stories cooking up in my mind. So finally lets start with the last episode.

Recap: Devakshi sangeet function, Dev comes to meet her secretly and tries to get close.

Night time,
Sona is seen smiling looking at the mirror, a voice comes from back,
: Sona are you thinking about me?
Sona sees Dev in the mirror standing right behind her, she turns behind.
Sona: Umm.. its nothing like that. I was toh..
Dev: what? You were thinking about me only and you cant hide it now.
Sona shies and turns towards mirror and finds no one behind her in the mirror. She turns again and finds no one in her room, she thinks that she was dreaming of Dev and pats her head blushing.

Early morning,
Sona was sleeping peacefully on her bed with a smiling face but this could not long last, she was distributed by her mom.

Asha: Sona wake up, its your marriage today, many preparations are do be done.
Sona: Maa.. let me sleep na…
Asha: Are.. Sona.. you don’t want to marry, uh?
Sona gets up quickly and says: When did I say this?
Asha laughs, : I will miss you Sona..
Sona: I’ll miss you too maa.. And they have a cute but emotional hug.

All the preparations have been done, its evening time and everyone is waiting for the barat to come.

Sona is dressed up as a beautiful bride, surrounded by Asha, Elena and grandmother. They all praise her beauty and have some emotional talks. They hear drums beats and wipe their tears and go down leaving Sona alone. Everyone greets the boy’s family and welcome them. Sona is brought down. All the rituals take place and the marriage is completed.

Pandit: The marriage has now been completed, congratulations.
The couple takes the blessings of elders. Bijoy, Asha and daadi ask Dev to always keep Sona happy and Dev assures them.
After bidai the couple is taken to Ishwari Mansion.Sona enters her sasural with all the rituals. They are given a vessel containing milk(I guess) and they had to find the ring. The one who finds the ring will be ruling their relationship. They both put their hands and Dev holds Sona’s hand. Sona glares at him, Dev smirks. Sona asks Dev to leave her hand through pleading eyes. Dev nods in no. He holds her hand more tightly and Sona angrily stares at him. Niki who was noticing all this thinks to pull their legs.

Niki: Bhai bhabi aakho hi aakho mai kya ishare chalu hai?
Ria pinches Niki,
Niki: Ahh.. di…
Devakshi feel embarrassed. Dev leaves Sona’s hand and she quickly picks the ring to avoid further embarrassment. Everyone clap for her. Ishwari asks everyone to go and sleep as everyone are tired especially Devakshi. Niki, Neha and Riya take Sona with them leaving Dev confused. Ishwari stops Dev and asks him to keep Sona always happy. Dev smiles and says of course maa. He wishes good night to Ishwari and goes towards his room sorry their room.
He reached the door and was stopped by Niki, Riya and Neha. They ask some money for entering the room. Dev who was very eager to go to her Sona quickly agrees and hands over some money to them.

Niki: Aree.. bhaiyaa… Sona di sorry bhabi is not running anywhere. So much desperation to meet her. The three sisters have a laugh while Dev gives a death glare to them.

Riya: ok ok bhaiyaa.. now you can go.. we will not trouble you!

Note: High romantic content, not that much but still read at your own risk

Dev thanks them and gets inside to find Sona sitting on the bed waiting for him. She smiles seeing him. Dev moves towards her. The whole room was decorated with rose petals, even the bed was decorated with a heart of rose petals in the middle. A perfect ambience for romance! Dev came near Sona and sat beside her. He held her hand in his and kissed it. Sona blushed. Dev slowly moved to her face and kissed her right cheek. And he continued kissing her left cheek, forehead. He gently removed the necklaces and places soft kisses on her neck. Sona felt his warm breath on her neck. He removes her ear rings and bites her earlobe. Sona was not able to take it as she felt very shy so she ran towards the window and looked at the dark yet beautiful sky with stars. She thanked God for bringing Dev in her life. As soon as she opened her eyes she felt two strong hands encircling her bare waist, she felt shivers run through her spine. She held Dev’s hand and they stood like that for a while.

Dev slowly turns towards her and quickly grabbed her soft cherry lips, Sona felt rough lips touching hers and was shocked by Dev’s sudden move. She didn’t reciprocate at first but then Dev bit her lower lip making her come back to her senses and without any further delay she reciprocated. It was a kiss full of passion, love, they continued with the intension of never leaving. But slowly they felt breathless and were forced to leave each other. Sona shied a lot and had turned the darkest shade of crimson and buried her head under Dev’s wide chest. Dev hugged her back and then picked her up in his arms. Sona again turned crimson and Dev smiled at her look. He was indeed loving it. They reached towards the bed and Dev gently placed her on the bed and got over Sona. He kissed and her face and placed love bites on her neck which made Sona moan his name. She felt the warm breaths of Dev.. he slowly removed the safety pins of her saree and removed it and threw it down. Now Sona was left just with the blouse and the petticoat. Dev slightly moved her hands to her bare waist and placed kisses on it along with love bites which made Sona groan.

She then got up and came over Dev, now she was on top, she started kissing him passionately and slowly untucked his sherwani, while Dev was just praising her beauty. He tucked her strands of her hair behind her ear which were blocking her view. She looked up to him and smiled opening the last button. She removed his sherwani along with his vest. And placed her head on his bare chest. Dev slowly untied the knot of her blouse leading Sona to shiver. He removed her blouse making her shy. He threw that also on the floor and moved his hands on her bare back only with the b*a left. He also untied the knot of her petticoat while she looked down shying. He helped Sona in removing it and Sona also removed Dev’s bottom. Dev also removed her underwear and opened the hook of her b*a. Sona was left with nothing and Dev removed his. Sona covered themselves with the blanket and consummated their marriage.

The End!
Thanks for reading!

I hope that it was not too much! If it was then I am really sorry. Please let me know your views on this but no bashing please, it was my first attempt of writing a wedding night so I really don’t know whether it was good or not. Let me know your views so that I can improve. But please no abusive words. Bye.. Love you guys..


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  1. Superb episode……??❤???????❤………Awesome one…….I’ll really miss ur ff…..and writings so please comeback soon……I’ll bee waiting……???……. Hope ur tests went well…..????
    Lots of love…..until u r back..❤..❤?

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Malehaa!!My tests went well 🙂
      Love yaa..

    2. Angel20

      Omg!! Thank you so much for your support and opening the books of history.. seriously yaar you are so sweet!! 🙂
      OK just because you want me to come back I’ll come back. OK? Now happy?
      Seriously yaar thank you so much for your support (^^)

  2. Aarti32

    Superb.. I’ll miss u n your ff too

    1. Angel20

      Thanks Aarti!!

      1. Aarti32

        Hey, Maria..u can also call me Aaru yaar, I’m Aaru, but jst changed my name due to some issues..

    2. Angel20

      Oh I am so sorry I didnt recognise you. Thanks Aaru 🙂

      1. Aarti32

        No yaar plzz don’t say sorry.. it’s natural dat anyone will get confused

  3. Niki645

    Amazing Maria di!!!!!
    I will miss ur ff so much!!!
    Do come back with one more soon???

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much!!

  4. Angel20

    What is this yaar? So less comments! Only 2?! Was this episode that bad! If yes then I’m sorry for boring you all!

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Maria pagal ho kia, it was so good!! Don’t let the insecurities engulfing you. There is no connection of word “BORING” with your work?

  5. Manya

    And apna promise yaad Rakhna??
    Will miss ur ff❤️❤️❤️
    Post soon?
    Love love?

    1. Angel20

      Thanks but mai apna promise nahi nibha sakti coz hardly people supported here 🙁
      Love yaa..

      1. Hey….!!!! Have u gone mad….????? Just bcoz some comments u r not coming back…..seriously…ok, I accept that appreciation is needed for ur work….bcoz it boost us…but if comments and support is less….u can’t abandon anything…..
        Open the pages of history…..Mir taqi mir…..the poet of Urdu..without..discussing him….the Urdu language remains incomplete…… Many political leaders in the past…..weren’t given credit for their work….but now…they r respected…. Many writers, poet……are also there….who weren’t known at that time……but now ….masters is being done on them…even PhD…
        The above discussion was that……u have to comeback….for the one …who supported u…..?

  6. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Maria! Sorry if I’m late though I’m not that much late this time?
    So this was amazing yaar! Loved it so much, the way this story progressed was too good?? I thoroughly enjoyed this ride. Thanks for letting me know about this fiction. I’ll wait always wait for something new from your side?
    God bless you
    Take care❤

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much appi!! i have started two shots on Shraman named Shravan! The meaning of my life. You can read it 🙂
      Love you <3

  7. Shruti710

    Hey Maria ,
    Don’t be sad
    U are really good
    So please let the krpkab fans read your ff
    Please write some more

    1. Angel20

      Thank you so much Shruti!
      I’ll try to write 🙂

      With Love

  8. Erina

    Hllo swtheart ?????I’m back nd I’m so so so sorrrrrryyyyyy ?????bcse I’m late but c mai aa gyi nd aate hi tmne mjhe jor ka jhatka diya I hate u for that.. Huhh aisa v koi krta h kya ????? I will tlk u later
    Nd coming to epi it was awesome. ????????????? nd why u r sying u will not return u don’t love me aur u dont miss me ????? Thn why this type of statement??? Sirf miss krne ka nd love krne ka copyright hmra h ????? But seriously I will miss u swtheart ???nd I want u to return vry soonsoon…
    With loads of love to my swtheart ?????????????????
    Erina here …. ?????

    1. Angel20

      Its ok, acha hua aa to gayi..
      Thank you so much! I miss you my jaan!! I’ll return soon dont worry..

      With Loads of love…

  9. Hey Maria di!
    Firstly, I’m terribly sorry for the terribly late comment! Actually, I think I’d missed out on this while I’d been down with fever. So, I’m really very thankful to you for sending me the link?
    Now, coming to the episode, it was fabulous! Simply fabulous! I loved each and every part of it like hell! And, the end was wonderful!
    I truly loved your FF to the core and, I expect a few more, or rather a hell lot more of these amazing creations of yours!
    Also, I’ve submitted a promo of my FF- ME, YOU AND PASSION. Hope you haven’t forgotten it. Do check it out once it has been uploaded.
    Loads and tons of love!??????

    1. Angel20

      Hey Anshi,
      Its ok dear, concentrate on your studies and take care of your health!
      Thank you so much! I’m glad that you liked each and every part of it. I’ll try to write more if time permits. I have read your promo and believe me it has made me more eager to read the further episodes! So do post it soon!

      With Love <3

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