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Home»Fan Fiction»Daayre (episode 12)
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Daayre (episode 12)

Kriya.nBy Kriya.nMarch 20, 201717 Comments4 Mins Read
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After enjoying his day with his lady he came back home …
It was night time …..
When he entered his mansion he found it dark …… A big frown formed on his face …. Laksh to himself – where are the servants … N why is house dark ….

He moved few steps when light came …. He heard clapping sounds and turns towards the direction ….

Laksh shocked – you here …..

Person – why were you expecting someone else …..

Laksh – nothing as such Shaurya ….. (villain ??)

Shaurya – seems like you are enjoying too much these days ….. He said pointing to laksh cloths which were full of colors ….

Laksh – Shaurya you’re thinking wrong ….

Shaurya mocking – you are correct in thinking wrong that’s why you have us wrong info about mehta’s deal ….

Laksh – I don’t know how he changed the tender price last moment …..

Shaurya shouting angrily – do you think me a fool ….. You blo*dy orphan

Laksh in same tone – voice down Shaurya I’m not your servant ….

Shaurya – oh so now you got guys to raise your voice infront of me ….. It’s just because of that girl right ….. I’ll kill…… (interrupted by laksh )

Laksh shouts – Shaurya …… He raised his hand to slap Shaurya but then stops on middle )

Laksh pointing finger to Shaurya said in dangerous voice – dare you say anything about her n you’ll see worst of me …..

Shaurya got afraid seeing laksh like this but composed himself and started to say when laksh entrupts him showing his hand

Laksh – not a word more just leave from here …….

Laksh left from there to his room leaving Shaurya standing in hall burning in rage

Shaurya – you forgot your place ….. I promise I’ll show you your real place ….. I’ll make your life hell ……. He also left from there ….
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Laksh room
He just now came out from washroom taking a hot shower to cool him down …..

He was standing in balcony clutching the railing tightly in his fist …. His mind was still remembering Shaurya words …..

His thoughts were broke by ring on his cell …..

His anger fades away replacing happiness seeing the name flashing in screen …..

He pick up the call but before he can say something he heard a voice full of excitement from other side causing his lips curved into big smile ….

Person – hey Mr chipku (I know you might have guessed who is on other side ?) are you free and if not then also leave all your work n listen to me meet me tomorrow in my house sharp 10 I have to tell you something good and ha no excuse otherwise …..

Laksh – hey hold on ms beautiful …. Take breath ….. Now tell me why you want to meet me (smiles naughtily) have you found any girl for me …….

Ragini angrily shouts – you duffer stupid idiot …….
Laksh took phone a lot away from his ear otherwise surely he would have become deaf from her shouting …. He smile at his thought and again keep phone back near his ear ….

Laksh innocently – what happened is the girl not pretty ….

Ragini angrily – you idiot have you seen your face in mirror….. Who will like you ….. Huh khata nimbu …..

Laksh in mind – you like me ms beautiful

Ragini – now where are you gone speak something ……

Laksh – I’m taking shower want to join me ….. He smirked

Ragini – whatttttt ….. Chii ….. You idiot …..
She was about to cut the call she laksh spoke

Laksh – hey sorry ….. I’ll come ……
Before he could speak further the call was already cut …..

He smile looking at the end call
Laksh – cute angry little kitten …… But MINE …..
——
Here ragini cuts the call and keeps a cute angry pout …..
Ragini – how dare he say such thing …. Chii ….. Me n him shower ….. Chii
She realised what she said and blushes crimson red ……

She started dancing happily ……

Ragini – wow tomorrow I’ll tell him my feelings ….. I love you Mr chipku ….. I love you so much …..

She turned around while taking rounds but stoped seeing someone standing near door with angry look……

Ragini whispers in shock – bhai …..
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Guys i want a favour from you all …. Actually I’m writing a ss on raglak khwahishein please do read it …. ???……
Here is the link ….
http://www.tellyupdates.com/khwahishein-prologue/

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Kriya.n

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    17 Comments

    1. Mintu on March 20, 2017 9:20 am

      Awesome dear..!! raglak phone conversation is nice.. Laksh is naughty being wid ragz..!!!! Ragz is so cute..!!! Waiting for next part

    2. Tigeress on March 20, 2017 9:27 am

      Wowww www, last part was so cute, loved it , superbbbbbb awesome epi dear

    3. Tigeress on March 20, 2017 9:29 am

      And I have already read ur ss and commented also , it’s really nice

    4. lovely7 on March 20, 2017 9:29 am

      Nice

    5. Asw on March 20, 2017 12:40 pm

      Nice hope arjun say no to her love for laksh ☺ keep going

    6. raglakholic on March 20, 2017 12:43 pm

      lovely…blushing ragu….wow …nice chappy…..n plz cntinue ur khwaishen ff…..

    7. IQRA222 on March 20, 2017 1:07 pm

      kriyuu di the episode was really nice
      yayy laksh clashed with shaurya
      raglak convo was too cute
      waiting for the next part
      and i already read khwahishein

    8. Sinni on March 20, 2017 2:07 pm

      Nice

    9. Follybraverl on March 20, 2017 4:40 pm

      Nice

    10. marklotha on March 20, 2017 8:00 pm

      suri dear i nevr miz ur raglak ffs..tnk 4 ur aswme epsode

    11. Akshata on March 20, 2017 8:40 pm

      awesome

    12. Ammu on March 20, 2017 9:13 pm

      Outstanding episode and loved Raglak scenes. Eagerly waiting for next

    13. Arjuna on March 20, 2017 9:50 pm

      AWESOME

    14. A.xx on March 21, 2017 1:27 am

      fab xx

    15. tëìtō kUn on March 21, 2017 2:27 am

      Superb…
      Laksh Clash with Shuraya was Awesome….
      Raglak Convo was Cute….

    16. asra on March 23, 2017 1:29 pm

      awesome dear…..omg arjun hear everything….Ohhh noo thz shaurya didn’t do anything against our raglak..waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    17. Rehna on March 27, 2017 10:32 am

      Awesome dear

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