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Home»Fan Fiction»CRITICIZE… Saathiya (SS) SOME SHOTS… SHOT-12 (LAST SHOT)
Fan Fiction Saath Nibhana Saathiya

CRITICIZE… Saathiya (SS) SOME SHOTS… SHOT-12 (LAST SHOT)

RianaBy RianaFebruary 26, 201720 Comments4 Mins Read
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RECAP-AHEM’S DEATH!!!…
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15 DAYS LATER…

@MODI MANSION

Modis performs a shradd pooja for Ahem…
Gopi too participates in the pooja…
Kokila is in a sad mood…
She recalls a scene…

FLASHBACK

Nurse: Congrats you had gave birth to two baby boys…
Kokila kisses the babies…

Timepasses…

Ahem changes into a kid…
Kokila beats him for not doing homework!!…
Ahem apologises to kokila…
Kokila hugs him…

Ahem stoles laddoos from kitchen…
Kokila finds laddoos everywhere…
Hetal: See your Krishna bhagwan is eating laddoos…
Kokila laughs…
Ahem is shown eating laddoos…

FLASHBACK ENDS

Kokila cries…
Meera n Vidya recalls there childhood..

FLASHBACK

Mansi beats meera for stealing apples from Kitchen…
Ahem goes to defend Meera but Mansi stops him…
(THOUGH AHEM WAS A WORST HUSBAND…HE ALWAYS WANTED TO BE A GOOD DAD)…
Mansi shouts: Ahem…dont spoil your kids…else today they r stealing food…tomorrow they will kill someone…
Ahem interuppts: Mansi…
Ahem gives apples to meera…

FLASHBACK ENDS

Meera: As the time passed…dad started hating us…as mansi aunty instigated him…
Vidya: Di…Mansi aunty is only responsible for everything…i am happy that she left India…

Gopi recalls her moments with ahem before killing Radha…
She sits silently…
Jaggi consoles her…
Gopi puts her head on jaggi’s shoulder…

DAYS PASSESS…

@MODI MANSION

Phone rings…
Paridhi receives a call…
Paridhi: Whaaaatt???…
Kokila: Kya hua paridhi!!…
Paridhi: Kakiji…Urvashi Aunty met with an Accident…she’s in City hospital…
Modis gets shocked!!…

@CITY HOSPITAL

Modis gathers…
Jaggi comes near Urvashi..
Urvashi opens her eyes…
She apologises to kokila n gopi n jaggi for her misdeeds…
Urvashi: Just bcoz of my misdeeds i am here…
Jaggi: Maa..
Urvashi: Before dying…i want jaggi n gopi to get married n its my last wish…
Kokila smiles…
Gopi: But..
Urvashi: Gopi…agar uss din tum mujhe thappar nahi marti toh shayad aaj bhi main badle ki bhavna rakti…But its my only wish…pls dont deny…
Gopi agrees…
Urvashi smiles…
Jaggi hugs Gopi..
Kokila screams suddenly: Urvashiii!!!…
Urvashi stops responding…
Doc: Sorry…she is no more!!…

GREYSCALE EFFECTS

All gets shocked!!…

AFTER 5 DAYS

Gopi n jaggi gets married in Radha krishna mandir…
Kokila blesses both of them…
Kokila again starts calling gopi as Gopi bahu…
All gets happy…
Gopi does her gravapravesh in modi bhavan…

Gopi is shown sitting in her room as a bride…
Jaggi comes there n sits besides her…
Gopi shys looking at him..

SUN SAATHIYA SONG PLAYS…

Jaggi removes gopi’s jewelleries lightly…
Gopi gets seduced?
Jaggi removes his shirt n kisses on gopi’s neck…
Gopi shys…
Jaggi softly: I love you?…
Gopi: I love you too?…
They had a steamy liplock!!!..
He starts removing gopi’s saree n kisses on her the legs n hands??…
Scene gets frosty…

5 YEARS LATER

Modi mansion is shown well decorated with lights n flowers…
Many people are shown in the party…
Meera,Vidya,Paridhi,Jigar are shown standing at the hall…
Vidya is shown with her Husband Shravan [KUNAL KAPOOR]… (Age: 30)
Meera is shown with her husband Dharam [AMAR UPADHAY]… (Age: 34)
Shravan n Dharam both are brothers from Suryavanshi family…
Gaura Suryavanshi [VANDANA PATHAK] is shown as Meera n Vidya’s mother in law…
Meera is shown with a baby boy of 2 years name Ahem…
Vidya is shown with 6 months girl name Priyal…
Kokila: All guests are there…but where’s the married couple…
Sonakshi [RASHMI SINGH] is shown as Sahir’s wife…
Sonakshi: Dadi sasuma…there coming…
Samar is shown with his fíance Neha [MUGDHA CHAPHEKAR]…
Hetal: See They are coming…
Urmilla n Others cheers…
Gopi n Jaggi is shown coming downstairs…

Gopi is shown carrying a cute 5 year old boy kid…
And its there baby…his name is Gogi…
She kisses her…
They are shown in a beautiful Red n black outfit…
Meera: Gopi bahu…now cut the cake!!…
Paridhi: Cut gopi ben…

Jigar: Yes bhai bhabhi…
Gopi n Jaggi cuts the cake of there 5th anniversary…
They feeds the cake to each other…
Everyone claps…
Gopi feeds a piece to kokila…
Another too Gogi…Meera…Vidya n others…
Gopi n Jaggi looks on at each other…

SAATH NIBHANA SAATHIYA TITLE SONG PLAYS

Everyone cheers…
Samar: One family photo!!…
Gopi n jaggi had an eyelock..
All smiles??
Cameraman clicks a Happy family pic…
…

THE END

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So this was a cute end of my CRITICIZE FF…COMPLETING 12 SHOTS…Thanks a lot everyone for encouraging me to continue this ff…Share the comments below???

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    20 Comments

    1. amirul on February 26, 2017 9:50 pm

      it was a awesome ending riana.

      • Riana on February 26, 2017 11:25 pm

        Thanks a lot Amirul???

    2. Siddharth on February 26, 2017 9:54 pm

      Good ending raina enjoyed ur fan fiction a lot ?

      • Riana on February 26, 2017 11:26 pm

        Thanks a lot Sid???

    3. Mansi on February 26, 2017 11:53 pm

      Super duper loved it a lot???kokila remembering ahem as a kid and Meera Vidya too remembered there childhood was emotional??shocking Urvashi too died but united gogi?and all agreed too…Gogi got married and there romance was too cute??Vidya Meera are shown married having kids too wow?even Sahir n Samar too found love and mugdha as Samar’s fiancee unlike the serial Mona darling(upekha)…Gogi too became parents of 5yr boy wow?n named him too gogi?it was an awesome ending….Loved ur SS a lot will be missing it?

      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:49 am

        Thanks a lot Mansi???

    4. shakaib on February 27, 2017 12:43 am

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      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:53 am

        Thanks a lot Shakaib???….Yes i watched some episodes of Satrangi sasural….As the storyline was so complicated…

    5. Nandhini on February 27, 2017 1:21 am

      Nice ending of jaggi and gopi marriage but it was a bit weird when they had a 5 yr old kid when their daughters are already grown up,married and having kids?one fantastic thing is dharam is a young man…good mother-in-law gaura and all good fiancees for tolu&molu…i am glad you brought here an issue of crime on women and its result in this story..good ss fan fic??

      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:51 am

        Yah first i thought no kid…then i though to put a kid…Thanks a lot Nandi???

      • Jasminerahul on February 27, 2017 8:35 pm

        good that you showed gogi kid as jaggi deserved a kid.

    6. AHT on February 27, 2017 4:23 am

      It was amazing you should right more loved it I mean you should write other fanfiction too new stories will miss reading it

      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:50 am

        Thanks a lot AHT???

    7. Rani on February 27, 2017 5:51 pm

      At least Samar didn’t get married to Mona!

      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thanks Rani???

    8. Jasminerahul on February 27, 2017 8:33 pm

      fb scenes were touchy.good that before death urvashi repented and as per her wish gogi got married. gogi SR was passionate. they named their child gogi.so sweet. glad that here shravan dharam are brothers and gaura is not a trouble maker.here mughda is samar’s wife.not that brat Monica. atleast here he got a nice wife.can you please try to write an os on samar’s love story?cvs did injustice to him.they showed sahir’s love story.they give sahir sona scenes now also. but Samar’s love story was not shown.they don’t even show his scenes with his wife Mona. he hardly got dialogue and do pratap quit sns

      • Riana on February 27, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thanks a lot Jas???….i will definitely write if i get the time!!!…

      • Jasminerahul on February 27, 2017 11:16 pm

        Thankyou very much

    9. krkavita on March 1, 2017 6:02 pm

      ahems’s flashback with kokila, gopi, & the girls was very touchy. ending was nice. The endindg was also good.

      • Riana on March 8, 2017 12:33 pm

        Thanx a lot krkavita???

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