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crazy love-intro

AstraBy AstraOctober 6, 201647 Comments3 Mins Read
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Introduction:
A handsome guy is wearing a sherwani and looking into the mirror, getting himself ready. A lady comes,
“Laksh, you are a groom not bride. Get ready fast and come down…” she says and goes away.
“haa maa…” laksh answers smiling.
“wow… I’m going to get married to my love Kavya today. Hope, nothing comes to as obstacle in my marriage…” he thinks.

His obstacle comes in the form of black human. That person stands behind Laksh. Laksh trembles and turns back.

Laksh: hey…who are you???

That person takes out some spray and sprays on him. Lucky fells down unconscious. That person drags Laksh outside with much difficulty. Nobody observes, as that person covers him with a cloth and everyone thinks its garbage.

The person makes Laksh sleep in car with help of other black dress person. Both, give hifi to each other. They drive the car to some lonely area.

After driving, they stop near a shed. There are no one around them. They carry heavy Laksh into the shed and make him sit. They tie his hands and legs to rods.

Just then he gains conscious.
Laksh: hey…hey…who are you?? Why did you kidnap me??
Then that person doesn’t talk anything but puts knife near his neck.

Laksh: ok..ok. I understand. I shouldn’t shout. Tell me why? What do you want?

The both kidnappers doesn’t speak anything.

Laksh: why are you calm?? Please tell me. I have to get married. Leave me. I will give you whatever you want…

Then one kidnapper removes his mask. He is Rajat.
Laksh: dude, who are you?? I have never seen you before? What do you want.

Rajat: I want your hone waali wife. I love her…

Laksh shocks.
Laksh: what?? Can a human like you love Kavya? It’s possible only to Laksh…

Rajat and other kidnapper laugh. Laksh also laugh. Suddenly Rajat stops laughing and Laksh too stops.

Rajat: partner, this fellow seemed to be cunning. Be careful with him, I will bring food.

Says Rajat and goes out. Laksh is alone with other kidnapper.

Suddenly Laksh acts smart.
“Aww…my tummy hurts. Please at least remove the chains at my legs. Oh no, I’m dying…” he shouts.

That kidnapper takes pity of him and comes near him and removes chains on legs. Suddenly, Laksh grabs the kidnapper by neck.

Laksh: what did you think? I’m a amul baby? See, what I will do now…

Kidnapper is about to beat Laksh in stomach, but he holds hand. The hand is very soft and he smells the kidnapper’s scent deeply and he amazes. That kidnapper pushes Laksh back.

Laksh holds kidnapper’s hand and drags. That kidnapper falls in Laksh’s arms. Laksh could see that person’s eyes. They are very big and have kajal. He was lost in that eyes.

Laksh raises his hand to remove the mask, but kidnapper again pushes him. But, Laksh could remove the mask.

The kidnapper stand far from him facing back, as the mask removed, the long hair falls on that person’s shoulder.

Laksh amazed to see the silky long hair of that person.

Laksh: is that a lady??
He amazes. He looks at that person from top to bottom and realizes that may be a woman.
He looks on surprised.

To be continued….
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If you missed the teaser, it’s here…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/crazy-love-teaser/

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    47 Comments

    1. Sindhura on October 6, 2016 10:57 pm

      Awee super

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 2:56 pm

        Thanq dear…

    2. Ragz_teju on October 6, 2016 10:59 pm

      awesome.. loved it hope its ragini

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 2:59 pm

        Thanku dear

    3. abi on October 6, 2016 11:00 pm

      Wow super

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:00 pm

        Thanku…

    4. Berdilla on October 6, 2016 11:04 pm

      nice

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:00 pm

        Thanq…

    5. ammy on October 6, 2016 11:20 pm

      awesome

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:00 pm

        Thankq dear

    6. haya malik on October 6, 2016 11:29 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:01 pm

        Thank you

    7. lisa on October 7, 2016 12:27 am

      ha thats ragini love her

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:01 pm

        Thnq lisa

    8. rethu on October 7, 2016 1:41 am

      Is it Ragini?????. Thanks for your update dear.Awesome story
      Keep rocking.Stay healthy….

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:01 pm

        Thank u reethu

    9. Sreevijayan on October 7, 2016 2:20 am

      Interesting start dr..loved it

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:02 pm

        Thanku dear

    10. SPP on October 7, 2016 6:31 am

      Awesome

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:02 pm

        Thanq so much

    11. Arjuna on October 7, 2016 7:18 am

      Interesting

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:02 pm

        Thank you

    12. lovely on October 7, 2016 10:49 am

      Nice

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:03 pm

        Thank you

    13. tani on October 7, 2016 12:25 pm

      Super awesome

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:03 pm

        Thank you dear

    14. Kakali on October 7, 2016 3:06 pm

      Awesome one Astra… loved it…
      but when r u going to post BEST ENEMIES… i m missing that … thnk u… ;-&

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:23 pm

        Thnq dear…actually i need some time to update it… Out of ideas yar…

    15. saranya on October 7, 2016 3:12 pm

      Amazing
      I think it’s ragini

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:25 pm

        Thanq saranya

    16. ANKITA on October 7, 2016 3:14 pm

      awsome first teaser then intro plz post epiosde soon

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:24 pm

        Thanku dear

    17. hemalattha on October 7, 2016 3:18 pm

      really fabulous and interesting.is that the girl is ragini

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 3:24 pm

        Thanku dear… U will know next..

    18. Malika on October 7, 2016 3:28 pm

      Superb please update your both ff. I’m waiting. Marvellous intro yr. Keep it up.

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 4:28 pm

        Thanku dear… Did u write raglak ff nxt part?

    19. j. on October 7, 2016 3:57 pm

      awesome yaar so the girl is ragini???

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 5:09 pm

        Thnq dear…may be…

    20. Akshata on October 7, 2016 4:32 pm

      awesome, lucky is crazy

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 5:09 pm

        Haha…thanku dear

    21. Mahjabeen on October 7, 2016 5:12 pm

      Amazing part astra

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 5:17 pm

        Thank you dear

    22. dharani on October 7, 2016 5:20 pm

      very nice

      • Astra on October 7, 2016 5:47 pm

        Thanku dear

    23. rafeee on October 7, 2016 6:58 pm

      superb dear….intrstng nw only i read ur ff

    24. Ashnoor on October 7, 2016 7:05 pm

      Awesome

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